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Catch-up Fyn
This is a nice and creative expression of nature and your sensitive observation. As a reader I can experience the cool breeze, or crabapple tree shedding summer, all this comes to a picturous and freezing moments so creatively captured. Excellent impression..Sindbad
This is a nice and creative way of inviting readers to learn and appreciate the history and its inherent link to knowledge and power as well. As a reader I do feel a sense of responsibility and power to contribute and learn about our legacy and where we stand in present viv a vis our history. This contest with creative image indeed helps reader to do constructive research and contribute. I congratulate you on your proprietory effort and creation of a spotless contest that will have a deep impact in understanding certain dynamic and disturbing trends in the history of our modern civilisation...Sindbad
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DragonBlue
This is a nice and vivid with picturous essay on memories of music and some kind of revolution in love songs since 1966. As a reader I get transported to a different era with virant contribution from different artists like Janis Joplin, my favorite dont worry be happy. I like the ending wit nice and propetic words like you learn to live when you begin to give. I will add one more from elton John from circle of life on the day we arrive at the planet, is the never to take more than you give, in the circle of life and wheels of fortune. Overall a nice and rather bold take on Universe of justice...Sindbad
This is a nice and acostic poem that reflects a creative and yet sensitive mind and as a reader I did feel the pain and emotional damage war causes to the readers and as always a very harmful thing for people involved. This poem does justice to the picture frame and this complete anhillation expressed on 4 different level is indeed a creditable job. I have lost touch with war like situation all around as there are zero on very little conflict happening in real time. Your poem gives a refresher memories however painful to the readers and this is a creditable job. And kudos to the picture perfect for this poem..Sindbad
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This is a nice and very well organised interactive story. The unique combination of scenarios are intelligently categorised and highlighted. This allows the participants to focus on creative part of rendering a story with all inner ideas and imaginations. This is a great job and I know a lot of effort must have gone in to assimilate and start this wonderful interactive story. I wish you a very happy and wonderful new year and pray for all the success you can accomplish....sindbad
This is a nice and wonderful quiz and gives reader a new dimension or spectrum on Christmas. As a non Christian reader the question were refreshingly interesting. I did learn certain simple and critical things about Christmas and I will enjoy the festival more with inputs here. Overall a nice and interesting quiz... sindbad
This is a heart touching and to some extent a story that brings tears in the eyes of the reader. As I am from a different country and a different culture, however I could feel related to the events that is condemned on a uniformly manner across different religion, creed and culture. I believe in Karma and its universal rule for people and for country as well. If we study history many forward marching countries suffered heavy setback due to policies that doesn't take into account universal law human well being. Recent examples can be Afghanistan wherein as recently as late 70s, people well being was predominant. The events and personal experience you faced with inherent strength and moral speaks a great deal about your inner refinement and strength. I am sure in the next decade you will see the hand of Karma giving the just reply to all these events, and you will be lucky to be able witness them as well. However in your overall narration if you can simplify the emotional events like - I’ll never forget the Indian couple at the furthest cubicle. The woman is in tears, sobbing her heart out as the officer tells her she’ll have to be detained while her husband is allowed to go home to get their affairs in order for deportation. I hear them beg and plead that they’ve lived in the States for over thirty years, have a business, and children. He even pleads that he be the one incarcerated while his wife goes home, for she’s got anxiety issues as well and is on specific medication she cannot afford to skip. Did you think the officers were swayed by this? Absolutely not. Nothing the couple could say or do would change their minds. To think that this poor, sweet-faced, older lady would have to spend the rest of her days in prison until their passports were ready, just about broke my heart. To compound matters, this was going on in the other cubicles as well, and though some managed to compose themselves, I felt the panic rising within me.
Overall words are not enough to express the events you were exposed to. I find in difficult to fathom a persons 20 years of hard work and dream vanishes in couple of days in such an advanced and well oiled legal and educational achievements...Sindbad
I am indeed a fan of Bohemian poetry. I liked the even and ballad style with perfect and balanced capture of the ambiance and premium environment. This is beautiful poem about ballade of the Absinthe Cafe. Some words caught my eyes- schmoozing, Savoir faire.
Yes, from the beginning its about the Absinthe and perfect ambiance. That's perfect enjoyment and stress buster! Your words are so pure true. I like the way you sketched the cafe dynamics.
You described the things like a reader was experiencing all the fun. Your poem is humorous. It's real to cafe experience.
