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Review of Awakening  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi M Hague Bailey This is a Review on Behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  [E]


*Reading* Great story. I really enjoyed it. The flow was smooth and the character evolved nicely throughout.
I was truly surprised who he turned out to be. For some reason I wasn't quite expecting that. *Wink*


*Flower3* The Beginning immediately grabs the reader's attention, and definitely makes one to want to read on.


*Balloon2* The Title is a perfect fit for this short story. *Smile*


*Flower1* The Description is strong, and gives a good hint at the story, without ruining the twists.

*Balloon4* The Ending is fantastic! I really enjoyed the way this ended. I wonder if there will be a follow up story? *Wink* hint, hint


*Flower3* The characterization is strong and vivid and well developed throughout the story.


*Balloon4* What I liked best about the story is the surprise of who he turned out to be, as well as the ending.

*Thumbsup* NICE JOB!

Tracey
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi billwilcox This is a Review on Behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  [E] *Bigsmile*


*Reading* Whoo! What a dark story! Buy that boy some salt-peter! *Shock* I love your horror stories, Bill. But sometimes I wonder where you dream of these things. Then again, that is one of the biggest forms of flattery! I think the same thing when I read Stephen King. *Smirk*

This was quite a sick piece of writing, and probably one I would have quit reading, have I not been familiar with your work. This writing shows how an experience during our life, can mutate into something horrific! As always your words paint vivid imagery, easily allowing the reader to visualize everything going on with and around the character. Great job! *Thumbsup*

A spotted a small typo: into to Mrs. Berber’s bedroom window. *Smile*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey

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Review of Gone  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*Reading* Hi J. Bell This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] My last Review for the Author Spotlight. *Smile*

After reading a few of your poems, I can see that love lost and love searched for, is where you find your inspiration. Though your writings are sad, you always have a little hope and 'what ifs' poking through. Your emotion throughout your writing comes through strongly.

I have just a couple of small suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit. *Smile*

*Note2* Imbibing spirits grants me time to think

At least I think I'll find answers at the end of this drink

Imbibing spirits grants me time to think
Perhaps I'll find answers at the end of this drink.

Even though you're using the word 'think' as two different meanings, reading them aloud, still sounds a bit repetitive.

*Flower3* I'll love again... no, nevermore

There's nothing wrong with the last line. I was just thinking that if you write it like this:

I'll love again ... No. Nevermore.

With No and Nevermore being in a sentence all their own, it adds much more impact - making a stronger ending for your piece. *Idea*

I've enjoyed my visit to your port. I hope you have enjoyed your reviews. I look forward to seeing you around WDC! *Smile*

Tracey


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Review of Fairy Tales  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
*Reading* Hi J. Bell This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Smile*

This poem is about a love dreamed of and hoped for - a love that's too good to be true, that it exists only in a fairytale, as the title pretells.

The only suggestion I have for you, is that you may wish to change the word towering in your second stanza, first line:

A princess atop a towering tower

A princess atop a majestic tower

The word majestic keeps the syllable count and takes away the repetitiveness of using tower twice together. *Smile*

Welcome to WDC. Please let me know if I can help you with anything!

Tracey


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Review of My Verse...  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
*Reading* Hi J. Bell This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight. *Smile*

Your description is what made me want to read this verse. But it still left me wondering what the review stated and what made you write your piece in this particular form?

The writing like your other two poems, are full of emotion. The reader can tell you're searching for answers and longing for rest. Perhaps looking for that lost love to come back and put your mind at rest.

Nicely done. *Smile*

Tracey


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi J. Bell . This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

I enjoyed reading this poem of deep reflection and realization. Your title is interesting, using the first two words of the first four stanzas, with the last stanza using each two word set. Interesting form.

I love the way the first three lines of your first stanza read - describing the strong characteristics of yourself. It actually makes the fourth line hit the reader harder ending with such a negative emotion. Strong impact - nice.

I also like how you reflect in the first three lines of each stanza, and still the last line of each stanza kind of sums up the emotion of the previous lines.

