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#4264566

Review of Adversity: The Perfume of Loveliness

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives already a good thought and wisdom that even when we are in a bad situation we can always reflect goodness on it.
And just like the given title, the scribbled body is more beautiful than the title, in which it stated some example of some good things that came from adversity.
The created rhyme and rhythm within the words is also natural and not forceful, I mean it goes naturally, when it read it loud. Well Done teacher!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have doubt on the word refuse-last line in the second stanza, it just made me pause a little while reading it, because the given rhyming is different form the others.
Maybe the pronouncing it on its ending in which mostly the other words ending pronounced is -eyn- and this is -fyus-.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4264563

Review of When Relationships Sink…

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Christopher Roy Denton

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I picked this piece of yours in the Newbies Contest of Sisco, because the given title is very intriguing and mostly I found that many have this problem nowadays.
The word sink is the charming and interesting word in the given title, it is like a ship that sink, I like that you link relations to ship that some kind of they sink, the punctuation mark ellipse gives and stimulate also the emotion of the title, it gives an impression of sinking.

The title just like the scribbled body of the piece is important, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part. Good job! because you hook me as your reader.

And when I begin to ponder the scribbled body, I find this as a lyrical poetry style, though I think you didn't intention it, because there are lines that are the same, but its good because it is like an echo while reading it. As I've said, I like that you link the topic to a ship that sink and use the imagery being in the bodies of water, like sea, ocean in portraying about relationship.
It emphasis and shows vividly as well as stimulate the emotions. Well Done!

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4264289

Review of Summer

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Choconut ~ House Targaryen

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my gift to you for being one of my fave this Month and of course
Happy Birth month Choco!

But, please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The word summer always fascinates me even if I already knew it, and I already read lots about the season, still its my favorite next to Autumn season, because it always creates a good imagery, maybe the expectancy that I may feel when seeing and reading items about summer. Vibrant, Energetic, full bloom, beach, starry night. Just beautiful.
And that is I reflect while reading the scribbled words in this piece of yours, few words in strong and vivid manner but compact of meanings.
Well that is the beauty of a haiku poetry, just like a quote, few words but meaning full and compact. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4263879

Review of My baby

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!wolfwonder

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of your in the Newbies Reviewing Section, I pick it because the given title always fascinates me, I have a little one which I always call it my baby everyday, and an old baby too.

Well, anything means on that word, it always gives a good impression and imagery, so everyone will going to like to read it this piece of yours.

A title of a piece is one that be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

And just like the given title, the body is more beautiful that talks about our love one, the scribbled words in the body is very encouraging to lift him up and inspired him. Words are easy to grasp which it means that this is for everybody. It just like you are talking naturally.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some doubt for you to consider, I marked them red and my suggestion is in green.

You are stronger then you know
You are stronger than you know

Angel know this
Angel already knew this =much stronger

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4263689

Review of The Monarchy

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Heleny

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The created title creates an impression of those times where rulers, kings and queens were still here, or in a fairy land. I definitely pick it in the Newbies Reviewing Section, because fairy land as well as kings and queens always creates a good and interesting topic to me, and finding this poem while seeing the scribbled words in the body that this is the world through the eyes of a child really creates an adventurous view to an reader.
The fist stanza gives me an impression of the child dream or admiring, when I go to the second stanza the topic or subject change in which it leads me into confusing though, it still talks about kings and queens and the point of view didn't change but
the created impression- change. Maybe the using of pronoun you on the first stanza and then it become we on the second stanza.

Every title of a piece, gives a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, My only doubt is the changing of the addressee of the first stanza and the second stanza.
I suggest you add Then so that this will mean that the second stanza is a continuing of the first stanza, without the conjunction then it gives an impression that the person in which addressing on the first stanza is different on the person in the second stanza.

high horse you sat upon.

Then, we scrambled up to the top..

