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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sum1,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I think you did a good job in utilizing the prompt. I have found it difficult to write from the perspective of the opposite sex! Your verses flow smoothly, and the rhyme scheme is good.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Legerdemain,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I wholeheartedly agree! Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Fluffy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Kittiara,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A cute story!!! I can hear one of my grandson's explaining his brother's disappearance now! Good job with the dialogue only requirement.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear writerchuck,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: There are many truths within your free-verse poem. Each of us as writers strive to achieve expressions of "art". Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!
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Review of Last Gift  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Amy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: A sad love story! Your character development was good, as was your imagery. The poignant tale touched my heart.

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of Different Power  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Bob,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Guess your piece points out that opposites do attract! This free-verse poem about friends that are so very different stresses that anything is possible if you use your talents to their optimum potential.

Suggestions: I noticed several spelling errors/typos.....I am so guilty of this myself when I am rushing to post a piece. *Smile* Let me say, that these are suggestions, only. I am not an editor nor a professional at reviewing. In the second stanza, line 1, suffisticated should be sophisticated; same stanza, line 3 usefull should be useful; in stanza 4, line 3 usefull should be useful; and in stanza 7, line 4, insead should be instead. Finally, in stanzas 9 & 10 eachother should be each other. Hope this helps!

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of One By One  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Jess,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Flow is smooth in this free-verse piece. Good word choice.

Suggestions: None

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear ConfusionFusion,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Thank you for taking me on an insightful trip! It would be quite a shock to someone to have lucid moments within the sea of insanity and wonder who, what, when, and where they were. Nice job!

Suggestions: None

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of A Day in the Life  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Acendence:

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Nice period short tale. Good character development. Sad piece.

Suggestions: None.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please continue to "write on"!

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Review of You're Crazy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear July!,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good job! I have found that life can be a continuous contrast each day! Good flow, very smooth and very descriptive.

Suggestions: None noticed.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Deceived  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mairu,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Deceit can be painful. Emotionally charged piece.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Thaddeus,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery! Good rhyme scheme and flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of A Vile Visitor  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Tammy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A great description of a nightmare! Good imagery!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear hiryuu,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good story line. I think it might be a good piece to expand.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Silent Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Bwitchd3,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: It is always hardest to say goodbye to the things that we love! Your abcb style is good. The rhyme scheme and choice of words flows smoothly.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of mothers love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear dawson,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Such an heart-wrenching decision that no one, especially a mother should have to make! Your poem has a good fluid style and flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of mothers love  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear dawson,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: The choice that you write of is a heart wrenching one! However, your style is good and the piece has a good flow.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Every Time  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Critter,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse style with a nice flow. Your imagery is lovely.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of My gentle promise  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Chukwuezue Nnabuike,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A lovely tribute to your sister! Your free-verse style flows at a good pace. Very emotional!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear khaki,

I have just finished reading your third piece! This is another review for the First People's Group.

Overall Impression: It was a beautiful and peaceful poem. It gave the reader such a positive feeling reading the words. Great job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear khaki,

Nani, again, here with another review for the First People's Group. I am happy to be visiting your port, and am enjoying the time I spend reading your work. I really don't feel that I am qualified to review your work, though. I am not an accredited reviewer. I have no expertise in this area, as I am sure that you must if you are offering to review for others, but I do enjoy reading and visiting within the WDC community. So, here goes:

Overall Impression: I do love haiku! They are such wispy expressions that leave the reader with a fresh outlook. Yours are no disappointment! I thought they were lovely, and left me looking forward to reading more from you.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None that would improve your piece.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Paper World.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear khaki,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. First, I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I joined the site in June of this year. My experience here has been phenomenal! I have had such a positive one! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.


Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job! Concise with a great message.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None that would improve your piece.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Tea Kettle In Awe  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Daizy-Craizty,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: A cute piece! The flow is very good, as is the rhyme! Nice job!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of NYC  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Leger,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Very vivid description of the city! I like the way that you describe it without the fanfare and flowery words that usually accompany depictions of "the Big Apple".

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Trapped  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear SCflute,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good descriptive free-verse. It gives the reader a feeling of desperation that the writer must be feeling in his/her situation.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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