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Review of Crystal Clear  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tinker

This poem about nature and the way cold creeps in has been creative and easy to relate to. A one of a kind of poem, full of creative and uplifting words. You really do have a way with words as you know just how to draw your readers in and that is talent and clever. I did not see any errors what so ever and was a really encouraging poem indeed for a crystal world of unspoiled prospect.
Keep writing and sharing. I am giving this poem a five-star rating..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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jaya

This is a nice and creative poem flowing in natural essence of rain, and reader can smell the unique and nostalgic aroma of rain. A nice and distinct flow of words and moments like hillside green or wild flower spread, all gives a universal appeal. Overall, I really enjoyed this poem as I have indian roots and creative flow of words did bring nostalgic memories in short it was magical and a positive/inspirational binding force of nature so well expressed...sindbad


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Review of The Desert  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Winchester Jones

This is a nice and unique take on dessert and the evnts so well written in so few a word. However the ending here came rather sudden and abrupt to my taste. Sponteinity of action and turn of event did leave a rather humbling experience to the readers. The descriptions are rich and live.
Very good job!

sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Prosperous Snow Globe

This poem exemplifies the humoros quotient to a level that appeals on a universsal level like- the sales slip of the re-gifted gift she gave you. You have used words that can be related by vast majority of readers and I can congratulate you and thank my good fortune to come accorss such humorous and yet simple poem on Halloween sales events as always there is a great imagery. Thank you for the entertaining poem and hope you're doing well!

Sindbad


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Review of Take My Weapon  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

I have been a great admirer of your poetry. There are ample of reasons for the sameand the simple one can be surmised as you have seen life on a humane level with no viel of illusion or superficial facade and you have captured all those moments with such accuracy and act of emotions that leaves a deep impression to the readers and at one point we are all reminded of our base. That is the way it happens in the natural world anyway, survival of the fittest...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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BusmanPoet

This is a nice and rather perfect poetry for a lifelong ultimate love. I hope WDC and its celebration of 19th Anniversary kindle some lifelong experience to be more dynamic and involved in this excellent site. I liked the tsunami of emotion fitting perfectly here. Thanks for sharing your vision and appreciation of deeper meaning of ultimate love in this well crafted poem...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fyntastic!

This is a nice and yet mesmerising poetry you have penned. I liked the way you presented the wizard and yet a balanced with some hesitation in the true unfolding of witches daughter inherent aspiration to capture the minds and imagination of young generation. The style is perfect. The imagery is live. The expressing is strong. I like the idea of name flamming Flapdoodle which is cathchy and participative to the toodler generation.
Good job!

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Kirby Ray

This is a nicely caliberated story with lot of incidents captured that gives it a semblance to actual upfolding with twist and suspence to the ancient mystery. As a reader I did find this story balanced with certain characters playing more than the assigned role vis a vis the story.
I liked the inerent character of Lord Cosmic. Wish you a very vibrant and rather symbolic 19th WDC Anniversary. Creative and I enjoyed reading this, with regards and all the best for such creative churning of adult fantassy..sindbad


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Review of Stained Blood  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Monsoon

I was randomly going though stories to review for the anniversary raid and felt a inner desire to go through and review this unique story with title stained blood. As a reader I did get the inner meaning of blood and lineage these are words to live by. Nicely written and looks like you put some thought and time into this to enhance the go to value. Easy to follow. Creative and we can say a lot in a few words like- The slit was just inches from my heart. The blood was staining my white blouse, and vest. Barnah ran over and held me as I almost fell forwards. I was fine..
A nice play on words and I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Great well written item and welcome to WDC wish you a long and productive association, I commend your creativity in unfolding such an exciting work..

Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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KingKitsune

This is a nice and interesting take on Noya and her fading beauty. As a reader I did feel the raw inner dilemma and constraints Noya felt and the helplessness that is so very difficult to discribe in words. These are words to live by for the future generations. Nicely written and looks like you put some thought and time into this. Easy to follow. Creative and we can say a lot in a few words. A nice play on words and I enjoyed unwinding of delicate moments however the number of times the word Noya came in this story can be curtailed. Thank you for sharing. Great well written item..Sindbad




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Review of Snow Ice Cream  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Prosperous Snow Globe

This is a nice and wholesome capture of events with rich and vibrant memories attached form our childhood. We all cherish such exclusive moments like my grandmother would make nice sugar candies from caramel and vanilla skillfully transfering the rubbery texture to the stick and give us the exact propotion and temperature to relish and forget ourselfs to that magnetic moment. You have done just that and I am indeed happy and grateful as well..sindbad




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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Kirby Ray

This is a nice and refreshing story with all elements of interest mystery and most important a perfect balance of a thrilling blockbuster in the making. As a reader into the cave did bring certain lively reflections and moment that makes a story popular and attractive. I wish you all the best and give this story a 5star for its originality and perfect balance...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DragonBlue

This is an impressive and rather appealing collections of c-Notes you have here. As a audience I can appreciate your inner finesse and eye for details to dispay eye capturing and yet popular themes with unique mixture of balance and inner belief so very necessary for such endeavour. I wish you all the best, and relish the creativity so sophisticated and appealing.. Sindbad


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Review of Game Models  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jeffhans

