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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.


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Your title "Should've Stayed in Bed" really caught my attention. My curiosity is peaked now.


Rhythm & Flow:

I love your rhythm and the flow is easy to follow. I love all the rhyme, perfectly executed.

Imagery & Emotions:


Gezzzz, just one of those days where you would've been better off with the covers over your head. I've been and I'm sure that all your reader's can relate to your piece. Especially where our furry friends come in play.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:


Run to the store for a minute,
Painting cans left close to the door.
I return to find she's painted
White paws all over the floor.
Ok, I have two but they go together like chocolate and peanut butter...lol. Without a doubt I've been here with my grand dogs. You have captured something that all can relate and laugh about after the fact and we can only laugh about it.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece and part of your world. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It gives me great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.


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Your title "Music is it a poem" really caught my attention. Curiosity killed the cat they say, but I entered anyway to see just what the answer might be.


Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow of this piece goes hand in hand to develop this piece of art.

Imagery & Emotions:


I have thought of music being a poem, because it has a story, rhythm,
rhyme, and a purpose. I love how you actually broke it down, so one to use their imagination to actually see that it is.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

The bolder our mood, the higher the pitch,

This is my favorite, but there are several in this piece that I really like. It was hard to narrow it down, but this is most definitely the one. I can see or hear it now I should say, we do crank it up depending on our moods. Not to mention the highway, gotta have my jam on.

Thank you for sharing a very unique way of seeing music now. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your title "A Gift from God's Hand" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


Your words in this piece flow together as if they fell upon the page.

Imagery & Emotions:

It is without doubt that He loves us without conditions. Anyone who has the faith can relate to your piece. This is beautifully written and a wonderful tribute to our Lord God.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Thank you Lord
for the gift of life
to the chances You are giving me
You must love us
very much...to give your
eternal love for free.


Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your title "14-line poem, untitled" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

The flow of this piece speaks to one as if you and I were sitting down discussing our day.

Imagery & Emotions:

Your words take me to a place so many of us (writers) go, off into never-never land I'm afraid. Oh so do we relate to your piece.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Thoughtful and deep
My words flow unimpeded
From that place of clean inspiration

My heart onto the page
The astral being I am
Dances through the lines

As you can see I favorited a little more than a line. These are the words we all search for at one time or another. You captured feelings every writer knows oh too well. I love the ending turn to Comedy...lol What else is one to do? Happy Anniversary may you have a wonderful weekend.


Thank you for sharing this delightful piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is my great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑ 10th Anniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many many more. I thought while I was here I would give you an anniversary review to help you celebrate.


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Title:


Your title "A Droopy Christmas Tale(Tail)" really caught my attention.


Storyline, plot and characters:


What a cute story of a Christmas surprise. I love all the characters... all sweet and cuddly...lol

Imagery & Emotions:


It's not hard to imagine the cat lady down on all fours searching for the puppy. She is a animal lover. You have great detail for the imagination to run with.


Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Stepping carefully out the front door, I looked for clues of the noise.

This makes your piece a mystery of sorts. I think that it captures one's attention to see what is going on.


Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your anniversary and have a great weekend.

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Review of Regret and Sorrow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Your title "Regret and Sorrow" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

Your words in this piece flow together as if they fell upon the piece of paper.

Imagery & Emotions:


Speaking from within your soul the words of this piece are so near to you. A piece of you is in these words you speak. You have described every feeling that every single person has experienced at one time or another.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Have a great day. But do
step over the liquid of black molasses
oozing and hovering around my feet.

Such a true statement of how a person might feel on a glume day. Most people live with regret, I know I do. You really can't help it. You captured those feelings to a tee. I want to wish you a wonderful 15th Anniversary here at WDC, with many many more...lol

Thank you for sharing this wonderfully written piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Deep In Her Eyes.  
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๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ CONGRATULATIONS on Your promotion to YELLOW CASE ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ


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Your title "Deep in her eyes" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

Your words in this piece flow together as if they fell upon the page. I love that you rhymed it, gave it style and rhythm.

Imagery & Emotions:

Your piece has soul and a love for all woman. I feel it in your words of admiration for them.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:
Deep in her eyes, is a place to live.
With a smile so wide, my love I give.
They say the eyes are a window to the soul! Do you believe this? I've been told when you look into someone's eyes you enter into their world. Eyes tell all. Congrats again on your promotion. I don't know about you, but I'm pinching myself still to see if it's real. I'm so proud of you accomplishing your goal.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. I enjoyed reading it as I do all your pieces.

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Review of One Man's Junk  
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๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ CONGRATULATIONS on Your promotion to YELLOW CASE ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ


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Title:


Your title "One Man's Junk" really caught my attention.


