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Samberine Everose

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#4224445

Review of My Summer Vacation

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi tYpO/T.Boilerman

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this June.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title reminds me when I was still in college, when our summer vacation is already coming and mostly we( students ) talk about when will be spending our summer vacation. That is my first impression, and I'm glad that the story talks this also.
I like how you showed and introduced the personality of the characters especially the main character. There are some dialogue that helps to introduced well the personality of the characters. The way how the words crafted is vivid and easy to grasp, means that this is for everybody.
I like also the lesson that I pick here. Definitely, books are a good company and they can brought us everywhere in this world.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4224443

Review of Lost Without You

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Sum1

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this June.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

THE TITLE

I pick this piece of yours because I was captivated on the given title:
Lost Without You- Everyone can relate on it, It also reminds me as one of the lyrics in Music, but it always have the charm to attract readers, by using the pronoun You, making the reader to be a part of it. The created emotion have an impact effect also by blending the two words Lost and without, they give a somber effect and by combining it with the pronoun you this will give an impression to the reader to pick it and not letting go the said piece.
Good job in choosing the title, because it hook me as your reader.

THE BODY
Like the given title, each crafted lines in the body is full of emotions, that is the first thing that I noticed. The emotions is being showed here and letting the reader to be in the shoes of the main character by using powerful words that is fit to described the longing, and missing.
I like also the given thought here, instead of a lover which everyone always use it.
This is about the muse which gone away.
I also love the ending part or the conclusion, where in the muse return back, and a sparkle of inspiration is given.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem,
I just only have a doubt on this line:
He spoke to Him in the only way he could,

I think there is a pause or a comma between the word Him and in.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4224176

Review of Strawberry

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi eyestar~*

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE
.
Wandering in your portfolio, this piece of yours did catch my attention. Just the title says its about strawberry. I like strawberry, one of its delightful appearance, and it always been a partner by a salad, during the winter season here or any festival. Second of its mild sweet taste, but you can really appreciate its taste if this will blend it to honey or milk.

THE BODY-

The format is appealing, a lanturne poetry. All the crafted words are in shaped like the chosen format. The thought tells about a strawberry life.
Like in the first lantern. Lucious- that one word says it there about the strawberry taste. I'm surprise that its your national fruit. Great!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some doubt that arise in my thought, while pondering the strawberry lanturne.

On the first stanza, maybe you might like to edit, The word ripe is out of the line in the first stanza.
The word fruit as the last word in the first lanturne. You might mean fruit. Singular. Because national fruit is only one.

In the second lanturne:
I just wonder why you said the strawberry is left by nature, it gives me the feeling or thought of being puzzled. You might like to change the words that you used here for a clearer view.

No comment on lanturne three because, we all know strawberry can be a good source of nutrients of the soil, once cultivated.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4223948

Review of An Autumnal Sun

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!The prodigal son returns 2023.

I'm Samberine Everose

your little best fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review because I've missed giving you reviews and its good that I found this latest item of yours.

Please always remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

THE TITLE:

The one that fascinates me to pick this is because of the word
Autumnal- from the word Autumn. Like Summer, Autumn is one of my favorite season next to Summer season, then Spring and Winter, because of its nostalgic effect or ambience, the falling, drop of leaves creates a nostalgic effect, the sun setting, its colors are different than summer, more like to be orange, and sometimes I see it in the amber or golden color with the mix of fire red. The feeling is at peace or rest, quiet. Just beautiful. So I always been attracted to the Autumn Season.
And you blend it, to be a descriptive word to the word Sun creates a reverent impression. I chose the word reverent or in solemn, because just like pondering the sun's setting in the afternoon, there is a reverent feeling. Just by its setting, the sun did a good job to give a shiny wonderful day.

THE BODY:
The story is in few words. I can say it is direct to the point. You paint a beautiful picture, just like a painting where in the detailed is compact with beautiful thoughts and wisdom.
I admire on the way how you pick and chose those words that really describe and fit well to show the beauty of this piece and reflect the emotions on it.
Words like kaleidoscope of colors
winter sneezed- (I like the personification you used here)

begrudgingly,
And I like the view or the appearance of a youngster,
it balance on the chosen hues of this wonderful painting in words.
It reflects the four seasons here, and the emotion of sadness, but sometimes there is a bit of contentment.

There is a line that just gave me a thought to think, and I'm confuse of some word.
and he'd never see another Spring.

