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Rated: E | (5.0)
Superb! Fantastic!

This poem speaks about love, essence and maturation of love relation, where space is not a factor and time is not absolutely necessary.

As the love story is a pure imaginative fruition, the relevance of time and space do not appear to be more important.

At the end the desire is so expressed, as it happens, in reality, a lover does give more importance to space and time for maturation of love for making a relation.

I like the poem, it is really challenging; it tells about the implication of imagination and practice of love. Today, in the age of internet or information technology age, the implication of thoughts appear lesser implication oriented to a general reader.

I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the speed and spark of the thoughts, flow of thoughts, the viewpoints, word visuals, and monologue flavour of appreciation of love in thought and in maturation, glow and gravity of a love story in dimensions, the word imagery and the free flow of thoughts.

I am happy to write this fifteenth (15th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 6 years ago in April, 2014.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of A Promise Broken  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Sad! Tragic!
She tells her story, how she finds her status today, she is broken down, she has been deceived by him, he promised and swore to her on a moon night, he somehow made her to believe him, and today she is alone, truly, a promise broken, I like the poem, I have enjoyed the true taletelling, the word visuals and word imagery.

Edit:
a poem about betrayal.
(This is a poem about betrayal.)

Comments:
I do not understand the mention of Genre: Death and I think I do not find and direction mention of facts about death; superficially if mentioned, and or metaphorically incited or expressed, where I think I need to assume and rethink about the story to find out the essence of mentioning the Genre: Death; however, I do understand a metaphoric influence of death but it is not clearly expressed.

Besides, there is not a hint or a word about death mentioned in Author’s Notes.

As a reader, I could not enjoy the story is based on the background of death. Interestingly enough, the entire first stanza of the poem gives light about death as an incident the poet has referred to metaphorically. And I appreciate for the poetic trick of expression.

My point is not that why the word ‘death’ is not mentioned, my point is the first stanza should have been expressed more intensively to refer to the incident of death, and the story begins thereafter. Mentioning the word ‘Hell’ does not incite the thought about the inference of death as an incidence happened there, and if, that is purely assumptive and as per the intelligence of a reader. Time is precious, a reader may not be so much interested to invest time in the read to assume and presume the background of the story.

Please feel free to accept or reject any of my edits and or comments. I have tried to help you though.

I am happy to write this twenty-fifth (25th) review of your poem of betrayal which was posted on public read and review about 15 years ago in August, 2004.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Earth Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naturally wonderful!

I like this poem about saving our earth – Nature and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word visuals, the word imagery and the message.

Poet is concerned much about our mode of living, non-concerning about saving our earth, and worried about our wrong use and misuse our natural resources and Nature.

Poet wishes to save our earth for our own welfare, healthy and natural living.

That we are inviting our distress and reducing our scope of living on this earth, so it is important to save our earth and make everyday living as Earth Day.

I am happy to write this seventh (7th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 9 years ago in April, 2011.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Love Me Not  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a nice poem, I like it and I have enjoyed the read and the style of expression; it is simple, though it has suffered a lot in terms of expression.

But, the flow of thoughts is good enough; although there are too large lines and I think they could be expressed into shorter lines.

I think readers’ reading pleasantness is equally important than understanding the message; a poem has a short line of expression, as you know, a reader gets better read pleasantness reading short lines in a poem.

Comments:
love/emotion/poetry
Your description about the poem is inexpressive; I find it is incorrectly expressed. A description about a poem is expected to be catchy and interesting to the readers.

Comments:
I think the following line could be broken down into shorter lines:
You shattered me when you told me not once but several time they are my babies.

Edit:
I gave you honesty. You excepted it
(I gave you honesty. You expected it)

Comments:
There is a wrong use of word, use the word ‘expected’ in place of the word ‘excepted’.

Edit:
Even when you know that they are your.
(Even when you know that they are yours.)

Comments:
There is a wrong use of pronoun, use the word ‘yours’ in place of the word ‘your’.

Edit:
Fo me to love you the same.
(For me to love you the same.)
Expressive:
(For me, it is to love you the same.)

Comments:
The sentence is not expressive, expressive and grammatically correct sentence is given.

