Hello Marqese Dabbs,
Welcome to WDC.
I am reviewing your poem, which I found on the read and review page, as part of the Simply Positive Newbe Reviewers Group. I offer my opinion based on my limited experience. It is only one in a world of opinions and yours to use or ignore.
Overall Impression: You have written a sad poem in which the "I" is dealing with the unwelcome pain of unresolved difficulties that keep surfacing in their mind. The poem has a very personal tone. Your images are intense, and, consistently with the experience of the "I," there is considerable ambivalence.
What I like: your choice of image using the photos, and of bleeding memories. Then, there is an element of fighting back when the speaker says "burn the pain..." In the end, the issue remains unresolved. I like that you don't make it into a sermon and preach wisdom but instead leave the problem unresolved.
Problems and suggestions: In line 8, I wonder if the "I" is comforted by silence or by something else within silence. Line 10 "things" is plural but "is" is singular. In line 11, to what does "It's" refer? Does it mean the pain is always struggling, or the ambition, or the "I?"
Comments: This is a very interesting poem and I really appreciate you sharing it.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing !