Overall Impressions:
I love the snow. I just don't like driving in it.
Emotional Impact:
This reminded me of my own carefree moments as a child. I used to play on the ice all of the time. I had fun but always ended up falling on my knees and getting these gigantic bruises on them and wouldn't be able to kneel, lol.
Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and visuals of the little girl spinning and skating on the ice.
Flow/Form:
Good flow and meter.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Good job!
Ciao,
Gem
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Imagery:
You gave beautiful imagery and descriptions.
Flow/Form:
Very nice flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
Make sure you put a rating on your poem. I would also suggest that you put in an explanation to what it is you're supposed to do for the contest, perhaps put in a link so other reviewers can see what the contest is about.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is good advice for those who only look at the bad things in life. If everyone focused on what is right, instead of what's wrong, all of us would be better off.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this. Write on!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This was so sad and yet so beautiful. I greatly enjoyed reading this piece.
Emotional Impact:
I think a lot of people can relate to this. A lot of people wish they could go back in time to relive certain moments and change the things they did.
Imagery:
You did a great job with the descriptions and visuals.
Flow:
This has excellent flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any spelling, grammatical, or punctuation errors.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Well done!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This was really fun and funny to read! I never knew what the word hyperbole meant. I had never even heard of the word before, lol.
Flow:
This has excellent flow and meter.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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Overall Impressions:
I enjoyed reading this amusing little short. I have had days like that. I call them "Murphy's Law Days" They suck to say the least.
Narration/Dialogue:
The narration and dialogue were excellent.
Character Comments:
The old milkman creeped me out big time. I am so glad that I live on the third floor of my apartment.
Imagery:
Great job on the descriptions and imagery.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any punctuation, grammatical, or spelling errors.
Closing Remarks:
Well done!
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