The writing ends on a positive note - the author shows he will not go down without a fight. Though, sometimes they feel like giving in - the need of survival always kicks in.

Very deep writing.

*Note* GOOD JOB! *Note*

Tracey



This is cowardice... now departed


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Review of Regrets  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*Reading* Hi J. Bell This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

This is a very emotional poem about two people going into the inner city. They thought they could handle it, but sadly, only one came out.

Your title is strong and drew me in and your description well describes what the piece is about.

Your writing is strong with your words clearly describing the scene. The emotion of your words come across vividly, leaving a feeling of desperation, sadness, but also self preservation. *Thumbsup*

Nice job! I look forward to reading more from you. *Smile*

Tracey


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Review of Life in a Box™  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Amalie Cantor - We Got This! This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

This is a wonderful piece written about two people living together though miles apart. They live life through their computer. They believe to be happy, but are they truly? How happy can a person be, when their whole social life is lived only through a screen and keypad in front of them? The computer is a wonderful creation, but when we use it as a surrogate for human interaction, it is then that we truly hurt ourselves, in so many ways.

I enjoyed this thought-provoking writing. The message you pen within the words is loud and clear, and one which needs to be heard by soooo many of us!

I have enjoyed my visit to your port. I welcome you to WDC and look forward to seeing you around. *Smile*

Tracey


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Amalie Cantor - We Got This! This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Continuing on with the Author's Spotlight! *Heart*

This is the first poem I have read of yours. It's hauntingly beautiful! Your words paint a beautiful picture of each season, with the wind crying throughout each scene. The flow is perfect with a wonderful A-B-A-B rhyme scheme and moving the first line of the first stanza, down a line in each stanza, with it ending up being the last line in the last stanza. Good job! *Thumbsup*

*Idea* My only suggestion would be in the second stanza, the last word in your first and third lines:

Another season, come and gone,
And thus does the wind cry,
Of summer's beauty now undone
And autumn's entrance brisk and dry.

Gone and Undone do not rhyme, causing a break in your A-B-A-B rhyming scheme.

That's my only suggestion - the rest of the poem is beautifully done. *Smile*

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey


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Review of A Choice  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*Reading* Hi Amalie Cantor - We Got This! This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

This is a continuation of "That the Blind Might See"  [13+], so that is what drew me to the piece. I wanted to read the follow-up story. *Smile*

This is another flash fiction writing. The piece is well written and the dialogue flows smoothly. The author does a great job of showing us the surroundings of the main characters, as well as showing us their descriptions.

*Books3* Most of what you have written, I kind of gleamed from the first story. That being said, I still enjoyed the read. The all-important moral of the story is reiterated in this story. What's stands out most, is that we do have a choice of how we live our lives and who or what we put first. Will we choose the one that will awaken our senses and make our soul come alive, or will we keep living in the dark, letting it rob us of our life force a little each day, until our life force is completely drained?

Great job on sending a very important message. *Heart*

Tracey


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Amalie Cantor - We Got This! This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

This is a really cute story, with a wonderful lesson. I enjoyed reading it very much. Your words flowed smoothly and the story line moved along at a nice pace. Great job on a flash fiction story! I know flash fiction is not the easiest thing to do. *Wink*

*Note1* I like you title. It's what caught my attention and your description drew me in. Nice job!

*Idea* I believe there's a little bit of Skie, in all of us. We're all so busy living our lives, that we let all the beauty of the world go by us, missing the little miracles of nature, every single day! We need to open our eyes and smell the roses, before our choice to do so, is taken from us. *Heart*


I love your closing line. Beautiful.

*Note* NICELY DONE! WRITE ON ~ *Note*

Tracey


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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Smiles This is a Review on Behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] Author Spotlight! *Bigsmile*

What a wonderful and whimsy idea to write about objects found in an attic. I've always been captivated by old attics, with old chests, full of wonderful stories and perhaps hidden secrets!

