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Samberine Everose

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#4214001

Review of Teaching Spanish

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Gerald

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble on your piece in the Newbies Review Section. I pick it to have a read and give a review because it enticed me using the word Spanish.

Some schools here in the Philippines teach Spanish language, its a part of our history. I don't know how to speak on that language, but there are some words in spanish that we often used here which we inherited by the Spaniards when they are still here in our country.
Spanish word for me is very classy like the English Language, mostly they included that in some short story and novel here to make the piece become classy its appeal.
Your invitation is very readable and interesting too.
You might like to write it some rules and words about Spanish, because using an Skype there is always a limitation, the learner should be in focus, its good, but what if the prospective learner who like to learn Spanish have only just a few spare time, like for instance she is in office, but she like to learn Spanish language.
So I suggest if you might like to write it.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4213996

Review of Raindrops on the windowpane of life.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!QueenElizabeth

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble on your piece on the Newbies Review Section, why because it hit me by the word raindrops, windowpane and life. Raindrops always creates a good imagery, its refreshing, windowpane of life might be our reflection about life.
The given title creates a good thought and an impact to a prospective reader.
Good job because the given title hook me as your reader.

The created body is like the given title, there's an impact, it talks about different raindrops, and how far they would go beyond, their journey to life. I love the thoughts on it.
They are true and good. Well Done for this.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4213781

Review of Life

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!V

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Every one can relate on the given title, its short but every will enticed on it.
Who doesn't like to know about Life., the wonder of life.
Life is always beautiful, even if full of trials, complications and just a few some sweets. That is Life.
While reading this piece of yours, it allows me to comprehend about the wonderful of life and its wisdom to us. In every experience we had and will have. We already thought us about Life.
Great that you stated here the beauties of all the wonderful creation surround us that always inspired us even if we are in our bad times.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
The only thing that I doubt is the proper using of punctuation, specially on the first stanza. Punctuation Marks is one of the powerful tool of a poetry, that helps stimulate the emotions or tone of the piece.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4213777

Review of Trees In Fall

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Freziie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

THE TITLE:

There are two things that comes into my mind when I stumble your piece in the newbies review section.
One is Tree are falling, or they are decreasing its number.
and the other one is how we see Tree in Fall or Autumn.
I like them both.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

BODY

Great job in showing and describing how you comprehend nature surrounds you, specially the trees, for me they are those one of the wonders of nature.
They are older than us.
The emotions is in there also, by using words that can stimulate the emotion of the piece.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have few doubt that arise while reading this piece of yours, you may like to consider it.

The trees in fall, they surround me. Weeping their leaves into the ongoing sea below them.
Why the sea is below the trees, I don't understand this.
You might like to omit the descriptive words below them.

Weeping their leaves into the ongoing sea.
This would be firm, and enough to make the reader guess.

Those leaves fly everywhere. I like the personification in this part.

...to be in nature, to stare in awe at the beauty around me.
You might mean beauties surround me.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4213774

Review of The Three Men and the Mountain Sage

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Aesop

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

I'm your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

THE TITLE

I stumble unto your piece in the newbies review section, and I pick it to give a read and a review. Why because the given title creates an impression to me like those fable and parable I've read when I was still a kid, and I'm always a fan of those things.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the given title hook me as your reader.

THE BODY

What a beautiful story which is full of thought and wisdom.
The story is just simple, like stories, parable, tale but creates an impact after reaching the ending.
It gives the reader a thought.
I didn't disappointed after reading it, because you did a great job filling my first impression.
Each of us have different views and different understanding on what we have learn on the story.
For me, the simpler the better.
We always see wisdom in every simple things, because that is where we came from. from the basic.

The Mountain Sage would like to ceased his work as a mountain sage in the mountain so he prefer to have the umbrella from the third man, because he know he already have a replacement in his position as a mountain sage. (

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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212526

Review of Mom

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!writteninthestars

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble on your piece in the newbies Section, and I pick it to read and give a review, why because you used one of the most powerful word that anyone will hook.
Mom always creates a good imagery to us, always touch our hearts if we find that word, because it always reminds us our Mother.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

What a nice letter to your Mom, nicely crafted and every words are sincere, it comes from the heart. Your Mom would be love this and be proud of you.
Mother's always proud for their child, even if we would be failed, still they are there our number one fan. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212497

Review of Cloud-Covered Moon

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!someone else

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the Newbies Section. I picked it to read and give a review because of the given title.
The three words blends together and create a good imagery, some kind of mysterious using the word moon, but if this is cloud covered, this moon will not see its beauty and spread its shine and light because of the clouds that covered on it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part. Good job because the given title hook me as your reader.