The word he'd is a contraction. Right BFF, may I know, from what word?.
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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4223932

Review of The Autumn Gala

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

HiMaryann - House Martell

,

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

This is my second pick item of yours that I would like to read and give a review.
My eyes was captured by the given title using the word Autumn blending the word Gala, creates a music, a feastive of the season Autumn.
What a wonderful imagery of Autumn that you've been trying to be pictured by your reader.
Good job in crafting the title.

THE BODY-

Juts like the given title, this is in few words but the meaning it gives an impact to the reader. I like the words: dances, gusts, waltz, nippy. They all have an
important role to make the piece lively and creates the mood of like a happenings
in the season of Autumn.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have
a doubt why you didn't start the first line in a capital letter. I thought,
we should always start a capital letter in a line or a sentence, or this is a one way to bent the mood of the poetry.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4223929

Review of My Trip to Australia

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

HiMaryann - House Martell

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

This is my third pick item of yours to have a read and give my review, because it sounds great and interesting knowing your adventure or trip in Australia.
I still didn't gone to far places, just only here in our country.

And reading others experience and travel can give me an idea and feel their adventure too on that place their visited. I'm glad that I've found this piece of yours, and letting me know a bit about Australia. I like the Sydney Opera which you've mentioned here, and your crafted words are vivid and gives an interesting outlook while looking at the captured pictures. You showed to the reader also how you feel in every particular place you've been in Australia, like putting your reader in your own shoes, which gives me thrill also as I follow your footstep describing those places you've been in that wonderful Australia.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4223927

Review of Little Writings

for entry "One of my dogs"

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

This is one of the items of yours that I pick to have read and give a review to be a part of the WDC Kind Hearts.
I already expecting that the contain of this awesome book is in short writings, but I didn't know that mostly the entries are cute, like this one.
One of my dogs. Anyone can relate on it, the title is short, and light, and the impression and imagery will be about dog.
And by looking inside the body, a cute handsome dog in the picture greeted me with glee and below is the short caption about it.
The description big smile, happy and fun that really fit to describe the picture, and the given emotion can make the reader to wear a smile also, because of its
lively effect.

Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4222055

Review of Breath Away

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Beautiful Candy

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Happy Anniversary day to you sister, I'll be hanging around here in your Prtfolio this day to make you special in your Anniversary day. Just don't be irritate if the fairy spoil you so much with reviews.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Now, I'm hook again in this piece of yours, because of the word Breath you used.
Breath links to Life, if our breath will be away, I think we will be lost and gone.

I didn't expect that this is very inspiring and a powerful poem.
The first line gave me an interest already, letting your reader(me) know about life.
Failure, mistakes and problems are ingredients in life that God let us to have to make us grow and become a better person where God intend us to be.

Good job in choosing the title, because it hooked me as your reader.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Breathe in and breathe out
that's how near God is to us. Well Done!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4220695

Review of Imagination

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Cheyanna Wester

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I try to look for another static of yours to give a review as your request, and this piece of yours lure my attention, because of the given title.
Imagination always creates an impact to every writer, without the imagination, we can't creates awesome things. Creativity exist with our own unique imagination, and everyone have that ability, they are just differ in ranges.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I get inside the body and ponder those few lines.
The first stanza- states about children with their imagination.
But, I am not agreed the fact that stated in the line that they don't have any ounce of imagination. Children have more imaginations that adult, though they still didn't know how they express it.
The second line is blurred to me. The world is only one stated there but follows the number adjective two or three, adjective- these should be used to summoned the following the number adjective. The line three in the first stanza is fine to me.

The second stanza are already vivid and also the third stanza.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4220428

Review of Midnight Angel

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Angus

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. The blending of the two words Midnight Angel creates a mystery. The noun Angel always creates an impact because it talks here about purity, fondness, and tenderness. Mixing it with the word Midnight, a solemn, dark and something mystery where in it drawn the reader to look this piece of yours.
Good job, because the title hook me as your reader.

THE BODY-

I like how the body was scribbled in words which sketched different imagery.
I like how you hold the tone, it links on the given title, Midnight and Angel.
The flow is good also, the pattern of the poem is in Angel form. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4220422

Review of What?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Angus

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

I found the title so interesting so I picked this piece of yours to have a read and give a review for the WDC Kind Heart.
This is an interrogative word, and it so seems to be intriguing.
What behind that What?

Good job, because the title hook me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

THE BODY-

I don't know if this is a horror or a comedy story Angus. But I find it amusing, I can't resist to smile and left me thinking after I've read this story.

First I like how you scribbled the words, for me as an ESL (English Second Language) is easy to understand, though there are words that are not familiar to me, but when blended to words that are common, I already grasp its meaning. Good job because this is for everybody.

