I appreciated what you had to say about the women and roses. I t was a very good piece. I happen to be a man also with differing views than yours. However, that isn't meant to say that you were wrong in what you said quite the contrary. You were basing your experience withi women and how they react to flowers roses to be more exact. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it showshow well you did with no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This is a beginning of great stuff here. I liked what you had to say in the beginning. I wll read your work and review them too. But you did a good job with this piece and it is for sure that you can write. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job ad we said. Keep on writing.
This got me off guard here as to what you were talking about. But then it hit me and I have to say that you are not fat at all. You have a heart that tells you that that you are. But at the measurements you gave in your piece it is not so. You suffer from belemia as far as I can tell and it is something that is eating at your very core. You did well in presenting this pieice of literature for the purpose of a review and you did well with thie piece. Keep writingg and I do ask that you get help for yourself it isnt' too late for you. I promise you.
Sounds like someone is in trouble with the police. The court has filed a restraining order against him. Well, that says a lot for this guy. It idoes sound kind of creepy when you think of it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review.. You did a good job and it is shows how well you did. Keep writing.
This is a sad piece. Why it is is because of the words you used to paint a somber picture. You used your colors well though to paint the picture. There was o time for Spring or the flowers only a hot searing summer. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for I didnt' see any errors in the piece and that is good. Keep writing.
This is a good piece. it is mentioning about dancing. It is something that is alluring to the lady as she dances and it is the capivation of the theater. The theater was capitvating to her and she loved it and knew that she was going to be all right. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
You took the dog and the man and made this happen. It was if the dog had gone to Heaven. However, there is no such thing as a doggy heaven. It is the Heaven we read in the Scrfiptures and that is the only Heaven that there are except for the first six heavens past the sky. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was very interesting to read. You did a good job as we said. Keep writing.
BEAUTFUL ! This is a beautful piece of work. You did it so well. One was able to see you go out onthe roof and there contemplate the things you wanted most. This is what i am getting from the message. You are angeredd taht the sun has risen but you can't stay angry long. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
This is a sad picture here of a man who wasnt' very well liked by his children. He got intoxicated and left the children in the car while he played pool. It is sad that he was like this and you have no vivid memories of him being good to you is what I get from the message. You did well in presenting this piece of litearure for the purpose for a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for i don't think too much of the man either. Keep writing..
I liked the form you used in thispiece. You did it so well. It looks great on the page and it is soemthing I am glad that I clicked. The subject was about dreaming on and I got that very quickly It was done well and you did well in presenting this piece of literature for othe purpose of a review. You did a good job as we said and it is hoped that you will keep on writing.
Romance is dripping off the page. Love is such a good thing and there are many ways to love. you do it in your dreams and you hold unto him and think of him and hope that he thinks of you. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
There is romance in this piece. It is as though you are pending for something to happen. you are waiting forthe other shoe to drop and you are waiting for that time. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. I am glad that I clicked this it is good reading. I hope that you will keekp on writing.
BEAUTIFUL! You are speakingabout yourself in this message. You are somewhat all alone with your thoughts and you know that you will have it all one day. You did well in presenting this piece of liiterature for the purpose of a review. YOu did a good job. You did well as we said. I hope that youwiill keep on writing.
I couldn't make out what you wanted to say in this piece totally. It was about resting in peace. That much I got from the reading. It was a good piece you wrote. You did well n presentring this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are asked to keep on writing. You did a good job with this one.
I liked this piece for it was a great one. There were no errors found in the whole piece ajnd you did it well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. I am glad that i clicked it and wanted ot say again that there were no erorrs in this piece. You did a good job. Keep writing.
Very good advice for the ones who wont' smile and take liife as it comes. it is so important to smile and keep a smile on your face. There is agrowing trend that smiling is not the best thing to h ave on your face. Well, you could fool me. I hope that you will keep on writing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well.
This is a great piece though it seems hard to swallow. You are speaking about doing away wtih this person's picture and any thing that wat like him. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did well as we said and it is hoped that you will keep on writing.
This is a good piece. It is speaking about religion as it were and what one expects to gain from it and how they can't compel others to change from one thing to another. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job as we said and there are no errors in the piece. You are needed to continue to write and I hope that you will keep on writing.
There is much here about the two sisters. You very imitating the older sister in the things that she did. You did not have any errors found in this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of litearurre for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said and I hope that you will keep on writing.
What a beautiful piece this is! You have no errors found in the piece. Iti s romantic in nature and it was a good read. You did well in presenting this piece of liiterature for the purpoes of a reveiw. You did a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing You 're good at it.
What a way to put something out there. It is a pen talking and it is really saying something to its owner. You did a good job with htis. It is almost funny. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it isn't any room for improvement.
This is a thought-provoking piece of work. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature fro the purpose of a review. You did a great job. with it. There are many questions in t his piece that only one can answer and it is the author of the piece. You have used the paints well in coloring this piece. Keep writing.
I have never seen this before now and I enjoyed it. It was written with the dead person's words and it is something else that I ffound amazing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpos of a review and you did a good job. I don't see any room for improving this piece. It is just great the way it is.
The content in this is not good . You have to obey your father and mother no matter what. In today's society the risk is too great not to mind your elders. I really beg to differ with you n tat note. Ihope you will have a good evening. cubby I didn't find any errors on the page sothat is good.
This was a good piece. For me, you chose the right color to put this in. Black is the way to go and you did it. Thank you. It is easier to see with it in black than any other color. You did a good job with this piece. There were no errors in it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.Keep writing. You're good at it.
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