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Review of Bad Luck  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bad luck indeed to be wiped out completely. I could imagine the scenes which reminded me of different battlefield scenes in movies. The speech, actions, characters ,scenes, plot are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your battlefield word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of AKIN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words describe a scene of the unknown. A character who is perhaps misshapen, but I feel this character is an image created in the mind with its unstable shape. Or, perhaps it is the other side of a person who is generally good at heart, yet has the other side occasionally appearing in dream like fashion reminding the person about the darker side of life and death.

We have our good side and our bad side. I believe in Gods abilities to take care of everything. I trust Him because He has taken care of me all of my life. For this reason I can also see through your words that both sides battle and the good wins.

Thank you for writing about both sides of life and death battling for supremacy with good winning praise and glory to God. Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A twist on the hunger games that brought images of this story to life with added relational changes. I could see the scenes in my minds eye, hear the conversations, feel the tension and other emotions, and believe these changes and additions.

Thank you for writing this hunger games story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very up close and vivid introduction to two special horses that I can see, touch, and appreciate through your carefully chosen words. Years ago I had horses. A stallion, several mares, one, a quarter horse. I remembered them as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing about these special horses and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Bad Girl  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
well Sue was certainly naughty, but...you joined in her naughtiness so is like the pot calling the kettle black. Guilty as charged, lol. I could see because of your carefully chosen words the scene, the characters, the actions, and feel a lot of emotion. You made this scene and the characters realistic and I could believe something like this happening.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about naughty Sue and you with me and WdC members. It seems there were two college degrees acquired, lol.


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Review of Trust in the Lord  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You touched my heart with your words because through your confession I felt God. I know there are times when I have blundered ahead of God and made a huge mess. Thank you for reminding me and for showing people the necessities of prayer and trusting God as you wait for Him.

Thank you for writing these words an sharing them with me and WdC members.


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Review of Who is Happy ??  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Praise and glory to God because I am content and happy. I could feel the happiness of each bird until that bird saw another bird they thought was prettier or better in some way. It is true about humans comparing but we are told not to do this according to scripture and other writings. I'm glad you explained this concept in an interesting, colorful, and believable story. I was able to see, feel, and understand all of it from the beginning to the end.

There are some typos/errors. Reading this story and making minor changes will smooth out the wording and de less distracting to readers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about not comparing with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dearest Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm encouraged by your words. Rooting for you is magnetic. Feeling your encouragement is uplifting to me. Word by word you wrote a poetic dear me message that is alive and speaks to me as if you were sharing your ides with me face to face.

I could imagine each scene with you standing or sitting beside you, a hand on the shoulder of you, and giving a pep talk.

I hope you are having a fantastic 2024.

Thank you very much for the pep talk. Yup, it is a pep take to me. I am encouraged.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dear me word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Beautiful Rain  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could feel the scary part of this situation. I could imagine being stalked. I could run but not hide. The idea of an unperceived change is frightening. All this combines to make me want to avoid you at all times. I thought about Halloween while writing this review.

Thank you for writing and sharing your changeable self through word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
{But, when it came to the moon}brought a smile to my face. I didn't know why until I finished reading your word art. What you wrote about poetry is true and so it also applies with any writing. I could see you dealing with the challenge of not writing poetry, but I could also imagine you writing a story in a poetic way. Finding the right words to express the feelings, scenes, characters, and other things in a story matter as much as words for poetry. I can imagine you and words dancing across the page or screen creating a story in poetry form or poetry in short story form.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Inner Me  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really appreciate these words because I now have a better idea about how you see and respond to the world. It also gives me the opportunity to know you better and to be able to create a friendship that I hope will last. I can relate because I also miss visual cues similar to you missing audible cues.

You are an individual. Aspergers is also variable. Together I understand it is a challenge to explain to people what things are like for people living with Aspergers. You can explain your situation but I won't completely understand because I'm not you. I can only have a clue.

Please help me to understand one step at a time as our relationship grows.

Your words show insights into this special situation. You have talents that most people won't have because of you unique pop.

