Samberine Everose's (everose) Reviews

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4308628

Review of Love Isn't Scary

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Rhi C.

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the newbies section and it draws me to pick it, to read and give my review because of the impression in the given title.

The title always serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the words between the scribbled body, I can consider this just like a good advice that we shouldn't be scared in love, I liked how you begin it with the word Don't, it gives an impression of the mood to be firm.
This is my favorite lines which you link it to nature or spring.

Let it remind you of the lilies
Blooming in the spring
It brings something new

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, I marked my doubt in red and my suggestion is in green color, take it if you like and ignore if you don't like. Thank you.

Don't let fear of - you forgot to add a pronoun you here
Don't let fear you

of an ending love,
which make you avoid it altogether.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4308316

Review of New Priority

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!jmagisano

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this piece of yours in the newbies section, it sounds interesting because the title mentioned about priority, and I think about goal, specially mixing it with the word new, creates a fresh or an important thing that everyone must have to reach.

The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The words scribbled in the body is just fine, as I read it, it gives me an impression to be in the fast speed, for not using some punctuation marks that may control the speed of a piece, the enjambment format helps also on the emotion that reflects naturally.The mood is strong.

This is related to things that the government first priority to do.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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14 days may be credited.

Please visit my Favorite Authors Portfolio this March, 2017 featured in "Welcome to my Garden of Creativity " - fyn The Dark Faery

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#4308312

Review of Loneliness

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Just Me

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the newbies section, I pick it to have a read as well as give my review because the given title draws me. Every one can relate on it,and I already expect what's behind on it, but knowing from the brief description that this is about some personal view and opinion, it took me to be interested, because I believe that every human have their own uniqueness of views/opinions in everything.

And I as ponder on the created word in the body, I can say that you did well in expressing your opinion about loneliness, specially stating it using or considering the way how you feel and how the way others feel. As I read and continue reading between the lines, I get much deeper on the way how you want this word loneliness elaborate. It reflects mostly the emotions that you included and naturally flow while I am reading it. Using your voice in the first person, helps a lot to stimulate the emotions within the piece. Well Done.

My own personal opinion- Being alone sometimes is a choice, some human prefer or find happiness when they are alone, but if the feeling of loneliness comes to us when we are alone, that is a different thing already. We always know what will makes us happy.
I find happiness before in being alone, because that is where I have the chance to be close to our Creator, and to discover more or to know more about myself, that is where I discovered more and develop my passion in writing, and that makes me unwelcome loneliness. Friends helps a lot also. We can find friends everywhere, and each one can be possibly to be our good friends.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4308287

Review of Untitled

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!rowanne1303

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in the newbie section, I was entice to pick it because it doesn't have any specific title, I always love to know the beauty within each on the titles that was given to any piece.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I was surprised to know upon reaching the body that this item was written in the language that I used to know-tagalog, and found out after by snooping in your biography that you are a Filipino. Welcome to WDC again.
You already have your first step being a registered author here, by expressing yourself and sharing your writings here.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have doubts for you to consider, pick it if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you.

I understand all that you had written, of course I understand tagalog,
You express your feelings on it,
I also express my feelings through poetry, and the way you express is in line with a prose.

I would suggest you to write it or write your writings here in the English language,
English language is an international language which mostly understand it.
And I believed you understand it also, even if its not your first language like me.
So that you will receive many reviews, your writing will be hone, and you will learn more from others view and opinions.

Members and Authors here are very friendly and kind, and they are willing to help specially in improving writings, being here for already 4 years makes me to love this place and become them like my second family.

So, I encourage you to write On and express more.

If you need any help, don't hesitate to email me, by clicking the envelope beside my username. Samberine Everose

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4308251

Review of love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!cloud number 9

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the newbies section, I was hooked to pick it and have some read as well as give my review after because the given title lure me.
Well, the word love always gives a good imagery and impression, as they said without love no one will quite here, love makes the word go round as some old saying, but its always been true, we still love to live so we still breathing and trying to have a part and do our purpose here on earth.
So the given title gives me an interesting perspective and view.

