First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: Good start. A very good thoughtful piece and so true. I like the fonts color.
THE STORY: Every person born with unique personality into this world. We born to represent something new.
And if we do or follow another person, dressed like another we never know who we really are. So, we should destroy our false world and accept our true selves.
Favorite lines:You truly said “once you decide to dress yourself as another person who isn't you, you just killed yourself, not literally but emotionally. “
SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.
FINAL THOUGHT:In conclusion, I think you wrote a good article with a good message Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
I just read your poem when I came across read and review page. I love this roundabout poem and the way you wrote it. The rhyme scheme and rhythm felt almost lyrical in my head as I'm reading it. I feel the emotion woven in this poem. I like the lines
"Many a day I wonder why--
I must sit by myself and cry.
You’ve turned your back on me it seems
I’ll give you back your diamond rings
I must sit by myself and cry."
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: Good start. I like this gratitude poem and the concept as well. You draw a picture of someone who play a significant role in our life. I am now reviewing it and I do hope you find something that is interesting and helpful to you.
THE POEM: A mother's love for her child is like nothing else in the world . She loves us unconditionally and never expect anything in return. You start beautifully “I was planted in you like a seed “ yes it is very true. Our tiny life grew in her umbilical cord. Her love is incomparable. You truly said in your line “You bought all the finest cloth, accessories” I Like the images you have painted.
SUGGESTIONS: I saw a few mistakes however. In the third stanza you used the line " You bought all the finest cloth,accessories " I think you need a space after comma. I think you need to capitalize "I" because it is a pronoun.
CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Ryan”. You crafted him so beautifully.
FINAL THOUGHT: Nicely put your feelings into words.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I'm reviewing for the Review Challenge for March.
FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a wonderful story. Beautifully told and written. It flowed beautifully with your well-crafted words. I like the suspense builds through this story. It makes the readers worry about your main character.
THE STORY: A family found a boy during a weekend getaway.
DIALOGUES: Dialogue floated normally between the characters and I could imagine the scenes where they are.
CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. You crafted all of them so beautifully.
I enjoyed it reading. Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us.
I just read your thoughtful twisted poem from read and review page. It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Fall" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army"
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
TITLE:I like this thoughtful poem and the title as well.
IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images you have sketched here.
RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear.
RHYTHM: You have good rhythm in this poem.
FAVORITE:
“Love and pain,
are one in the same.
It’s the synonym,
I can live with.”
STRUCTURE & FORM: I like how each line breaks.
THEME: Yes life is like that. Your poem reminds me a quote 'In Light there is Dark, and in Dark there is Light.' Which was reflects in your poem.
OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: I just read your thoughtful twisted poem from read and review page. Maya Angelou's beautifully told in her poem how a bird struggling to escape its cage. You beautifully twisted Maya Angelou's poem, "I know why the caged bird sings".
THE POEM: I like the images you have painted here. I liked some phrases play in this poem “knows no bounds” “wide and out” “land on the sand,” “captive in a cage” “perish with age”.
I especially like the rhyming of your poem. It flowed well with your crafted words.
My favorite lines: “a pleasure once so grand.
The bird now yearns to land and soar,
to be free once more.”
SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.
FINAL THOUGHT:In conclusion, I think you wrote a good poem with a good message.
I just read your poem from read and review page. I found you have many wonderful poems in your poem. • Humorous ending. Your poem has lovely romantic thought crafted inside. I like your thought process. It's real to life and humorous. My favorite lines
"I thought of you the whole time; your face was in my head."
She grinned and said, "You miss me and what we had in the past."
"Not really," was my answer "I just didn't want to cum too fast!""
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good romantic poem. I like its simplicity.
THE POEM: The main image is wonderful. Yes, love should be expressed that way.
Your poem has beautiful romantic thought woven inside every line. It seems you wrote this from personal experience. You told beautifully about your deep and meaningful love to her.
FAVORITE LINES: “The stars have shifted
And I find my way.
I get lost and found again
Day after day.“
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told with third person. I especially liked the way you tell your story.
THE STORY: This is a story of a man Ryan who was too shy to find a soul mate.
Ryan was walking alone at the seashore enjoying the natural beauty. But he very much desired to experience this enchanted scene with a loved one. You have a good imagination. I like the thought “How would it feel to combine nature' s tranquilizing power and her serene presence?” your story tells that a hesitation is a missed opportunity.
DIALOGUES: Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the presentation.
CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Ryan”. You crafted him so beautifully.
SUGGESTION: I didn'find any mistake.
FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.
I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.
I just read our poem when I came across read and review page. It is beautiful poem. I like this carefully designed poem. The words "Water, splashing" "Ancient mountain" "mountain's spring" all the natural things blended together creates a beautiful images. I like how you displayed it. I could feel the sound, smell of this poem.
My favorite lines
"Mountain's spring, unearthed;
crystal droplets springing out--
water, splashing, pure!"
you have used punctuation marks where they are needed.
