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The Invitation: (Title, etc)
The title, description, and rating all fit this item perfectly. The chosen genre (Other), though, could be replaced... Perhaps, "Experience" as that one, to me, seems to fit with each of the tablets...?
The Banners: (Contents)
I wasn't sure what exactly to expect when I clicked in, but I absolutely love what I found! I've never seen poetry formatted like this before. It really blew me away. I think that you did a wonderful job with this and each one was simple to read and understand!
The Ribbons: (Imagery, Emotion)
Each one of these tablets had it's own feeling and imagery. Each one, though, stirred up a vision --only the third not having me picture a beautiful scene from nature. The emotion changed for each one too... At first, I was unsure if they'd be connected, so I just read them to feel them out... The second time, I stopped, looked away, clicked into scrolls, talk to hubby, etc... anything between the tablets so that I could really take in each one on its own --and that really added to the impact of each one. In each one, your message is so clear and so meaningful that I am truly amazed by how much you say... Even with very little space, you speak volumes --Amazing!
The Confetti: (Suggestions)
The only suggestion that I have is really superficial. I wonder how these would look in the Courier Font. Since it is a "fixed width" font, I think that it would really add an amazing touch to the visual aspect of the who item... Also, have you thought of using different placements to make them feel more detached from one another? (Like, left-aligned, one right, one centered, etc...?)
The Party: (Overall Thoughts)
I wanted to be able to tell you my favorite, but I really can't. Three, Four, and Five all really blew me away in such a way that I cannot choose one above the others... I absolutely loved reading this and am now itching to try it! THANK YOU for the knew knowledge and inspiration! You did an amazing job!