I love the way you begin your poem - all of these private items, hidden and protected from within the attic's own characteristics - and the items left to themselves, for so long. Things once pretty and cherished, now left covered in dust and cobwebs, as if part of the one it belonged to is long forgotten. Items once treasured so deeply, now lye abandoned, tucked away - no one to carry on the deep love and emotion once associated, but forever attached.

I enjoyed reading your writing and look forward to reading more, *Smile*

Welcome to WDC!

*Note* WRITE ON! *Note*

Tracey


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Review of Once Upon A Time  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi TarynSloane ~ Writing Congratulations on winning third place in a poem a day contest! I can understand why this piece placed. Even though it's a sad writing, your words impart a lot of emotion and passion to the reader. One is easily pulled into the writing and your heart goes out to the writer.

There's nothing worse, than being head-over-heels in love, and having the one you thought you could trust with all your soul, cheat on you and leave you feeling exposed, vulnerable and played. *Sad* Now because of that one person's actions, it leaves another hardening her heart, swearing to never let that happen again.

Brick walls are hard to tear down, once you put them up - especially when they are safe-guarding your heart and soul. *Heart*

I believe my favorite lines, is your last two lines:

And even though she loved her knight,
from him she would recover.
But the heartbreak from a death of a dream
could last forever.

What a powerful ending. And so very true - the loss of a dream (and hopes) is one of the hardest things to recover from.

*Note* GOOD JOB! *Note*

Tracey


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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Maryann . I enjoyed reading your very cute and creative story *Smile*

Way to go Sis, fast thinking! Put that witch in her place!

I love the way you used the sister's addiction to sunflower seeds, as the trail that gets left behind.

I have to wonder what's going to happen to the spaceship? *Laugh* Is she just visiting earth, to suck the energy life force from innocent children, or is she going to go back to where she came. I think if it were me, I'd have to go back (but not enter the house) *Wink* just to see if it was still there - if it is still there, they should go into town and rally everyone to go and destroy it (and the evil witch) *Bigsmile*

This story could easily be continued into another adventure, or series of adventures.

Good use of imagery and characterization. I don't usually read fanfiction, but I really enjoyed this piece. *Smile* Maybe I'll have to try and read a bit more!

I didn't notice any grammatical errors or misspellings.

Tracey


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Review of Hope?  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Jack-check out 7YS . I enjoyed reading your poem. It's a sad poem, where the writer is lost in a world of loneliness, depression and desolation. A very bad place to be. *Sad*

*Flower1* Anyone who has ever been in a depressed state before, can recognize them in your words, as you pen your first stanza:

Grey, dark, clouded,
The rain pelted down,
As I sat by the window, slipping deeper into the chasm
Of uncertainty, doubt, misery.
I remember the last time
I swore I’d never come back here again,
And yet, here I was again…

What really stood out for me is the line that is in bold. Those words reverberated throughout my being. I've been there - in the very bottom of that un-human pit. When I did finally dig and climb my way out, I too, swore to myself, that it was one place I'd never let myself fall back down to, ever again!

I also really like the way you ended this writing:

My belief punctured by the thorns,
I wonder if I’ll find the rose one day,
I wonder if it even exists…

I especially like the middle line. The poem/prose is very sad, and my heart-strings ache for the writer. My hope is that the writer did find the way out. It does get better, even though it seems like it never will - things don't always stay better, and you may slip again, but just never let yourself slip as deep as you were before - it takes away a part of you, which is hard to get back. *Heart*

((hugs))
Tracey


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Review of Two Ordinary Men  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* Hi Elle - on hiatus Wow! You did such a great job telling the life of these two beautiful souls who served in the Navy. My dad was a Navy man, who fought in the Korean war. He use to tell me a little bit about it - mainly the parts that brought him a smile, I was too young to hear too much about the fighting. Sadly, he died when I was only thirteen-years-old, so I'm sure I missed many more. *Sad*

*Flower4* When you told about the battle and the hundred-and-one people that died, my heart went out to them and their families. War brings so much death and sadness. It's also a time when the family stays in a constant state of alert, praying their loved one comes home safely.

