This is sad and a somber piece. You gave all you had ot the one you mentioned and he or she failed to live up to the agreement. It is regretable for that to happen to one such as yourself,. But then you are taking it in stride.You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. There were no errors inthe piece so it was even better. You have got a good one here and I hope that you are proud of it. Keep writing.
No matter if the heart is black or white it is going to be of blood. I think this is metaphorically done here and it is a good one. Life is so strange and yet so simple. You have hit the nail on the head with this piece and there were no errors found in the piece at all. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep writing.
Love is so grand,. It is come to life with the words you used in this piece. you are pledging your fidelity to him and for he to you. it is a great piece and one that I am glad that I clicked. You did well in presenting this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for othere are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
The rhyme scheme was beautiful! It set up pictures that one could see. your fidelity of love for the other is something that is great to see. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and its shows how well you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
How true this is! It is only for an hour You can do somethings and enjoy the flowers that are out there for you to enjoy. Stopping long enough to smell the roses is one of the things that matters most to me. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This is a great piece you have here. One can see these things that you mentioned. The fireflies and the other things made it a great piece. You are a good writer and it shows how great you are for othere are no errors found in the piece. You did well in presentnig this pieceof literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
Very good piece. I loved the way you worded this piece. I like to think on the same lines as you do about getting something out there for all to see. You did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. There were no errors in the piece and it was so much better that it wasn't. Keep writing.
This was a little bit hard to read but I got through it. You are speaking about Splendor as a person in this piece. I can understand the metaphor. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. There were no errors found in the piece and made it so much better. Keep wriing.
BEAUTIFUL! This is a beautiful piece of work. All the elements of a poem are present and it was a good one. You could see the earth bleed as you said. Talking about these things made me think of what I could do with a piece like this. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. it shows how well you did for there are no errors to be found in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a heart wrencing piece. You put all you could into it and made it wonderful. There were no errors found in the piece so you did well there. loved the wording and their impact upon the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Love is dripping off the page withthis one. It is a beautiful piece and one I am glad that I clicked. You have speled out everything in a relationship and it is something wonderful. You did wel in presenting this piece of literaturefor the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It shows how well you did for there are o errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! This is such a good piece. You have taken the swan and made into something beautiful for it is already. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for thereare no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
The picture was a great addition to this piece. it made me think of a swinging bridge and some of the rungs left out of it. Anyway your piece was a good job. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. There were no errors found the piece and it was a great read. Keep writing.
This is a very sad piece here to swallow but it makes perfect sense to me that you were talking about loving this person and he was pushing you aside. That is what I got from the message. You were wonged so badly and it hurts to know it. You made a believer out of me and I am glad that you did. I am feeling for your character. I have tro say that you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This was a long piece but well worth the time to read it. It is with this kind of logic that words are born to begin and there are the words that mean life and other things tha matter. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep on writing.
This is a sad piece to read. Your characters fell in love but it wasnt' true love. All that remained was the hate that comes with it. A love that wasn't meant to be is an awful thing to have happened. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. keep writing.
This was a good piece. The right things were in place and it was a wonderful read. It was a little long but I got through it okay. The essence of the moment was something else for y ou and you did it with getting to her bedroom. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was so done well with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece for it takes the mind of an addict and makes it out to be something that it isn't really. It grabs your heart and mind to where there is nothing left to do with anything at all. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. There were no errors found ni the piece. You have done well as we said. and I hope that you will keep wriiting.
WONDERFUL! This is some story. I followed right along with you on this passage. Winter was in love with Spring. There was a tree that wouldnt' shed its green leaves and be barren. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did it so well that I was impressed that there were no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
On the surface it seems like a bunch of words but it or they paint a picture. You used your colors well in painting this picture. You are metaphorically using the wilted flower as a person's life. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how wel you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This was a good piece. It shows the things that youdid and what they are like now. you have done well for yourself it seems and I am very happy for you. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did it well and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This was some story. It was something that I couldn't stop reading. It was an easy read.. There were no errors found in the piece. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how wel you did. keep writing.
This is a good piece. It tells me to be careful of what one would find in trying to discover you and your being. This is what i got from the message. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
Sounds like a lazy afternoon when you did this and having a ball at doing it. You were so polite and petite to the waiter and the things he asked of you. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! This is a beautiful piece of work. You did have a good reading and one enjoyable. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done and thought out well. Keep writing. I don't see any room for improvine the piece it is just great the way it is.
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