As I read the scribbled lines into the body of the piece, I can say that the given title links to the body. It talks about a fair beauty that once covered by dusty things that made to dampen its real beauty.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow the only doubt that arise in me is on the ending part, it gives an un ending effect to the reader.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212380

Review of A Tale of Two Fathers

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!J. Lynn Lindsay

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE
The given title is the one that hooks me to choose this nice piece of yours, because it creates a good imagery to me.
A word whether it in short or long, if it stir the emotion through experience, likes and favourites as well as creates a good imagery to the reader, it gives a good impression and an eagerness to know to enter to that item.
Father always creates an emotional impact to everyone, this always reminds us to our father and to our loving Father above who created us.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part. Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:

I like how you showed it well, the words you used are light and easy to understand, Good job because you made this just for everybody.
The most beautiful on the piece is the emotions created, specially on the last part, it nice that you first state a story or a parable so that each one would really understand it, and ended with a quote from the bible.
This explain what true and pure love is really all about.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212378

Review of War Drum

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!kerrimiller

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

While looking around into your homefolio to pick for something to review, this piece of yours lure my attention.
The blending of the two words is just simple but creates a good imagery.
Each one can relate on it. I really think that this is about a battle.
Sounds adventurous on my part.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:

Very nice, in just only 100 words you did it well in describing the given title.
This is an act of siren in a battle field, and also the emotion of injah has been reflected well. Great.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4212152

Review of Sweet desires

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
The blending of the two words Sweet Desires creates an enticing effect for me to choose this piece of yours to read and give a review, why because every desire if we see as sweet can lead to our happiness because we like and love it.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

THE BODY-

Just like the given title, the scribbled lines in the body is much sweeter and link at the given title. I like how you created it with the rhyming, the thought is good also.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the rhyming on the third stanza.
A desire has a life of its own, long or short,
when it doesn’t stick to a motivated heart.

Congratulations on the Awardicon!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212148

Review of RAVAGES OF TIME

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi bumfuzzled ,

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

While my tiny wings flip and flap into your homefolio looking for something that will give me an interest, and my eyes was captured into this piece of yours. What makes me captured is because of the given title, the blending of the two words Ravage and Time creates an enticing effect if it there's really a ravages of time..? I just only thought about Death.
Good job because the title hook me.

THE BODY-

This piece stimulate the emotions because of the Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery just like the title.
This is about death isn't it?, the thing that I really like is the rhythm of the created words between the lines

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4207439

Review of Lovely Poets

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A pleasant hour!!LaLa

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The thing that hooked me this piece of yours while scrolling down items in the newbies section is the word Poet, because I love poetry a lot.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

While looking the scribbled lines inside the body, the thought that gives is true, and beautiful, and this is in free verse.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just only have some doubt to think about.
The given title- The Lovely Poets. - There's a double meaning on this one, might pertains to look, though, I agree that all poets are beautiful and lovely, but when we go inside the body of the piece, it doesn't link already.
In the body, it says there the thing that creates the poet are lovely.
You might like not to add the word lovely there, or you might like to choose words that might best describe for a poets, like mighty Word-sword, or you might have a much better name.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4207434

Review of YOU

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A pleasant hour!!razia

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is short, and typical, but its effect can hook a reader because you let the reader be a part of it, using the pronoun You.
This can give the reader an interesting effect.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled lines in the body is simple, but the emotions is there already.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some doubt.

On using Punctuation marks- this can stimulate the emotion of a poetry, like line spacing, breaking and so on. You might like to put a period after the line, it makes the line firm.

These line are for someone in my life- you might like to add s in the line because these are four lines.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4203982

Review of Crazy Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Chris24

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

This piece of yours hook me to read and review while visiting your homefolio because it sounds cool and interesting.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
From the beginning until I reach the ending part, I'm so fond in reading this. This is just only a dialogue, but it says a lot, it describes a lot.
This is one example that using a dialogue only can stand alone a concrete to make a story moving and interesting. Good job!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4201571

Review of Yellow

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title creates a good imagery, and one of my favorite colors because of what it gives and what it makes one to feel and see.
The color yellow belongs to one of he brightest colors, it symbolize the sunshine, a happy day, a bright day, but sometimes they see it as in mellow.
I really like this color, so that impression hook me to pick this piece of yours

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

Just like the given title, the body consist of a lively tone or mood, refreshing and a warmth wishes and greetings to all Yellows!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4200296

Review of On the Value of Replying to Reviews

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!The prodigal son returns 2023.

I'm Samberine Everose

your little best fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review for my picked Item of WDC Authors this month.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an educational and informative impression. So I definitely picked it up and included in my Fairy Frontline Board this month.
I'm just sorry because I just only have the time to reviewed it now.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader, and any reader will definitely hooked on this one.

