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Review of Step Around  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully, intellectual. I enjoyed thinking through this one. Thanks.

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Review of Imagine  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Personally, I like the lightness of your first three lines in each stanza, and then the punch of emotion you evoke in the fourth line. (The only line I'm not so fond of is "imagine the years" in the third stanza.) The finale of the fourth stanza is appropriately solemn and sweet.

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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this nice, neat little snipet of reality.

I found your writing clear and concise, yet descriptively inviting and genuine.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your descriptive choices bring this piece to life. I found your writing clear---easy to read and understand---and flowing in a gentle yet moving cadence.
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Review of Behind the Mask  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very clear, accurate portrayal of the mask of manipulation.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poetry here is quite intriguing... Yet I found it hard to grasp you exact meaning.

The poetic quality of your writing here is truly mesmerizing.
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Review of Stealing Psalm 40  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome, real writing... the way you have given us your testimony -- encouraging without a hint of pomp or condescension.
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Review of A Day Spent  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found A DAY SPENT, deeply moving and beautiful!
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Review of Changes  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A lovely Villanelle... and a very appropriate topic since seasons come and go, year-after-year, making the repetitive lines most sincere.

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Review of Chained  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice story, Mr. Marshall. I especially like the ending.

Your descriptive use of words and word choice make your story both sincere and engaging.

Good work!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful!

Thank you, iKïyã§ama!! Thanks.
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Review of Doing it right  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very cute, fun piece with a moral. I enjoyed the rhythm of your rhyme.

Good work!!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found THE THREE KINDS OF REJECTION LETTERS very informative, helpful, thank you!

I've saved this to my favorites.
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Review of Angels Listened  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
ANGELS LISTENED is a very lovely piece with a comfortable lilt of rhythm and rhyme, which makes it simply shine.

Every detail fits together perfectly, you most certainly were inspired and, hence, inspired us as well.

Well done!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed us all a GLIMPSE OF HEAVEN in this beautiful and inspiring poem.

Your use of descriptive imagery and metaphors awakens the senses.

I enjoyed the nice cadence of rhythm and rhyme, flowing gently throughout. No stumbling found here.

Nearing the end, goosebumps rose on my skin and my heart lept within me.

Godspeed!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I found this melancholy monologue very appealing. You've broached a sensitive subject, yet in a soft-spoken and endearing manner.

I enjoyed your word choice. "Gentle and true" come to mind as I reflect.

Your writing is clear, focused and free-flowing --- melodious.

Thank you for sharing this!


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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice gentle story anyone would find pleasing, a comforting retreat.

Good luck with the submission!

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Review of Picture This  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good job! I thoroughly enjoyed PICTURE THIS!

You kept me on the edge of my seat, just like a good scary story should; and I liked the twist at the end, which gave a good jolt.

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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very creative, a "work of art" this piece, THE WRITER WRITES.

I enjoyed every last descriptive detail, every word, the gentle flow of the rhythmic rhyme cadence. I found it very focused and free flowing, refreshingly unique.

Thank you.

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Review of Words  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed your "word play" here. A fun read, and more fun to write, I'd bet.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Exercise poll  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like to walk long distances with nice scenery. I especially like Yoga.

I've found that walking outside is much better than walking the treadmill. I walk alone or with someone who enjoys walking long distances like me. If you walk regularly, the weight will start falling off.

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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I found your writing quite imaginative, unique and interesting. Fun in a scary sort of way.

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I found a few editing mishaps:

Did you mean "one drawer{/} up from Nancy Cartwright?"

Here you probably meant: "...The critics stopped short/u} of using the word s***..."

"...pockets of muted convesration..." s/b conversation.

"...shortcircuit but..." s/b short-circuit.

"...In fact, that''s where I stopped and moved on to something... s/b "that's"

I believe "traumatised" s/b "traumatized."











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Review of Gone In a Flash  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.0)
Intriguing piece of poetry... this "Gone in a Flash." You captured and held my interest throughout. I enjoyed your descriptive word play.

Clearly, you're a bird watcher.

My only suggestion would be to check your format and spacing to make sure each line ends and begins appropriately:

Perhaps, in the second line of the first stanza, end the second line at "seeking-high," and begin the next line at "High, into piercing blue...," etc.

In the first line of the second stanza, perhaps end the line at "sharp sunny day," and so on.
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Review of Spring Romance  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Here: "...In the days first light." "Days" s/b "day's" since it's possessive of "first light."

Otherwise, your Doditsu is a lovely picture of spring.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I see why you did so well in the contest... What was the quotation?

I found your story focused, clear, easy to follow. You gave us a lot of information in the span of a short conversation, which was quite entertaining.

Nicely done.

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