Great job covering a topic some people might have questions about. This is how I sometimes organize my things as well. It does make it a lot easier. I like the example you gave. It makes a lot of sense as well. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep up the good work!
Comments: This is a sad story in a way. I felt heartbroken for the dying lady. This writer does have a strange way to write a story. It's not a common thing to do. I think the pacing is good and the scene is accurate.
Suggestions: How's it going?", I said... Erase the ,
"Room 9", said the doctor. Should be "Room 9,"
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar errors found.
Overall Opinion: Good job on this story. I would be sad to see someone die. Yet this writer finds inspiration. Keep up the good work!
Comments: It begins intense. The emotions shows well through the description. I think it is balanced. Then it moves forward to the clubbing incident and the escape to the hotel. The danger is shown as the scene escalated. The scenes comes together smoothly along with the transition from one chapter to the next.
What I like: Seto's speech in front of the audience.
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar error found.
What I don't like: The club scene where it started to get nasty.
Overall Opinion: Great job with the story so far. It seems like Joan's night with Seto went well. Unfortunately later on ran into a big problem. No suggestions at this time for improvement. I think the emotions is conveyed well through the scene. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great job making it to the milestone of 1,000 reviews. That achievement I accomplished yesterday myself. We both have something to brag about. There are people out there that gives us wonderful reviews. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
I sometimes feel like not talking myself. I think the attitude is great in this poem. I don't want to talk. It is very clear and concise. The point in the message is obvious. I wonder why We would only be sad. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
It seems like this is a script. It begins with Casino passed out and the doctor checking on him. Then it continued on with the scene changing. Normally I don't review scripts but this seemed to read well with the events in place. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up with the good work!
From age 1 to age 95 we go through a lot of things. Good job with this poem. It's interesting to see how things change the older we grow. Looks like you chose living it up, but going older as you go down. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Good poem. It describes a relationship that is separated by distance yet have a few brief moments together with each other. The speaker has moments of enjoyment with her. The memories are great. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great poem. Butterflies can have very colorful wings. The description of the butterfly going from flower to flower and drinking nectar is great. The process does pollinate the flowers along the way. I love the descriptions it give. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Your poem shows expectations about the qualities of a man. A man you can count on because he is true to his words and have met high standards. It does answer the question very well. I see no spelling or grammar errors. Good job and keep up the good work!
This looks like a great area to help with the editing process. I see a variety of assignments available to follow. It might take me more than a month to complete all of the assignments in reality. My books are fairly long to keep track of all the points. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Comments: Great description of a battle scene going on with a warrior fighting by your side.
Spelling/Grammar:
and your sense of direction my seem lost. I think my should be may.
Overall Opinion: Good job with this poem. Only one mistake seen but rest looks good. The description of a war happening with one warrior standing strong against everyone. Keep up the good work!
It begins with Joan going out on her fifth date. The setting seems pretty real and believable. Good entrance to the story. I noticed the perspective switched to Seto in Chapter 2. It shows his arrogance with his interaction to others. I wouldn't have guessed what kind of deal would be made. The dress hunting seemed to be a good part of the story. The flow from one chapter to the next worked out very well with the events leading up from when the deal was made. Polyamory is revealed quite well through the chapters.
Spelling/Grammar:
Chapter 3: Roland Remained stoic. “Laura Aurelio, wasRoland Remained stoic. “Laura Aurelio, was... Should be remained instead of Remained
Chapter 4: "See? That's the attitude you need to keep a cool head in Seto's bed. Should have " after bed.
Overall Opinion: Good beginning and keeping the events in chronological order. I think the events matched up very well, flowing smoothly at a good pace. It's coming across pretty well for me. Good job and keep up the good work!
Content: Good beginning, where the boy Georgie looked for something to spend his quarter on and just happened to run across a mysterious machine. Then, in the last, he was able to fly on the back of the dragon.
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar errors found.
Overall Opinion: Great story, I enjoyed reading this. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great poem going with a story about the Alpha Lights landing on Earth. The Alpha Lights really has had a hard time with the people after they made their landing. I wouldn't have guessed that yogurt would be a break through. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The details are vivid in this poem. It shows the emotions at work as the break up happened. It is of a sad ending where he broke up and then found another girl to the speaker. Yet the speaker has the hope of finding another. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job with this poem and keep up the good work!
Good quiz. I had fun taking it. First attempt gave me a little over 50%, not bad at all for my first try. I did not see any errors made. Overall it is accurate and to the right answer as far as I know. Thank you for making this little quiz. Keep up the good work!
Comments: This poem feels like I am there, describing the moment of when it rains.
Content: A woman standing around waiting for the rain to come down. This poem is unique and interesting. It catches my attention. Starts out with before the rain comes and ends with after the rain comes.
Spelling/Grammar: No spelling or grammar errors found.
Overall Opinion: Great job writing this poem. I think the details are vivid. Keep up the great work!
The land of make believe sounds like a wonderful place to be. The adventures sounds like something anyone could dream about. This is a well thought out poem. Great job with the description and details. It paints a vivid picture.
No grammar or spelling errors found.
I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
This is an awesome group that will review anything that comes around and so many participants too! Hmm I am not very active in terms of reviewing right now but will join when I can. This is very neat and organized- with a set date for reviewing and other activities shown. Keep up the good work! :-d
This is a great poll and would be very helpful if everyone takes it~ Those are good brands, or were, to pick. I heard Chrysler is going downhill though. Honda is my #1 choice~ I don't think I could have worded that question any better than you did there. Keep up the excellent work!
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This is an awesome group that will review anything that comes around and so many participants too! Hmm I am not very active in terms of reviewing right now but will join when I can. This is very neat and organized- with a set date for reviewing and other activities shown. Keep up the good work! :-d