\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED ITEMS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bronxdutchman/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/6
Review Requests: OFF
1,013 Public Reviews Given
1,162 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 2 3 4 5 -6- 7 8 9 10 11 ... Next
126
126
Review of Dream Assignment  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting question! I've had some wierd dreams before, but that first one was way wierd! God bless and keep writing!
127
127
Rated: E | (5.0)
use to have a dachshund. Best dog I ever had! God bless and keep writing!
128
128
Rated: E | (5.0)
Say thank-you of course! God bless and keep writing!
129
129
Review of Fat for money  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Good question. My health is more important! God bless and keep writing!
130
130
Review of An Embedded Poll?  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Maybe too much- if that is possible! God bless and keep writing!
131
131
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Excellent poem- just needs to be formatted as a poem. structure. stanzas. line set-up. God bless and keep writing!
132
132
Rated: E | (5.0)
I use to own a cat that thought he was a dog! Cool cat! God bless and keep writing!
133
133
Rated: E | (5.0)
My wife likes this angel guy, so i picked him! God bless and keep writing!
134
134
Rated: E | (5.0)
Weekly- but I will try to change I think! God bless and keep writing!
135
135
Rated: E | (5.0)
Looks like I tied it! Rain is best- soothing- God bless and keep writing!
136
136
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I guess we will find out! God bless and keep writing!
137
137
Review of Twilight  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Haven't read the book! God bless and keep writing!
138
138
Rated: E | (5.0)
awards- ribbons. To hear someone say, "This is good!" God bless and keep writing!
139
139
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'd call 911 and hide- with a gun! God bless and keep writing!
140
140
Rated: E | (5.0)
interesting, to say the least! God bless and keep writing!
141
141
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem with a good rhyme scheme- a couple of good slant rhymes as well- good rhythm. God bless and keep writing!
142
142
Review of Guardian  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Inspirational and poignant write! Great poem. God bless and keep writing!
143
143
Review of The Lorelei  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful free verse- Loved the last Stanza, that was my favorite- Powerful and filled with passion. The very last line, to me, speaks of addiction- "A day of mindless repetition, awaiting her return." I can equate this to my substance abuse. A day of mindless repetition untill I could "use" again- this was my only thought. Great Job! Bravo! Sorry it took me so long to get to this wonderful write- been pretty busy. God bless you- and keep writing!
144
144
Review of Forever Yours  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I think you write very well- what takes away from this poem to me are the cliches', "Jump in front of a bullet for you" and "be there for you twenty four seven" These are old and used. You are a good writer and can find your own words- you do not have to use these cliches'. This is just my opinion. Keep writing and God Bless!
145
145
Review of The Inspired One  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a good poem- what threw me a little is the rhyme scheme- Stanza one has a little slant rhyme in it that works good, but all of a sudden stanza three seems to have a rhyme scheme that the rest of the poem does not have- A,B,A,B,0,C,0,C- the content is wonderful and wonderfully written- I just think it would flow better one way or the other- no rhyme or complete rhyme scheme- I still think this is a 4.5 poem. This is just my humble opinion. You have a wonderful muse- keep writing and god Bless!
146
146
Rated: E | (5.0)
"A rose among a bed of thorns." is almost cliche, but you made it work- I have no suggestions for improvment. Bravo! God bless and keep writing!
147
147
Rated: E | (5.0)
Again- entertaining and fun- God Bless and keep writing!
148
148
Review of Puppets  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting poem- thought pervoking! Good Job! Seperate the words "each" and "other" from the end of line thirteen. God bless and keep writing!
149
149
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very discriptive poem- nice rhyme scheme- with good rhythm. I have no suggestions for improvement. Bravo! God bless and keep writing!
150
150
Review of It's A Life  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice little poem- nice to see apoem about mans best friend every now and than- Good job- God bless and keep writing!
266 Reviews • *Magnify*
Page of 11 • 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/bronxdutchman/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/6