This is a nice and balanced take on game model. As a reader with limited knowledge about game and altered reality it brings, I was impressed with your grasp of experience and writing capabilities, and feel there is a room to expound and simplify the purpose of the game model. This story being a mundane one can unfold to a legacy that remains struck in your brain, however you need to jumpstart the adrenaline and happiness quotient. The dynamism of the story can really unleash the creativity that is so very well sampled here. You need to embrace every aspect of the game model that you have highlighted so well. In short the emotional and recall moments a reader needs, has to be finetuned for the target audience. Wish you all the best..sindbad


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Review of The Diagnosis  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
J.E. Allen
This is an incredibly sad, but well-written medical story of your dealing with cancer and its cause of death. Your piece is well done, flows nicely and evoked strong feelings in me as I read it.I liked how you structured your piece like- " Duncan nodded and said, “One last thing. My wife will have some jewelry on top of her dresser upstairs and there is a bit of cash in my office, inside the wall safe. The combination, is 18-34-17. The police will think I told you before you killed me.”
“Did you bring the money?”
He reached into his pocket and removed the folded envelope and gave it to the man. As the envelope left his hand, Duncan experienced a sudden wave of calm. The feeling washed over him, just as he felt his problems fall away.
“Go home, McCafferty. Enjoy your last day on earth.” The man turned and walked away"

Thank you for sharing your touching story and congratulation for the recognition you received in this well structured story.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!

Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

Your poetry of different sports and their challenges are so creatively expressed in all your poetry. As a readr I can appreciate your passion for sports and its nuances that can be observed or highlighted by people who are intricately associated with promotion of sports and healthy life it advocates. Overall this poem entails quality and frame of mind and body to be at utmost level of delivery for any sucess or definative results in competitive sports..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and yet strong poem inspiring under achievers and over achievers alike. The self beleif and its benefits have been beautifully expressed here. Passion, education, aspiration inspiration and all attitude and efforts have been expressed poetically and intelligently. Overall a nice and creative poem to promote some semblance of a last try by the underdogs...sindbad


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Review of Find a way away  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Arch

This is a nice and rather emotional take on song that has instrumental mainly piano and visuals leave a deep impression as well. Easy to follow with nicely written details as well as lovely reflections. Looks like you spent a lot of time enjoying your favorite music group like nine inch nails. Impressive and heart touching absorption of lyrics and mood. A perfect and well balanced poem..Wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Cruel Fate  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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April Desiree

This is a nice and yet a rather sad poem that hits a reader on love lost. The subtle and perfect nuances of love and heart has been perfectly represented here. I love how, i couldn't stop thinking about my own situation while reading through, I am immersed in the words and resonate with them and what they mean shreds would rip me to if we’re to part and say....
well, i am just gonna read it again. A well balanced poem and I am sure will give you recognition as well...Sindbad



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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rodney Grey

I have always fascinated with the way you bring up the basic structure in your book. I always adored your sensitivity to minor things that makes a story interesting and readers hooked on to go to the next sequel and enjoy the unfolding of unique and thrilling plot. Shadow of the dark one is indeed one such story wherein you have excelled in maintaining this balance. I am indeed eager to move to the next chapter, also thrilled with Rokos observation and perfect summation of the events so wonderfully penned. Overall a masterpiece being unfolded with lot of research and contemplation to make it interesting simple and reader friendly. Great job...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

Indeed this is a nice and balanced poem on complex feelings. As a reader one does sympathize with not going the full length and faltering due to devil of a diversion the life gives with noisesome woes. I have always liked your direct shooting from the hoisted and giving reader the real deal in a simple and succulent manner. Did use some unusual words like undue or risque or traverse. All this shows the direct and yet meaningful take on feelings and their complexities. Overall a bold and rather poignant take...sindbad


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Review of Love Hurts  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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OOT™
This is a nice short and poignant take on love and its transformation to a heartache in so few and balanced manner. The creative fibonacci sequel gives this poem a commendable appearance. A beautiful piece of love that you have written here with a balanced route of broken promises to heartache. I see lots sentiments here, with mentioning of foundation and pivotal take on care,
overall this poem is beautifully done...Sindbad

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

I have beena great fan of your poetry and have read and reviewed all inspiring poem with motivating and refreshing take of different and yet critical subjects in our life. Your words in detail makes this piece come alive. It's amazing how the values and inner poise, maturity, quality, and ability takes over one's body makes our mundane existence special or turning red light into green. You made this piece come alive, showing the battle from within with performance driven for an athelete in a competetive arena. Amazing job!

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Moomintroll

This again like your other writing is deep and highlights facts and inherent matter of people we have overlooked, our apathy to them has a hevy toll as well. The love of God shines through in your piece with words like-
He found joy, and true love, searched for God up above, knowing peace, yet enduring a war
A father, a son, a hero when young, supporting the poor and the tired
Once loved and adored, by many who saw, the man who is beautiful inside.
What a beautiful picture you have painted of His unconditional love and compassion. This is well written and I feel the love and beautiful soul not the outer appearance from this wonderful and to some extent emotional piece. Amazing job...Sindbad



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Review of I Live in a Box  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jace

This is a nice and balanced story on life in a small town, the basic inherent habits with controlled opinion. You did a terrific job of describing your character and their humoros relationship through imaginative style. You also managed to add couple of personal items that I as a reader could easily refer to. The smooth flow of writing was more than believable, and I could tell that you are well accustomed to the lifestyle so well articulated. You captured my interest with the first line and held it throughout. And the last line blew me away as I never expected you woulnt want to live there. Great job!

Sindbad


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