Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Thoughts of soldiers in war must be very confusing and sometimes desperate. I feel that you did a good job of conveying this.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Interesting style with good flow. I felt that your word choice told a good story in rhyme.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: It is difficult for me to review a piece that I am not sure that I understand. I wasn't sure if it was impressionistic from the view of one drowning in water, society or a drug-induced stupor. I apologize. I am afraid that my reviewing skills are not very sophisticated. It seems that the thoughts are disjointed. I am sure that this is for emphasis in the situation that your are conveying.
Suggestions: I think it may help to have some consistency in punctuation....maybe either not use any, or use it as it should be. But, please remember this is only a suggestion from a reader, and not from one who is an expert in the usage of punctuation, nor grammar.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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Overall Impression: Emotion-filled piece about the strong feelings the writer has for his/her lover. You convey the message of urgency to possess the very essence of the object of affection well.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: A good story of remorse from an accused's point of view. I think you have captured the feelings of someone who has learned from his/her mistakes. Sadly, this is not always the outcome.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed your Nonet! I thought you did an excellent job with the form, and your word choice was very good. And, you rhymed! Good job!!
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Love is all of this and more! Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Suggestions: I think your piece could benefit from an "in line" review. While I am not qualified to provide this service for you, there are others here at WDC who can do this for you.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Interesting and descriptive. Leaves the reader wanting more. Good traits to find in a short piece.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Lovely imagery and comparisons!
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Interesting piece. I couldn't help but wonder if it were true--it certainly was convincing. Good job! Suggestions:
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: A sad tale told in poetic form. Good word choice.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Good use of limerick form. Tells a nice story with good word choice.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Cute! Nice take on the "horror" theme. I am sure that you did well in Acme's challenge.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: Why do we feel the need to know "why"? Maybe one day in the future our questions will be answered. I am reminded as I read your piece of my three year old grand-daughter who always is asking "Why?" to everything that happens. We are not so different than she!
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: Nice story with a good ending and good character development. Relationships are sometimes difficult to nurture, but in the end, they are always worth the time invested.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: Heart-felt and emotional piece. Free-verse style has a good flow.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: Sounds like a good song to me! Good rhyme scheme and flow.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: A lovely piece filled with imagery. You are correct! The stars are beautiful and meaningful to many. Thank you for sharing.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: A lovely piece! Your imagery painted such a vivid picture that I felt as if I were standing there observing the things that the author was seeing. Good job!
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: Lovely imagery graces the lines of your poem. The rhyme scheme and flow is great. Word choice is excellent.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.
Overall Impression: A charming and eloquent tale! I loved your story that entwines characters of books of these great authors with their imagined conversation. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts.
Errors:I noticed no errors.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: A nice love story about lovers being separated only to be reunited at another time in their lives. Thank you for sharing!
Suggestions: None
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Good imagery in your piece. Stanzas 2 and 3 have definite rhyme scheme (abab), while Stanza 1 has a different flow.
Suggestions: None
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: A sad free-verse piece reflecting the hurt that you felt during this time in your life. It is always very hard to lose someone that you love.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.
Overall Impression: Dark and disturbing "take" on "Hush, Little Baby", but rhyme scheme is good and the piece does flow smoothly. It would nicely fit into the horror/gothic genre.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.
I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!
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