The scribbled words in the body is in few words, I think its still in draft and lacking some things, or quite blur for me.
But you did great in expressing it, and I try to link it in the given title, well it shows the scribbled body is something metaphorical.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some doubt that arise while I am reading it. Please see it below, I marked my doubts in red and my suggestion is in green color. These are only my opinion as a reader,it varies in others, please pick if you like and just ignore of you don't like. Thank you.

The title- making the first letter to be in capital letter will emphasize that this word is more special and important.

The Body:

All shows are not seeing eye (comma here) to see the rest of the mind
without comma, it gives a blur meaning

If you do not see what the mind does that keep(keeps) (in)the heart?

girls wait- why girls wait, I can't see any link on the line above, please
expand it more.
I'll be back, of course come back-no need to add this, makes reiterate the words in the line.

when i am back- when I will return back
Your name is written in the heart

i am in love with the mountains-this line doesn't link already

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4304632

Review of I am The River

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!M.J. DeLuna

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives a metaphorical meaning, making the article and noun in capital letter, emphasis that this is something special.

Title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The created words in the body is good and its like the given title where in is metaphorical too. The way how you used the enjambment format gives and control the speed of the piece, which gives your reader to visualize and comprehend it the given thoughts and meaning, this enhance also the line break and stimulate the emotion.

I link this to the one we are following in our life. The Path and The Way we chose to follow.
Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#2112528 by Samberine Everose

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#4304620

Review of Ten to One

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!IntricateMind

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find the created title to be interesting, though my first impression is about math, in which one of my favorite subject during college except algebra, but I wonder also the format is in descending order.

The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I think this is a kind of biography, and its unique how it was created, using the theory of descending form and numbers is quite interesting to any reader, not just like a typical format of biography. Its good also that you begin by stating all your inner qualities and not physical qualities. I can say that this is a good introduction for a guestbook, there is also a challenging question there on the last part, making this to be a guestbook by creating a forum on it, can easily answer the challenge stated.
Let me know if you would like to create one, and I will help on it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#2112528 by Samberine Everose

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#4304613

Review of Mom's Revange

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+

| (2.0)

A pleasant hour!Wyjebnik2

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the newbies section, I picked it because the given title sounds interesting to me. The word revange hooked me but when I try to find its meaning in the dictionary, I can't find that word there other than word revenge. You might mean revenge.

I think this is still in draft, and I can say this will be a great story. Though, there is a story already but there are elements which are not yet stated or reflected.
You might like to continue it, please let me know if you already finish and I will change my rating and give you a review.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#2112528 by Samberine Everose

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#4304609

Review of Beauty

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!SilverRaven

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interesting and capturing it gives a good imagery and impression.
Linking this or using this to name things gives an impression to be good and precious.
Knowing that this is about your friend draws me to know more about it, because true friends are like gem and they are hard to find.

I can say that the scribbled body is good, I liked the correct used words which finely described your friend and the good things and how he express his care to you. My favorite pet is cat also and he is my friend too, he likes to seat besides me when I am reading or doing works, he likes to kiss my foot too, and feels just like I'm a princess. But it change when I already have my child , because I already give my full attention to my little one, even if I don't have so much time for him now, my pet cat is still there,he is truly a real friend.

You did well in expressing about your true friend. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#2112528 by Samberine Everose

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#4302600

Review of Oh Magnum Mysterium

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Chazzz

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the newbies review section. I picked it immediately because the given title gives me an impression to be emotional, or in the lyrical voice. By using the interjection Oh, it gives a strong emotion, but I wonder, why you didn't add an exclamation point so that the impression will be more strong and firm.

A title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
The scribbled words in the body is lyrical, and beautiful.
I can say you did great in weaving the music into words, like a sonata.
The broken lines how they formed stimulate the emotions, and the wording within the stanza are all smooth and metaphorical. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#2110571 by Samberine Everose

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#4301440

Review of World Peace

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Jay O'Toole

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Happy Valentine's Day, Dad.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

As I sneaking some poems in your portfolio, this one draws me immediately because of the good impression that brings, talking about World peace is very up on to date, nowadays, this sounds informative and might be opinionated.

