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Review of Weathering Time  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
NordicNoir

This is a nice and creative take on weathering time and its timeless role for natural order of dessimation or cremation. As a reader I did find the take balanced perfect and yet I feel it can be expanded to 24 syllables by including the dry enviroment. Overall a nice and intelligent take..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+
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flyfishercacher

This is a nice and presentable information on a story that did appeal to me once I went through the prologue. I am eager and ready to go through the 20 chapters in a short future. I congratulate you for wirting such a exciting piece appealing to different age group and community. I just want more of this! I enjoyed it, thank you for sharing..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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DragonBlue

This is a direct and hard hitting take on a slang that has a negative innotation. This colourful and attractive write gives a new meaning and platform to this rather offensive word. I am sure you must have done creative and deliberate research to come up with such catchy words and make reader believe that bitch is no longer a offensive word to be used. I am sure if the readers go thorugh your article they will certainly have a different and unique take and understanding on this word.Thank you so much for the laugh and appealing ending. I couldn't possibly offer any suggestions. I'd rate it 6 stars if I could. Well done!!!


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Review of Given At Birth  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

This is a nice and unique way for seeking redemption and acquintance from the sins or bad things commited simply because we are at a wrong place at a wrong time with no provision to execute our free will. It's so well written, simple, poignant and yet incredibly deep and touching. You're probably my favorite author around here as all your poetry comes from your heart...sindbad


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Review of Faces Melting  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

This is a nice and creative way of exploring thing fron pov of our sensitive and velnerable self and moving to level and fighting the inner demons and uncertainity. This is a poem on self introspection and to some level melting face signifies the changes our nature undergoes once facing challenging atmosphere. This poem is a rather brilliant debacle compared with modern times, which I rather enjoyed while wondering what a modern version would read like with all the technologies. Then I shuddered at the thought..

Thanks for sharing.

sindbad


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Review of Rain  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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M.J.M.

This is a nice and rather unusual take on rainstorm. As a reader I can feel your exposure to such force of nature a regular event. I liked your ineherent and sensitive expression in so few a words and fathom you are open to suggestion on moving to the next level with nature and rainstorm. Nice and perfect take..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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BIG BAD WOLF Is Sam Vimes

This is a nice and elegant story with the main character Jack leaving a deep and a strange impact. I did feel the need to appreciate and express my appreciation as well. Fanatassy element here expressed in full eloquence. The style is elaborate. The expressions are strong. It is very touching the personal and yet distant take.
Excellent!

sindbad


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Review of Fellini's  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Archie

This i a nice and wholesome review of the ambiance of Felinis restaurant and as a reader I did get idea and understanding of what is expected and can accordingly enjoy the finer dining experience thanks to this exhaustive and yet balanced review of the restaturant. Certainly a rating on cleanliness, the warmth, the quality of food and the time taken to deliver a rating from 0-5 will go a long way. Overall a perfect and balanced review with address and phone number..sindbad


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Review of The Homecoming  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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🏳‍🌈 Me ~ Duf ♏

This is a nice and rather warm story on return of Ambrosia the supply ship after so much of apprehension and uncertainity. So much unexplored in a virtuous write and can unfold sci fi imagination to include certain anamolies that can dampen the homecoming. I really think this could be fleshed out in a story great enough to be a novel or a movie. Overall a great story..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Paul

I am a great fan of dragon slayer series, with main character showing the resolve and courage to sormount all odds to kill dargons. This story did give readers a unique perspective with room for showering the appreciation and applause for such a fantastic job you have done in providing a plausible alternative. Great job..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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very thankful

This is a nice and engaging assignment with questions that are practical and tests a persons knowledge about basic grammatical grasp. I will advice you to give an example and than motivate the readers with assignment and later a provision to express exceptions if there are any as well..sindbad


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Review of Somebody Like You  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

This is a nice and creative observation on getting the better off and understand the poeple close to you enhance your dominence. Thank you for sharing your talent with this inspiring poetry in free verse form. What I liked best was the effective use of somebody close.

Pulling that little extra out of ourselves which we didn't know was there is such an important way to grow into something better than we were while helping others and taking control of their free will. Good Job. Write On

Sindbad


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Review of Gone Is The World  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

This is a nice and creative poetry on understanding and adhering to certain inner sanctum to keep the outside influence boxed and hidden to a level wherein it will come as gone.Poetry doesn't have to be a complicated art form, as I find here simple expressions for the way one feels. I took a look at some of your other writing and see a professional at work. I think going forward, I am sure you must have gone through plethora of poetry and churned out certain specific style that can augment your style. You use the choicest of words and they sound the best to the readers as well. But, by all means, I will keep reading your poetry and experience what you feel. I have discovered great things during this process in your work...sindbad


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Review of Between Him And I  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!

