This is a beautiful story. It is the scourge of a place that didn't have any respect for the forest. It was a beautiful place and there were trees and long growing trees to show. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. You made it sound so beautiful and it was before the buildings became a part of the landscape. Keep writing.
It was a great piece. You did here was a great piece and one that I am glad that I clicked. it is about a football game and how Landon got the touchdown. You made him so proud of his accomplishment in this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. The work was well done. Keep writing.
This was a short piece. It was a good one though. There were pictures to be seen through the colors you used to paint the beautiful picture. you did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors on the page. Keep writing.
It seems that you have some growing up to do in order to be a true adult. Not saying that you aren't one already. I just think that it is something that you will have to get over and do well. There were pictures to be seen with the colors you used and well. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a reveiw. You did a good job. Keep writing.
There is a question you are askiing in this piece. It is if you are the one that will be close to you and love you. You have made pictures wtih the colors you used well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it is well done as we said. Keep writing.
This is a good pieceof work. You have captured the soul of a person in this piece. People will listen to her and then take it all in and deciipher the good things from the bad. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL ! This was a beautiful piece of work. You did well in describing the many flowers in your mother's garden. you did well in presenting this piece of lliteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it was picturesque. I hope that you wll keep on writing. You're good at it.
This was a short piece but a good one. You have all the pictures in a row and it is a good work. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of areview. you did a good job. There is no room for improvement in this piece. Your wrok was well done. Keep writing.
This was an awkward piece of work. The reading wasn't easy but i got through it. You did it well though for there are no errors ffound in the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job though it was awkward to a point. I didn't get the meaning and wanted to. Keep writing.
This is a good piece. Your letter is genuine and very well thought out. you did some pictures that make it so much more beautiful. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. it showsh how well you did with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
I think that the word you were looking to use were or was the word no one. You may have the word know and then one but not the other way around. You did a good job of this piece to for the purpose of a review. Your literatuer was right on. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with the few errors ffound in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a short piece but it is was painted beautifully with the paints you used to color these words. You did well in presentingthis piece of literzature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Your work well done I would like to know that you will keep on writing.
This is a somber piece for you to write. It is a good short piece but one that is full of pictures. One gets the glimpse of the man dying and leaving this world and it is something he doesnt' want to do. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. It shows how well you did in this for there are very few mistakes in the piece,. I don't know if you meant to use the term ma or not for my. But I counted it against you. Some countries writet different ways and it is their right way of dong something. Keep writing.
You're right there with the last thing you said about tit being from above. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. I hope that you will keep on writing. You're good at it. You did well as we said and it shows how welll you did witih no errors found in the piece. Good going,. And again Keep writing.
How true are you on this note! You will be part of the past and in good fashion. It will be a time of reflection and contemplation for the next twenty years. you did well in presenting this piece of literatuer for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors in ffound in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a great piece of poetry. It shows what you would loveto have happen to you since you were a girl. You made that so clear in the piece abut you being a girl. But all grown up and now the feelings have changed. you did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece or at least not many mistakes were found. Keep writing.
This is a good contest of the wits and whatfores in this piece . It is a place that I dont'think that I would fit very well. I don't belong to the Satan of this world. I belong to tthe God of Heaven as far as i know and it something that I would find myself not doing. You did well in presenting this piece of literaturef for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This was a good piece. It was a piece that was hard to follow for not knowing all the meanings of the words you used. It was my problem and not yours. I am glad that you have a good vocabulary and it shows so well. You did well in preenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep writing.
For a 13year old this was a great piece. You could see the things happening and what was going through your mind. It was sheer terror for you and it is something that came through with the words you used. You did well in prsenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
PERFECT! This is a great piece of work. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it is so majestic that you can have pride in this piece that you did. You have a good piece as we said and one that I m glad that I clicked. Keep writing.
This is a short piece of poetry. It sounds like you are deciphering the good from the evil or what would you call it? It is a good read and one that I am glad that I clicked. I hope that I have the message to this piece. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Your work is well done and you have got a good piece here. Keep writing.
This is a good piece and it is a very good reading. You like the wind tossing your side. You are lost in the rapture of the moment and in time to the weather outside. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was well done. Good job and as we said well done. Keep writing.
Yes, this could use some more work on the piece. You did a good job though with what you have begun. It is something that is well done in presenting this piece for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and your work is well done. you used your colors well in this piece. Keep writing.
This was a good piece and one that I am glad that I clicked. You have the grasp of what it is to make a good piece and you did it here with this one. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Your work was well done. It was a good read. I hope that you will keep on writiing.
This would get to the heart of anyone who has ever had a pet member. I don't like saying dogs or cats for they are part of the family and it is one thing for sure that you had a nice one NI Barney. I am glad that I clicked this piece. It caused me to think of my past pet members I have had too. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purprose of a review. Your work is done well. Keep on writing.
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