Into the body-
As my first impression and expectation, the body of the piece is really informative and educational, you stated here the importance of replying to a review, and the importance in what and which reviews gives, that sometimes it was been forgotten, or misused, misinterpret the reviews, that mostly reviews even if how light, how long, how short, always needs a simple appreciation because its a good, warmth and friendly WDC gesture.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4199439

Review of only 15 minutes til bedtime

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!AmyD23

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I think you take here a snapshot about your fun activity week end. Very cool.
It just only short, but full of exciting, and interesting, maybe if you would like to add more and give a most vivid view.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
Here are some of the couple things that I have in-doubt.
1. The title- is always the front line of every piece, as I've said already, impression and expectation first create here.
For me, using small letters in the title makes an impression for me an act of laziness. Every title should begin in capital letter.

2. You might like to add punctuation marks, and paragraph spacing. Punctuation marks always helps to stimulate emotions of piece as well as paragraph spacing, for a clearer view.

Oh crap. Its already 9:45 on a Sunday night and I have yet to ready the buckets for tomorrows customers.

This statement is blur to me, I mean not vivid.
you might mean-
and I should have to ready the buckets for tomorrows customers.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4199436

Review of Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Amrita

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Love is one of the enticing word that always hook a prospective reader as well as create a good imagery.
Though, love always have its twin emotion hurt, but we can't say that its love if we will not feel the hurt.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me.

The created lines in the body is light and true, but I feel the emotions.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

Love makes you cold - hearted and it completely changes a person .
changes you might mean change.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198968

Review of The Dance Of Dis

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Angus

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.

The word Dis hook my attention while looking for something to review in your homefolio. Its a new word for me, blending it with the word dance- dance gives a good imagery ad thought.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

Inside the body, I can say that you did well in holding the emotions of the piece as well as the describing and showing about the dance of Dis, you took me into a not so dark but a mysterious place in a night which the moon is full, and scattered stars.
You did well in making your reader to be in the shoes of the viewer.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198691

Review of Missed.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!EMPALAGARSE

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The given title enticed me to read your piece and give a review, because that simple word creates an emotional impact. Everyone knows and always feels that emotional feeling, and we can relate on it.

Inside the body, you described well, how is that feeling, and you did well.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198685

Review of From a hello to a goodbye

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Justin

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is simple, anyone can relate on it.
But the enticing unto this is knowing that this is something another story about in love and its twin hurt.
You describe it well the feeling of being in-love and when its twin-hurt will shoot you up also. That's is usually done, Love and Hurt at the end. This two always blend.
Because, without hurt you can't measure how you've been love that person.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I would suggest to add some spacing, Paragraph spacing can stimulate emotions as well as the breathing of the written words and lines.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198682

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!adt2017

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I also love blue, because it makes me feel at peace when I looking up at the vast sky, and its one of the cool colors when it link to ocean and seas. I'm also curious and have sympathy when I see blue in every person.
In other words the given title creates a good imagery for me, so I picked this piece of yours to give a read and review.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job in choosing the given title.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some words that distract the flow, and vividness.
like:
the color blue lets me know I’m not alone.

You might like to change the word lets to something more clearer on what you mean on the above statement.
like the word- telling
The color blue always telling me that I'm not alone, - there is already an impression of personification here to make it twist.

I love the color blue because it has taught me to love myself in every shade. Omit the word has to make the statement more firm and true.

Adding also an spacing, line breaking to a paragraph specially if its long makes the piece moving and stimulate emotions.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4197648

Review of When did I start loving you?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!JessCarsen

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE
The given title is the one that hook me in choosing this nice piece of yours, because it creates a good imagery to me.
It reminds me of song, because the created lines-title already have a beat or the rhythm, and by using a punctuation mark, you give the chance that your reader to be a part on the created piece.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I like every created lines. You did well in crafting it.
The rhyme and rhythm is in there, the thought that gives is good and true, and specially the emotion. The words you chose creates the emotion that is tender but not really mushy.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4195049

Review of Music to write by

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Joey's Spring has Sprung

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. The word music, hooked me because I'm one of the fanatic persons in music other that its one of my passion.
Music to write by, creates an inspiring mood because you blend the word music to the word write. And as I enter inside, I found out, beautiful classical music, and they are good, they are just hard to link, it takes time in linking.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
No doubt arise, just only the linking, or might be the problem is our net.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4195047

Review of "Emergency Warnings! Read Your Labels."

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Joey's Spring has Sprung

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is already captivating, using strong-alarming words and active punctuation marks.
Like the given body, its funny. and the created words are vivid and true.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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