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4262632

Review of What I am

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Purple is House Florent

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is beautiful and awesome my friend. You are already stated all the things about the qualities of a writer here. Every word creates a good imagery, this will always touch every readers heart because it defines here there being qualities being a writer. The poetry form is very challenging too, I already create using this form, my inspiration is my little one, and its so fun. I'm glad that I found and read this piece of yours. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4262378

Review of Among the Branches

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

HiJaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review as part of the WDC Kind hEart groups.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

Though, the given title is simple and every one can relate on it, but giving an impression and directing the reader about a location gives the reader to look and a curiosity to know more about what we can see through the branches, and my first impression is correct, this talks about one of the beautiful views of nature, the birds in the tree braches always creates a nice view and image.
I love how you scribbled those chosen words which creates a vivid imagery and follows properly and in order the chosen poetry form. few words always gives an impact and compact. I like also the picture. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE-

Hanging precarious

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4262373

Review of For I love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with Muse Masters Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Joy

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review as part of the WDC Kind hEart groups.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader.A good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hook on the given title of a piece.
I found this as emotional, the pain and agony is in here, looking the fragmenst of the crashed September 11 tragedy.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4262370

Review of Falling

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review as part of the WDC Kind hEart groups.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS AND IMPRESSION

The given title always creates a good impression and any reader can relate on it but it gives many meanings and full of thoughts, so when I begin to ponder the given body, as I read the first paragraph it glued me already using active adjectives that describe and show the move or the scene in the story. There are words that I as an ESL have to figure it correctly but by blending it with words that gives a vivid imagery it balance and the story can grasp by everybody. This is some kind of comedy but I also link this just like a prose. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I don't see any word that distract the flow of this story and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4261442

Review of Where Is God?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I drop by into your portfolio and I'm glad that I've seen new static items of yours, and found this beautiful piece which I assured it talks about our heavenly Father.
The title took me and reminds me in times when I we are struggling in our burden, that we just thought that our Father is absence and we didn't heard from Him.
But in the midst of our burden and trial, we knew in our hearts that He is there always, from the time that He breath us our life, He is there already, because the breath comes from Him, its a part of Him that shows and already stick in us.
This is a wonderful poem teacher, this reminds us God is in there especially in times of our needs on Him.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4261420

Review of The Dark Violet

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Edward Grey

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The created title gives an in depth meaning, my first impression is this can be a color, but when I try to ponder it, it gives a colorful imagery, and it sounds interesting.

A title of a piece is one of the great element to consider in writing a poetry, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of the item. First impression and expectation is created also on this part.

As I ponder the created words inside the body, it creates colorful imagery, which is more beautiful than the given title, because the poet already begin to sketch smoothly the imagery that the reader perceived in the given title. Words chosen gives an active blending with other words that were nicely crafted.
The beginning first line creates an impact that hook the reader to be glued and continue following the words within line.
I can say its beautiful, the rose flower always soften the heart of every one for its metaphorical means. You painted an awesome view in your own perspective using the idea of this one of the wonderful view of nature, though, I think its in dark or gothic but its lovely.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, just only the rhyming of the last line on the first stanza, it differs maybe the vocalization in pronouncing it, world. Try to read this lovely poem and you can see what I mean. This is just only my opinion, please ignore it if you don't like. Thank you.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4259725

Review of How Do You Like My Baby?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi JOHN

,

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review, as well as welcoming you here in the wonderful world of Writing Dot Com.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

I pick this from the mystery genre of WDC and chose to give a review as part of the mystery review raid of the Power Reviewers group,
because the given title is enticing to me, the word baby hook me because it creates a good imagery as well as a good impression. I'm a mother and already have a little one, and that maybe one of the thing that make me touch my heart.
Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.

