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#4290633

Review of Autumn's Palette

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Rhoswen - Relentless Victory

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The one that hooked me and picked this piece of yours to have a read and give my review is the word Autumn. Autumn is beautiful, it always gives a good imagery, mixing it with the word Pallete gives an impression that have a different colors just like the palette of an artist. Good description of an Autumn.

A title of a piece should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I liked the way how the body were scribbled, have different syllables in every line which create a good dramatic effect.
The thoughts is fine also, it gives a good imagery how autumn is beautiful in the eyes of the poet. Great Job!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow. I just have some doubt for you to consider like:
I marked my doubt in red and my suggestion is in green color

I walked on paths
Of crisp dry leaves
Flamed with color- my first impression about the Autumn here is having many color so color here should be colors

Crimsons and rust (comma here) dance in the wind- if there's no comma between rust and dance it gives a different meaning.

Autumn’s palette is a rainbow of color-colors

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4290626

Review of Dreaming Moon

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!the_nomie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is already poetic, as the mixing of the words dreaming and moon creates a good imagery, as well as it gives a double meaning, in which it personify someone.

A title of a piece, always gives a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Just like the given title, the scribbled body is much beautiful, and I see more poetic lines there.
Every line is poetic and gives a good imagery.
I think its not intended to have a rhyming and its just quite fine, because it will help to stimulate and will make to smoothen the flow.
Great job!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt in using of capital letters in every line.
I would suggest that you consider using small letters to begin a line, to make an enjambment style
it will give more a dramatic flow of the poem.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4290621

Review of Family Tree

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour, Jade Amber Jewel

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Everyone can relate on the given title, tree always symbolize our family, or roots- where we came from, and a piece that talks about family always lure anyone because this talks about our home or just like I've said our roots, it always gives or brought a sentiments to us.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled body is much beautiful than the title, because this already gives more or describe about the given title.
The rhyming and rhythm used were fine, and I liked it.
The best thing that I liked is the harmony and love of one another of each family members. Great job

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have some few doubts for you to consider like:

Now how big is their heart? - You used adjective-their in which it tells about the number of whom who have big hearts- so heart should be hearts-

I can't figure out clearly the last stanza-
it gives a sad mood, it disturb the good mood on the stanza's before

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4286239

Review of The Beauteous Breezes

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION
I can say this is a beautiful poem and well scribbled, because of the good rhyme and rhythm the you used, they are in order and in properly measured.
Its beautiful because of the given thought and the wisdom that it reflect.
I link this to our journey, and the beauties we find out through our journey here on earth. Well Done again teacher!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4284577

Review of The Storm

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour, 💙 Carly

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title gives an impression that this might be in the genre of dark, using the word storm.
I always found this word are gloom or dullness, but it gives me an impression that this might be interesting to read, and when I try to ponder the scribbled words in the body, I found out that this is a kind of action, on how we fight those storm within us, and we always survive if we are determined to fight it, whatever or however it is.
I found the scribbled words in the body to be dramatic also, by describing some of the feelings of the main character, where in it gives the reader chance to know the way of the main characters own thinking and feeling. Great Job!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow,
I just have doubt on the word below
Stillness fals before the...
You might mean falls

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4284573

Review of Pumpkin Fever

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 💙 Carly

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created formed of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. A good imagery specially if it touched the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title and the scribbled body of the piece.
This piece talks about autumn using pumpkin and it reminds me also thanksgiving day where we have many pumpkins everywhere.
I liked the created mood of this piece, it reflects enthusiasm, as well as vigorously in times of this season. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4284390

Review of Family - The Joys And Hardships

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Mare ~ extended hiatus

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I picked this item to give my review because there is a charm in the created title, when we talks about family, it always touched our heart, and familiarity within too, because it creates a good imagery, the home we came from.
And you are almost right, in all the stated views and opinions in this piece of article of yours, its short or in few words but its already compact in good thoughts, that we always found security in our family or the home that we came from, whatever that kind of "home", whoever the members who built that home, we always or can't replace them to anyone. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4284330

Review of Carly's Guestbook

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 💙 Carly

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I always love to hang out guest book by WDC members, because I always found a uniqueness on them, and reflect by each members own personality, and that is why I picked this piece of yours to sneak and give my review.
The guestbook is simple but its already stated there the important things that we should expect and might be impress in a guestbook like:
a sincere greetings,
cute images,
the authors simple bio,
the authors fave items.
Though, its still on constructed, but i found it it is well enough to entertain visitors.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4284316