Second I like the idea that the main character here is you..? and the incidence or sequence are amusing, its a daily routine, the issue is simple, but the story is interesting.

Third I like how you make me curious and like I've said intrigue about the issue of Angus about the Internet, It made me to follow the sequence of the story.

And Fourth I like the ending part, it left me thinking. Why Angus is shot already by a bullet, is it another story, and its not the internet issue. It explain maybe there, but I didn't easily grasp on my first reading. I might return and do the reading once again.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
This is an interesting story. I might therefore hang up again in your homefolio.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4220421

Review of The Idea

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Angus

,

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

I found the title so interesting so I picked this piece of yours to have a read and give a review for the WDC Kind Heart.
This is an interrogative word, and it so seems to be intriguing.
What behind that What?

Good job, because the title hook me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

THE BODY-

I don't know if this is a horror or a comedy story Angus. But I find it amusing, I can't resist to smile and left me thinking after I've read this story.

First I like how you scribbled the words, for me as an ESL (English Second Language) is easy to understand, though there are words that are not familiar to me, but when blended to words that are common, I already grasp its meaning. Good job because this is for everybody.

Second I like the idea that the main character here is you..? and the incidence or sequence are amusing, its a daily routine, the issue is simple, but the story is interesting.

Third I like how you make me curious and like I've said intrigue about the issue of Angus about the Internet, It made me to follow the sequence of the story.

And Fourth I like the ending part, it left me thinking. Why Angus is shot already by a bullet, is it another story, and its not the internet issue. It explain maybe there, but I didn't easily grasp on my first reading. I might return and do the reading once again.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
This is an interesting story. I might therefore hang up again in your homefolio.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4220234

Review of Megan's Ballroom

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Princess Megan Rose GOT Fox

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This piece of your is one of the most enticing part in your awesome castle, so I prefer to pick it and go inside.
Its the Princess Ballroom. I'm stunning with awe while I am already entered inside this ballroom. The Princess displayed pictures are all gorgeous. It took me into a magnificent place of your castle.
The short description is also enchanting.
Why not add some ball room music on it. Wow!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4220228

Review of The Princess and The Ogre

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi Princess Megan Rose GOT Fox

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this May.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This item of yours is one of my chosen to have a read and give a review as part of your being Anniversary Month.
Why because the effect of the given title can always pull a reader.
The word Princess is the one who is shining here because it always give a good imagery.
An imagery that symbolize a girl, a female- sweet and tender just like the princesses in every fairy tales. I think every girl's dream like to be a princess.
Blending it with the name of a giant or monster Ogre it gives a balance effect.
This maybe the enemy of the princess.
I like also that you attached the article adjective The, because it makes the two subject:(Princess and Ogre)or can help to distinguished the two main characters in this poem-story.
In the body-
I can say its a beautiful adventure of the Princess Phoebe with her heroes.

The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

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#4218953

Review of Admir

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Cheyanna Wester

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Though the title is only a one word- and I think this is a name of a person.
But it hook me, because this is not a common name.
I imagined this as a man, who can be a hero for everyone.
Have a kind heart, gentle man, and a warrior.
Lived during the old times as lord or leader.
That is what my impression and expectation of the given title.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Inside the body.
This is in narrating style. You are still trying here in this chapter to immersed your reader to know who is Admir, Right? and that is good.
But, there are some things you missed here.
For me the narrating style or the way you introduced Admir to your reader are too fast.
I don't ask for so many words, but one way in introducing your character especially if this is the main character is by showing his traits through making him moving in the story.
The reader must first love the main character, so that they will continue, and begin to follow the next chapter or episode.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I think this will be a great story, specially it talks about the time of vampire. As I've said you just missed introduced more about Admir to your reader.
So you must introduced well here the main character first, so if the reader will going to fall in love into your character and that will make them following the next episodes of this piece of yours.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4218951

Review of Free Women

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Cheyanna Wester

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick this in your Homefolio because of the given title enticed me to have a read and give a review.
This is what I reflect while pondering the two blended words.
This might talk about women being free.
Free form anything, free in their mind. No hurt or emotional hurt, just been free, at peace and content.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

So when I try to flip and flap my little wings inside the body of the piece, find out that this is a poetry. I love poetry. Really.
I can say that the wordings is link to the given title, telling about a women being free.
Nice expression your thoughts on it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

I like how you express it. Like the given title you expressed it freely.
I just wonder in the body if the piece the main subject is only one person, using the pronoun I, but in the title you used women who is plural means many woman.

