Hi Prosperous Snow,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. In the poem, someone is having a dream of taking a magical flight. I have had magical dreams like this more times than I can count. I wake up content and relaxed. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but it is not needed here. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Genipher,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of joviality and worry. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Darach is actually in danger. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man is warned that his king means to kill him. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
Hi Tim,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. You have a point to make, and you intend to make it. The point is about taking the problems that surround you in your stride and taking the middle ground no matter what. I always try to do this. I don't always succeed. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Joey,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem celebrates the closeness of the users on this site. I have felt this closeness ever since I first started here, and I love it more everyday. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Bruce.preast,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of hope and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about hanging onto hope by hanging on to those things in life that give you that hope. I keep hope in the people that I love and in the things that I will accomplish. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure.
Hi Werewolf,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of devotion and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is a prayer to the God Odin. I love this prayer to this God. I don't know much about Odin, but, after reading this, I will try to learn more. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Joey,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the closeness and fellowship with exists on this site. I have felt the same thing since the first day I started here. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Tim,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the chaotic state of the world. There is so much confusing and upsetting things going on in the world, I have to tune is out periodically. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a fabulous rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Julianna,
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention getting. The reader is wondering if it is referring to something specific to be depressed about or depression in general. They will begin to read to find out. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about the changeability of life. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the usual cause of depression, other people's thoughts and actions. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
Hi Hey J.,
This is a wonderful piece. The tone is full of pain and regret. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is heartbroken for the speaker and will read to the last word to see if they get their former lover to speak to them again and work things out. I loved this piece. The piece is about someone who has driven away someone they love and regrets the decision. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.
The piece is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
Hi TomDrish,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. The title is tells the reader that the piece is about an audio book but not much else. They will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. The piece announces the debut of your latest audio book. The reader is delighted to find out the latest step in your writing career. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an upbeat, energetic style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
Hi Louis,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is frenzied and full of fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about people trying to get away from the danger of a battle. I am wondering if the people in the poem will find a way to get away from the danger they face. I read to the last word to see if that happens. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Thankful Sonali,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is slightly annoyed. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, a turtle lists all the ways that they are not a good pet. I love pieces that personify inanimate objects or animals. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Denine,
This is a wonderful first chapter. The chapter opens with the chaos of battle. The reader is wondering what started the conflict and where it will lead. They will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your plot and main characters very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.
The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.
Hi VanillaSoftArt,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what the girls will get out of their experimentation. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, three friends indulge in foot fetishism. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This rare and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
Hi Tori,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the emotions you can see just by looking at nature and all it expresses in its beauty. I love going for walks and experiencing everything that nature has to offer. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Princess Megan Rose,
This is a fantastic poem and essay.
I will review the poem first. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the things which go on in the TV series Dark Shadows. I have never seen the show, and this poem makes it sound so awesome. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic essay. The title is just the series name. For anyone who has not seen, or heard of, the series, it is very intriguing. Even if you have seen the series the reader will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the various characters in the TV series Dark Shadows. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
Hi StellaAmbrose,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of sadness and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem I have found a mirror of a situation I am facing. It is not romantic, but I am experiencing the same type of emotions at the loss of a friendship. I thank you for sharing. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm in this poem. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Ed,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is melancholy and filled with pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is thinking about the person they loved and lost and how the experience affected them. I am wondering how this relationship ended as I read. I read to the last word to find out. The Sonnet poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is scheme is perfect for this form. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
Hi Dave,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given the reader a list of stories you intend to enter into the Prompt Me contest and a synopsis of each. The reader is delighted at the look they get at your thinking process as you write. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
Hi Winchester,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is light but tinged with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Lenny can cheer up the sunburned man. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a bartender decides to try and help a customer who seems down. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The is story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
Hi SandraLynn,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of trepidation and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the alien will get the help he needs from the human. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about an alien who has come to earth and ends up stuck in a tree. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. You have not included and description of characters or setting. This is a valuable technique which keeps the reader focused on the conflict. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
Hi Marushka,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is formal. It suits the piece and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the speaker will find a more interesting line of work. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about a university student who has to find boring work in order to appease their parents. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict base. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the student, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
Hi Doctor007,
This is a wonderful piece. The tone is melancholy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the relationship between the speaker and his wife will endure. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about a couple who has found a comfortable relationship beyond romance as time has passed. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.
The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
Hi CBH,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with hope. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Amine and Yassine will get passed their humble beginnings and achieve the stability they are lacking. They will read to the last words to find out. In the story, a quest for a short time of happiness leads to tragedy. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
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