This is a beautiful piece of work. It is dripping with love off the page. You love this person withi all of your heart and want them to be yours. For it to be like the threads of love intertwined together. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a reivew. you did a good job. You did it well and it shows how wel you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece of work. You have made me think of the people in this piece as being wronged somehow and it is their misfortune to have to deal with the inevitable. A mother is lost and the child is in wonder as to what happens now. Ths is waht i got from the reading and hope that I am right in assuming this to be true. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
I agree with you on this issue. It is something that must be answered and done right away for the time of our demise can come at any time. I liked to think on the realms of the scerenario two. that the lady worked all of her life and has something to fall back on her qualifiications as a worker. The you ng boy is not with it. I hope this makes sense to you. you have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of areview. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece. Your character is in a world to themselves. It seems so to me wtih the passage I just read. There is nothing can be done to correct the problem. So, your character is left up the creek without a paddle as it were. You did well nn presenting this piece of liteaturue for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
Speak about modernization/ These are the times that test men's souls as it were. I got the picture and it was something less than grand. Chicken coops for houses was something that I hadn't planned upon. They had to be wider than that. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Well this is something new for me. I never heard of an angel tell anyone that they were sent by the Master. You made a believer out of me and I am glad you did. I could at least go along withthe story. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Oh this was agood oiece. I got the lady was using the colors and the book. I hope I am right about that. She did such a good job with the colors that she was satisfied about them. you did well in presenting this piec of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.You're not having any errors in the piece made it a much better piece that you did. Good and well done.
What a story this is! I read every word and it was a funny. The Thanksgiving theme was there and it was a good one. The relatives most of all thought something with the alien coming to dinner. You did wel in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
This was an interesting piece. I was following you right on the story and come find out it was cast iron that the sheep was made of. You speak about the feathers droppign somewhat and they did. You did well in presentnig this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing. 4
WOW! This was a great piece and you did it well. It is horrifying to say the least. For in the instant he opened the trunk the voice sounded off. I would have panicked too. to hear from the being of some sort :There you are." I would have been frightened too. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors found in the piece GREAT Job.! Keep writing.
I guess you got surprised to see her in the shape she was in. Beautiful to look at and all the other things but to know that she was once a man kinda spoils it all. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well yo udid for there are no mistakes found in the piece. Keep writing.
What a beautiful piece is this! You are afraid of the dark and though there is light at the end there is nothing that you would do but hope for someone to love you. You are so right about that. Love transcends all the boundaries of mankind. We must have love or be totally lost in the tomorrows or of yesterdays. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing You're good at it.
What a way to look at life in general! You did a good piece here and it shows how well you did for there are no errors to be found in the piece. One never really knows what they want to do for sure. I didn't get to where I am by wanting to be in a wheelchair. But I am and I have to live with that fact. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
What a way to look at the eyes! I never thought of it like this before. it is something that one doesn't think about most of the time. There are so many colors of eyes that it doesn't appear to be any black eyes. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing. We need you in WDC. So keep it up and dont' ever stop.
This was a beautiful piece of work. One could see the things happening as you were crying and knowing tha someone had died that was close to you. It was part of a plan the greatest Planner of all had something to do with it. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It is hoped that you wil keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is an awkward piece of work. But there is a good way about it too. i loved the wording you used. Partner is unified is the favorite line you gave. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. There were no errors in the piece so there is no room for improving. Keep writing.
This is an awkward piece but a good one. There are no capitalizations throughout the piece. It is hard to tell where one thought begins and another ends. But I got through it okay and have to say that it is a good piece. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.Keep writing.
Yes, love is the key that opens many doors in life. It is for the young and the not so young to be doing. Love thy neighbor is something that comes to mind. It is a priceless virtue and one that is necessary ina person's life. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Oh how true this is when it comes to our reflection. We don't like what we see sometimes but it is ours and it is there for a reason. You painted this so well. You used your colors to paint this picture and it is a good job. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job as we said. You are hopefully going to keep on writing. We need you in WDC.
What a great piece this is! The madallion was the main thing between the people who was with it. It past from generation to generation and there was the box that he thing was in. It held this madallion and was what he the father wanted to give to his son. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did there were no erors found in the piece. You did well. Keep on writing.
You are the first 5.0 stars today. You did a great job with this piece and it is so understandable that I have to agree that you had to break it off with the person. You are not leaving them to themselves but you are not going to sit by and let them rule you either. I thik I have the grasp of this piece and it is a good one. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing. You did a good a job and it shows how well you did iwth no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This is an unusual piece for me to read but I got through it all right. You were speaking about selling your soul to whatever force is out there if I am not mistaken and you feel that something greater is at the end of it when you come to your end of life. I sure hope I have got this right. I don't want to give a bad review. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review You did a good job. It shows for there are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This was a good piece. You are speaking about you and your life. About the day being done and the other t hings you mentioned were special to you. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did agood job. There were no errors in the piece so it was even better. You have got a good one here. Keep writing..
I guess one could say that she was the Queen of the city. A lady of prostituion is hardly a lady but it will do in calling her the lady. She turns down a trick from the car speeding off and she readjusts herself to the next one that comes along. You did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
This is a somber message here. You have your characters at a crossroads of space that is without the love that was once there. You gave all you could give and it wasn't enough to keep them at home. It was a sad piece and one that I will remember for some time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of a review. You did a good jjob. Keep writing.
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