THE BODY-

Though, the given body is have short in length but you showed or narrate the story in a vividly manner, I didn't grasp some words maybe for being an ESL, but it still understandable because you blend words that are easy to understand so its balance. You only have three characters but you introduce them in a good manner, by using active verb that is fit. The flow of the story is good and smooth, even though there are few of dialogue. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4259108

Review of All That I See

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Purple is House Florent

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple, I can connect this as a title in a song, or in other words it gives me an impression to be in a lyrical form.
And as I begin to ponder at the given body, the words are easy to grasp, but I can feel the emotion, by using fine and active words that been vividly fit to show and describe the intense feeling. I like it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have a few doubt for you to consider, ignore if you don't like, thank you, this is in repeating the ending line of each stanza, maybe if the stanza is compose of 4 lines it will be good and it enhance every stanza, but the stanza is in three lines, by repeating the last line it just distract and it gives an impression that its over used that line.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4258873

Review of Adoring Eyes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Kit of House Lannister

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The created form of words gives an enticement to follow, because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Cat is my favorite pet animal, so I always hook and it mesmerized me every item that talks about cat, and just like the given title, the weaved words is adoring describing the adorable eyes of one of the cute creature. I like also how the poetry was formed, the words are vivid and smoothly subtle. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4258846

Review of In Dreams

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Purple is House Florent

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Everyone can relate on the given title, but the word dreams creates a good impression and imagery, dreams also related to wish, or maybe hope too, something we like, but for not using the possessive pronoun my, it gives an impression that all the things that were scribbled are just only a wish or likes that only stay in our mind, and waiting to achieve in our will.
The created body creates a fairy tale impression, using the word prince, and thinking a princess too. The emotion is longing or waiting for the prince, and I like the romantic spell in every words, it sounds sweet just like in a fairy tale.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, ignore if you don't like.
I mark my doubt in red and my suggestion in green. Thank you.

My heart thunders, my skins skin(plural, we only have one skin) on fire,
I'm going under, burning with desire.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4257894

Review of Fair Weather Friends

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Schnujo is Late to Lannister

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

the given title will definitely charmed any reader, Fair weather friends gives a compact thought and maybe a good thought for friends that sometimes if they really value or meant friendship to their friends.
We have many friends, but just a few we can say that can count on them.
I like your ideas here in your poem, describing a true friend, who always been there specially when we need him/her, only few will stay and can do that to us.
This is my favorite line of the poem.

But comes the rain, storms or showers
Not one stands with us, in our loneliest hour

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem, I just only doubt on the third line in the third stanza, the ending word is doesn't rhyme just like the other one. But even though, I cam say that The awardicon deserves well! because the meaning and the beautiful thought of this poem is worthy to have an award. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4257888

Review of Princess with wings

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Purple is House Florent

** Image ID #1999237 Unavailable **

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which your friend Schnujo is Late to Lannister

purchased it for you.

MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION-
As I've scrolled down the image items in your portfolio to pick for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

Princess with wings- Though, I already have a clue that this image will be about fairy, or a princess but the title keeps me hook and sounds interesting to find out its image contained. And as I saw the beautiful image of a fairy princess with wings it gives me an idea to link on your pen name Purple princess. Though, I can't see any purple color of the fairy that might be symbolize too on your name but the aura or the mood of the created fairy girl gives an impression that relate in the chosen pen name of yours.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

No doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this cute image of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking it.
I am looking forward to see more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4257886

Review of For Schnujo

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi Schnujo is Late to Lannister

** Image ID #1999237 Unavailable **

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which your friend Andy~hating university

purchased it for you, with the following message:

Happy sweet 16 Anniversary of WDC!

THE TITLE-
As I've scrolled down the items in your portfolio to pick for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

Schnujo- I know this is your pen name, and I am wondering where you got this cute pen name of yours, it gives an impression like a warrior, or a battler or a warrior soldier who ready to face any challenges, and as I see the created image inside, the given name is definitely link to the created image, specially the use of active or powerful shades of colors, The motif is like a balloon, but I wonder why you definitely used the battling trip balloons, but the combination of colors is good, vibrant, which means energetic.
I like also the simple instruction on how to create an image here in the portfolio, I may adapt it someday.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

No doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this cute image of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking it.
I am looking forward to see more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4257584

Review of Eggplant

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Schnujo is Late to Lannister

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Eggplant is very familiar to me, because this is one of my favorite botanical plant and its fruit is so very delicious. Here in the Philippines we call it "Talong" or "Tarong" we often like to add an egg even if its name have an egg already.

