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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Don Two

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and words on wonderful treasures and their inherent significance. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with all the creative and pertinent things and makes the words stand out. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this. Always..Sindbad


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Review of Her Father's Face  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Cubby

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details on her fathers face with appealing and creative format. A neat placement of words with balanced meaning sums this up and makes the words stand out. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this. Always..Sindbad


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Review of A Final Gift  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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HuntersMoon

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and words of wisdom on shadow and light. A neat creative intake with lot of pondering done here. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this. Always..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Ambiguous Air
I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written with nice and elegant find so beautifully expressed in so few a word. A neat mapping pattern sums this up and makes the binary alphabet stand out. Beautiful reflections. Creative, impressive and I enjoyed reading this. Always..Sindbad


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Review of Ice  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dorianne

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. A great way to capture emotions and heartbreak in so few a word. Nicely written details from core of your heart did leave a deep impression. Easy to follow and you spent a lot of emotions and inner churning to come up with perfect response. Beautifully captured the inner nuances. Always...Sindbad


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Review of Try Me and Others  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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C. Yarn Weaver

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nice and perfect 2-4-2 format. I have got a nice and perfect example to adapt while following this creative and yet pertinent format. Beautifully captured on try me and captured. Always..Sindbad


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Review of The Copper Kettle  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Prosperous Snow (Neva)

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I did enjoy your take on star trek, specially my favorite character Captain Kirk and Spock. This was an unusual take on what seemed like a superhero-narrative, but I suspect that it isn't heading in that direction in the long run specially after saving two races from extinction and stopping an intergalactic war. Indeed a heavy stuff handled in a perfect and humorous manner...Sindbad


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Review of Love is Blind  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Goliath

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This is a nice and creative take on love, I liked the semblance and correlation of bride and her family with claws.Nicely written details, easy to follow and I enjoyed reading this. Creative and great job. Always..Sindbad


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Review of Settings List  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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J. L. Henry 4 years ON WDC!

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. I am very happy for your completing 4 years in WDC, as you compatriot I support and adhere to your sentiments. You can done a perfect justice to Nano Assignment. As a reader I did like the balanced and clear marking of the characters. Brilliant work with the tone of the character for something that simplify descriptions of the actions and the subjects without using big words like- An archway at the opposite end of the foyer leads into a living room with hard wood flooring. In the center of the living room sits a leather couch, two leather recliners, and a glass coffee table. The coffee table stands on a cream area rug. Across from the couch a 72: flat screen TV hangs on the wall with shelves set up underneath for holding various electronic devices..

Great job..Sindbad


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Review of Planetstride  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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John Johnson

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Overall it's a slightly too grimy read for me to want to associate it to something higher, specially a space opera and the pilots dilemma, if I were to want to read a tale of that kind I would avoid this for that reason. It has potential and you seem to have a lot of underlying lore to go with it, but it should probably shine through more. If more of the inner workings of his current dilemma and a rather strong urge to walk on a planet can be better captured with tonality of the action and its outcome. Other than that, you might be heading somewhere with it. I did get a picture of your inner working. Hoping for the best..Sindbad


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Review of The King of Texas  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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HuntersMoon

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details and I enjoyed the caricature and semblance of King of Texas and cialis. Nicely written details about understanding of scepter vis a vis a palace. Easy to follow and great wisdom with inherent sense of humor. Always..Sindbad


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Review of Happy Nights Inn  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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R

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details coming from your heart. All the events with perfect balance of the background has been the strong point of this short story. A great way to remember a cold and a wintery night. Nicely written details and giving bone chilling a new definition specially- Bang. Bang. Bang or Tick. Tick. Tick. Tick. or Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. Tap. . Easy to follow and you spent a lot of time with this. Beautifully captured the essence of fear. A wholesome ready with full value for time and money..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Eleanor Willow

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Nicely written details coming from your heart. Nicely written details on Maryn Tylser, and his wholesome preparation to make his dream of floating cities a reality, easy to follow and I enjoyed reading this. Well, rounded characters and well written dialogue like - "Don't worry," Chorlan said. He bent down to collect the small crystal hidden in the pocket, "Talak tried his best to keep his word. Torture works wonders to loosen people's tongues. I knew you were hiding something when we spoke at Highrock. No other plesaxtech glows white and no one sacrifices their own blood to the gods unless they want to die. I didn't believe you wanted to die." With no emotion, the Emperor wiped his blade on a clean spot of Maryn's robes. Maryn watched with quickly dimming sight as Chorlan stretched his wings, and flew away.
Creative and great job expecting the best. Always..Sindbad


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Review of Fear  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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D.C. Malcolm

This is a nice and rather universal feeling you have captured. A person feels uncomfortable and a nagging fear with bagful of imagined dangers running at the back of the mind. Your story deserves five stars for being full of action and well-written...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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MichaelMalyon

This is a nice and mysterious take on guardians of the night. I did feel the fascination and your unique skills of creative suspense and thrill in so few a words did leave a deep impression like - As the goosebumps on my neck give rise to the chilly touch of death, lightning claws from beyond this world. Behind me, the shadows breathe a mist of icy wind. Within this flash of light is born the author of my nightmares. Lots of images and feelings come to the surface while reading this piece. Although many things go untold, it doesn't really make any questions come up either as the theme sci-fi is more existential on a human level than personal on an individual level.

