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Good morning Monty,
I thoroughly enjoyed "A place in my heart". It brought back memories of a love I once had. As you well know that this shall find a way into everyone's heart. The memories of yesterday. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work.
Happy writing,

A little bewitching for the holiday

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good evening Fhionnuisce,

Just dropping in to read your fabulous short story "The Faeries of Teaghlaigh". A very charming story of the bravery of these tiny creatures that we all love and adore. Excellent writing, I found a couple of error's, but none to draw the reader from your story. I'm interested if there is more? I look forward to reading more of your work.

Keep writing beautiful things,
A little bewitching for the holiday

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Keaton,
I have to tell I've never read a poem about death like this. It is written very well. It makes one wonder if it is that way. I myself have faced death twice and once with my son. I walked in his room, have you ever felt death? I stared him in the face and told him to get out. But as you've written one does get tired and decides to give up. No more pain, no more misery. They just want to rest get it over with. This is what I've gotten out of your writing.I look forward to reading more of your work.

Happy writing,
A little bewitching for the holiday
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Lilla,
Lol, if only there were enough of them to go around. It would be such a much happier world, don't you think. I love the title and the purpose of the man. Make one woman happy in his lifetime. Well, at least the right one. I love the quote, it made me smile. Thank you, Lilla for sharing it with us.
Keep writing wonderful things,
A little bewitching for the holiday
Electrifying
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Review of Justice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ruwth,

The sad thing about OJ is that there will always be that question. Did he or Didn't he do it? There are only the players in this scene that know the whole story and we shall never know. Like so many others before him and after him, that will serve them justice where there is no hiding from the truth. Great debate and well written.
May you have a blessed day,
Spooks with a Heartache
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Review of The Eye  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey W.D.
This was really, truly captivating for me. My first horror like story to read. Yes, I've watched movies, but that you can see and hear. This took me into something different. Your details were vivid, real vivid. Even at the point where he is eating his heart almost well it did make me gag. You had me wanting to know what was going to happen next. I did feel sorry for him at the end. I was truly hoping he would make it out somehow. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work. Very interesting. Keep up the great work. Great details....

Happy writing,
Spooky with a Heartache
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Review of The Hunter  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh W.D.
Now, that's just not right....lol. I was getting really wrapped up in it too. I love the details it made me feel like I was in the room with them. Begging him not to shoot him. Now you have left it to the reader to imagine what happened. It could of went one of three way's. He got Cletus, Cletus got him or he shot the Buck. I love the twist to it, pulled the reader right into the story. Because you know that we all have a Cletus in our life. Great story loved it. My story ends with him killing the Buck of course. No great hunter is going to pass it up.

Great job,
Spooky with a Heartache
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Review of His Hand In Mine  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Connieann,
This is a very touching photo. Today is my sons 37th birthday and I will always remember his hand in mine. I know that others can relate to this beautiful picture. It in no doubt is a beautiful memory for you. I look forward to reading more of your work.
May God bless you,
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Dear Francis,

That is some mighty powerful words. Now, I can only imagine one person with that kind of power. But I'm assuming it is your quote. I can also relate to that powerful statement. A wife talking to her husband...lol
It is a powerful statement, I that I enjoyed. Keep up the great writing. See you in the hallways.

God bless your day,

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Review of He Knew  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear JJ,

I just read your story "He knew" it's strange when you have that feeling, you just know. Although you want to talk to them and ask question's. You just know. I like how you presented it. I found no error's. Very nicely done. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing,

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Hello Harry,
A very touching poem. It tells of undying love that a mother has for their child and the heartache which happens when that child doesn't make good of himself or herself. At one point most parents go through this, I think. I found one small error, other than that, this is well written and speaks to oneself. I have included the error, I find it's great to have a second pair of eyes. Keep up the great job.

#1: Twenty-five years {old, but} still not a man,

Happy writing,
Girl with a Heartbeat
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Dear Myles,

This was very lovely goodbye. In some way it made me realize that no matter what, it takes time to say goodbye. We have to be able to grieve in our own way. It took me back to some memories, good ones and some not so good. I enjoyed your story, although I feel like it was close to being a real experience for you. I didn't find any error's. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for writing such a beautiful goodbye.

