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The title and chosen genres fit this perfectly. The description, however, might benefit from a word or two of insight into the story... Also, I'm not sure, but I think that this may be 18+...? (Don't quote me on that, I always go higher for safety, lol...)
I love how this story had a nice, calm pace and feeling at the beginning and end; and packed quite a punch in the in-between! The flow was smooth, everything was simple to follow and understand. I could easily see everything happening as I read this and I'm pretty sure that my heart didn't beat through half of it as I seemed to hold me breath in fear and anticipation! (Basically, the emotions and imagery came through very clearly!)
I read this three times and still only found one typo! (In paragraph four, lake-side can be one word; lakeside). Other than that, no suggestions came to mind.
I can't even believe how much I felt this! Suspense isn't the word. Even knowing the ending from the beginning, I was still scared for Jenna all the way through --there was definitely a wonderful reader-to-character connection! (And, by the way, bite me for stressing me out! lol. My heartbeat and breathing don't like you right now, lol.)
This is very well-written and a wonderful display of your talent for dragging your reader into the story and showing them everything as it unfolds! Just... Wow. Creative, horrifying storyline that is wonderfully presented... what more can I say?
This review has been typed to encourage and help. Take my words as you would those written on a grain a salt. Each character is derived from only my humble thoughts.