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372 Public Reviews Given
372 Total Reviews Given
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Honest and simple
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Poetry
Favorite Genres
Religious
Least Favorite Genres
Horror
Favorite Item Types
Static
Least Favorite Item Types
Interactives
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Erotica, vulgarity, and anything that I don't feel comfortable with.
Public Reviews
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Review of The Flight  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it. This is a great short story. I am glad I was able to read it. Everything looks good to me, so I don’t have any suggestions for improvement. This story keeps the attention from start to finish. It has suspense and an unexpected twist. This also has a great ending.


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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is cute. I think you meant “Perhaps he needs his own mat”, and not on mat. 🤪 we all have those typos sometimes. I will look forward to reading more of your writing. Welcome to writing.com. Keep writing and keep trying to do God’s will. What an awesome God we serve! I figured I would repay your review of my poem with a review of one of yours. 😉 If you need some help getting started on here, feel free to ask me questions. If I don’t know the answer then I can get in contact with my cousin who has been on here longer than me. She got me started.🙂Happy writing!


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Review of My Writings  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
We all need a break sometimes and now we can’t say we weren’t warned. Lol Enter your portfolio if we dare, huh? Some of us need warning labels before we dare to enter. Lol Thanks for the warning. I will take my chances. This is where people get really interesting and show their true colors. 🙂
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am assuming by the sound of this that the new position might have been in the food industry? This is a cute poem. It is short sweet and to the point. It is Ray to read and rhymes well. I have no suggestions for improvement. I can also feel the fast and busy pace of the workplace through this poem.
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This is very interesting! Thank you for sharing this information. My mother always loved lighthouses when she was alive. There are some really pretty ones. Knowing their history makes it even better. I have no suggestions for improvement. Overall you did a really great job on this.
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Review of Voices  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very informative and insightful. I like the hint of humor in this. I like the spirit of it. It shows the willingness to fight your own negative thoughts and emotions. That is always a good thing, and it is good to try to gain a better perspective on those thoughts too.
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Review of Selkie  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a story with a bit of a different spin. I like it though. The story flows smoothly. This is a relaxing and soothing story. I don’t have any suggestions for improvement. The plot was presented well. It didn’t take me but a few lines to get completely hooked into the story. I enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Ann Went  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is definitely a relatable subject. How many of us have done that before? Oops! Lol it is a quick easy read. The message was easily communicated. It was kept short and simple. The rhythm and rhyme are also not hard to spot. I don’t have any suggestions for improvement.
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Review of The gift of fun  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice story. I wouldn’t have expected it to end that way. Not bad though. I could also picture this being kind of a love story between two people, rather same or opposite sex depending on what your beliefs are. It has kind of a romantic feel to it, but I don’t think that is what you are aiming for. Happy endings are always nice rather it is romance or not.🙂
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Review of Bordeline  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
Depression seems to be the theme for today. Lol Maybe the universe is crying with me today. You might go back and check on some spelling and grammar unless it is part of the mood and feel of this. I think it communicates well your emotions though. Keep writing. 🙂
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Review of What God Sees  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the rhythm and sound of this poem. The message is conveyed well and is a message of hope. Also I see it points out that you can’t hide from God. It is very easy to read and understand. I could see myself writing a poem just like this. 🙂 I will have to watch out for you in any competitions. Lol
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Review of " The Ceiling "  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it. Beautifully written.
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
War is such a depressing subject. We always long for peace during times of war. Sometimes I do wonder how much we would all do differently if we could turn back the hands of time. Hopefully the younger generation will learn from the mistakes the generations before it has made.
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
Reminds me of Ecclesiastes sort of. Vanity of vanities. All is vanity. It is kind of depressing. Every one searches for the meaning in life. Some people find it and some never do. This probably wasn’t the best thing for me today since I am already struggling with emotions. Lol However, it can easily be related to.
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Review of Mount Vesuvius  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem dear cousin.
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Review of Cleansing Tears  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this poem speaks a good message. So many of us forget that we are supposed to take care of our planet and when we do, it takes care of us. I really don’t have any suggestions for improvement. It is very well put together and pleasant to the ears.
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Review of Nightmare: Cabin  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The story itself is good. You need to check several words that are not spelled correctly. I can’t put my finger on it but I feel like the story is missing something. Maybe it needs a little more information. It doesn’t flow smoothly in my opinion. It is off to a good start though.
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Review of The Little Thief  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
You may want to check spelling and grammar in a couple places, FYI. It is a very good story and a very good lesson. I personally wonder why people let 6 year olds wonder the streets by themselves even if only a block away, especially in this day and age. Unfortunately it does happen in reality. I would have gotten spanked if I even thought of leaving the front porch when I was 6. Of course, we didn’t live in the best neighborhood either.
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
Regular bananas for me please
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Review of Oneka: Chapter 3  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now that I have read 4 chapters, I can hardly wait for chapter 5. I read #4 first which is why I was happy to read the other 3 and impressed how they act as their own individual story as well. I enjoy your style of writing and will look forward to reading more of it.
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Review of Oneka: Chapter 2  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I can see how this connects to the first chapter. Yet it seems like an entirely different story. I kind of like that each of these chapters I have read so far seem like a story in and of themselves. I like the way they are independent of one another and yet connect to one another.
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Review of Oneka: Chapter 1  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was interesting. I admit it went differently then I would have expected. I enjoyed reading this. It kept me in suspense from start to finish. If this were a whole book, I would be hooked on this story from chapter 1. I can’t wait to read more of your writing. 😊
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Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very creative. It is different from what I am used to reading but has a nice rhythm and sound to it. I am not quite sure what to think about the subject itself. It does give off the musical vibe, however it depends on your personal belief of angels if you would agree with the lyrics or not.
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Review of First Kiss  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (5.0)
I want more! I want more! Lol why stop at just the kiss? Way to show those emotions! Just an opinion, but I think this would make a good prompt for a short story or the beginning of book. It is a complete thought and yet it can have writings and thoughts added to it.
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Review of Humanity  
Review by Marvelous Friend
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can detect the passion of the writer for the subject of humanity. I can feel the emotions of each question and line in the poem which is a good thing. It gets the reader to think and examine one’s own self to see if they possess this quality and what is lacking.
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