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Review by Jeff
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following Simply Positive review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Your essay definitely fits the bill as a comedic essay. As far as I can tell, all of the contest guidelines were followed and you did a great job coming up with a stylish and interesting take on the prompt. In particular, your sense of humor really shone through as someone with (many) years of experience *Pthb* and the wisdom and insight that come along with such an advanced age. *Pthb* (I keep forgetting the "positive" part of these Simply Positive reviews... *Laugh*).

         *Bullet* Honestly, I think you balanced the comedy and the nonfiction essay elements extremely well. Your humor comes from your insight, your assessment (sometimes in hindsight) of the situations, and the inherent ridiculousness of some of those situations. All of these aspects lend themselves well to comedy, while still maintaining the fact that it's a nonfiction essay chronicling your feelings and thoughts about the subject of dating as an older person in today's digital world.

         *Bullet* This was a very touching essay. The aspects where you talk about your family, and life after the passing of your wife, really added a great dramatic and emotional undercurrent to the piece. I suspect that many people will be looking merely to make the judges laugh (which I suppose should be a goal of a comedic essay), but I think you bring something else to the table, which is the ability to make them laugh AND make them feel something.


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* If I were to suggest some way to improve this piece (which I am), it would be to clarify your stance a little more. At various points in the article, it seems like you're making a commentary on the appearance of digital media in the dating scene, the experiences of someone older trying to get back into the dating scene, and the changing opinions of what's desirable in a mate. While all of these are great points to make, and you certainly have the room to make them in this essay, I feel like the transitions between these concepts are just a little muddy at times. I would suggest a bit more structure, which will logically guide the reader through the first of these issues, to the second, and to the third.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought this was a great essay. You really captured the essence of the prompt and came up with an inventive, entertaining way of exploring it. Even as is, I think you've got a solid entry on your hands. Thanks for asking me to take a look at it! *Smile*


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 

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Review of Strays  
Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hi Mara ♣ McBain -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Vibrant characters. It's always such a pleasure to read your work; your characters are always well developed and engaging. I thought both Jared and Cass were captivating characters with a definitive event in their past that shaped their new lives together. Nice job!

         *Bullet* Excellent use of dialogue. The dialogue in this piece really drove the story, and gave it a feeling of simplicity and effectiveness. There's no excess description or detail; just to real people trying to get a handle on a new situation. Bravo. *Smile*


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* I wish I had some suggestions for improvement, but honestly... I have none. I thought this was a great story just the way it's written.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought this was a strong entry filled with two compelling characters, an event in the past, and a new future together that they struggle to find a connection over. Very, very good story, Mara!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

Hi Milhaud - Long Tail -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Good use of the prompt. Danny's character has very clearly been affected by a traumatic experience in his backstory, and that event shaped him into the person he is today, and guides him in his actions. Nice work!


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* Honestly, I couldn't find anything in need of improvement. It was a well-presented, well-told story.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought you did a good job creating a story that effectively explored the prompt and gave us a compelling, unique character. Nice work!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Overcome  
Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hi shotzey -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Good use of the prompt. I think you did a great job creating believable and realistic characters based around a compelling take on the prompt. Your story was engaging, interesting, and your characters came alive on the page. Nice work!


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* One small suggestion for improvement would be to break up the confession of Amber's past with a little bit of narrative action to make it feel like less of an expository passage. As it is, it feels just a little bit on the nose, but with something to break up that dialogue, it could work very effectively.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought this was a great entry. It was a successful, creative use of the prompt, and you did a great job with the execution. Well done!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review of Home Sweet Home  
Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hi billwilcox -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Wonderful characterization. Like so many of your stories, the reader can instantly identify with Charlie and his predicament. You have a real knack for getting your reader to empathize with your characters and this story is certainly no exception.


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* This is a relatively minor issue, but I was hoping for a little more clarity on the event in the character's backstory. Was it being on an ill-fated flight? The virus itself? I know it all kind of goes hand in hand, but if I were to suggest something that could be improved (which I am), it would be this small issue... and that's all I can come up with. *Wink*


OVERALL IMPRESSION

This was a great story. It was terrible and tragic and mysterious all at the same time. Well done!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by Jeff
Rated: ASR | (3.0)

Hi J. Marie Ravenshaw -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Good take on the prompt. Losing a loved one is always a difficult, tragic experience, and it was used to good effect in this story, bringing your family of characters together.


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* I felt that, for this contest, the story missed the prompt a bit. The story focused on the event in the character's past, with only a brief reference in the last short paragraph to the character in the present... when I was looking for a little more of the character in the present, with a reference to what had happened in her past.

