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Review of Old Route 33  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You made my nerves tingle with this tail of haunting of rout 33. I could see the characters in action especially vivid was Billy and his reactions to the haunting dreams and his experience as traveled through the wooded area of rout 33. It seemed real and was spooky.

Thank you for writing this story which reminded me of the twilight Zone and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your characters are believable and realistic but you know, I know them so I might be a bit oh, what's the word...we;; anyway I could imagine the action, the emotions, and feel you wrote a story of humdrum to happy excitement and joy. I certainly relate to the positive attitude about WdC and living a happy life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you joy and happiness with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You introduced me to some unique and interesting characters. I could follow their exploits through your words. Your story idea has great potential and kept me reading. I suggest as you let your imagination free to craft this story that you ask questions such as who did what, when, where, why and how. Asking questions helps you get ro know your characters so you can bring them to vivid life for the readers.It also helps you know more about your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A safe house inviting and wonderful a picture of perhaps a church image in my mind as I read your word art. Another image in my mind a house warm or cool depending on the season safe and inviting. Hands reaching with wide stretched arms ready to hug and protect. Feeling at peace and enjoying my journey as the words guided me on my journey.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Shackled  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow this is a very dark yet compelling piece. Your words compelled me to keep reading. It was as if I were in this situation and could not escape. The rhythm kept me moving from word to word as I discovered the evil and sinister menace driving the character to hateful and horrible deeds.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members about the dark deeds and entrapment of living a horrible existence.


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Review of The Locked  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The plot idea could become a good story because you can add emotions, actions, and other elements. Punctuation also would make reading your word art easier and more enjoyable.

How do these people feel about being locked in? Are they angry, afraid, or have other reactions. Do they work well together? What body language are they using? Do they grit their teeth for example or make fists? What is the town, place where they are locked up like? Is it cold, hot, or other temperature and does this affect the out come of the story?

When writing and capturing the essence of stories it is a good idea to ask questions. Getting to know your characters through asking questions is helpful because the more you know your characters, the better you can show their lives and interactions in your story.

Please let me know about any questions you may have. I hope you craft a fantastic story with scenes, characters, and other elements that read like watching a movie. You have a wonderful beginning. Keep going and let the story and characters do what they want; go with the flow. Do can do this!

Thank you for writing and for sharing your plot idea with me and WdC members.
Write On! *ThumbsUpGreen*


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Review of Good Again  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see in my imagination Frankie in bed destrozar and afraid. I also could see his parents concerned about his welfare doing their best to help him through this challenging time for all of them. Your words smoothly led me through the story with no distractions. I enjoyed reading and and especially liked the ending because the day turned from bleak to sun sining and the pancakes a wonderful meal.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Frankie with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You dove deep when you wrote this poem. I believe there is a reason for everything that we might or might not know. Understanding may or may not reveal its self. My belief in God is upon a string foundation. These are the thoughts which came to me as I read your word art.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about looking for balance with me and WdC members.


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Review of Falling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with emotions and adrenalin rush taking me from event to event in this falling story. I fell for each vividly descriptive word and followed the descent line by line as I floated toward the earth with no hope of salvation until almost the last second of breath. The emotions flooded every second. I could see the falling character and also see the earth becoming bigger and bigger until I could almost touch it. The relief of the parachute opening was over whelming which I felt as the story ended.

Thank you for writing and for one exciting adventure through your word and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A surprise gift can be nice, but when the sender is not known sometimes it can be something ominous. The interactions between the characters are realistic and are star trek authentic. In a way rgwt night have proceeded with a little more caution, but it's a TV show or imagination of the writer so it is ok and works well.


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Review of Nearer everyday  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I get from this writing that mankind often is complacent. We can do nothing as individuals but as a group we can make positive changes. I believe mankind has no business messing around with what God made and tying to take credit because ultimately mankind ruins a good thing. Words are powerful.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Feathers  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could feel the desire to offer hope and uplift the spirit. even through you stayed strong I could sense the tears and sadness of watching this process of dying. at the loss must have been crushing. I hope you are doing well and have joy in the blessings of each day.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your journey with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You showed me your struggles, you let me in, I'm glad I read this poem, it showed your win. I could imagine the scenes and see you struggling with life. I felt your despair and your dismay as you worked your way through each day. I'm glad you're here and shared something special so we can get to know each other. I can relate from a physical pain point of view.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your challenges and triumphs with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the rage as it rippled through out the land and caught to destroy those who killed his daughter. The sadness also was evident along with the ravarge heart now empty and forlorned. In my minds eye I could see the events. You showed the emotions and actions of this story well.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art which was like watching a movie with me and WdC members.


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Review of Tome at Last  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine you writing, reading rejection slips, and working in the printing shop. Your words have a nice rhythm to them which guided me along each stanza through your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate because of the medical issues I've experienced. Your words showed me how you had ups and downs as you recovered. These words worked well together and I was able to read your poem with no distractions.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You lied...Shame, shame on the liar. So sad that someone would do this. I have to admit the part about boiling water and using a book was funny. I could imagine the scenes well. Reading and understanding the story was enjoyably easy.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about lies with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, you gave me food for thought. Being cautious about situations and not rejecting nor jumping into them without knowing as much as possible is my understanding of what your word is about.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Red  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words exuded loneliness. I could feel the emptiness, despair, and being alone as if in solitary confinement. The tug of war in conversation between being alone and having mental words with yourself or imaginary someone ahows me a prson hunched in a corned fighting with their imagination like a boxing match.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, it seems you certainly have a very dear friend. I could feel the appreciation for this special friendship as I read your poetic words. The wonderful positive changes in your life are evident. Your words gently guided me through your fantastic story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your wonderful friend with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Words of wisdom were written in an uplifting and happy rhythm that carried me along each line easily. I liked your reference to prayer and controlling fear because we are told never to fear/fear not many, many times in scripture.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your words of wisdom with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote simple statements yet they are complex and have much strength. I appreciate your wisdom and effort in constructing this valuable word art.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art showing when weakness seems to be dominant and yet strength is actually the reality.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
These words tell a story of love everlasting throughout all time. The love seems endless. It seems expansive. It seems to have no end. Did you have a particular score in mind when you wrote these words?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art song with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that to blindly respond to situations it is better to seek understanding. Your poem has much good advice. It has a smooth guiding way giving me direction that I appreciate.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of bbb  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I'm not sure what this is about. Your list has many items that for me do not give me any idea about its purpose. It could be a reminder list, or thinking about something you intend to use in a story. It could be something for a contest. Perhaps adding genre information instead of [other] might help. A brief explanation would be helpful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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