This is a reading well worth the effort. The fact that Rob was over the people there made him think that he was important and what he said went as law. I am so glad that the lady got the uppper hand in this story. It was a good reading. There were no mistakes found in the piece. You did well in presenting t his piecd of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job as we said and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
What a wonderful piece this is! You have described the plight of the lost man until they come to Jesus for salvation. You did a great credit to the Lord here with this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You have a good read. You are hopefully going to be doing some more writing on WDC. We need you here with us. Keep writing.
What a twist is this to the story. He the storyteller used the animals out there for his story and was telling it like it was to the people who had gathered. Then the coins came into play and it was about the coins that made all the difference to the ones who had them. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. It was very well done and a good read. Keep writing.
This is a good piece. It asks a lot of questions that there are no answers to right off the bat anyway. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You have done it well for there are no signs of improving anything you spelled everything correctly and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
What a piece is this! You did it so well. There was a time that I was pulling for the salmon and I don't even like them at all to eat. Salmon is not one of my favorite foods to have. But the plgith of them made me feel bad for them. You did well in pprsenting this piece of literature for the purpoes of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
I have something to say You did it so well in this piece. It makes perfect sense and it is something I want to try myself. I am forever using the form to be and it isnt' right to do it. There are other words that can be used and you know you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows so well. Keep writing.
This is a great piece. You are ta;lomg about getting out of TN and going for CA. You had seen all the countrysde uyou wanted to see and there were plenty of it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It was so good that there were no errors found in the whole piece. I don't like the reference tot God and you're being indestructible as He is. That isnt' so .But I could feel your meaning here and don't fault you for that. Keep writing.
I think I have it down pat but wanted to run this by you and see if I have it or not. You are speaking about life. It is a fleeting thing to be sure. it is something that takes the mind of a learned man and causes him to think. I hope that i have this right. You did well in preesnting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It shows how well you did for there are no errors in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a good piece. You have made it so clear about life and the things that happen in life. This is what I have got out of the message I hope that i am right about this meaning. If not, please help me here with it so I can understand it better. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for he purpose of a review. you did well and a good job as we said. Keep writing.
What a story. Ths was well worth the reading of every word. It seemed spooky to begin when he was talking about the house but then it wasn't for Bill coming itno the picture was made clear about the river and the young girl who painted the picture. You did well in presenting this piece of litearature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was very wel done. Keep writing.
There was a lot with this piece. It is a beautiful piece and one that should be read by everyone on WDC. You speak about the emptiness he feels in his quest to capture the heart of the young woman. This is what I am getting from the message. You did well ni presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You didnt' have any mistakes found in the piece. ti was a good read. keep writing.
It is as if you are saying to her that you loved her still and though you are no longer together the love is still there. You are willing to share her with another for she is no longer yours to share. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors in the piece. You have as we said done well. Keep writing.
Well, the blank line got my attention in a hurry. havent' ever seen that before in a piece. You were speaking about love and how you didn't want it to be so in your life. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found in the piece. Keep writing.
Love is in bloom now and it is something wonderful. You told the love of your life how you would be and what he is to expect from you. It is a very good read. You didn't have any errors in the piece and that was good to know. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of areview. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
A very good piece is this one. It is full of love and romance. You have hit the nail on the head so to speak witih the feelings that come from this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
It was very interesting. I got the gargoyles and the other things you mentioned. It is as if the gargoyls are looking at every move you make. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It was very well done and no errors were found in the piece. You are asked to keep on writing.
This is a sad piece to read. It was wonderful in the beginning and now the course has been run and there are no survivors. You did wel in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You didnt' have any mistakes found in the piece. Keep writing. You're good at it.
This was a little hard to read. But I think you are speaking about music of some sort. It is like a band as it were playing and you are listening to them. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep on writing.
One can get confused in reading this piece. But tyou know what you are saying and it is something unique. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and there were no mistakes found in the piece. It is for sure we need you to keep writing.
That is a question that only the character can answer. About staying or not staying, I mean. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well for there were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job s we said. It is for sure that you dont' need to improve on this piece it is perfect the way it is.
You did a good job with htis piece. I tis an humble prayer and one I would like to pray myself. It means everything to me to be close to God . You didn't capitlize the word Yourself when speaking about God and that is why I gave you a 4.0 stars. I am adamant about capitlizing the references to God. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well and it shows how well you did. For there was just this one flaw in the piece and you can edit that if you wish. Keep writing.
This rates a 5.0 stars for the way you did this beautiful tribute to your grandpa. It was a sad story to tell and I am sorry for the loss. It is something to me for I had to see my parents both placed in the graves and it was a hard thing for me to see and do. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there was only one error n the piece and it was about the harmonica. Still all in all it was a great piece and I am glad that I clcked it. Thank for sharing this piece Keep writing.
This is a touching piece of work. You are saying goodbye to your young daughter. It is clear that you miss her and want her back. However that isnt' going to happen to you. You are lementing on the loss so clearly in the piece. I feel for you I really do. You did well in presenting this piece of literuature for the purpose of reviewing. keep writing. you're good at it.
I gave this a 4.0 star rating. The reason? Well, you didn't capitalize the name God in your work. I feel that all people everywhere should capitalize the name of God for all He has done for mankind. I liked your piece though and wanted to tell you something about it that there were on errors except for that one. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job for the most part and I would like to see more of your work. I hope that you wil keep writing.
This is a great piece and one I enjoyed reading. I was feeling for you there on the board and thinking to not do it but you did it and was the best thing you could have done. You enjoyed the experience and it shows now that you did . I have to say well done on this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Youdid a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors in the piece at all. Keep writing.
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