This is a powerful subject. Diving down into a crisis isn't an easy thing to remember, but the path to coming out of it is a joy to experience. It's a scary thing to feel like God doesn't care about us anymore, that's not true but that could be what it seems like in a depression or something. Everything matters to Him. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
There is a lot of fanfiction I don't read. It could be one one of those reasons you listed as well. However, it is a whole new world from a familiar source. I agree that rules matter. Matching the spelling and grammar makes sense. Quality is out there. It ranges based on your taste. Those are valid reasons for reading or not reading fanfiction. Good job and keep up the good work!
The decision of writing something is difficult to grasp in this poem. There are a few things that come into mind. The poem fits the prompt nicely. I would say be careful with the syllables. I sometimes count 7 where it suggests 8 for example. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
And here comes a dragon. Bring it on! I love the attitude in this poem. No matter what is being thrown at you, you are a firm believer in Christ. Despite all the scary things out there you won't give in. In some ways you are braver than me even. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The poem is inspiring and motivational. Someone who would believe in God could use it on their wall for a keepsake and look upon it whenever they are feeling down. What a great message! No spelling or grammar errors found. Even in the midst of all your troubles and sorrows God is there for you. Good job and keep up with the good work!
This poem is making me think. Fear acts on impulse without thinking. It doesn't have any time to react because of what's happening. There are consequences and costs but it doesn't care what that will be. Well said. No spelling or grammar errors found. Free verse works great with this poem. Good job and keep up the good work!
Pain and frustration are the major feelings I felt as I read this poem. I love the vivid imagery used. There is just an empty hole that could only be filled by a child if that child were still alive. It is a sad and depressing poem, but there is always hope on the other side. Just let out these emotions. Good job and keep up the good work!
Linkin Park is a band on haitus but the first pick for Resurrection Jukebox. The history of Linkin Park is interesting and I hope they find another lead singer soon. Chances are I may have heard about their hit album or a song or two from them. Their song, Shadow of the Day, is highlighted and well covered. It is simple yet uses advanced technology. The description of it covers it well. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
Clues is important in all mysteries as they lead straight to the guilty one. Good job with capturing the word and meaning of clue in the poem. It does only take minutes in the movie or story while it could take hours in real life. And I may miss that clue completely as well. The learning is quite clear. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The shadow of our darkest secrets falls outwardly as well as inwardly. Pain and agony underlies the anger felt toward others whether or not they deserve it. Heartbreak is a factor by someone who got trusted. This captures domestic violence beautifully. The inward message of what it feels like to be abused and pretending it didn't exist outwardly. Fits the prompt nicely. No spelling or grammar errors found. Well done and keep up the good work!
It is so hard to choose from. I see writing contests is the overwhelming response and yes, sometimes I participate in that myself. I love the variety on here and will be able to help you out if you are in need of more opinions. Good luck with hosting a contest based on the results. I may join myself.
I think this poem is clever and easy to read. I found a discrepancy between syllables in poem and prompt but don't let that discourage you. I love how simple and expressive your poem is. Your love is there even when the other person makes mistakes or confuse you. I think that's how God is too. Good job and keep up the good work!
"you exasperate" This is 5 syllables instead of 6. I double counted. You can try "you do exasperate" or "you can exasperate" instead to make it 6 according to the prompt.
And now, for a well deserved review for the challenge. First of all, I'm going to say it's amazing and there are so many options available. It's hard to keep track of contests but you do it good here. The rules are quite simple and there the placing of participants and past contests is well thought out. It is easy to navigate. I'd say the set up is just right. The current contests going on top and past contests listed underneath participants.
Suggestion: "CURRENT CONTESTS" could be in a darker color so that it could stand out more.
I think this challenge is worth joining and giving a try. And could always ask for help on months where all the contests are closed or invalid. Good job and keep up the good work!
Feelings of loneliness and hurt could be imagined as I read this poem. Being abused really takes a toll in real life. There is help available to think of but the feelings of hurt and loneliness really interrupts the thought of getting help. No spelling or grammar issues found. It is a sad poem but someone out there would care. Good job and keep up with the good work.
The message on how important it is to pick the right friends is important. Be careful to choose your path wisely. The light will always be there even in the midst of darkness. There will always be hope with the right allies. There are no spelling or grammar errors. I think the description works really well. Good job and keep up the good work.
What a heart felt poem. The twist is a surprise to have the person be turned into a chair. They would feel bored trapped as a chair. The poem is consistent with no spelling or grammar errors. I think it's a cute poem. I like how the mother did find a perfect chair, but not when the child stepped over the line and turned into a chair. Good job and keep up the good work!
This is a good start to a longer story. Having magical cushions for heroes is a clever and unique idea. Three is a magical number. What if there is a boss to all those pain creatures? Same with the cranky creatures? Just an idea. I would love to have a magical seat cushion. I would pick the shy one. You have a great beginning. The ending leaves me with wanting to know what happens next. I feel it's short. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good work and keep on writing!
What a sad and lovely poem. The man lived his life and then found peace from death. The single book could represent him being poor and homeless. A sad life to live. That could be his treasure. There is rhyming at the end of each line. No spelling or grammar errors found. Great job and keep up the good work!
So came here just to rate the calendar. One rating is lonely. There is a solid mix of developing plot, characters, and setting. I like how it's organized with plot coming first then the characters giving tools to build a solid outline and world. Keep up the good job!
The question why flows through in the poem. Work does pile up every day. Something needs to be done. I think everyone has feelings that needs to be let out and writing is a good way to do that. This poem is captivating in asking questions and giving answers to why. No spelling or grammar error found. Keep up the good work!
I think this is a great way to motivate yourself and others to focus on being healthy. You can't do it alone, or else it's not that easy to do. Your goal is clear and easy to follow. Weight loss is a challenge for me because the scale goes up and down all the time. So far I lost 20 and need 100 to go. I may cheer you on as well as the others. Keep up the good work!
My first thought is of confusion when I first read "To my love you are evil" but then the further I read the more I understood why. This is a different approach to romance since it involves separation. The speaker still loves on despite being apart. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!
The pandemic continues and the speaker goes from getting a face shield to riding on an airplane to Varanasi. She becomes claustrophobia at security check and looks at The Scream on her phone on the ride to Varanasi. There is special significance with The Scream. Good work with the story. Keep on writing!
"...even the dreaded “c” word!
Today, it happened during..." Return after word!
Hello! I see this poem in the perspective of a soldier who fought for freedom of their country and how they feel. It sounds a little lonely but with pride too. I love the choice of words painting a picture. I will say the effort is worth it to think about what is stood for. No spelling or grammar errors found. Keep up the good work!
Great job with this poem. It captures insight on the progress of the painter as he/she paints a picture. This picture reflects his skills and messages he wants to give. It's accurate to the process of painting a picture as I've painted before. Keep up the good work!
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