Great job creating imagery.

Best wishes for your writing

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This poem's emotions go back and forth with inherent understanding and nuances of bowling. The superior acumen and sincere practice with diligent use of ideas have been creatively captured here.
Well done.

Best wishes for your writing.

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. Your poem is full of action, and cause with inherent positive and upcoming vibes. This is a nice take on when to back down and reset this inherent balance, also the dynamics with words like- Seeking grants that huge applause!
But sometimes knowing is a gift. Has been perfectly captured here.

Best wishes for your writing.

Sindbad


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Review of Never Give Up  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dragon 老师

There is a nice and creative twist on never give up. I liked the word choice and form of poetry however the nuances of never give up vis a vis the style has been perfect and sound. I think if the second stanza and first stanza are reversed it will give a new meaning as well. Just my take here..Overall a perfect and refreshing poetry with nice pun in the end..Sindbad

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Ollie Mathew

I am a great believer of mother nature, hence my choice of a girl and her inherent foundation and support will create an ideal environment for the next child to relish. As a family I feel a girl child as first brings a lot of good vibes and wholesome bonding of a family in the future. This is just my personal opinion and in view of larger audience such quiz helps in refreseshing the dynamics of nature..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

The movie sandlot is about baseball and motivation of a coach doing wonders, has been captured beautifully here with words like designs must take precedence. Composing poetry is a process of collecting and arranging various language components--some intentional and some accidental--over time. The words invade our consciousness and provoke a sensitivity to their interaction, as we flex our writing muscles. Practice does not always mean tedious work; in this case, it’s more like play which may develop and advance for a lifetime. Poets begin by experimenting with words and phrases, like- And the quality and fragrance -A stem .
You have achieved the most important step in this process by capturing your thoughts on paper before they can fly away. In that effort, you have excavated a golden nugget from the depths of your imagination. Keep up the imagination running to maximize the effects and transform it into the magnificent jewel it can be with last lines like -
Which may develop and advance -
For a lifetime!
Indeed a salute to your creative zeal.. sindbad.

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Review of Night Shift  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Joto-Kai

This again is a nice and creative take on dream and its so many different rub so wonderfully captured here. Nicely written details and good descriptions about night shift. The words flow well, a neat tone with a good rhyme pattern like- Chin up, lip curled,
his sneer says all: I could have done it, you know. A shake of his head. this describe all different unforced things going around. No errors. Impressive and creative. My favorite lines: Enter the black-hooded wraith, faceless.
Gloved talons strike, cellophane screams.
I am happy to have read this and got familiar with some nuances of night shift...sindbad


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Review of Homecoming  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Joto-Kai

This is a nice and catchy poem you have written on nuances of your feline pet. Nicely written details and I hung on to every word. Good descriptions with nicely written details and a sense of humor. Entertaining and this is creative. Impressive with Zebra-stripe-toes strike. It always a pleasure to go through your creative take on cat of the house the the unique greeting style..sindbad

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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EOIWriting

This is a nice and intriguing poem written from the heart. As a reader I did like the flow and undercurrent of love devotion and peaceful confidence on the unraveling of events. The nuances between nature and inherent love at heart has been beautifully captured with beautiful reflections. Nicely written details like- Though my train of thought derailed when I saw
Black spots far in the distance floating above our city.
The sky starts to turn a more appropriate orange.
Our hearts joined together for so long
About to face the ultimate test..

Leaves deep impression. Easy to follow, nice tone with a good play on words. A neat rhyme pattern sums it up and makes the words stand out. No errors. Creative, impressive and a pleasure to read. Thank you for posting poem on eternal sunset with so much at heart ..Sindbad


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Review of My Fire Burns On  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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EOIWriting

This love poem you have written in nice surroundings. The ambiance must be compelling and perfect for you to pen such a passionate and yet non attached poem. Obviously, I am reminding the golden rule of poetry: It's not the form but the content! What a wonderful surprise when I going through the lines -
We were part of the inferno
Your dress a bright crimson to match
My everlasting love for you.

I was reminded of the love and strength so beautifully expressed. I really enjoyed it. I think your approach to this balanced form and subject in so short a time was excellent. I congratulate you to incorporate tiny details that bring the power of your words to life - brilliant. Very creatively expressing the power of joy. A very romantic but enjoyable and enlightening read, one that will resonate with many readers and remind the loss with positive vibes. Thank you for sharing your journey of emotion, imagination, and talent with me today and sincerely eager to go through more of your work. Keep writing! Wishing you all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Toressa  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
rl

This lyric for love song is indeed creative as you know golden rule of poetry: It's not the form but the content. I really enjoyed looking at lyrics of a love song through your eyes. While the general approach is dictated by the form, I think many will find that your words resonate Toressa Toressa and its romantic feelings.

That you incorporated the details of how you arrived at the end with love comes to mind, really opens the poem up and allows the reader to reflect on their own thoughts and feelings the love song. Very creative. A very enjoyable and enlightening read, one that will resonate with many romantic readers. Keep writing! Wishing you all the best..Sindbad

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