Storyline, plot and characters:

Love the storyline, a great adventure of how one man's junk becomes another. It's gone through time without fail from one generation to the next. Your characters are fabulous no doubt brothers, awesome. Love Jemmry, no doubt an Alien.


Imagery & Emotions:

Your piece has great detail and leaves the imagination no doubt what is going on. If this was a series on SciFi I would watch it.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:
"You're supposed to break Tortilian stuff, Charlie.
You never want to insult an Alien, I would shutter the thought of what would happen. I would like to know all the adventures that Tangent has been on and not to mention what did Tammy say about his new purchase and new found technology...lol

Thank you for sharing this delightful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to visiting your port again. Congrats again on your promotion. Are you still pinching yourself to see if your dreaming, this is such an accomplishment for us! A really awesome one.

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Review of A Midnight Stroll  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:


Your title "A Midnight Stroll" really caught my attention.


Storyline, plot and characters:

What a delightful storyline and your character is full of life.

Imagery & Emotions:


Your descriptive details of all his surroundings are perfect and made me feel as if I was sitting in the garden out of view, watching him from a distance.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

Malcolm engulfed her in an embrace and lifted her into the air. โ€œI heard you calling for me.โ€

Ok, yes I'm a romantic and this line just made me still believe that there is still romance out there. It just shows you that if you believe and still look it is there, even if you think not.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Pizza  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your title "Pizza" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

Your words flowed perfectly together in perfect rhythm.

Imagery & Emotions:

This is perfect, I have totally been craving Pizza for 2 weeks now. You captured my imagination with your description of pizza toppings and I want it even more now...lol

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

All of it, because you have to have everything on a Pizza...lol ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‚

Thank you for sharing this enjoyable piece, can I have a slice now minus the pineapple... ๐Ÿ˜€ I really enjoyed reading your piece.

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Review of The End of Her  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your title " The End of Her" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

Your piece flows with ease of every word as if you were sitting here speaking to me about your mother. Perfect!!!

Imagery & Emotions:


Your piece speaks volumes of the loss that you have endured. Anyone that has lost their mother like us can relate to this piece. I can feel the emotion's that you have captured on this page.
Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

It is hard to choose a favorite line, because this entire piece has meaning in each and every line. I can relate to your piece so much, I lost my mom when I was 22. Nicely written, with lots of heart and soul in it.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is my great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many many more. I thought while I was here I would give you an anniversary review to help you celebrate.




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Title:

Your title "Who is That in the Mirror?" caught my attention.


Storyline, plot and characters:


This is a very good storyline and have never looked at it from the perspective of a soldier. I'm very sympathetic to your character in so many ways. Good strong character in this piece.

Imagery & Emotions:

I feel a great connection with your character and know that anyone who has been or had someone in the military can relate to this piece.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Is Jim still here?
Without a doubt he wonders what it is that he lost each time. A small piece of himself which has now become so much more. It's not only physical, but mentally lose.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I am a military mom, daughter, niece, cousin and grand daughter, many generations.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It is my great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many many more. I thought while I was here I would give you an anniversary review to help you celebrate.




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Title:

Your title "Thoughts and Memories" caught my attention.


Storyline, plot and characters:

This is more of a face to face conversation, let's say with a friend or a acquaintance.

Imagery & Emotions:

You have brought up some very good questions and this reader can relate to all of your questions. I have been asking myself these very same questions for several months now.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

"How did I arrive at this point in my life?"
I believe at some point and time every single person on this planet ask these questions. I wonder myself everyday now, "How did I get here?" It sure wasn't where I am suppose to be for sure. Now to ponder these questions, maybe I will get the answer!

Thank you for sharing your piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of The Lovers  
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It is my great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many many more. I thought while I was here I would give you an anniversary review to help you celebrate.




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Title:

Your title really caught my attention, "The Lovers"


Storyline, plot and characters:


Your storyline caught me off on how they wanted to tell Darren about their love for each other. Your characters being two living persons and two ghost really turned the tables for me, nice touch.
Imagery & Emotions:



Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

Darren must have been waiting for you to find someone to love before he would move on.
If you think about it I guess sometimes it is hard to move on whether it be dead or alive.
Thank you for sharing a delightful story with us. I really enjoyed reading it.

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It gives me great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.


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Title:

Your title really caught my attention, "The Storm".


Rhythm & Flow:

The rhythm and flow is to perfection on this piece.

Imagery & Emotions:

Your description of the storm in ones life is spot on for all. When one goes astray from God, you are so blinded by earthly things that you shut out Him. I know that your reader's can relate to this piece, I know I have.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

"Welcome home my child", He said.
I felt so much of this piece within me. It spoke volumes about faith and the forgiveness that He gives us.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

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It gives me great pleasure to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†Happy๐Ÿ˜ฑAnniversary๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.


