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I like reading stories taken from life. I like this thoughtful piece. It is full of wonderful thoughts. I feel that it wrote from life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.
Yes, it is very awful that some people fight over religion. All religions ask for simplicity and love.
You paint a nice picture of your early days as well as life. I like the messages conveyed in this piece. Especially in the lines the most radiant lesson is that people are important, no matter who, what, or where they are.
Great write, It's so inspirational. Thanks for sharing!!
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Why?" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
You seem to write this story with selective word choice. For example, color, spear and attack. I understood this was written for this kind of contest but it still looks great. You managed it well. This is really a good story.
I enjoy the character Paul and Ellen and the suspense. I think you can make a bigger story from this piece. This would be interesting.
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Inside the Darkness" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
FIRST IMPRESSION: I love reading stories written with the prompts. This is clever story of you. I appreciated the way you told this story. I like the title as well, it fits this story.
SETTING:In a modern time.
CHARACTERS : The characters are believable and the storytelling is very good.
DIALOG:I like the dialogues. It floated beautifully between Kathi and Beth
I like the ending.A laughing, 108 year old reflection of herself, staring back into the eyes of a 40 year old screaming Kathi.
suggestion: I felt your story was a little rushed. I think you needs to mention the Writer’s Cramp prompt to understand the readers. Otherwise it’s a great story. I enjoy it reading.
Indeed the Autumn changed everything in nature but not our hearts. Autumn represented the sad reflections of life. Yet it represented as the melodies of colors of love and affection.
I enjoy the scents, colors and sounds this poem “Royal purples and vibrant reds,
Orange pumpkins and Indian corn,”
I like the image and symbol you have used here. You metaphorically compared the natural object with human nature.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank for sharing!
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Friendship" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a beautiful gratitude poem for heartfelt friendships. You wrote beautifully about the importance of friendship.
The importance of friendship not express in a words. Friends make us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. They are always there for us when in need. Your words are very true. I like the repeated verse of this villanelle poem “A touch of kindness to inspire.” And “A heart for honest desire.”
For me, I never would be a writer without them. I think they are the reason we stay glued. I like this poem!
I understand you wrote for Game of Thrones contest and you managed it well. I enjoyed your poem. It followed the prompt
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "The Lighthouse Keeper" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
General Impression: {/b} This is a good story about a women who attracted to the unusual lighthouse keeper.
It’s beautifully written and told. I especially like how each paragraph starts. I like the descriptions.
Dialogues: {/b} Dialogue floated beautifully between the characters.
Characters: {/b} All the characters (Audrina, Damian ) are well developed.
I understand you wrote for Game of Thrones contest and you managed it well. I enjoyed your story. It followed the prompt probably and you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "The Lighthouse Keeper" . This review reflects my opinion only,and I am not a writing expert.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
General Impression: This is a good story about a women who attracted to the unusual lighthouse keeper.
It’s beautifully written and told. I especially like how each paragraph starts. I like the descriptions.
Dialogues: Dialogue floated beautifully between the characters.
Characters: All the characters (Audrina, Damian)are well developed.
I understand you wrote for Game of Thrones contest and you managed it well. I enjoyed your story. It followed the prompt probably and you can make bigger story from everything I just read. It would be interesting.
I read this poem from read and review page. This is a sweet poem. It feels like breathing a fresh air. I enjoy the scents, colors and sounds of this poem. You painted life so beautifully. I understand you wrote this from personal life experience and it looks great. I like the last stanza
"Night has fully fallen; the heavens burn bright.
My questions, now answered, fall by the wayside.
I breathe in the cool air and stare into the night
knowing you're with me, held tightly inside."
This is a good thoughtful piece about the tact and charisma. I appreciate the way you displayed it.
It makes me read it to the end. Your words are very true that knowing one's own vision are all factors inside a person who combines charisma and tact. Yes, personal attractiveness may influence others for a certain periods of time but not forever. Both Charisma and skills combined together make a winning profile.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I learn many from this piece.
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I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "A Journey To Love" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. It has lovely romantic thoughts woven inside every line. You started beautifully In the city, an expanse of rubble, Hopes, smiles, sins, radicals and trouble. Your words are so pure and true. Yes, true love is hard to find because it is extraordinary in your words “tough job for mortals where angels fall”.
I feel this poem is strong, positive, and bright and inspirational. I like the last stanza His image faded, though mine stayed, you see, From the deep, his voice said, "I'm you; you are me." It packed with message.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank for sharing!
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Inside the Darkness" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I like this supernatural story about hunting vampire. I appreciated it’s descriptions and presentations. You have good characters descriptions for example “He looked rather magnificent as reddish sparkles radiated out of his eyes, forming a direct contrast to his sparkling white pointed teeth” . The setting and the plot is absolutely fantastic. The dialogues floated beautifully between the characters. I loved the endings “That's when I feel, in my blood, a wild wind swirling, singing, pulsating from a center so bright. “ it is certainly different than the usual vampire mysteries stories I have read!!
I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Beneath the Spring Rain" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I really liked this poem because of the metaphor you have used here for examples: “ash-colored veins” “millions of eyelids blink “the steel needles of spring “Twisting in her hands her keys to rebirth “
You painted the season spring beautifully. I like the little rhyming and
the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.
The poet uses the colors and shapes, sounds, smells, touch, and feelings to create the images.
I like the last stanza “splashes in question marks on the slippery street,
while she laments frizzled hair,
instead of frizzled dreams.” and I feel that this is positive. It has good message.
This is my second review for your poem, as I am taking part for July Challenge for "The WDC Angel Army" ,
I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Marking the New Year" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
Beautifully started with the lines “December's blue moon still hung heavy in the sky”. I really liked this celebration poem because of the enchanted scenery you have painted here.
