This is so sad. It seems that you ae missing your loved one. It seems he went to heaven. You did d a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
What a piece is this one! I love a good vampire story. Youdid a good job. I liked the details of this story. You were telling it as it happened. It was a blow by blow sort of story. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job.
This is so sad. The promises a person makes should be their bond. It wasn't you to let your parents down it was them that changed. You had no control over that happening.You did well in presenting this piece of literature fur the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! What a beautiful piece this is.You have captured the cemetary and the trees. You did it so well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It is hoped that you will keep on writing.
GREAT piece is this one. You have captured the true meaning of art. It is in the eye of the beholder as you said. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature forthe purpose of a review. You have done well as we said. Yo have done a good job. Keep on writing.
WONDERFUL! This is the most helpful piece I have read today. It is about reviewing and what is expected of the reviewers and the reviewees. I liked the section on poetry. That is the thing that I love to do best. i tis simple and yet it is deep for the person to see in their own minds and hearts what was said. you did well in presenting this piece of advice for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said. It is hoped that you will keep on writing.
This was a beautiful piece. It was a haunting one for sure enough. There were no errors in this piece and it was very well done. I wouldn't want the silence to get me as it did her. It is amazing and really done well. You presented this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It shows how well you did. I hope that you will keep on writing.
This is a thought provoking piece of work. You are mentioning to the one you are writing about that he has hurt others and also hurt himself. It is sad either way. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and you did a good job. Keep writing.
It is always sad to say goodbye to people you know. I get the feeling that is what you are doing in this piece. Saying goodbye to a man who faced life with everyhing he had in himself. You are saying goodbye to a man who was strong. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job.It shows how well you did. Keep on writing.
A great trbute is this one for your grandfather. You are wishing the best for him and you are not going to stop until he gets it. it is sad that you had o lose him. I am understanding how much you loved him wtih the words you said in your piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. I hope you will keep on writing.
Well, you did a good piece here. It is amazingly beautiful! You take the name silly girl and describe her to he world. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. You wrote t his very well. I hope you wil keep on writing
This was a beautiful piece. It is done in 55 words and really told a story. I am glad this was fiction and not the real thing. It is something else you did that makes it so much better and that is you told a story. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
Well, this is something else. You are saying this person is lying to you but not any more than the others who did before them. This is what i am getting from the message. So,the person is still lying to you and you are okay with that. I think it is time we had a talk. You don't need to have anyone to lie to you for anything. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. It is hoped that you will keep on writing.
This is a great piece. It makes perfect sense to me and it is one of the greatest I have read in two days. Life is something to hold unto and watch at every moment in time. You have captured this so well. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose a review. You did a good job. You did well as we said. keep on writing.
It seems that you are setting yourself and us as God and that is so wrong. of you to do that. We are not all gods. As you put it we are not what it seems to be. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. Youdid a good job. You did well and it shows how well you did in writing this piece. Keep on writing. Yo8're good at it.
This was a good piece you did. To me it is talking about sleeping and not being able to sleep. There are so many things about this piece that are good that I can't tell you how well you did but to say that you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Youdid a good job. Keep on writing..
There is one reason why you didn't get a 5.0 stars for this piece. You didn't capitialize the word or name God. I am being picky I know but right is right and it isn't right to lowercase God for anything. You did well in prsenting t his piece of lilterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job Keep on writing. That ws the only thing I saw wrong with the piece.
You are lementing over your sister for having left you for her husband. It was great to have her with you in the things you used to do.
But oow there is no more we but me and it is troubling you is what I am getting from the piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for he purpose of a revew. You did a good job. Keep on writing.
This seems like a dream that you were having and that you were going to retailiate with the pipe You ran and ran away from the being and now you are the one who is stalking him or it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing and you did a good job. Keep on writing. I really enoyed this one.
This is a great piece. It is about decision making and how it affects you even for what your father does or did. Not only that but your father's father and down the line and also future for the grandson's son. You did a great job with thispiece . You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a oood job. it shows how well you did . i am happy I clicked this. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
This was a beautiful piece. It was one of the best ones i have read in the last two days. You are talking about disability. It is for sure that you did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. You are asked to keep on writing.
This was a beautiful piece. It is with this that you have done well. You made yourelf at one with the water. Youheld on and tt was something else for you to do. Then the storms came and all that was left was sand in your pocket. you did well in presenting this piece of literture for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well youdid. Keep on writing.
GREAT piece is this one. it is so admiral of you to keep yourself until you are married. That is something that isn't the case in most people anymore. It is now do it and do it again. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing.You're great at it.
What a great story this is! I was lost in the words as you typed them out I felt the water and the other things in the story came to life. That is some good writing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Yo did a good job. Keep on writing. You're great at it.
Love is grand and this piece is dripping in love. You are there for the peron and wlll be there for them. You make this sound so romantic. There is romaticism in this piece You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. Keep writing. You're great at it.
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