Here in this line:
When I was little I was told that I could never amount to nothing

The adjective word amount there, I can't figured what it means in the first line, its blur for me what it means.
Does this mean you can't afford to nothing.?
You might like to change that word.

This line:
That I was just another girl that will grow to be a women

The word another here gives me an impression that there is another girl other than you. I got what you mean on this line. You might like to make it in general.

That I would be like the other girls that will grow to be a women.
I can say this is more vivid. But I don't know if this is what you mean.

That will link now to the next line.
And that my only purpose would be to be a mother

One thing more, I observed that you didn't used any Punctuation Marks.
Punctuation Marks always helps to stimulate the emotion of a piece specially poetry.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4218949

Review of "I Love Piano Duo"

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!GerMac

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
What makes me choose this piece of yours is I was tantalized by the word you used- Piano.
Piano is one of those instrument that are close to my heart, this makes me express what music is all about.
Piano will always creates a good imagery to me.

When I flip and flap my little wings to get inside the body of this piece of yours,
in which I already have a clue that this is about music.
I can say, that this is an enjoyable to read. I like the story within.
I pictured a family, a home. Dad, Mom and daughter, in which like Dad's playing in the piano there have their harmony.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4218945

Review of I Salute You Mom (Mother Day Special)

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Ekant

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble on your piece in the Newbies Section, and I definitely pick it to have a read and give a review.
The given title gives a good imagery because you used one of the touching words here that I can say every one can relate on it.
Mom or Mother. The core of heart of everyone.
We also celebrate Mothers day in our country. Absolutely. Because Mother should be a must to give a tribute.
We will no be her in this world without their sacrifice from the day we are already their in her womb, where we have our first heart beat.
There' s no anything in this world can ever replace the love of a mother to her child.
As of me, when I first saw my little girl in its first ultra sound, when she was still 8 weeks old in my womb. There's no ever replace my happiness seeing on her, heart beating, alive.
For me she is a gift from God. And a wonderful gift. Though, every one expect that being a parent especially mother is hard and full of struggling. Mothers always like to have children and be sacrifice for their children even what matters most, because of the happiness and fulfillment they see while taking care on their children, specially if their children will be a successful one. They will be satisfied on it.

Yup, its so hard to think that there are some who forget their mothers when reaching their old years specially if that child is already a successful one. That is one of the most sadly part now a days.

This article of yours is good to wake each one the important of mothers.
Words you scribbled are easy to grasp and it means it is for everyone.

Well Done!.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4218943

Review of Is My Heart Wandering?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Ekant

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the Newbies Section.
I pick it because I was attracted on the given title.
The given title is just simple and many can relate on it but by using an interrogative sentence, like asking something that we don't know to ourselves, it gives an effect to the reader to be an interesting, and the reader would like to know the answer on that searching or wandering.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

When I try to read the body of the piece, I can say its good, it reminds me of music. I think about that this is in lyrical. I like the rhythm created, the beat.
Some lines are repeated, but its good it makes the piece give an enticing effect.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
The only thing that I doubt here, is by using Punctuation Marks. Observe it, without the used of any Punctuation Marks and some stanza breaking, it makes this piece flowing, no ending part. Honestly, I didn't know that I already reach the ending part.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4217672

Review of In progess

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A pleasant hour!!Chase Bailey

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble on your piece in the Newbies Section.
I pick it not because I am fascinates on the given title, but it gives me an idea or impression that this piece needs help in improving because as the given title perceived that This is in Progress.
So I will try if I can be giving you a help.
So as I can see in to the body.
This was crafted in few words, and the thought is still blur.
But I like how you crafted the first line.
27 on a 55. Very captivating.
Leave it that way.
But the next lines are being blur already, maybe if you like to add more lines.

The impression is still an unfinished piece.
And one thing more the given title.

In choosing a title of a piece, one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4217670

Review of In The Wilderness

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Pasquale Lorina

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I'm a nature lover, so I definitely pick this piece of yours in the newbies section when I stumble on it.
The word wilderness hook me, and I already know that this is about nature.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

Inside the Body.

