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497 Public Reviews Given
1,201 Total Reviews Given
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I look for how well the story or poem flows and if there are things out of place. I also check for grammar and spelling errors.
Favorite Genres
Sci-fi, Fantasy, Speculative Fiction
I will not review...
Anything above GC.
Public Reviews
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Review of The note  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The perspective is unique and draws the reader in. I know using I and you language can be jarring together, but this is meant for a certain someone who died and is missed and loved very much. So the you sentences is appropriate. There is much going on with the confessions being made and a promise to visit. Although every day might not be realistic, the idea is achieved to go and visit. Great details and apology. Things that happened in the past can't be changed but the future changes. One right step to move forward is with a visit.

No spelling or grammar errors found. The genre is perfect.

Good work on this flash fiction and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good article about Al. Al raises questions about the future- like will authors and writers be replaced by Al writings with the big companies? I doubt that. It takes great writing and even then not all great writing is noticed. There are benefits for some companies to use them. I wouldn't encourage it for school though. It would feel like cheating that way. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm reviewing for "Creature Features.

Great work! Though it fits the prompt it lacks creature characteristics for the contest. The beginning of school is a tough thing to face and the speaker is afraid of being invisible to the teachers. The feelings are genuine and concerned. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent poem and what a unique way to introduce the watch. That place sounds great to go to and meet all of those creatures too. It looks like the form is followed. It's a happy discovery right before school. I imagine they would want to do it again. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!


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Review of You Never Know...  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Good mystery with the beginning of school right around the corner. The characters is believable with only focused on Aliz. She wasn't sure if she would like the school until she met Marishka. Both of them were vampires. Great hints of features they had along the way! Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great details and sounds like you experienced this. It must've been hard be at your first boot camp. I don't intend to join. The excitement could be felt and dimish quickly. There is a solid plot through out it all. Just like running out of gas. The pressure builds up. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
No spelling or grammar errors found.

The poem is fit for someone who had a loved one and then one day lost their loved one. There is hope in the end that the speaker would meet their loved one again. It is short and simple. The details are just right. The poem works great and flows smoothly. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of A Dog's Christmas  
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great work with the details and using the familiar poem Twas the Night Before Christmas. Interesting story about the tiny intruder- a mouse. The dogs sure had an adventure and RIP goes to those ornaments. The poem fits the prompt nicely. I don't think it has to rhyme. Only that the words flow smoothly when read out loud. I love this style. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Journal/Blog  
Rated: E | (5.0)
So sad that you had to give up Vinegar. I've never heard of that being an allergen but it sounds like you are allergic to it. Nice details and connection to the doctors. The symptoms are a side effect though. Definitely choose wisely what you eat. I love ketchup myself and I think there is some without vinegar. Read carefully but tuna and mackerel might be good options. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Plot Survey  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tough one. I think it is plausible. As far as I could tell the terms is used correctly and the protagonist will be in a tough situation. Security will be on high alert.

I do see a crime going on since I think the pump and dump is used without consent. There will be a conflict of interest for doing what would be better. The protagonist will have to lie to avoid being caught and the company may take notice eventually.

Well set up. Now it needs a beginning, middle, and end and you can start writing. The words are unfamiliar but I think I got the idea. No spelling or grammar errors found. Hope your plot is an inspiration.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
No spelling or grammar errors found.

The flow is smooth in free verse form. The poem starts with the question and then answers it nicely. I love the description of the answer it gives. All of these qualities define a good person. This will cheer your friend up.

I can't think of any suggestions. It looks like you covered everything. Well done.

Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poem about being a mixed race.

Looks like you grew up in Kazakh and learned many things there. You also learned things about Russia too and could show it. Two different cultures yet you have hope. That's the right attitude to have. The poem is free verse and in three sections. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Side tracked.  
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The main character is a good Samaritan despite being there to rob an apartment. Calling the police to help a lady in need in the middle of doing a crime. The other person had sense to avoid jail. Fits the prompt perfectly. I am curious about what happens next but that might go over the word limit. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Review of Thunderstorm  
In affiliation with Fantastical Review- Aider  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In just a few short words, this poem speaks a lot. The dragon and rider works hard through the thunderstorm to become the champ before going back to the dragon camp. It does also follow the Terzanelle pattern perfectly. The dragon camp must be filled with dragons and riders alike even if the poem didn't say but gave hints of the camp being alive. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I went and checked the contest and the prompt is followed perfectly.

The old man has a connection to this bush and it is introduced in the beginning to the memory in the ending. It kept me guessing as I read it and the colors and music were well played out. The bush turns out to be hiding a memorial too. Fitting for Memorial Day.

No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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for entry "~Daddy's Tree~
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Out of a twig a tree grew proud and strong. Looks healthy to me and a great picture too. The haiku tells the story behind the tree perfectly well. It is loved by the planter, in this case your father. I say it is something to be proud of. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of Vegan Boy  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story which introduces a man whose interest is in eating vegan food. To celebrate his birthday, vegan cake is a must. So came the recipe for vegan birthday chocolate cake. It looks pretty yummy. This grandson must be proud to be a vegan. It would be hard to feed a vegan. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem about a horse who is steadfast and loyal. Blanko must have been one happy horse looking forward to those walks along the forest road. I can imagine he'd be fast enough for a Derby too. Nicely written. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of dew drop in 2023  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The demon cat sounds very mean. Then again the daughter doesn't seem to have much luck either. The narration is very simple and to the point. The demon cat won the house for as long as it remained alive. Breaking the family up. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of What We Fight For  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a realistic war scene about Oleksander and the Russian. Oleksander struggles to survive as the Russian attacks. Until finally his comrade comes to the rescue. A photo of a little girl with a teddy bear was the only Intel. Great details involving the main character action and reaction to the Russian. The language fits right in. The place and scene fits well too. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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for entry "Spring Is
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for entering! I'm reviewing for I Write. It's all about the wonderful sounds of Spring and the joy that it shares. I love every line of it- it is well balanced. Spring is a time of celebration as well as time for new life in nature. I see the rhythm flow smoothly. The details are carefully laid. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Review of A Starhawk Tale  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tense moment going on here. Noth and his guards are capturing intruders and the intruders keep calling themselves Jesse Forster. Until the big one captures Noth and frees the others. I wonder what will happen next and if Noth will ever get free. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great details. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Marge seems to be having memory problems here. The day starts out her expecting somebody. Only cars were banned five years ago. Then breakfast came and they didn't have bacon. While coffee brewed she wanted to go to the beach and it was too dangerous. So nothing went her way that Tuesday. Great twists. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
What starts out as an insight to Cupid's minions working for Cupid to Paul and Julie working in the same environment. Rekker and Berg are the two minions who take up the case.

Things aren't going so well so they try the elevator trick. It turns out Julie is claustrophobic. They meet again later on and did a handshake. It ends with Rekker and Berg talking about the handshake. Will they succeed?

You have me hooked and left wondering what will happen next. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep on writing! Maybe inspiration will hit some day.


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Review of Craptastic  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First impression is the feeling of being sick. And it gets worse than that. Great use of the made up words. It fits the poem line quite well. Pretty much hanging around those leprechauns had terrible consequences. The drinking must have been out of control. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!


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