Its the only plant who don't have an egg even if its name have an egg, that is a joke of the plant we often used here.

Well this piece of yours is very informative, and I like that you tackled here about this one favorite plant of many.
I just only know here the information that this plant can be cause in sanity, maybe when the plant fruit will be stolen away. Mostly here in our place plant this kind of vegetative and they sell it high in the market specially after a storm, so they maybe be crazy if this vegetable that they plant in their backyard will be stolen.

Nice information about eggplant. I like also that you give a link in the internet, to easily access more information about this said plant.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. I would like to suggest to add an image of the stated subject to enhance more this piece of yours.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4257546

Review of Anticipation au Deux

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I just think the poem is moving, because the chose words used are active, I like how you made it in enjambment form, its not dry but stimulate the emotion.
I think about a feeling, or like a fairy, or a muse who always likes to pester the creative mind of the author so that they will describe them in words.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
tickler, once again
inducing a flicker of joy,
claiming rights to all that happens next,

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4257524

Review of She

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi cass

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Every one can relate on the given title. Though, its only one word but I think it givens many thought, and good imagery. This usually addressed to the an important woman that might be behind on this piece of yours. Sounds interesting so I pick this piece and have a read a give my review.
As I ponder at the given body, I like that you begin every line with the word she. which makes every line have its own thought and impression about she.
You describe it here well and vividly the thought, the desire and it stimulate the emotions in every word that you used.
My mind only concluded after reading this piece of yours that every she is very much emotional and born to be submissive to their love one. Nice poem.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
She carries regret for letting him go and not fixing the leak in his heart,
COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, just only some punctuation marks in the contraction word like:
cant = can't
doesnt = doesn't
wouldve = would've

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4257496

Review of Fear

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Wiccan101

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The word fear that you used as the given title gives a strong feeling, though this is a kind of behavior and it always gives an interesting outlook to any one who passes on this piece of yours, so I pick it to give my review.
And as I ponder at the given body, every line defines properly and vividly the feeling of being in fear. I like the idea that you stated different idea which is compact in every line that shows the feeling of being in fear. Absolutely, the feeling shows and reflect there in every line that you had.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
The cold capturing you frozen

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4257492

Review of Think.. what else should our lives be

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi sssam-on the way back

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is a lovely words about positive outlook in life. Every lines creates its pwn thought that gives an impact to every reader.
I like the word think you intend or put in every stanza, it serve as the beginning part that gives the reader to prepare on what they would expect in the following lines of every stanza. This is a great inspiring and motivational poetry.

MY FAVORITE LINE:

Of choosing the correct pieces to create our master jigsaw
Of building bridges in order to cross the surging rivers
Of spinning the wheel of fate to play the game of life.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, my only doubt is the given title if you would like to tighten it, for me its long, some title even if its short but it gives an impact, I would suggest to use the word Think only, besides its already define vividly in the body what we should be thinking of.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256647

Review of The Thinking Chair

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ♥Hooves♥

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is again a funny story of yours Hooves, but interesting to know about the thinking chair. Just like your other story there is a sense of humor to make it lively. I like the mood also, and the thought narrating when you were still a kid, it took me to remind also when I was still a kindergarten, but we didn't used about the thinking chair. And I don't remember any punishment that our teacher give in us.
This is a tender story of yours knowing some of your personal life and anecdotes.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the story, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4256643

Review of Behold, The Bread Tie Bandit

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi ♥Hooves♥

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is about Boo again your pet dog, now I am fun of reading story of yours about Boo, that cute hound dog seems to be a very delightful and cute dog for me, and also a good home protector. I like the topic here, about worrying something that Boo might eaten, every owner will also feel like that specially its their own dog.
Its gives relief to know also in the ending part the cause that Boo is alright.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the story, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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