While pondering the crafted lines of your piece, it brings me to a world viewing
the basic view of nature. It reminds of the garden of eden in which its stated there in The Bible. No man made or artificially that has been created by human to summoned its beauty. Just only the original view in which Our Creator first design.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4217653

Review of A Drifting Shell

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Blackjynx

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I've encountered this piece of yours in the Newbies Section. I pick it immediately to have a read and give my review. Why because the given title is fascinating.
A shell- the outer skin of a mollusk can be drifted only if this is empty.
Because of its emptiness it makes this shell to be float.
That's what I see when looking at the given title of your piece.
We are in the bit of emptiness when we loss our love one.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

In the Body:

I admired you for holding the desired mood of the piece until reaching its end.
Chosen words are all blended and vivid.
Some are obscure or esoteric but it blended on the other words which are light and easy to grasp. That will make the reader to easy understand it without any distraction of the chosen mood.
I like also how this piece formed. I means its line breaking, and stanza breaking.
It added to light up and stimulate the emotion of this poem.
Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just wonder why you intended not to add any Punctuation Marks. I've been a fan of Punctuation Marks, because they also help top stimulate emotions of the piece. I'm sorry if I always looking for it in a piece.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4217639

Review of Bamboo

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this month of May.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Section and found you there being one of the Awesome Authors here in WDC, who will celebrate Anniversary this Month. I tried to flap my little wings into your homefolio and this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to read and give my thoughts on it.

As I ponder to this word- Bamboo, it gives me a good imagery, and many good thoughts.
Not only that this have a good character that can be follow, there are also many things that we can derive from this plant/tree.
That thoughts makes me to pick this piece of yours.

Good job in choosing the title, because it hook me as your reader.

In the Body:

I like everything that was written. The rhyme and rhythm are good,
Well chosen of words and specially the given thoughts that described the character of the bamboo.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
I wish i could be one of the bamboos
That whatever height I would go
I would still look down to the ground
Taking a gaze to where I came from.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, I just wonder why you didn't capitalized the letter I there in the fourth stanza-first line.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4216866

Review of Grammy's Special Lil Man

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Patrece ~

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Hope this made you smile and know you are loved...by your seester!!~

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

My tiny wings brought me into your homefolio to choose an awesome piece of yours that might enticed my attention, and this static of yours captured my heart, even if this is not a poetry, which often times would like to chose.
Why because, the given title hook me.
The sentence is a description of something, for me it sounds interesting, using word Grammy- I think its a pet name for Grand ma, blended with the word "special li'l man"
My first impression is this is referring to grand ma's favorite grand child. Right?.
It reminds me of my grand ma, because even if Grand mother have many Grand children there is still their own favorite pet.

A good imagery that surface on the given title, specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hook on the given title of a piece.
Good job, because the title hook me as your reader.

The style in the created lines in the body of this piece is narrative form. Mostly description. I like how you made it that way, the reader will have already an idea, and will automatically love the grand ma's favorite character on this piece.
I like also that you only just stated on the last part, where in it is about to end that situation of Braxten, this will concluded the wondering of the reader, even if they already have the clue who and how is Braxten.

This symbolizes that we are always created special and unique, though, our uniqueness or being special sometimes can't understand. But, God already gave us persons to help us outshine that uniqueness through our love ones caring and love, like our mother and our grand parents. Braxten is very lucky to have you as his loving Grand ma.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have doubt just only on the first paragraph.

I wonder at times, as I observe him and interact with him, if his is a tortured childhood, or is it joyful? I have come to the conclusion....

I think the pronoun his is not the right pronoun there on that line which I underlined red. Because you are relating to his childhood.
You might mean- if he have a tortured childhood-
or if he is a tortured child.

Please make it vivid.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4216028

Review of "Keyboard Lightning"

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!! GerMac

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcase members in the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

While my tiny wings is flapping and flipping in your Homefolio Poetic Garden, this piece of your captured my eyes to pick it because of the word that you used on the given title.
Keyboard for me creates many meanings, as well as my fascination in this word.
Keyboard reflect to me the keyboard that we used when we write using computer, and keyboard also reminds me of the keyboard of a piano. Music the one in which my favorites and a part of me.
Blending it with the word Lightning, creates an impact effect to reader.
Because lightning gives an impression of a powerful light.
I also think why you didn't used the word lighting, I think lighting gives a much softer feeling or impression than lightning. Right? or there is more deep idea.

Making the two words begins in capital letter, makes an impression that this two words are important. Nice Chosen words

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
The body gives me an impression that this is a theme or a duo between two important things. I like how the poetry was formed. There is a created story behind it, and it creates a thought to the reader after reading.
I like the emotions that I reflect on it, like harmony, love, unity, I also chose the word home or homey.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow
just have a doubt on the first stanza:

The pianist is poised~~ensconced in thought,
Interpreting memorable sounds, you might start this line into small letter because the first line end in comma, it continues the given thought, or if this emphasize a new thought the first line shouldn't be ended in comma, but in period.
He plays glorious classical music.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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