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Title:

Your title really caught my attention. "Angel of the Beach" Part two


Rhythm & Flow:

There is no rhythm to this piece. The flow of your words are as if they belong together.


Imagery & Emotions:

This piece makes this reader think about what if I were to find an Angel on the beach. All the questions and feelings that would come to mind.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:

She must feel something
as she smiles in her sleep.

This is a lovely piece, I can only imagine what it would be like to find an Angel. With all the questions I would have ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece with us. I really enjoyed reading it. I also read part one...fyi

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Review of Thief of Hearts  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Title:

Your title really caught my attention "Thief of Hearts" catchy title.


Rhythm & Flow:

Your words have been chosen well for excellent rhyming. They flow with ease as if they were meant to be.


Imagery & Emotions:

I know that your reader's can relate to this piece. At one time or another we all had a Thief of the heart.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
The cruel beast that stole her heart
Unfortunately this happens to us at one time or another.

Thank you for sharing your piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest for I'm no expert reviewer.

I want to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.

Title:

Your title really caught my attention "In That Moment, Forever"


Rhythm & Flow:

There is no rhythm to this piece. It flowed the ease was easy to follow.

Imagery & Emotions:

I pictured myself looking back for that moment and wished I could keep it forever. But, I have a few that I would love to have back.


Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
If I could, I'd live in that moment. But I think everyone feels this way and can relate to this piece a lot.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Poetry Reading  
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Title:

Your "Poetry Reading" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:

With it's unique flow and was easy to follow. There is no rhythm to this piece.

Imagery & Emotions:

As I read each verse I was able to picture what was being said.

Conclusion:

My favorite line is:
He started,
a heartfelt tribute;
at the end
a round of applause.

This is a beautiful piece and well thought out. I want to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us. I enjoyed reading it and pictured myself standing there nervous reading mine. I can see relating to this piece.

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Dear Wenston,

I wanted to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.
I found your piece "The End of the Rainbow" very special and unique. Without a doubt I didn't expect this poem to be about your brother in the military. Now with that being said this is got to be one of the cutest poems dedicated to a member of the military. I myself am a military mom and found this piece very touching. Please tell your brother thank you for his service and also your family. I hope and pray that he has returned home safely. I want to thank you for sharing this piece with us.
May you have a blessed evening,
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Good evening Some Kid,

Just dropping in to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ here at WDC and may you have many more.
Thought I would drop by and give you a anniversary review. I needed a good laugh tonight and I found that in your play "Why Don't Ya Let the Whole Town In? Oh my, I love all your characters, plot and who doesn't like a good prank. I pictured it all going down even right down to the pink clothes...lol. Hilarious, I want to thank you for making me laugh tonight, I really needed it. I'm a bit of a prankster myself, this was a jot down memory lane. Thank you for sharing it and may you have great success here.
May your evening be blessed,
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Review of Mystery Woman.  
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Hello Anthony,

I want to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.
I see you have some new pieces. I wanted to give you a anniversary review while I was poking around your portfolio. I thought I would sit a spell and read your new pieces.
I decided to review "Mystery Woman" I found it to be a very beautiful piece. This woman must be very special to you. You have written from the heart and captured what is within your soul. May she realize what she has lost by walking away. This is a very special piece thank you for sharing it.

May God bless you,
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Review of My Sister Angela  
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Dear Marie,
I dropped in to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more.

I wanted to give you an anniversary review while I was here. I want to tell you that your story "My Sister Angela" is a very touching and a tribute to her. It sometimes is hard to see just how much one person does impact another's life. This reader was drawn into your piece wanting to know more of your little sister and the impact she had on you and other's in her life. Thank you for sharing such a moving piece and giving us a glimpse of her and your love for her. Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
May you have a blessed evening,
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Dear Stephen,

I dropped by to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more. While I am here I thought I would give you a review on your piece "Broken Hearts Can Be Mended."
What a lovely piece your words flowed perfectly together as if they were meant to be. Everyone who has ever had a broken heart of any sort, needs to read this piece. I find a very encouraging. I want to tell you thank you for sharing this piece with us. I enjoyed reading it very much.
May you have a blessed evening,
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Review of They Told Me  
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Dear Angel,
I wanted to wish you a ๐ŸŽ†๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ Happy ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Anniversary ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ† here at WDC and may you have many more to come.
While I'm here I thought I would read some of your work and I came upon a piece that caught my eye, "They Told Me". I often wondered what and how the disciples felt the day after His crucifixion and his resurrection. You bring this question to light in some ways. I can see one thinking and feeling this way. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
May you have a blessed evening,
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