Choice is yours. You are free to accept or reject any of the edits in the brackets and or comments.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful! Metaphoric!


This is a nice poem with good use of metaphoric scale of appreciation, I like and I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word visuals, the word imagery, the contrasting and diverse mode of expression, and the free flow of thoughts.


Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.


Keep on writing.
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Review of Shut myself out  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
True!

All the way, from top to bottom, I like this poem, and I have enjoyed the read for I could easily relate the thoughtful thought over thoughts at ease.

You have so many doubts and questions about your such act and thoughtful activity; I think, mostly thoughtful persons do live this way and think like this, so the adage goes rightly, to mention, a genius person appears mad, but thinking within mind or within oneself is the first nature of man.

In general, there are people who immediately after waking from the bed, start thinking within mind or somehow, because, mind is restless, so thoughtful persons keep thinking incessantly, even some people keep thinking while doing other activities like driving or walking.

I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word imagery and the word visuals.

Edit the title of the poem:
Shut myself out
(Shut Me Out, or I Shut Myself Out, or I Shut Myself out)

Comments:
We generally use the word ‘myself’ after using ‘I’ for example: I myself did it instead of myself did it or did it myself; and it is evident that you have used in your sentence about description of the poem, under the title of the poem, you know correct use of the word ‘myself’.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Marvellous! Wonderful! Fantastic!

Only a great poet can prescribe the ways how to read a poem, so minutely, in detail for reading, understanding and enjoying the read of a poem in sequences, steps and orders.

As a surgeon operates a patient in an operation theatre, you have suggested, advised, mentioned and explained the ways, methods, modes and activities how to read poems.

I cannot remember if I have read the Take – 1, if I find, I must read the same.

I like and have enjoyed the read.

I am happy to write this tenth (10th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 4 years ago in October, 2015.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Aging Cat  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a nice poem about your loving pet cat Vashtie, you observe her and find the mentionable point in making this poem; interestingly enough, she does not know but you see how she turns gray before your eyes; you have discovered the natural appearance of her, she still has her black coat, in her appearance, her black coat remains the same over the years.

I am happy to write this twelfth (12th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 14 years ago in June, 2005.

Thank you for sharing this 3 line poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, initially I thought this poem has some words or thoughts of controversy in term of expressions, but later I could feel the worth of having two keys to open the door of a heart and why some women do keep only one key to their heart.

Yes, you have convinced the value, essence, need, and importance of keeping two keys for your own safety and save feelings.

But, you as per your decision, better you can control your heart with one key; I like and have enjoyed the read, the story, and the word visuals and the word imagery.

You give importance to self-dignity and self-respect, so you have decided to go this way, so I like the spirit and the message you have tried to portray and pass on to the readers.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

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Review of Together again  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic!

Memories lost sometimes, and you may discover yourself in a vacant state of mind, you may have lost everything, as you feel so, and you may find nothing to relate to your past memories, but, when a related person comes in and both together you may find the memories flash back and you do remember everything and your memories lost may come back to you.

In your poem you have narrated the story as such, I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the story, the monologue flavour of appreciation of memories and correlation of past memories with the help of someone from the past relate to your memories, and the word visuals, and the word imagery, the rhythms of thoughts, the free flow of thoughts, and the simple mode of expression.

Edit:
Together again (Together Again)

The rambles of being lost in memories are well said, well done.

Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Rainbows of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic!

I like this poem, and I must write, I have enjoyed the read, and the story, the spiritual essence of the taletelling, the metaphoric and symbolic flavour of expression of the story – the rainbows of love, how she flies with the angels and witnesses the truths in paradise, the changes and moments of love.

I enjoyed the word visuals and word imagery of this free verse.


To mother Marie Peal Newland Darbe Sisk

Comments:

I find this line, the description of the poem is not expressive, as it is not a sentence, and it is not grammatically correct, as in want of use of commas and full-stop it has been poorly expressed.

Besides, you have not used Author’s Notes giving us a word about the same, though I understand what you wish to mean.

I think, the setting of the poem is not clear.

I am happy to write this ninth (9th) review of your poem which was posted on public read and review about 7 years ago in December, 2012.

Thank you for sharing this free verse poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of In The Woods  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic!