It feels like a beautiful light awakening in the darker shadows of winter and shines bright. I found it reflected in the lines “of new beginnings, stretched out
into the moon-gilded night.”
I like this because it’s wrote from life’s experience . I like the little rhyming of your poem and how each line breaks. I feel this poem is positive and soothing.
I am taking part for July Challenge for "The WDC Angel Army" . I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Shattered Ice" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I really liked this poem because of the way you painted life with the breathtaking beauty of winter. You beautifully used the quote Snow provokes responses that reach right back to childhood. I like this epic poem. I like the little rhyming and how you ended the word “breathe” in every line, “for a brief moment I cannot breathe” “air trailing as they breathe.” “It takes more than air to breathe.”
I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories. I feel that it wrote from life experience.
The poet uses the colors and shapes, sounds and smells, touch and feelings to create the images. For example “Crystal clings to every branch” “a sharp crack of winter’s whip” “Boots crunch, footstep designs break virgin white” “a crimson memory flash.”
I like the last stanza and I feel that this is positive. It packed with message.
I just read this from read and review page.
This is a sweet tribute for a heartfelt friendship.
The story: The story is about a pet.You wrote beautifully what pets do for us.
Sometimes pets makes us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. I like the lines "This friend of mine always makes me happy, makes me laugh and wherever I go, he always follow me. I love the way he used to come to me and play with me." Yes friends should be like this. The way you wrote can easily read. I also like the ending.
Closing Comments: Friendship is a good subject for poetry. I enjoyed it reading. I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.
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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
I like this journal poem. I like how you express your feelings accumulated your thoughts. it is wonderful that you record your thoughts, feelings and observations in a poetic style.
I like your poem, It is full of lovely romantic thoughts inside every line. I like how each line breaks. yes, love should be like that. I find this poem is positive tone. I especially like the end stanza
"We smile at one another
Hi!!
I just read this poem from read and review page.
The Poem: I love reading friendship poems. You wrote beautifully what friendship truly mean. I like how you crafted your words.
Friends makes us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. Life becomes dusty bleak desert without friends. The way you wrote can easily read.
Favorite parts:
“We chose different paths,
Our destiny might not be the same,
But our hearts remain as one,
And someday we'll meet again"
Closing Comments: Friendship is a good subject for poetry. I enjoyed it reading. I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.Thank you for sharing!!
I like this afterglow poem because it is rich in words. You are right that The changes in every person are so everlasting that there is an afterglow shining around the world.
We come to this world only for a few amount of time. Life begins like sunrise. Sometimes clouds and storm prevent us from shinning. But after storm keep sun shining. It’s so wonderful to see sun shines again. These was reflected in your poem. You paint's a nice picture. The tone I find this poem is positive and so true.
I like the lines of the end stanza
for us all to capture this without withholding the enrichment
of all this love in the world brings a strong lasting presence
This is sweet poem about Hawaiian Breeze. I appreciate the simplicity of this poem. You expressed beautifully your feelings . Sometimes we need to look around, slow down, take deep breath to avoid the digital world, and we found the simple pleasures that makes us delightful.
You have good rhyming in this poem. I like the lines
The aroma of this sent is so, so pleasant
That it brings a pleasant Pervade
First I want to tell you that I love rhyming poetry. I found you have many wonderful poems here. I am now reviewing this beautiful song lyrics. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good poem. I like the colors and shapes and sounds of this poem.
THE POEM: This poem has lovely romantic thoughts woven in each line. I admire every word choice and the flow was smooth and continuous. The tone I find this poem is soothing and positive. Your rhyming scheme make this poem more interesting.
FAVOURITE LINES: In time I will heal and I will be free.
I'll send back these heartaches to you C.O.D.
I'll send back these heartaches to you C.O.D.
It's been a pleasure to review your story "Dear Me Letter Contest Entry" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army"
I love reading dear me contest letters. Your letter is inspirational and after reading this I find encouragement too. I appreciate this and enjoy it.
I like the third paragraph Enjoy your writing with a cup of tea at your side waiting for you to take a sip and enjoy it bouquet of aroma.Here, in my country tea is very popular. I can't imagine starting my day without a cup of tea.
I found that you need a verb corrections The world will be a better place because you were here and did what you could to help people and make their lives better it should be “are”.
It would be interesting to read if you align your letter.
I think you are a good writer and you can make this world beautiful through reading and writing.
This was a very good letter! I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you write some more letters in the coming years. Thank you for sharing your work!
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
I like this poem because it’s full of wonderful thoughts. You have painted a vivid picture through your writings. It is easy to read and understand. Yes, writing is the best way to express our feelings. I learned many from WDC and still I am learning.
We can help ourselves by writing. If we put down our good and bad feelings that happened everyday and acknowledge them may help to remove anxiety and lift up our spirit. The words of your poem is so pure, honest and very true.
My favorite: Hold your head high
You're not dead you're alive
write and you'll receive a reply
Some suggestions: I think you need to capitalize all the first letters of each lines.
Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. It is wonderful.
First I want to thank you for this sweet little poem. I am now reviewing it and this review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I like this poem because your words are so true. Its express strong emotion. you wrote beautifully with deepest feelings. I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful. I appreciate its simplicity. My favorite lines
Love is something
But it’s not anything
suggestions: I think you can add some extra lines to make it more beautiful.
I enjoyed it reading.
Mina
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Beautifully started with the lines “December's blue moon still hung heavy in the sky”. I really liked this celebration poem because of the enchanted scenery you have painted here.