Good morning this is Funnyface.I am here to look in your port after receiving the word that I have been chosen to receive the honor of being 'The Chosen Star" for this week.
Title:"Celebrate W.Com's Rising Stars"
Beginning:I had never heard of the Rising Star's and I must say I was shocked to read that I had been nominated by MDuci and accepted. I am humbled and thrilled beyond belief. Thank you for this honor.
Body:Your welcoming image is lovely, you have explained what the Rising Star is and how it works in this item. I like the way you list the Talent Scouts Proud sponsors and the contributors.
Closing:What a delight it must be to notify an author that he or she is the Rising Star of the week. What pleasure, excitement and encouragement your words give!
Hello Karl this is Funnyface. Title:"Haiku" Beginning:I think I need to study this work of yours. Body:I have tried to write these type of poems, yet I can not do so. I appreciate you people that can. These various haiku are beautifully written.
Closing:Your last one here is my favorite.
Comment:It is nice to see the different types of items you are able to write. Keep it up!
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Hello Humming Bird this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation for you reviewing one of my items.
Title:"Blooming Rose - Part One"
Beginning:A solid opening. Very descriptive writing. I wondered what was wrong with his Love which compelled me to read on.
Body:The body of this story is heart wrenching. To have to choose if the Mother or baby could live then to learn both might survive but the baby could well be physically challenged had to very stressful.
Closing:The baby is indeed welcome into the family.. I am interested to read what has happened in this family.
Comment:Please e-mail me and let me know when you add more to this true story.
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Hello Vicki, this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation for you reviewing one of my poems.
Title:"The Cat's Meow"
Beginning:I like the photo of "Princess" You are correct when you tell us how beautiful and classy she is.
Body:You filled us in on the delight that your cat gives you, about her likes and dislikes. Your love for her shines through, in each line you write.
Closing:The history on the back ground of cats is interesting, My son has an orange tabby, I must tell him about his heritage.
Comment:A little something for what it is worth, I have been told that cats are not mentioned in the Bible. I am not sure if it is true. We had our cat for 19 years. We still grieve for her.
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Beginning:A solid beginning to this Emotional Thriller.
Body:Packed full of emotions, vivid details.This story grabbed and kept my attention throughout. I felt so sorry for this lady and the life she was enduring. Good details.
Closing:Very gory but I can understand that this is what probably would have happened.
Comment:I enjoy your writing. Please feel free to visit me again and I will return the favor!Simply a lovely job here
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Hello Darkmind this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation for you reviewing one of my poems.
Title:"Pain And Sorrow" A fitting title for this poem. Covers your subject nicely.
Beginning:A great beginning as you takes us directly into the "meat" of your topic.
Body:This poem touches my heart. You might have been writing about me, and I am sure many others on this site.I am so sorry that you have had such hurt and pain. No one deserves to go through such times.
Closing:I do hope your pain and sorrow will go away before long. Your ending is heart wrenching.
Comment:Welcome to WDC. If I can help in any way I am but an e-mail away.I hope writing will help with your healing.
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Hello Gina, this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your that was listed on the front page.
Title:"I Almost Cried"
Beginning:You grabbed my attention with your opening verse and held it to the end of your poem.
Body:I can understand how proud you must be to know someone that is as gifted as he. I can only pretend that I can hear the beautiful music that filled the room. How proud his friends and family must be of him.
Closing:I know how happy you would be sitting watching him perform. You have done a lovely job here and I feel great emotions.
Comment:Welcome to WDC. If I can help you in any way just e-mail me. Happy writing and enjoy the site here.
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Hello this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation to you for Sharing The Story Behind Your Pen Name.
Title: "Autumn's Butterflies" your title grabbed my attention and I had to read to learn about these autum butterflies.
Beginning:A nice beginning. I like butterflies and I never ever thought that they die with the cold weather.
Body:Your plot or body here is well developed, and written perfectly. How sad it would be to watch each beautiful fall in death to the ground. I can see where they would blend in with the autumns leaves.
Closing:Your last verse sealed this poem for me. Your wording in this verse is awesome.
Comment:It sure is a pleasure to read one of your poems!
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Wow Tracy this is really quite a urban legend and you have told it so nicely in the words of this poem. The AaBB Rhyming scheme has this poem reading smoothly.The subject for the legend is something we can relate to a mother trying to save her child from a lunatic. Very nice work here.
Hello this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation for you reviewing one of my poems.
Title:"Chapter 1 :A New Dawn" Beginning:A nice job here setting the stage of your new story. Inducting us to the characters and setting the stage for the story.
Body:Your story is well developed and you have cast a bit of suspence as we wonder what the scar of Seth's face is cause from and why Cass has the same scar. Closing:Again we wonder what is going to happen, what it is that Cass had to learn from Seth and why Clyton was upset.
Comment:This sounds like a wonderful story in the making.
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Hello GeminiStar this is Funnyface.I am reviewing an item of your to show my appreciation for you reviewing one of my poems.
Title:"Bad Hair Day"
Beginning:Your opening is solid. There are many horrible things that happens to ones hair at the hands of a hairdresser or at the hands of oneself.
Body:I appreciate the body of your story. How shocked you must have been when you looked in the mirror and seen the color it turned out to be. This is not a nice thing to happen to anyone, but I smiled as I read the story.
Closing:I don't blame you for redying it.I think I would have chanced it as well..only as it started to fall would I have regrets.
Comment:I like this story as most of us ladies here can relate to it. I see no errors.
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Hello John, this is Funnyface returning your favor of reviewing one of my poems.
Title:"Lonely Mountain"
Beginning:A strong beginning as I feel loneliness even here in your opening.
Body:You have done a wonderful job here in this poem. My favorite line was "Crafted by the hands of God. There is nothing I found that could better your work here.
Closing:Your ending verse also shows loneliness, as we do come in this world and leaving alone. Comment: A nice piece of writing.
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Flower of New Brunswick,
Canada where I reside.
Hello Joanie this is Funnyface. I am reviewing this poem to show my appreciate for you reviewing one of mine.
Title:"Emptiness"
Beginning: A nice opening. I like how you began using the word of your title, which sets the tone for the rest of the poem.
Body:I really like this poem. I like how your last verse of each poem leads nicely into the first line of the next verse. I also like the way you bring Jesus into the final verse.
Closing:An inspiring poem with a strong ending.
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The violet is the
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The butterfly is very pretty and the colors blends together nicely. It is very nice that Vivian Zabel gifted you this signature. Some people are so talented to be able to create these different things. I like the words Lovely Lotifly.Have a nice evening! FF
Beginning:Your opening is solid, and takes us directly to the scene of the last few mintues with your Mother.
Body:The words you wrote here in the plot of this poem is heartwenching. To lose a mother, there is no words to say how hard it is. I loved reading how you all were with her in her final mintues. It had to be so hard. I have never seen a person die before. I do know the promises God gives to all mankind, and my faith is strong in that, but it doesn't take away the sorrow, loneliness and lost.
Closing:I agree one day you all will be together again..what a glorious time to look forward to. A Mother like mine is more than a memory. She is a living presrnce. WHat precious words.
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Beginning:A firm opening, and I like your subject matter.Sneezing.
Body:I like your plot. I had to smile into places. Sneezes are something we all should know about, as we all sneeze. Yes, I have heard people say God bless you, since I was a litlle girl. I am a senior now.
Closing:I also learned something new, that one should sneeze in the bend of our elbow.
Comment:I enjoyed!
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