You have expressed how you have felt, experienced the words written in the tree that you have seen, witnessed and found the essence and choir and symphony of your living.

You have much been influenced and affected with the words and have fostered a likeness about the words as you think you have learnt a lot and you may discover even more about your life and meaning of a living that you cherish and maintain.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the philosophical thought and essence of words, the word visuals, the word imagery and the flow of thoughts.


A true poem about an amazing event in my early life that drives me to this day...cheers

Comments:
How nice! You have offered us to read a true poem. You have done it logically. I appreciate your thought. But, I know there is nothing like a true poem. Of course, we can say, it is a true story, though, in literary perspective, we cannot say a true poem, because a poem has imagination, so it cannot be true, for I know, true is fact. As such, a poem, being a literary expression or an expression in poetic term has a mix, flavour and words of imagination, which are not to be appreciable as true. Clearly, I find the expression of true facts; truth or facts in a poem do not make it a true poem. As you have narrated, described and explained a true story of your life.


I am happy to write this sixth (6th) review of your biographical poem which was posted on public read and review about 6 years ago in February, 2014.


Thank you for sharing this excellent poem with us.

Keep on writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this write up or article you have mentioned links to poems about soldiers and patriotism, most of your great, award winning poems, published between 2003 and 2008.


I feel happy to know that you served with the Indian Army for about three years; you joined the service on 5th October, 1965 at your 23, in response to the call of duty, out of a sense of patriotism, putting off your career prospects.


Edit:
LINKS: POEMS ABOUT SOLDIERS & PATRIOTISM
(Links: Poems about Soldiers and Patriotism)


Comments:
I do not like a title of a poem is written all in capital letters, in order to fulfil some specific purposes; I write title of an acrostic poem in all capital letters, to know more about this you may click the link: "Invalid Item" 


I think you have mentioned the Genre: poem for this work, though this work is about poems, I do not think it a poem, and you may mention Genre: Article for this work.


Honestly, you are free to accept or reject any of my edits and or comments that I have humbly offered.


I am happy to write this first review of your historic work (poem) which was posted on public read and review about 12 years ago in December, 2007.


Thank you for sharing this work (poem) with us.

Keep on writing!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic!
I like your 14 line poem and have enjoyed the read, the story, the taletelling, the rhymes abundant, the word visuals, the word imagery, the free flow of thoughts, simple and realistic speed of narration, the tale of the Halloween visitors and their short stay and enjoying the night with you.

I am glad to write this fifth (5th) review of your excellent poem which you created and posted on public read and review in October, 2016 and send this review in and within about three years of publication of your poem.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Poet thinks, visualizes, feels and forecasts the day when we live afresh, anew, and differently in absence of technology, when technology is dead, how we live in the new world, free of today’s technology, we learn how to live without the help of technology, with no existence and help or tool of technology of today, and hopes and wishes that we will start to live in and with basics, as if living in a newly created world with the death of today’s technology, as once we learned how to live when this world was created.

I like the concept, the theme, the taletelling, the free flow of thoughts, the word imagery, the word visuals, rhythms of thoughts, limited rhymes and the story of living after the death of today’s technology in this world.

I was happy to find and read your fantastic poem on public read and review and now I feel happy to write this third review of your incredible poem in the form Quatrains you created in June, 2017 and glad to send this review within about three years of posting of your thought-provoking poem.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Keep writing on, on and on!

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Review of Digital Me  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Fantastic!
Your digital status, digital feeling, digital stand, digital status, digital passion, digital emotion and digital passion visualized, explored, experienced and expressed in all of your digital involvement and affiliation.

The effect and impact of digital state of living is well versed, I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling about your world and relation with digital existence, the word visuals, the word imagery, the monologue flavour of life of digital world, the rhythms of thoughts about digital acts and activities of your state of living in the world digital, the free flow of thoughts of this free verse (or vers libre).

I was happy to find your work on public read and review, I am glad to read your free verse which was created in September, 2013 and now I am proud of writing this fourth (4th) review of your free verse and I feel good at sending this review in or within about six (6) years of posting of your fantastic free verse.

Thank you for sharing this free verse with us.