*Note5* I would have loved to seen all the air show of the 16,000 crafts flying in a convoy~ Can you imagine what a site that would have been!~ *Shock*

*Flower1* You did an excellent job telling about the two men in their separate lives, and then showing how they came together, through their children, and spent the rest of their lives in a close friendship. *Heart*

Very nice story. Thank you so much for sharing.

Tracey


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Reading* Hi Maryann . What a wonderful beginning to your story. Your words automatically put me in the scene where she was, as well as giving me the sense of the deep love she held for Pelo. Nice! *Wink*

Reading about her shopping extravaganza was fun! It made me want to go shopping. *Laugh* You did a really great job showing us what all she was buying. I don't think Pooca could have done a better job, it looked like she covered all areas. *Thumbsup*

I also enjoyed how you described Patrick. I was so worried someone was going to try and steal their goods, or mug them. I was happy and a little relieved when they made it back to the boat and set sail for home, all safe - including the supplies!

I found this one typo:

*Note1* ...as he starred at the big building,

as he stared at the big building,

*Heart* I love this line:

The adventure is what dreams are made of,

A truer statement was never spoken! Adventure gives us so much - it revitalizes the human soul, which is so needed sometimes!

Great story. Thanks for sharing. *Heart*

Tracey


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* I love your forum - it's so nice to have a forum filled to the brim and overflowing with activity from us older souls *Wink*
My question, do you have an age limit? I'm 49 yo with 6 grandkids and the 7th on the way *Pthb* *Shock* *Laugh*
I've been married 32 years to the same man - need I say more? lol. I've been on my own since 15 and have had such a wide range of life experiences - some fun and some just to survive and yet others just to stay alive. So, with all that being said, can I join your senior's group? Can I, huh, huh? *Bigsmile*
Great job putting this wonderful group together. Look forward to hearing back from you *Smile*
((hugs))
Tracey
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Review of My Angel  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi april This is a Review on Behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  *Cool* *Bigsmile*


*Reading* This is a nice writing, which expresses the pain of losing a two month old baby. How horrible for any mother and family to go through. I'm so sorry for your loss. I truly think this is more of a prose writing - one where you can say what you want to say in a poetic style, without having to abide by any poetry rules.

*Idea* I'd also like to know what happened to the little angel. You let us know she was taken out of the home - was she taking alive during a kidnapping, or was she taken because she sadly left this world and entered a far better one? I think it would help the reader connect to your writing even more. Of course this is only my opinion, please use or discard, as you see fit. *Smile*

Blessings to you and your family.
Happy Anniversary!@
Tracey


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Review of LED BY A STAR  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SHERRI GIBSON This is a Review on Behalf of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


Hey Sherri! So good to be visiting your port again! *Bigsmile* I hope you've been doing good! Look forward to talking to you again, soon *Smile*

*Reading* This is such a beautiful poem. What a gorgeous tribute to Our Lord and Saviour. I love how your words praised Him, even written about Him newly born and lying in a manger. Your words portrayed such imagery, I could envision Him, Mary and Joseph, all bathed in glorious light and adorned with Crowns of Salvation. You also did a wonderful job in writing of the Wise Men's trek and how they found their new born King. *Smile*

Beautifully Done!

Happy Anniversary,
Tracey


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Review of Arendelle  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi bertiebrite hoping for peace This is a Review on Behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group" 


*Reading* This is a beautiful poem, with such vivid imagery. Your words flow smoothly throughout, making the reading of the poem even more intimate.

While Arendelle sounds like a treacherous place to go if ones not careful, it sounds even more mysterious and pretty. A place where the hint of moonlight at the base of deep, dark forest brimming with life would draw you in.

You're very good at showing the beauty, dangers and mystery of Arendelle in your poem. I truly enjoyed it. *Smile*

*Thumbsup* NICE JOB!

Tracey
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Review of Memory, May I?  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi A*Monaing*Faith This is a WDC Anniversary Review! *Cool*


*Reading* Your poem is really good. The emotion is strong and vivid and you have a smooth beat.
Nice job using the prompt words, and making it look simple. *Smile*

*Note1* My only suggestion would be to separate the last stanza into two lines each, to keep flowing with your line count in each stanza above.