Have a good evening,
Girl with a Heartbeat

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Review of The Look  
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Wow.. Ken, that was just so amazing. I know that we are suppose to do 250 in words at least....lol. Here goes, now that was beautiful. Touched my soul and was brilliantly written. I uttered every word and inhaled them once within. Wow, or I could just do 250 WOW's...lol. I'm just blown away. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Happy writing,
Teresa
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Review of The Prayer Quilt  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear GeminiGem,
I was moved by your story of Trina, God does move in mysterious ways. This is a very beautiful story of love, courage, hope, caring of others and faith in our All Mighty God. It was beautifully written. I always include any error's I come upon. I believe that it's better to have an extra set of eyes. I will return to read more of your beautiful writings. I'm am glad you're a survivor. May God bless you always my dear.
Happy writing,

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#1: Didn't she just see on that Leah and her husband were on vacation?

#2: Just two simple words, but {again, she} knew in her heart
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Review of Friday, Fall  
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Hey Tink,
You painted such a vivid picture that I could imagine her painting the fall foliage about me. Wonderfully written.
I really enjoyed it.
Happy writing,
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Review of When in the Woods  
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Hey Tink,
Hehe, told I was dropping by. Man this reminds me of my day's in Tahoe. I miss it and you just brought back the joy that I was missing. It amazes me how we each can take our thoughts and words and make something so small into something so rewarding. I enjoyed it very much. Beautifully written.

Happy writing,
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Review of I Have a Hero  
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Hey Tinker (Judi),

Memories play a big part of our lives. Even though some are good and some are not. I can relate to those. This was nicely written and has a lot of your soul in it. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work.

Happy writing,
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Hey Snow,
I love this poem. I can relate to this. When I pray I let the light in and exhale the darkness letting it disappear. I love how you put into perspective.
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Review of Identity  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good morning Alton,
I just finished reading "Identity". I really enjoyed it, great detail. It was as if I was watching it unfold before my eye's. I like how it was left open at the end for additional stories. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Happy writing,
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Good morning isokarifrancis,

A very wise quote. I enjoyed it very much. It tells me to always stand my ground and never forget that I'm in charge. I look forward to reading more of your work. Hope you drop my my place and say hello. Stay awhile and read if you'd like.

Happy writing,
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Review of Masquerade  
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Hello Know My Hell,

Wow, I really never looked at it that way. But I indeed can now. Very well written. I like how you linked all the different charades together. Then made it all about the perception everyone has, in order to play the game of life. I look forward to reading more of your work. Hope you drop into my place and say hello.

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Review of Washing Dishes  
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Good morning Neva,
I enjoyed reading 'Washing Dishes". I do the same thing...lol. I find doing the dishes by hand gives me time to pray. I truly never realized it until you wrote about it. I found a couple of error's. I don't know about you, but I always like having a second pair of eyes. I have included them for you. I look forward to reading more of your work. Please drop in and read some of mine. Hope you have a wonderful day.

Happy writing,
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#1: I squirted in glob of concentrated Palmolive dish detergent
#2: Doing excellent job with the dishes is a good way to pray.


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Good morning Tim,
As I read "The Matador and the Bull Fight". I pictured myself sitting in the arena listening to the crowd roaring at each movie that was made. I could smell the dust from the earth as they fought. You painted the scene as if you'd been there. Now, I have never truly understood why they put swords into them. But, if the bull rammed the Matador. That would be his sword protecting himself. I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your writings. Drop in at my place. Look around and tell me what you think.

Happy writing,
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Review of A Simple Act  
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Dear HuntersMoon,

I come knocking once more tonight before I go. I thought I needed to read one more. So I peeked in your folder and read "A Simple Act". I was delighted to read it. You described it perfectly. The touch of a hand can mean so much to someone. I will return to read more. You are very talented. I have included a couple of error's I found and have included them. Hope you have a great weekend.

Happy writing,
Girl with a Heartbeat
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Review of Hooked  
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Hey Huntersmoon,

I just finished reading a very delightful story of a daddy who enjoys his favorite hobby Bullriding. But, enjoys spending time with his children. The great detail that you gave of him preparing for the ride was spot on. I felt the emotions he was having prepping for it and during the ride. I found a few error's and have included them for an easy fix. I find 2 sets of eyes are better. I look forward to reading more of your work. Please drop in and read some of mine, I would appreciate your thoughts.

Happy writing,
Girl with a Heartbeat
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#1: At 5 {feet,} 9 inches, he didn’t seem the cowboy type. He
flexed his arms,
#2: The world blurred as Take Off leapt out of the enclosure,
twisting to {the right.}
#3: Take Off once more and began to spin to the left. Cody
leaned into the spin, relaxing a bit.
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