This is a nice and direct poem you have written to definitively seal your level of understanding and some leverage or unfolding of bond between two source so well exemplified here in so few a words. What impressed me the most was how the wording was not forced but blended into an emerging natural mind picture. I enjoyed the creative aspect very much.

thanks for sharing.

sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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amy-Looking Forward

This is a nice and informative article and specially for fish lover(for catching them) this certainly helps in giving one a headstart. Says it all in a unique and easy to understand way. What drew me to this story was the title and short description on dry fly, the nymph fly and the streamer fly . Nice hook about using leader and tippet for streamer fly. What made my mind pause and consider, was the matter of fact presentation and yet all the options covered to give a beginer a fresh and positive start on catching fish and the importance of fishing fly. Well done. Write on...Sindbad


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Review of Theopathy  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Netzach

This is a nice and unique topic and so is this short and yet poignant description of the same in a creative manner. Hence defination of theopathy ie experience or capacity for experience of the divine illumination especially : intense absorption in religious devotion is aptly applied here. I am interested for more such poem to fill my corners(in lighter vain)...Sindbad


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Review of Insomnium  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Netzach

This is a nice and unique poem you have written on insomnia. As there are lot of people suffering from this predicament, you have given a universal identity with so few and poignant words in your poetry. A nest rhyme pattern puts the words into focus and makes this easy to follow as it calls attention to the insomnium. Entertaining little take on incarnate insomnium. Always: sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

Very nice. I like it all but that ending is a powerful line specially the inspiring forecast. This reminds me of reviews I sometimes get that are on a tangent that I'd never even considered when I wrote a piece on games most evident crises.

That is not what I meant at all.

Perfect ending for a poem about peaceful and central become less extreme with graceful perpetuity.

Indeed a perfect and balanced poem on a subject I have no doubt you are the best..sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu


I like this poem and I can so relate to it! As I can experience the effects not so long ago a 20 year old and now at 50 years. I liked the lines- A purpose leaked, most every instance,
Escapes my brain and seeks relief.
The finish line off in the distance
Envelops strain while leaving grief.

Reminds me of unfulfilled ambitions or great moments missed by a wisker.

Well done and very interesting to read!

sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Connieann's totem is a turtle

This story does leave readers with nostalgic moments, as a 6th grader and 10 years old this is a tiltating experience I most old timers will vouch for. As a reader this story did leave a deep impression. You are talented and have a way with words as you weave your web of words cleverly guiding your readers to what you want them to clearly see and here to bring about moments that happened so long a time ago and written with so much emotion is indid worth my appreciation. I did not find any errors at all also the creative linking was indeed the icing. Keep writing and keep sharing. I am giving your very creative story a five-star rating...sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and yet unique for people who are single and yet lucky to encounter love in unlikely place with testy soulmates resolve for rescue. You are talented and have a way with words as you weave your web of words cleverly guiding your readers to what you want them to clearly see like not yearning for a mate or gamers still stay bound or not. I did not find any errors at all specially with one solid and blessed effort. Keep writing and keep sharing. I am giving your very creative poem a five-star rating...sindbad


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Review of Waiting for a Son  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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BIG BAD WOLF Is Sam Vimes

This is a nice and moving story and as a reader I did find the plot a little difficult to comprehend, however I appreciate the creative endeavor and incident that triggered the story. It is an interesting read and a great explanation for newer writers or writers who typically write longer pieces but are trying to attempt smaller pieces. The cliff hanger story you present as an example is a good one because it shows how a martyr and his coffin is used to build up the suspense and drama of the situation.

Overall, great little explanation here. Thanks for sharing your knowledge with fellow WdC members.

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Rhyssa

This is a nice and exciting story and with your tenure in WDC, I must congratulate you and listen to your rich and diverse experience in this vibrant and popular site. I really enjoyed reading it special the rebellion part with a twist. I'm giving you a plethora of five purple stars for the good job that you did here on this story and made readers agree to your pov. Keep on writing ..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Autumn Is Azathoth

This is a short and yet revealing review of Before we were yours. I liked the lines- Suffused with imagery the reader wants to pause to savor, this is a frighteningly realistic work of historical literary fiction. Overall, great little explanation here. Thanks for sharing your knowledge with fellow WdC members...sindbad


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Review of The Poet  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
NordicNoir

This is a nice and creative synopsis of a poet and the inherent poem unfolding in such a unique and poetic manner. I write primarily poetry and have always been very descriptive in my work. I have discovered however, that the key is not in describing but rather in painting a picture and allowing the reader to interpret it through their own filters. I do that by omitting adjectives and adverbs, as well as prepositions. In other words I use no words that describe but rely instead on nouns, pronouns, and verbs to convey my message the way you have done here so very creatively. Great job..sindbad


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