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Review of Rapunzle  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This can be an exciting story and a sad story depending on the point of view. The mother sad and the boy and girl elated and entering a new adventure.

The characters, scene, and actions are believable. I can see this story like watching a movie in my head. The emotions are easy to feel as I read the words. I could also imagine them having hope for the future and the mother although sad and disappointed having hope that her daughter would be ok and return home.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about eloping with me and WdC members.


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Review of Telling Time  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The first idea that came to me as I read your poem was by throwing the clock away you were unable to watch the clock. Without the clock you could not watch time moving. Without the clock time stood still. The other thought I had was about things in life that were reversed mentally and spoken that were not welcome. The thoughts that escaped through fast moving lips seemed to be those in particular that were supposed to be kept secret. I felt emotions of regret, dismay, and self dislike because of the run away memories, but I also hoped that in time things would be better.

Thank you for writing your poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Nymph Rhapsody  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm and the sound of the words you used to create this poem. I felt relaxed as your words spoke to me and showed my your vision. I could hear the sounds and song as I listened to your words in my hear. It felt as if I was moving along with your words completely in tune with the environment. The peacefulness became stirred as I read your last words and sadness slipped in amount the suddenly quiet nature as the song and danced stopped.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about nature a human encroachment with me and WdC members.


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Review of Greed  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Someone truly loves and is willing to not judge. Someone is greedy, or is it something else. I wonder what is fueling both people to do or not do things. It seems there is something underneath their actions or inactions. I could feel the tug of war with in the word art intros story poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your allian story is believable. I felt as if I was in the story and knew the characters. The scene made sense and I could believe the interaction of everyone. Now that I've read your story I'm parched. May I have a drink and visit with everyone in the next adventure?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your allian story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You put hopeful in a highlighted and important perspective through your word art. Your words show that no matter what comes you focus on being hopeful for good rather than bad or light rather than darkness. I imagined the light pushing the dark away or covering the dark with light. Your message is easy to understand.

Thank you for writing about being hopeful and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem, several thoughts came to my mind. I thought about having freewill and making choices. My mind visualized someone barely hanging on to life. My hope for them is that they realize life is precious. In god I could see through your words hope and spiritual upliftings. The battle of despair and victory over it and other negative feelings.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I visualized each scene. The emotions were evident and I could imagine and feel them as you described each character and how they reacted to the events. I was in your story completely and could interact with the scene and characters as I stood by and watched them show their emotions and body language. I felt as if I had been introduced to them and experienced their lifestyles with them.

Your story is easy to read and understand. It seemed as if I were watching a movie that I soon became a part of. I enjoyed the adventure and began routing for the dragons safety along with the safety of the people.

When I came to the end of your story I was completely satisfied with the events, characters, and scenes. I'm glad no one was hurt or killed. I believe the moral of this story is there are times when misunderstanding or fear can be the enemy of reason and taking the time to understand. Fighting or destroying what is not understood can sometimes be avoided.

Thank you for writing this very nice and action and emotional packed story.


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Review of Just out of reach  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your description of the man and scene because you used sight, sound, emotions, and touch to tell the reader your story. The end affirms that this creature will not allow anyone to view it which is reassuring as the story goes and yet sad. The struggle of this person to accomplish the task is realistically revealed so the reader can experience the story.

Thank you for writing about the man and elusive creature and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Vernal Equinox  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem the bridge collapse entered my mind. It felt as if your situation was collapsing and you decided to make a sudden and serious change from falling to rising up and entering the world of the living again. Your words carried me smoothly from the beginning to the end of your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not certain about how your poem makes me feel because of learning about the FSK bridge collapse. The best I can do is write that the sadness of this event is wrapped and twisted into the sadness of your word art. Sadness therefore has been amplified. I struggle to separate this review from the bridge collapse and yet they seem to want to be together. I can relate this to words in your poem and the words those people would have spoken had this not happened. In your poem, your words are silenced and those of the bridge collapse were silenced.