I applaud you for not quitting and continuing to climb the mountain of life because I had difficulties with school stuff and socializing for different reasons.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you because blindly following whatever others dictate is not always the best choice. Ir is plain in your words that following the spirit, researching the situation, and taking time to think things through before deciding on a way to proceed should be done first. You also make it clear that by blindly based on how many or past history following can lead to destruction. I could imagine and feel the turmoil of being bullied and fighting to over come by deciding for yourself what the best course of action would be.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you insights and word art with me an WdC members.


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Review of Clash  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the additional information available below the poem because it helps readers have a better understanding your word art. I could see and feel the tug-of-war between trusting your heart or your mind. I wonder what the spirit has to offer ni this situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC embers.


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Review of Believer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a nice job working with the digital art software. The colors you choose blend well making this picture interesting visually. I could feel the peace of the dove and also the burning of compassion.

Thank you for writing about this picture and sharing your words and picture with me and WdC members.
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Review of Summer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for explaining the picture and the steps you took to create it. I did not know she was holding a dragon because it blend in well. I have limited vision; blind in one eye and legally blind in the other. The colors work well together and do not take over in one aspect oner others. They are to me relaxing.

Thank you for writing about your art work and sharing it with WdC members.
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the poetry lesson. Because you wrote this poem showing the development of a tsunami I learned about this poetry type. I also was able to see the tsunami as is was born, grew, and became mature.

Thank you for writing and sharing your tsunami word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you. Many people have no idea how our representatives are elected, how they vote, and many have too much kool-aid in their system, or have been brainwashed. We need to watch for tinkering and dishonesty. You made a simple explanation of how things work stated in an inviting way for readers to learn about this and understand the what, why, when and how of our electoral process. I hope people wakeup and see what is happening and understand how they can make changes.

Thank you for sharing this information with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moonrise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could hear the howling of the wolves as I read your poem. The lake mirror, the Goddess, and wilderness scene is vivid through your word art.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the goddess and nature with me and WdC members.


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Review of Misty  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your story showed me characters who although have a nice conversation, are unknown. I wonder about their body language, facial expressions, and if they continue their acquaintance relationship?

The story about how Things went with the girls relationship after a few years?

Restructuring the sentences using pastéense for history and affection words showing noe as in the present would help the story move smoother and be more realistic. For example: she grabbed a lighter and remembers the first time a lighter was in her hand. It was smooth, comfortable, and she slid her thumb toward the lever as her nerves tingled with anticipation. Her mouth salivated and formed an 0 shape as the cigarette slipped between her lips.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The voice could have been for safety or evil but I'm glad it turned out to be a test. I have had promptings from the Holy Ghost like a feeling, voice in my head, or a combination that saved me from trouble. I can imagine the fear of the unknown rippling through the character. The character and story are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a voice with me and WdC members.


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Review of Blazes in the Sky  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome dedication to the unborn children because of the brightness of he burning candle which shows the brightness of the children with God.

When I read about her realizing about his flame not dying it seemed to be like going over a bump. For me it would read more smoothly and be more enjoyable if you took out the word [had]

Thank you for writing this wonderful poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of RAINDROP PRELUDE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your carefully placed and chosen words I could see a pianist tickling the keys, first moving to the left. Deep into the lower tones of the strings and then moving to the right. Tickling the notes of the higher strings. The lower strings a bit out of tune and the higher strings in tune and singing a cheerful sone because the heart is full of joy and gladness.

Years ago I tuned and repaired pianos. I can relate to the ups and down of the keyboard.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of True to his Word  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! The rage hit me like a wave from the ocean. I could see the scene which showed emotions of rage and disappointment from dad toward the son who did continue playing music. I get it. Music is in the blood. It stays for life as long as life on earth exists. I could see the trepidation of everyone else too. I can believe a story about someone who loves something and is forbidden to enjoy it.

Thank you for sharing your emotional word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of TIME  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see through your words time passing as things are changing and changing as time is passing. You're right, time waits for no one and still it allows us to change and grow. Your words guided me through your story creating no distractions.

Thank you for writing about time and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the joy of the adventures, the sadness of illness, and the deeper sadness of your loss. I've been there done that many times and know it doesn't get easier. I could also relate this to human to human relationship because animals are family members and because often we have similar friendships. I believe animals and people especially loved pets are many for each other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your special friend with me and WdC members.


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