         *Bullet* One slight technical note. They walk in on the father with a breathing tube in his mouth, but it's mentioned later on that he was pronounced dead on arrival and the EMTs didn't even attempt to resuscitate him in the ambulance because he had flat-lined. How, when or why, then, was he intubated? *Wink*


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought this was a powerful story. It had compelling characters and real drama, which is difficult to pull off in only 1,200 words. Good job!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

Hi assuranceagent -

I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" , and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Good integration of the past with present events. You did a great job mixing memory with real-time events, seamlessly blending the two into one cohesive story. *Thumbsup*

         *Bullet* Excellent characterization. I thought you did a good job creating two distinctly unique characters and putting them in a situation where their differences played off one another.


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* Honestly, I couldn't think of any improvements to the story. I thought it was well presented and well written just the way it is.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, you did a good job with this story. It was an entertaining and engaging take on the prompt. Well done!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work, and thank you for participating in this month's official WdC contest.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by Jeff
In affiliation with Unofficial Erotica Newsletter ...  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)

Hi percy goodfellow -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

*Checkv* Good characterization. I always enjoy the unique characters you create, Percy, and this story is certainly no exception.

*Checkv* Original take on the prompt. I like the fact that you came up with a fresh and inventive twist on the final exam prompt. *Thumbsup*


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

*Xv* You know what my suggestion for improvement is going to be... *Wink* I'd like to see a little more integration between the dialogue and the narrative. There are chunks of dialogue where the action pretty much stops, and I think if you can keep both elements moving at the same time, you'll have a much stronger story. *Smile*


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, this was a solid entry for the HSP Final Exam. Good work and good luck!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 

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Review by Jeff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello there,

I came across your item today in the Mystery genre listings and thought you did a great job. It would be my pleasure to feature your item in this week's edition of the Official Mystery Newsletter. *Smile*

If you do not currently receive the newsletter, you can subscribe through your Account Options settings, or you can always read archived issues under the Things To Do & Read section.

Keep up the great work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello there,

I came across your item today in the Mystery genre listings and thought you did a great job. It would be my pleasure to feature your item in this week's edition of the Official Mystery Newsletter. *Smile*

If you do not currently receive the newsletter, you can subscribe through your Account Options settings, or you can always read archived issues under the Things To Do & Read section.

Keep up the great work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe
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Review by Jeff
Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Hello there,

I came across your item today in the Mystery genre listings and thought you did a great job. It would be my pleasure to feature your item in this week's edition of the Official Mystery Newsletter. *Smile*

If you do not currently receive the newsletter, you can subscribe through your Account Options settings, or you can always read archived issues under the Things To Do & Read section.

Keep up the great work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe
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Review of Reflections  
Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello there,

I came across your item today in the Mystery genre listings and thought you did a great job. It would be my pleasure to feature your item in this week's edition of the Official Mystery Newsletter. *Smile*

If you do not currently receive the newsletter, you can subscribe through your Account Options settings, or you can always read archived issues under the Things To Do & Read section.

Keep up the great work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe
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Review of Cheating  
Review by Jeff
In affiliation with The Talent Pond  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)

Hi ~*Arpita*~ -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following Talent Pond review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

*Thumbsup* Covered many aspects of the topic. I love the fact that you didn't just tackle one or two issues with cheating... you provided a variety of examples and arguments to emphasize and reinforce your argument that cheating is harmful, whether we realize it immediately or not.

*Thumbsup* Clearly presented. You did a great job structuring this essay into clear and concise paragraphs. It was well laid out, well organized, and presented effectively. Nice work! *Smile*


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

*Thumbsdown* Honestly, I have no suggestions for improvement. You did a great job with the prompt and this is exactly the kind of essay I was hoping to read.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Even if it weren't the only entry this round, it would have been a contender for the prize. You did a great job with it. In fact, I'm so impressed, I'm going to make an executive decision and award you the full prize for First Place. *Bigsmile*


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get caught up with the Sinister Stories contest. With an office move and a death in the family, my time on WdC over the past couple months has been spotty at best, and I apologize for letting it go so long without getting to the judging. Although there were not enough entries in the January 2011 round to award the prizes, I'm going to send you something in recognition of how long you've had to wait for me to get around to the judging. *Wink*

Thank you for your participation in the Sinister Stories contest, and I hope you'll consider entering again now that we're back on track! *Bigsmile*