I could see as I read your poem the ropes and chains thrown around your words silencing them. Misunderstanding choaking your words. We have choices. Depending on our decisions I/you could be quiet or shout/roar. Writing this poem I believe is a shout and roar for people to be kind to each other and work to understand each other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sanctuary  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You certainly have found a very peaceful place according to your words. I could feel peacefulness as I read your comforting words. The mind is vast and it seems you have much peace and comfort within.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your sanctuary.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I visualized the scenes through your inviting words as I read your wonderful ideas. I agree with your concepts and hope for the future of families and Christmas. In scripture and, this is not a quote, "it is more blessed to give than to receive". I could feel your enthusiasm about the importance of celebrating Christmas for the right reasons rather than because of someone in a red suit or getting something, good going. I hope readers feel this also.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your wonderful concepts about celebrating Christmas word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Lost Kitten  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the big strong hands taking care of the kitten. In my imagination the collar was a soft beautiful collar that the kitten enjoyed wearing. I believe you wrote this story to comfort your child and share a peaceful idea about being in great and wonderful hands when the time came to leave the earth. I could feel loss at first that changed into hope and a bright future for the kitten.

Thank you for writing this story about the kitten and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the longing to do whatever it is that is calling. I can see you through your words waiting for this and that to be finished so you can write. I also can see you moving writing to the top of the list.

I have a dilemma slowing down my writing efforts. for this reason, I get it and hope you can find a path to writing as much as you desire.

I can feel the pull as the magnetism of writing draws you close but not close enough at the moment.

Have you considered dictating what you want to write using software that is already on the computer or something else available?

I can see and feel writing competing with other activities that might not be as important as originally thought. I don't watch TV but I do watch a movie occasionally. I know I could spend that movie time writing. I also know sometimes it is beneficial to watch a movie for example.

I hope you can resolve the tug-of-war challenge between writing and other activities.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about writing challenges with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An invincible skull that invades the enemy's fragile skulls and takes away their abilities to live or function is something scary to contemplate because if humans go far enough this if not soon will be in the distant future. It reminds me of robots that are capable of withstanding attacks and that try to overtake humans and make them slaves. I could imagine these events. They are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your futuristic word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words rhymed nicely and smoothly took me on an interesting journey from beginning to end. It seems a matter of a persons point of view doesn't it? I enjoyed the humor and fun in this tale and could see in my imagination someone sitting comfortable on their substantial padding. My view of the events are clear and colorful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your rhythmic story in poetry form with me and WdC members.


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Review of Space dream  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the part about Omar working hard to achieve his dream and successfully having his dream come true. Through your words I got to know Omar, His ambitions, and what he did in life. I could visualize him with a huge smily as he blasted into space.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Omar with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for writing this emotional piece and for sharing with me the love you two had for each other. I know both of you now. I'm glad you had each other. God has taken care of me all of my life. I trust Him. I know what it to lose a loved one because I lost many family members. Know that even when times are tough and you feel abandoned and lonely God is with you in your time of need. I hope you are ok and things are better for you.

Thank you for writing about your special relationship and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Empty Nest  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your ending made me laugh. I appreciate the humor and laughter, thank you very much. The beginning of your story seemed sad as if a child died, but it brightened in the end which was a relief. I could imagine the scene with the mother struggling to think of her sons room as just a room or keep it as a tribute to him. When I read the ending I could see him in his room packed full of dirty laundry, "Mom, I'm home."

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pests  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter when you wrote about blowing up the house because of a mouse. I definitely dislike the chemicals humans use for the many reasons we have. What some people consider pests others see as beneficial. You pose good questions. The word flow is smooth and carries the reader vividly from beginning to the ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the chemicals and other stuff humans use for pest control with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could envision two people deeply in love and also an artist deeply in love with their chosen art form. Smoothly I was taken from beginning to ending of your poem. You kept me interested in reading as my imagination showed the details of your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about an artist with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pretender  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the shuddering as morals slip slide downward. You ask questions that provoke deep thinking and soul searching which I too ponder. You all offer hope for better decisions and positive changes. Most of all your words evoked the thought about {when good men do nothing evil flourishes]--not a quote.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you thought provoking poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Free as a bird  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched as you flew to the heavens and met with Jesus. I could feel the happiness as you went home to be in heaven. I know of the hope through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being home in heaven with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your worlds remind me of a poetic story of victory sweet yet with some sourness because although there was victory for Calus, it seems there is potential for defeat. I was able to follow the events and see in my mind the characters actions. The plot kept me interested in the story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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