This was a rather humorous piece of writing. I especially enjoyed the part about of the escalator. That was cute. This was well written. I get a bit embarrassed when talking about undergarments. LOL. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
Again, well done on a well-written piece. I have always enjoyed reading your work. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. I enjoyed both the short story and poetry parts. Well done! Keep writing!
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This is a well-written story with a lot of potential. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. You have a great plot here. I will have to check out the rest of this story to gain more insight to this. Well done and keep writing!
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This was so beautiful and so sad at the same time. This was very moving. It must be hard not having your mother around. I know what it's like to lose a parent. I lost my dad back in October. He would've been 50 in July. I treasure all of the moments that I had with him. This was well written and had great flow. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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This was a very sad and moving poem. As sad as this was, you still delivered some of the most vivid images in this. The poem flowed smoothly and was well-written. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. You did an excellent job! Thank you for sharing this!
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Sorry that it took me so long to get to your review(s). I had some things come up that I needed to take care of. I am very embarrassed for this.
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This is so beautiful but seems so tragic.
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I can definately relate to this piece. There have been a few paths that I didn't go down, and wish I did. It makes you wonder the all too familiar phrase, "What if.........."
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This has excellent form and flow.
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
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None.
Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! Thank you for entering! I hope to see you in round 7! Here's 100 gps for entering! Well done!
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Wow! I am surprised that I never rated this contest before! This is an excellent contest with some very awesome prizes!
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
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You come up with some of the most unique prompts and I wish you the best of luck! Here is a donation to help out!
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A very heart-wrenching and touching poem.
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This had excellent flow and and form. This read smoothly and was well written.
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I can only imagine what this poor woman went through as her body was ravaged by that beast that calls himself a man.
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
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Thank you for a brilliant and excellent read. Well done!
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What an ingenious contest! I may have to try my hand at this sometime! This is truely unique. The rules are clear and easy to read. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done!
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What a fun contest! I could never write a song to save my life. Maybe one of these days I will. This is a great contest. They rules are clearly stated, and the forum is very colorful. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. I have donated in the past when this was Jem's forum, but I would like to make another one. Well done, and here's a donation for your contest!
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This was a good short story. It also has a moral to it as well. Never get involved with someone while they are married or attached to someone else. This is a good example of the bad side of an affair.
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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This is a great example of the Diamante!
Emotional Impact:
I think most of us can relate to this poem about friends and enemies at school. I used to get a little bit of both. Kids can be mean, and so can adults.
Flow/Form:
This had excellent flow, and you followed the Diamante form perfectly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Suggestions to make the poem better:
None!
Closing Remarks:
Good Luck! Thank you for entering! The prizes are bigger for round 6! I hope to see you in round 6! Here's 100 gps for entering!
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This is a very interesting prose. I have never read anything like this before. I really enjoyed it. This was well written and flowed smoothly.
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I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful piece with us! Well done!
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That was cute. This was well written. I get a bit embarrassed when talking about undergarments. LOL. I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors. Well done! 
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I am assuming that this is Walker's grandmother?