The first thing that I liked is the smooth flow of every lines withing the rhyme and rhythm, where in I found them as natural and not been forceful in using. The given thought is strong and gives an impact to encourage every one about the Peace that (will)comes and will stay to those who will accept Him.
This is my favorite stanza:

The Peace of Man will come to Earth,
when men in pieces come to change,
Admitting fault, receive new birth,
and by their Maker are arranged.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4299643

Review of BASICS OF WRITING

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Nimmay

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the newbies reviewing section, i picked it because it draws me for stating the word that I think everyone will eventually charmed on it. Writing.
If we have that passion-writing,whether it is small or great, anyone would like to know and want to learn more about it.

And I found this as an informative piece, its neat and clear, stating the basic on how writing goes on, as well as full of encouragement to Write, that everyone whether if its an amateur or expert can write, cuz we have its own uniqueness or own views.
I liked also that you enumerated things that enable to encourage one to write. The words or the voice that you used are for everybody and can easily understood but in the professional manner. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4299639

Review of Buddy

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Lady Elf

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple, it is the modern way or a form of endearment of addressing to our friends, but making it only in one word in the title gave an impression to be special or precious.

The title of a piece serve as main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled body is in few words, but every stanza already captured best meaning and means of being a friend or having them as our buddy.
Making the words in that way- scribbled fine gave an impact specially the story within.
Its simple, all the wordings, anyone can grasp, but the emotion is powerful, it gives an impact specially when reaching the ending part about losing a friend.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4296902

Review of I Was So Embarrassed

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, ~WhoMe???~

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title draws me immediately to have a read and give my review in this piece of yours, for having an impact of emotion on it.
Its an statement that anyone can be hook and look at it as an interesting thing.

I liked the story withing the scribbled words in the body, something amusing.
Though its short but interesting.

You begin it with a nice setting, letting to pull your audience/readers attention by describing the things surrounds the character and what she/he is doing.

You didn't intentionally introduced your characters here, but its fine because the way they move and talk, the reader already sense their personality.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4296625

Review of Here Again We'll Never Meet

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, GabriellaR45

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I was hook immediately in this piece of yours while roaming in your port because of the lyrical effect and impression of the title.
I liked the created rhythm on it, and just like the created title the scribbled body is more beautiful, because it emphasized and define more in there the meaning of the created title.
I find this as a sad love, and I liked the created imagery, its colorful, it took me your reader to be in a different sentimental place. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
A tree covered path, a grassy lea.
Witnessed by a warbling wren,

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4295489

Review of Twins

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour,Winnie Kay

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased member in the
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I'm your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

The given title draws me immediately, while looking for something to review in your port, specially stating in the brief description about their individuality. Twins sounds interesting to know about them.
Though, these two are look alike, but they have their own distinguishing part.

I really liked the story within the scribbled words in the body, the way you express is it is fine and in order, there is a smooth reading while trying to pondering it.
I see some few contraction that you used, sometimes it gives me an impression that its hard to read and gives a kind of slang but your poem gives a nice flow on it. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
They now have diff’rent lives to live,
But when one falls in pain,
His brother’s there with love to give,
And two are one again.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4295106

Review of IN LOVE WITH YOU ALWAYS PART 1

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour,The lonely writer

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Everyone can relate on the given title, It reminds me of some lyrics in a song, using the word love gives a good imagery and impression, I found it something sweet.

The title is one of the important part as well as the body of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I felt and reflect the emotions that you like to emphasize here, though the story have only one incident, but the feeling and thrill of the author is reflected.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I think this is still in draft and waiting for its continuation, and I know this will be a good story.
I just have some few comments below in order to create a much smooth flow while reading it.
Pick if you like and ignore if you don't like, these are just only my own opinion, others may differ.

The punctuation marks, don't forget to put them, specially comma and period, this will give a nice flow and control the speed in reading.

The use of capital and small letters- We always begin a sentence in the capital letter, and small when we continue a sentence or after a comma.
Don't forget that we used capital letters in proper noun like names.

There some part of it that is redundancy, I understand it because of the feelings while we are writing it, expressing an emotion. I suggest that you should create or give or chose a good adjective in one word that will describe the feeling that you had been, or a sentence that links to something like for instance:

It reminds me of a fine summertime, the first time that I saw her.
That I even forgot my next class coz I was stunned peering to the most beautiful girl
that I've ever met.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4295102

Review of Is it okay to not be okay??

