Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest for I'm no expert reviewer.
Title:
Your title "Tears For Two" really caught my attention.
Storyline, plot and characters:
Your storyline and plot was excuted very well in this piece. Telling everyone just how important these two were in your life. How you became inseparably and enjoyed each other's company. Just wondering about their names?
Imagery & Emotions:
I'm sure that other's that read your piece has had the same feelings about their loyal and without a doubt TENNIS SHOES. Wait your tennis shoes! Ok you totally had me going about two dear friends of yours that you buried in the back yard no doubt. I was almost on the verge of calling the police.
Conclusion:
My favorite line is:
βFarewell, my beloved tennis shoes. May your soles rest in peace.β
Ok, I do have to say, when you find a pair that is so comfortable and last forever it is very hard to say goodbye to them. I had a friend who no doubt felt the same way with his. He even went as far as to wrapping rubber bands around the toes, because they were coming apart at the sole and toe. Then eventually he duct taped them together. No kidding, but he is cheap also...lol Makes things last until there is NO MORE LIFE IN THEM. Yes, I guess I can call him a serial killer also.
I want to thank you for sharing this delightful piece of yours. I really enjoyed reading it and laughing at the marvelous ending. You really had me going. Happy Anniversary my friend π€ππ€
Keep Writing on!
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