Keep Writing!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am not sure to get pleasure reading this as a poem, but I like it may be a poem thematically, for it is so light, softly and simply expressed poetically, expressed prosaic, so I wish to mark it a prose poem.

I enjoyed the emotional part explained, as the loving girl saved and nurtured the little bird and while the bird left her bed, she stated a fine word that she would miss the little crow.

I was happy to find your work on public read and review.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Right indeed, there is always a child in you and me, and it changes in activities but nature almost remains the same in us, because of social restrictions and age, we may not do the same activities exactly as we did at our schools during our school days, our inner mind and heart remain the same and we do jobs and wish to entertain us differently and freely at our later or older age. We cannot forget the moments of joy, and happiness we had in our school days in celebrating and or participating activities in our childhood days.

I like and have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the word visuals, and word imagery.

Edit:
There’s still a child in you and me
(There is Still A Child in You and Me)

Comments:
I do not like underline a title, it really looks odd.

Edit:
Walking through the platform
Realising it’s children’s day
No one wished me
How sad it is today
Because there’s a child in you and me
Let’s celebrate this day
Knowing how important it was
In the old school days
It’s still here but in a different way
Shining on my face through a sunshine ray
Back to school,
Remember teachers dancing with their hair grey
Some wore pink
And some in happiness spray
Now I know how I loved that frooti drink
How amazing those days were just to think


(Walking through the platform
I realize it is Children’s Day.
But, no one wished me
how sad today it is!
Because, there is a child in you and me
Let us celebrate this day in India
remember how important it was
in the old school days!
It is still here but in a different way
shining on my face through a sunshine ray.
Back to school
I remember teachers dancing with their hair grey
Some wore pink
and some in happiness spray.
Now, I know how I loved that ‘Frooti’ drink
how amazing those days were just to think!)


Honestly, I have offered edits in the brackets and comments; you are free to accept or reject any of my edits and or comments.

I was happy to find your work on public read and review.

Thank you for sharing this work with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Wishing Well  
Rated: E | (5.0)

This is a philosophical poem. Philosophy of living is expressed all through. Your idea, concept, ideal, philosophy and appreciation of life is well versed. Life is a gift from God. Life goes on for creating a meaningful living. Life has a gift of life time. Man has to leave everything on this earth accepting death the gift from God at the end of life. Man has to earn by dint of labour and through struggling for living. Man has the only wish to offer wishing well. Man cannot offer anything from him. Man can wish well for everyone he leaves.

You have stated, expressed and worded the theme very well.
I like. I have enjoyed the read, the taletelling, the free flow of thoughts, the word visuals, the word imagery and the story.

I was happy to find your work on public read and review under the column read & review. I am glad to read your poem you created and published in October, 2015. I am proud of writing this fourth (4th) review of your poem and pleased to send this review today after about four years from posting of your poem on this site.

Thank you for sharing this work with us.

Keep on writing.
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Review of Autumn.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You do really love the season autumn, so you visualize your love and find your love exists as you have expressed metaphorically, I like and have enjoyed the read.

Thank you for sharing this 3-line poem with us. Keep on writing.
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Review of Love’s Triangle  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Feeling and emotion, fantastically thought and worded, love’s triangle --you and your eager pride and the one you want.

I like and have enjoyed the taletelling, the point of view, the theme, the taletelling, the word imagery, the word visuals and the flow of thought.

Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

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Review of Reflections  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The stand and status of friendship is well explored, appreciated and expressed, as each day reflects so, what about after he is no more; I enjoyed the read, the taletelling about imaginary friendship.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Ultimately the soldier receives farewell, he has to fulfil his commitment, now mother and wife appreciate; I like the poem, and have enjoyed the taletelling, flow of thoughts, word imagery, and promotion of values.
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Review of The broken  
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Just all feelings you could not express in words, darkness may hide the broken stand of relation for the time being though, truly worded, I like, and I have enjoyed the read, I dislike the title.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Still, you deserve for win, and I congratulate you for the win, truly, you have maintained the form well and followed contest rules, I like the poem for the metaphoric scale of appreciation of cemeteries, I have enjoyed the read, taletelling, and fantastic word visuals, and word imagery.
Keep on writing.
by Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber
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