I am very happy and honored to come across your poetry here. You are one of the legends and the style you use has a direct impact to the conscious of the readers. In archaic smile you have expressed all this and more. I was impressed with smooth flow of lines -
For I Am powerless With regard to Saving myself Archaic smile Showing truth In deep darkness Showing hope Regardless of such Absolute blindness Broken Child
The chance and inherent spring load of oppression is so beautifully captured here and all the more in this poem...Sindbad
This is a nice and perfectly balanced poem on your twin reflection. Lovely reflections. We do love the way you standardized this poem like-
Rippling water mars my visage.
Eyes bright, now dull, now bright
Easy to follow and this is creative and puts one in a good mood. Creative, a good imagination at work and excellent impressive on twin reflection. I also enjoyed how you ended it. It was a good twist which I didn't see coming, specially the missing aspect so way to go! Keep up the great work!
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and words of wisdom for your youngest sister who is turning 17. A neat and sincere expression of practical standing of world sums this up and makes the words stand out. Beautiful reflections with words like-
What a woman you're going to be!
Just enjoy your innocence a bit longer.
Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this and will recommend this to other readers as a sanguine advice. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and words of wisdom flow smoothly with I love it here acts as a slogan as well. A free flowing pattern sums this up and makes the words stand out like-
The God-green, glowing, grow sound
Surrounds and astounds.
Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this short balanced poem. Always..Sindbad
This is a nice and yet balanced portray of Tobias and his playful zest in a perfect chilly and snowy environment. A nice combination of animals and nature's seasons and elements as well as uncanny exposure to first winter snow by Tobias has been beautifully captured. Lovely anticipation of events calls attention to the words and gives this a perfect and balanced story. Easy to follow, no errors and a creative presentation. Impressive writing. Always..Sindbad
This is a nice and complete portrayal of love in so short a passage..I liked the unique summation of until death do us not apart. A nice picture of love accompanies this poem masquerading as that feeling. Amazing, sweet poem of how that feeling gets transformed to love. Beautiful unfolding of emotions of love here. Always...Sindbad
This is a nice and perfect poem that enlivens our spirit and gives us inner peace. I believe such poem gives us respite from all the turbulence and narrow thoughts that plagues us in our day to day existence. Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again. Until next reviewing, just keep posting such inspiring poetry on praying and learning the perfection of the same as well.
This is a nice and balanced poem with poetic justice to thoughts, emotions, mind chattering. All this and more with perfect and sequential unfolding of your inner fears. I did find guitar resonant with a simple strum very creative and perfect here. Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again. Until next reviewing, just keep a similar endeavor and wish you all the best for the contest while staying in writing and reviewing.
This is a nice and simple poem, a little casual however you didn't give an inch of leeway and expressed a mystery that has a gender specific response. Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again specially with an ending that unfolds the mystery and yet reader gets something more. Until next reviewing, just keep up with the new found romance, while staying in writing and reviewing.
This is a nice and heart touching poem on rain and a plethora of effect it has on different people. I liked your representation of cloud with crying, also the rippling experience as well. Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.
Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing such creative events observed by so many people and so well expressed here.
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details on chicago cubs and their accomplishment with a room for exquisite words of wisdom. A neat introduction with nice and dynamic follow up with words like Wrigley Field—the memories or ivy extant, brick outfield wall . These leave a beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this energy boosting account on Chicago cubs and their accomplishment or victory from the jaws of defeat. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details and words of wisdom with nice pun on owls and waxing philosophy. A neat comparison of lions having prides and owls parliament sums this up and makes the words stand out like Athena's shields. Beautiful reflections on field mouse. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this satirical presentation. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details and words of underlying depth as And, my oh my. The more deeper I delve the broader meaning I get in a broader prospect as you said falling apart is easy. A neat sequential pattern sums this up and makes the words stand out. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this short poem. Thanking you Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details and words of wisdom with some semblance to all the creative grasp you express on plethora of topics. A neat and bold words sums up the whole poem in a perfect and balanced manner. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed a creative take on a mundane topic. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details with introduction even though written unspaced speaks a lot. A neat and rather sincere manner expressed what you cant be. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed randomness here. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I found this poem in the Read and Review Section and wanted to share my thoughts. Nicely written details and words of poem flows with your unique life and how you see the strange world around you. A neat appearance of pattern sums this up and makes the words stand out beginning with non clarity and ending with a box of dead with so many emotion beautifully expressed in the middle. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading the nuances here. Always..Sindbad
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and words on leader and follower. This is creative and pensive poem that stands out on your devotion to God. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up and makes the words stand out. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this. Always..Sindbad
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