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour,Viji

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick your piece to have a read and give my review because the given title sounds interesting, other than being an interrogative statement.The given impression have a contrast.

A title as well as the body is one of the important element of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I liked the created character in the body, I can say it was defined properly,
I also liked the created rhyme and rhythm its naturally reflect and not force full.
Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have doubt on the given title. I just think there is a word you've forgot to put there,and one punctuation mark( question mark) will be fine already.
you might mean
Is it okay, for not being okay?

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4293547

Review of The Making

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Adding an article adjective The in the given title because you begin it in capital letter gives an impression not only something special but also there's an important on it, in which this impression will give an interesting thought to find about it.

I liked the simplicity or how the words were scribbled in few words but the given thought is compact and deep. I liked also the created form, I don't know if you intended to shaped it like that, but it goes it naturally. Well Done!

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4293544

Review of Flower's

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!dbingham3

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title creates a good imagery, it is one of the wonderful beauties of nature. Flowers have different and own beauties also. A bouquet of flowers always gives a delightful feeling whenever we see or received one.

The title of a piece serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled words in the body are fine, describing the used and beauty of this wonderful creation.
The created imagery is light and tender, and creates colorful.
I liked how it begin, using an interrogative statement, it gives the reader to find out more. Great job!

My Favorite Lines are:

If God can do this with flowers
Than just think, what can He do with us
If only we would allow Him full access

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have doubt on some few lines, pick it if you like and ignore if your don't like. Thank you.
I marked my doubt in red and green is my suggestion.

These say many things - you might mean they
They say many things
Add prepos.- on here. How you see them, how you use them
On how you see them, on how you use them

A joy He desired to give to one daily
Oh the many scents that they give off - this line is not link on the line before it. I found it force full and not naturally express it.

Can bring a smile to one's face
Though, we already sense the thing that you are stating here but adding the word
they will create a smooth reading.
They can bring a smile to one's face

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4293535

Review of A Hard day

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!Solidus

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece hook me to read and give my review because of the impression that I reflected in the given title. This might an impression about a day that passed, or something that had happened so it was considered to be a hard day, I would like to find out.

A title as well as the body is one of the important of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I first admired the way how the rhyme and rhythm went through, it goes it natural. The given thoughts is good also creating an emotion or an expression about a day, we always have different views about it specially on what we encountered or experienced it everyday, and this one is another kind of it. Great job!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4293029

Review of Point of views

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Cecelia Gallerani

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS AND IMPRESSION

My first impression is I first link this in a kind of way in creating a story, because the given title creates a informative mood.

Just like the scribbled body,the title holds one of the important part of a piece because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I reflected a beautiful thought in the scribbled words in the body, I feel it, so I can say its emotional. Lines are some kind of poetic as well as metaphor. The imagery is good, you hook me in the beginning using an sculpture and the art of sculpturing.
I can say this is an emotional piece. Great!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
My only doubt is the word piece-
particular peice of art resembled- (the letters in the piece are in ramble)

I suggest also some breaking of lines or spacing to make it more emotional and dramatic.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4291325

Review of My war

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!Chad

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found your piece in the Newbies Section, I pick it to give my review because the given title gives me an impression to be appealing and interesting, though I already have a clue what will this all about, but knowing about war is a kind of adventure to me, it reminds me of my grandpa in times when he still here, and used to tell me about his adventure when he is also in the war during the world war 2.

I think the scribbled body, is still in the phase of beginning, but I liked how the beginning goes, it hooked me already,and I know this will be one of great story.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I think that this is still in draft and still in progress, I hope to read more on it.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4290642

Review of Canvas

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Rhoswen - Relentless Victory

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The word canvas is always close to my heart, because I used to have that. Canvas always creates a good impression because this can we possibly see a beautiful picture or view or image that will left some inspiration or joy in us.
So that impression is the one that hook me why I picked this piece of yours to have my read and give my review.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one is important, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Every line creates a good thought as well as have a poetic style.
It just like a beautiful painting that paints in a canvas. I can reflect different colors but mostly this are vibrant and fine colors, though I can see some dark colors but it succumb by the vibrant colors, and I liked it that is the way how we are designed by God. Great job!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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