Review of Lincoln Penny

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

My first impression why I picked this piece of yours to have a read and give my review is Penny, I linked this to coin, Lincoln is not familiar to me, but I guess this is a kind of coin in which it sounds interesting to me.
The best thing that I liked after pondering the created body is the form or style that you used, the enjambment where in it helps the speed of reading to make it slow and smooth, makes me the reader to have the chance to think or chew it finely the words specially the given thoughts, to understand it vividly. It stimulate also the intended emotion as well as reflect properly the created rhyme and rhythm.
This is about our standing to people, or what might they look or impression to us.
Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4284152

Review of Birthday Surprize

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 💙 Carly

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick this piece of yours while flopping and flipping my wings into your portfolio to have a read and give my review because it sounds interesting. The thing that hooked on me is the word birthday because birthday always creates and gives a good imagery, a celebration, happy thoughts, and what's more a surprise, I always like to give surprises to my friends and while pondering on the scribbled body these are my impression and comment about it.
Setting- is fine, and simple, though, its not the main thing that emphasized in the story but for clinging on it in the incidence the setting was properly described as well.
Characters- The story have a few characters, but some narrating thing as well as their moving and dialogue, they were properly and fit introduced in the story specially their personality.
Length- The length is good, not short and not quite long to handle and create an impact.
Language- The language that were used is for everybody.easily grasp that makes to have a vivid and smooth reading.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4283368

Review of Determined To Make Your Way

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 💙 Carly

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. A good imagery specially if it touched the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
The scribbled body is encouraging or the tone have a sincere diplomatic advice from a friend to become being determine. It reflects wisdom as well as sincerity, its in free verse and it helps to stimulate the desired emotion.

My favorite lines are:

Knowing you are not alone
God guides your steps
Stands by you as you face the battles
That come at you with ferocious force. Well Done!
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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4283334

Review of How Do You

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is intriguing, a kind of interrogating, though you didn't used a question mark, but the tone on it, that is one that hook to pick and have a read and give my review in this piece of yours.
And as I ponder the scribbled body, I liked the way how you formed it, its like it was naturally stating and showing, I say showing because the created imagery is vivid, maybe the words that you used. I liked also the enjambment form that you used in the last part, it makes the poem to be appealing and interesting. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4283101

Review of For Raina At 22

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I liked the simpleness of this created short story but at the end it creates an impact. The thing that made me hook is using a name in the given title, which gives me an impression that this girl is something special.
And as I read the scribbled body, I liked the sentiment on it, and the created emotional that reminds me of something in remembering, specially the ending part. Its a good story in few words.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4282782

Review of Last Man Standing

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick this piece of yours to give my third review for your Teddy Bear Gift basket goodies because the given title reminds me or gives an impression to me of those action movies that I've watched and do like to watch, in other words reminds me of warrior who left standing after a battle or when the story or movie reached its end.
And as i ponder the scribbled body, I link this to be like a song, because some stanza were repeated, but its fine, because it makes like an echo while reading it, I find this as a reminding of being not into quit, maybe I didn't grasp some of its meaning because of being an ESL my apology for that, but the emotion that I reflect is something strong and inspiring. Well Done

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4282778

Review of November Rain

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Kit

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Using a name in symbolized something always gives or charm a reader because it gives an impression of something mystery or riddle which gives challenges to any reader passing by to find out what is it, and the noun-rain you used mixing it with the proper noun November have a fascinating appeal,a description like a wet or rainy winter in which the given thought is dullness.

I liked how you formed the poetry into enjambment format it makes or help to make a dramatic flow, the words you used also are light and gives an impression of tenderness.
I liked also that you are incorporate some awesome famous soft rock love song, it gives an appeal to the poem. Well Done!
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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4282238

Review of Sarcasm in its ugliest fine form

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

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A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
What makes me drawn into this piece of yours is the given word in the title-Sarcasm.
Sarcasm is good when its not vulgar or meant to be sarcasm. The given title creates an impression that sarcasm is really not quite fine, as you used the word ugliest, but when I try to ponder at the given body, the thing that I liked is the sarcasm as my first impression in the title is just tender, or words that you used are appealing, not harsh as you like to be the impression in the title.
I liked the line that you linked to the poem couplet and some modern words that were used today, they make the poem lively and inviting. Well Done!

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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4282201

Review of Reaching for a Rainbow

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

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A pleasant hour, Kit

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The word rainbow always gives a good imagery, or impression, I can't think any thing that this word will emphasis something negative, its serve also a symbol of covenant that God gives to humanity that He will always be in peace with humankind. (Genesis9: 8-16). And its good that you used or gave that impression in here.
The thought in the body just like the given title is inspiring and encouraging.
I liked that you begin it with a modulated imagery- creating or making drawn your reader attention until reaching the middle stanza which gives an impact or more stimulating inspiring words and then slowly return to its normal impact when I am reaching the ending part. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4281099

Review of Here, there and everywhere else...