I just read "The Turtle's Triumph!" when I came across read and review page. I like this story written with prompt a turtle's greatest accomplishment from the perspective of the turtle. I find it good reading and humorous. It's so imaginative. I appreciate the narrator's thought process. Especially the ending is brilliant
"Being stuck upside down is the greatest challenge a turtle could ever face and I overcame it in record time."
I just read "The Light Of Olympus" when I came across read and review page.
This is good piece of research work. It packed with information about universe. I learned many things from your piece. Yes I learned that giant stars are millions upon millions of times brighter than our own sun. Scientist are still working on to find a planet like our earth.
I like this scientific piece. The way you wrote keeps me reading it to the end.
I just read "A Whirlwind Romance" when I came across read and review page. This is beautiful romance piece written with limited words. Your word prompt "hair" "dress" "stripes" was probably given to make some kind of romance story.I think that's why you focused on that which is important for the contest. I think you could make a bigger story.
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. Thank you for sharing your work! Pleasure to read it!
I just read this when I came across read and review page. The way you wrote this keeps me reading it from the beginning to the end. The dialogue flows beautifully between the characters. You have good imagination. I could also imagine how characters look like. I like the character Megan.
Beautifully told and written. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
I read your piece as I came across read and review page. I like the images you have painted in your poem. The descriptions are well written and so true. Your poem has good messages inside every line. This poem gives me the positive impression. My favorite line
"To many these days, trials
Are too much to bear.
So they question and doubt and
Seek hope elsewhere."
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
Thanks for sharing your story with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
I just read your piece. It is very thoughtful piece and true. It keeps me reading it to the end. You truly said "Women aren’t as strong as men."
The right to educate women is a fundamental right of the nation. The number of men and women in the world is almost equal. But, Interestingly the education rate of women is less than men.
Beautifully written and told.
Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Keep writing!
I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work.
This poem is beautiful. It really demonstrates the poet's frustration over this relationship. I like the word "invisible wings" woven in throughout the poem. I like how you put your feelings into words. I find this poem is positive. I like the ending
"My courage grows strong
My invisible wings are no more"
Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
This is wonderful poem about Two Halves of Man. Every person has two sides good and evil. Good and evil are really one, but we have broken them which reflected in your poem. I like how you contrasts the two world. you truly said
"Evil rules this world we’re in,
Just look around, don’t pretend.”
A tear falls down the angel’s face.
“You old demon you are out of place.”
The tone is soothing. And your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful.
Beautifully started with onomatopoetic words in the lines "Ahhhhhchoooo! (Bless me) It must be Spring."
I like the images you have painted here. This poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like the scent, color of your poem. It is vivid and so enchanted. "leaves are opening" "new year's birth." "brightly paints the hills" all the natural things blended creates a beautiful spring nature.
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed it reading. Thank you for sharing!
I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. This is good poem about Insomnia. I like how you put your feelings into words. Now a days insomnia is very common because of our busy schedule. Anxiety, stress, and depression is a part of our life. We cannot eradicate it. I like way you expressed it. The tone I find this poem is soothing.
I read this beautiful gratitude poem "Daddy" when I came across read and review page. The poem about a old aged father written by the view point of a daughter. I like the simplicity of this poem and the big meaning it has. I like this poem because of the beautifully crafted words. I like the repeated stanza
"A stubborn mule he has been called,
This father of mine with his unshakeable pride."
I like the way you put your feelings into words. Its beautifully told. Thank you for sharing!
I just read your poem. It is a lovely poem. A very good poem with an unique concept. It has lovely thought inside every line. I like the way you put your feelings after watching a romantic film. I like the lines
"I seek it everyday.
The love of people,
The love of friends,
The love of life,"
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you.
I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work"BE KIND ENOUGH TO CARE" .
Good start. I like the beautiful nature picture you have painted. I am now reviewing it and I do hope you find something that is interesting and helpful to you.
This is a very sweet story about a girl who used to come beside a lake with her mother. There is nothing more beautiful than being with nature. It helps people feel happier and more connected which reflected in your story. You truly said “her sweet lullaby resounding through my ears.”
You penned down all your thoughts so beautifully.
Suggestion: If you make it a bit longer, it would be interesting. This is just one person opinion.
Overall: I enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing it with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.
Keep writing!
I especially like this poem. The last stanza was my absolute favorite. Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. The tone of this poem is soothing. It has lovely romantic thought inside every lines. I admire every word choice.
I just read your piece. It is so thoughtful and so true. You wrote beautifully the problem of our society.
I like the concept. Yes cheating is totally wrong. Sadly, nowadays cheating has become a lot more easier than before. Because of the advanced technology. I like the words of your poem. It is so inspirational.
yes it is true that "Society will praise the winner, But pride will be defeated by the truth."
Thank you for sharing!
Mina,
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Good start. I like the beautiful nature picture you have painted. I am now reviewing it and I do hope you find something that is interesting and helpful to you.