I know how you feel about doing interviews and feeling like your brain is only half there. *Pthb* I've been out of college a lot more than two years! *Laugh* Try not to be too hard on yourself. Remember, there are sooo many more applicants now than there use to be. A product of the times.

Next time you go for an interview, brush up on the math you may have forgotten - fractions, decimals, etc... it's easy to lose it when you don't use it! I think that holds true for most people. In the meantime, keep doing what you're doing - trying to enjoy the days off you do have. Plus, if your muse is activated, your days of writing are productive! That's good for your brain and your soul *Bigsmile*

*Thumbsup* KEEP WRITING!

Tracey
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Review of Sanctuary  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Grace♥Leo health issues This is a Review on Behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group" 


*Reading* I'm so there with you! It's funny how synchronicity works - because as I was reading this about your sanctuary, I so needed one right then! *Laugh* In the midst of all the turmoil in my mind, your writing slowed my thoughts and gave me a short meditation of being right there with you! Your writing was vivid, and I had no problem seeing and feeling everything that was going on around you (and me *Wink*).

I also enjoyed how you had different aspects of yourself, doing what you love to do creatively. Once again, it was very easy to replace yourself with myself, as I read. *Heart*

I am saving this piece to my favorites - and will come back and meditate in your sanctuary. (If that's okay *Bigsmile*)

*Thumbsup* Beautifully Done!

Tracey
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Reading* Wow! This is definitely a challenging Challenge *Rolleyes* *Bigsmile* I've been trying to psych myself back up to get involved in blogging again. It truly is rewarding to belong to a blogging community and I do recommend it to anyone who wants to start blogging on a regular basis. A community will inspire you when you don't feel like writing and mostly give inspiration for subjects to write about. *Smile*

This 30 day challenge is not for the blogger weak-at-heart. So get your blood pumping, check your ink in your pen, or your muscles in your fingers *Wink* and get ready to blog - every day for thirty days. The prompts will be provided and they are sure to make you think! If you feel you're ready for the task at hand, the official month (every other month) will sure to entice you with wonderful prizes - but if you're like me, and would rather jump in on an unofficial month (not as much pressure, see how things work, meet a new community of blogging friends) than an unofficial month might be for you as well. Come on in as June is the next unofficial month.

I look forward to seeing you there! *Bigsmile* *Pthb* *Laugh*

Tracey
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Review of The Storms  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hi very thankful This is a Review on Behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group" 


*Reading* This is a good poem and it has a nice flow about it - though I don't think it's quite a Trijan Refrain (please correct me if I'm wrong, or there's another way to write them, which I don't know about) *Rolleyes*

Please note that this is only my opinion and only offered in the spirit of trying to help. Please feel free to use or discard as you feel fit! *Thumbsup*

*Note1* I've always known the Trijan Refrain be 3 stanzas with each first line being the same (though, I know there is a version, which allows the first lines to be different) All three stanzas are to be nine lines each and to follow these rules, meter and rhyming scheme:

8 / A (same LINE to begin each stanza)
6 / B
8 / A
6 / B
8 / C
8 / C
4 / D (first 4 beats from line 5)
4 / D (first 4 beats from line 5)
8 / C

 Let me see if I can give you an example of one stanza:

A Shadow lurks within the walls (8/A)
As it fades in and out (6/B)
Throughout locked rooms and creepy halls (8/A)
Finding you, I don't doubt (6/B)
Haunted Spirits near darkened doors (8/C)
Casting its presence on the floors (8/C)
Haunted Spirits (4/D - 4 Beats from line 5)
Haunted Spirits (4/D - 4 Beats from line 5)
Into the night the banshee roars (8C)


*Flower2* Hmmm .... I guess I know what my next writing will be! *Laugh* Thank you for the inspiration!

I did enjoy your poem, as it is written. Crazy and scary dream! *Shock*

Thank you for sharing.
Tracey


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