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour, Fivesixer

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Happy Holidays, Norb.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I do love mellow and oldies song liken the Beatles song and its good, the given title reminds me of one of their song- Here, There and Everywhere, that first impression hooked me to choose this piece of yours in your portfolio to have a read and give my review.

I best thing that I do appreciate and I liked is the way or in orderly formed and approached style that you used. I can say you already found your unique style in expressing words because of all the poems that I already read , its only now that I encountered a different poetry style, its like writing it naturally, no obscured words that were used, or no fancy. Making the lines in the enjambment it helps a lot to stimulate the emotion.
I liked how you in properly arranged the theme or subject in every stanza:
from the luckiest day to the loveliest day.
This reflects inspiration in day today. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and.
Just a doubt arise me here in these two lines.

for some pretty serious anti-depressants.
But it isn't the pain of being let down

Using the word let and combine it with the word down gives an impression or make the reader into confusing. Why not dropping the word let, it will make the idea be clearer.

But it isn't the pain of being down

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4278244

Review of Dance of the Vanquished

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

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A pleasant hour, Kate - Writing & Reading

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I am fascinated when I first saw this piece in your portfolio. The word dance and vanquished hooked me because they give a good imagery, dance its an art or an expression of something and vanquished are the one who won or in victory.
The title gives a good impression.

There are some words that in the scribbled body in which being an ESL its not immediate for me to grasp, but mixing it with familiar words it gives and balanced the meaning and given thought.
I think this is not intended to have a rhyming, but its good because it helps and gives more enthusiasm on its mode to be in victory.

The given thought is good, it defines victory and being in victorious everyone will always have a dance and be dance for it. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4277387

Review of My best season

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is beautiful poem about spring, the enthusiasm the energetic and smooth flow of words gives a feeling of delight and being refresh. I imagine a fresh morning in my garden surrounded by beautiful kinds of flowers, birds are chirping. Its lovely.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Butterflies fluttering in the garden.
A rabbit plays inside the warren.
Winter just said goodbye to you.
Oh, My beautiful spring, I always love you.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4277385

Review of Leaves in Springtime

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
We are still in our way approaching the winter season, but reading this piece of yours makes me feel missed already spring.
Leaves are really changeable in every season and the way how you sketched finely and smoothly gives an impression thinking and missing the spring season.
I like the way how you begin this piece, it links on how spring season begin, and every stanza expressed in a tender voice on how a tiny shoot can give meaning to spring. Lovely.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Morn
Greets you.
Feel her kiss?
Open to her,
And she will bathe you with delightful warmth.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4277383

Review of PITTER PATTER RAINDROPS.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is beautiful, the word pitter patter gives me an impression about rain because I always stumble that when the topic is about rainy days, that hook me to pick this piece of yours.
The crafted lines reflect a good rhythm and rhyme just like how the rain was dripping,
maybe the way how the words were formed in which in creates a good sound as well as have its own comfortability while reading it. Well Done.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Give me the summertime with refreshing winds and rain,
Pitter patter on the roof and gurglings down the drain.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I just only have doubt on the word gurglings you used.
I wonder why you made it as plural- adding an s,
when I try to search in the dictionary it means laughter,
does this mean that there are many laughter?

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4277377

Review of Stygian Souls

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The word Stygian fascinates me to pick this piece of yours, it gives me an impression
to be a good name of a warrior. And as I ponder the thoughts between the scribbled words in the body, the mode is in slow phase by using the enjambment form in which it helps to stimulate and add a dramatic speed to give time to reader visualize and grasp it the created imagery. Though, this is something in dark or horror by using words that are link in that genre, but its okay, the format and smooth flow gives a tender feeling not to be scared on it, but just mystery. Well Done.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
The skies begin to threaten
the peace of the night,
and wipe out the light
of the stars.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

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#4276877

Review of My Sanctuary

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Gabby B

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Every one can relate on the given title, sanctuary or kingdom, a place or a home that gives as peace at rest and finding our own self.

A title is one of the important part of a piece as well as the body because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled body was narrated well, mostly its concentration is the thought or musing of the main character, I just only found some action in the last part of it because of its incidence or in other words I just only understand the story when I already red it. The thought of it found on the last part and its good.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4275348

Review of A Fall Day

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!! River

This is a review from "WdC Kind Hearts"

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

Fall or Autumn is one of my favorite season, next to summer, because of its magnificent nostalgic beauty. So I always fascinated to pick things and interested in those that are related in this season.
And as I ponder the created body, wow, you did well in describing the beauties of an Autumn season, the changing of natures view from summer to fall, the dramatic transformation of leaves and scent as well as the things that we always do when we reach this season. Thank you for bringing me in those beauties. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE PART IN THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
Reflections of bright orange, deep crimson red and sunny yellow make the calmly flowing river blaze with colour.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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