How I LOVE this! I love everything about it. I love your beautiful word pictures that absolutely TAKE me there.
I love the “tone” of the poem…the feel of it: “hypnotic rhythm,” “somewhere above the earth,” “away from the boundaries,” ”serenity,” “I breathe in,” “the absence of time.”
And most of all I love, “Content to remain in this moment and leave all tomorrows behind.” This statement is the creed of my life!
The long and short lines didn’t affect me at all…they certainly didn’t distract.
THANK you for this, Pat.