Just whwn I thought I knew enough about google from part 1, here comes part 2 and a promise of a part 3. At first I wasn't sure why I would want to search google in different languages, but I tried it and found it a bit interesting. I now look forward to reading part 3.
Very well written and helpful. Personally, I've always used the default and never gone into detail, I have to admitt, I didn't realize you could go into a more detailed search. I will keep that in mind for the future and see how that helps me with my writing.
I like it, but I think it might be a little better if there was more information in there, like what was the cause of his pain. Cancer, arthritis, heart disease or just living. I think for a controversial subject like this, knowing that, would help the reader understand how they had come to such a decision.
A sad, telling poem about the loss of a loved one and the regrets one has on what may have been left unsaid. The author catches the lonliness one would feel after losing someone they truly care about.
Nice poem, depicting the darker side of love. The author captures the feeling of rage and betrayal that one finds after realising that he had been cheated on.
I had a similar place, when I was a kid and it also was torn down to build apartments. No creek though, but bushes with lots of berries and a tree my sisters and I would sit under and make believe. Sad, how progress can destroy the pleasures of childhood.
Very good story! Only problem I could find is in punctuation and capitilizing and a few missed words. Examples...
He help but think how pathetic it would be if he died before he ever got to start the mission.. should be, he couldn't help,
There lying in the protection of the cart was the young princess Abigail staring straight back at him.
should be princess, Abigail, staring straight back at him.
“right, and tell my dad that you kidnapped me and decided you didn’t want me? I can see it now, yes sir here’s your daughter back. I’m sorry I took her but at least I gave her back!”
Beginning of a sentence should be capitalized...Right. Several examples of this in story. But I love the story and am adding it to my favorites!
Excellent poem. In the beginning, the rhythm seems off, I think leaving the out in equilibrium shifts would help, but that's the only thing I noticed. I've had a panic attack before so I think you caught the feeling very well!
I began reading this, thinking, "how cute" and wondered what twists the writer would find in this variation of Peter Pan. The story then took a disturbing turn with the crusifiction of the family pet. A very horrific tale. An excellent read!
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I did not see that coming. Simply hilarious! And by the way, I didn't know you knew my boss. 
I loved it! 