SoCalScribe
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Review of School Paper  
Review by Jeff
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. Overall, I enjoyed this story. You did a great job of infusing personality and entertainment value in your dialogue, developing effective, engaging characters and making this item a pleasure to read. I felt like it was a little short and therefore missing a bit of a story arc (it ended a little abruptly), but other than that, I thought you did a great job with it. Best of luck in this round of WdC Survivor!
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Review of I Can't Believe  
Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. You did a solid job with this entry. You crafted a complete story, complete with setup, rising action and resolution all in comparatively few words. Dialogue-only isn't easy, but you sure made it look that way with this entry! *Bigsmile* Best of luck in this first round of WdC Survivor! I'll be rooting for for you (so long as it's not my neck on the chopping block! *Pthb*).
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. I thought your entry was well written, and the characters were developed and interesting. We've got some tough competition in our little group, but I think you're right near the top with this entry. *Smile*
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. I thought this was a wonderful item... well written and engaging. I enjoyed it so much, in fact, that I gave it my vote in the poll... instead of voting for myself! *Pthb* What can I say; you wrote the better entry and you deserve the recognition. *Thumbsup*
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. I thought you did a really good job with the dialogue itself. It was engaging, well written, and effectively developed the characters in your story. Unfortunately, it's not technically a dialogue-only entry, since there's an introductory sentence and dialogue tags that present information... but that notwithstanding, I really enjoyed the piece as a whole. Good effort and best of luck in this round of WdC Survivor! *Bigsmile*
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Review of News Test  
Review by Jeff
Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm sending along a quick review for each of the WdC Survivor entries I read before voting in the polls. Overall, I thought this was a fun and entertaining story, although I had a little trouble following along and seeing the complete story being told. Other than that, though, the dialogue itself was fun and engaging. Well done and good luck in this round of WdC Survivor! *Smile*
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Review by Jeff
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi Hayley I. (aka Kilpik) -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following Rising Stars Member-to-Member review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.

WHAT WORKED

*Thumbsup* I loved the creativity that went into this story. You came up with a really great premise, and the Rainbow Man was a wonderful throwback to the snake oil salesmen of old, who peddle wares that are often less than they seem.

*Thumbsup* Wonderful moral of the story. Your thematic elements shone through and you told a heartfelt, captivating, enjoyable story in just a few short paragraphs. It's everything a short story should be. *Smile*

*Thumbsup* Excellent detail and description. You made this fantasy world come alive and jump off the page. It reminded me much of the movie Pleasantville in style and concept, and I thought this version of the premise was just as good. *Delight*


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

*Thumbsdown* I wish I had some suggestions for improvement, but I loved this story just the way it was written. It's easily one of the most imaginative and elegant stories I've read on this site lately. Great work!


OVERALL COMMENTS

Overall, this was simply wonderful. Fantastic work!


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,

SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 

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Review by Jeff
Rated: E | (4.0)
Overall, I think this is a great format and good introduction to the class. I like the addition of Matty Rosen and Cornelia Cobb to add a little depth and variety to the forum. The only suggestion I have is to perhaps utilize Dropnotes for the lessons themselves. The item feels a little text-heavy, and upon initial skimming of the item, feels like a lot of information being presented all at once. If you utilize Dropnotes for the lessons, people who are interested can expand that particular section... and the item itself will appear less dense to the casual peruser who is trying to determine if the class - on a general level - interests them.

Other than that, this sounds like great fun!


SoCalScribe
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Review by Jeff
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .



Hi MoralityKid -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following Simply Positive review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that the following is my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard any of my comments as you see fit.


WHAT WORKED

         *Bullet* Good use of description. You painted a vivid picture with your judicious and yet effective use of detail. There was just enough to give the reader a clear picture of what you want them to imagine, without being too forceful or overbearing. Nicely done!

         *Bullet* Effective use of dialogue. You integrated dialogue into the story well, and it helped move your narrative along in all the right places. Good job!


WHAT COULD BE IMPROVED

         *Bullet* Honestly, nothing comes to mind. I really enjoyed this story just the way it is.


OVERALL IMPRESSION

Overall, I thought you had a great item, with strong characters, and an effective writing style. It was a pleasure to read your work. *Smile*


I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 

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Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Hi Anitta Bae -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that these comments are my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard anything in this review as you see fit.

I thought that there was a lot of great imagination and creativity that went into this story. It was original, detailed, and there was certainly a lot going on! Overall, however, I felt that the story lacked a little focus. The protagonist - Sam - seemed to be pulled from one event to the next, almost at random. There was very little cause and effect in the story; he just migrated from one moment to the next moment. I think you did a great job setting up the mythology and developing some truly engaging story concepts, but a little more polish is needed to bring everything together.

This is a great start, and I think with some time spent revising and fine tuning, this could turn into a very entertaining, enjoyable story.

Good effort! *Smile*

I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Also, it would be a pleasure to feature this item in an upcoming issue of the Official Mystery Newsletter.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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Review by Jeff
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi rbued -

I had a chance to read your item today, and have enclosed the following review for your consideration. Please keep in mind that these comments are my opinion only, and you as the author have the right to use or disregard anything in this review as you see fit.

I thought this was a great flash fiction story. It had the feel of a classic noir tale, and the personal, offhanded way Jack narrates the story gives the audience an instant connection to him, which makes the surprise at the end all the more twisted and unexpected. I wish I had some suggestion for improvement, but I liked this story just the way it is. Very well done! *Thumbsup*

I hope that you've found my comments useful. Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work.

Also, it would be a pleasure to feature this item in an upcoming issue of the Official Mystery Newsletter.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Best regards,


SoCalScribe

Please check out these items:
"Unofficial Erotica Newsletter Group" 
"The Dark Society" 
"Blogocentric Formulations" 
"Beyond The Water's Edge - CLOSED" 


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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