Great words to pick and thank you for the trinket too! It is definitely patriotic and welcoming to veterans too! I got flags for decorations and plan on using balloons and snacks as well as bubbles to celebrate. Fireworks not allowed. Chips to share with friends got a bit messed up. Definitely celebrate the freedoms USA offers and protection. All I really want to try is to do is the right thing and not the wrong thing.
Fits the prompt nicely and great work in describing how a home sweet home would be like too. I also love the reference to coffee too. Characters is believable and realistic. The flow is very smooth too. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great job and keep up the good work!
Awesome that the Medicine saw through the illusions of danger and defeated the danger- a creature in disguise. The way it was written was very entertaining and a great balance of details and surroundings too. The sparrow acted like a messenger. Enough time and warning to know what is going on. I love that too. Characters and animals were believable and realistic. No spelling and grammar errors found. Sorry for the delay in judging as I got sick and just now recovering from those sickness. Eyes not opening and other stuff like that which lasted for months. Anyway, thank you for entering and being patient!
This is definitely a cute poem with lots of humor in it! It is absolutely adorable. Favorite line if I can only choose one even though there was more than one: and roasted me with oregano. No spelling or grammar errors found. I know this was November round but got sick multiple times until I actually recovered from the series of sickness. Sorry for the delay! Thank you for entering and winner of the round will get the brand new January MB.
Absolutely perfect! Worked on my phone. Definitely describes a garden. This is a list of all the things I need to make a garden too. All of these events match up along with each other too. Not spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is very unique capturing a single moment in the form of waiting for a bus stop. When that moment passes then it dissappear like when the bus comes and takes you away. Great work. No spelling or grammar errors found. Characteristics is perfect. Structure is good. Good work and keep up the good work!
This is a nice, short piece capturing the essence of a smile. I love the words short and sweet. That matches nicely. The poem is consistent and accurate with smile. No grammar or spelling errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great details! The story captures generations that suffered, I imagine the Native Americans, and then the present era, the nation we are today. Voice is clear and smooth. Characters are believable and realistic. The pacing is good. Due to style, no spelling or grammar errors found. A couple of sentences felt like run on but maybe okay. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great details in few words! The paint of cooler weather by describing the sky and such is amazing! The trees and land comes to life in preparation for the weather. It refers to deciduous trees which loses their leaves in the fall. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Nice poll. It shows your dilemma in whether or not you can handle the job. If it is your dream work go for it. Nothing beats happiness. But if you're hurting a lot from health might want to consider retiring but looks like all is in favor of it. Hope you land a good job.
Great details going through the struggle of finding love and compassion with a soul mate and having the joy of life with him. Only a few people find joy in marriage. The rest ends in divorce. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great use of details! The stranger in an environment well known to him seeks a woman and her treasures. Then he moves onward, and the woman fades. Yet he seeks her out. Good showing. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
It's getting cheesy here! Good research. I can't think of a poem of cheese either. That poem fits nicely. The structure is well done. The form is used well. Pizza is my favorite. Only a few poems counter this saying, but I think the quote is true to a degree. Nice job handling the quote well. Voice is smooth and natural. Everything is consistent. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great descriptive words about the celebration! It took me a great pace to solve it. Not hard but not too easy either. I can solve quickly so don't pick on me to adjust. Excellent blend of long and short words. Every one of them is unique. No spelling or grammar errors found. It fits the activity. I enjoyed it. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great details showing a sense of longing to be with someone, just like a lady has. The longing to belong and be loved. Just like her. A craving the speaker feels they don't need, yet craves. This emotion is persistent throughout and flows smoothly and naturally. I love the way the words are used. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job! Keep up the good work!
Great details. It starts with the meaning of revolution. Then goes to the story about the leader's doing and what's being done about that. YaVont is a cruel leader who only supports the wealthy. Then they watch as the last of the resistance scatters. A revolution begins. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job, and keep up the good work.
Great use of details. Caspin is in the midst of a war zone of Conflicts, and with the Jeesims, they discover the harrowing truth about Airborne Weapons. It turns out the Jeesims had been making their own, too. Better than the Conflicts to destroy most. If not all. The time came, and they activated theirs just in time. On the screens, they watched the action unfold. Good emphasis is made that a war is going on without using the word 'war' too many times. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters are believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job, and keep up the good work.
Lovely details capturing the moments as they pass by. Good use of show. The speaker dwelves into their soul until they come across what they are looking for and the results is fascinating. Pacirhyme ng is great. Not too fast or too slow. No rhyme but that's okay. Works out great with this free verse. There is too many choices to pick out one favorite line. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Voice is natural and smooth. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great use of action and details showing the dire situation Mrs. Anderson was in. The questions didn't help either. Either way she was going to be convicted. She wasn't going to accept being charged guilty. Pacing is great. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Great use of details. Everything speaks of snow. From the weather being snowy to collecting the snow and bringing it inside its characteristics are implied. Cold and wet. No rhyme but that isn't necessary. Flows great as is. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!
Great use of details! Love can be binding in a positive way. It is fulfilling and completes the speaker. There is good in the way it works out. No rhyme, but that's okay. Pacing is good. I love all the lines, it is precise and to the point. It matches the prompt well. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the great work!
Great use of details. I enjoyed reading the details. She is unaware of what is going on far away and the transaction of POV needs to be distinguished somehow. Her POV being one section and the new section describing the city can be separated by an extra return. The forest could be a new section. You can dwelve into a little bit more detail and it would still work. The pacing is great. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. This work has great potential. Great job and keep up the great work!
Great details! The focus is this: when we reach the bottom we must turn the page. In real life and when we read. This is so true literally and figuratively. Time continues and we age. Voice is smooth and natural. Characteristics is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
That sounds exciting! Having a book published and going for book 2. I'm happy for you. This seems like something that would be found in a blog post, so I can say you are on a happy journey. I hope you have success. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work.
Simple and sweet! I agree the animations are very cool. This poem has few words yet creates great imagery. Purpose? To celebrate the animations created by SM. Seems like the guitarist is lonely and looking for their companion. Voice is smooth and natural. Characters is believable and realistic. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
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