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Samberine Everose

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Poems-any genres except erotica

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#4254660

Review of At the traffic lights

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Abe

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Every one can relate on the given title, because it gives or it talks about place, using a prepositional phrase and the preposition at where it links to place, so my first impression in the body of this piece is about what happened beyond or in the traffic lights. Very interesting to find out.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The thing that I most like is the story behind the words of this piece of yours.
Every words is fit and evokes emotion, even if some lines are seems to be long but it just proper to give a vivid picture of the encounter to a prison.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, but I just wonder why you didn't use any punctuation marks or even a comma or a period. Punctuation marks helps to stimulate emotion as well as give a pause or breathing part, or the speed reading of the reader.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4254413

Review of My world

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jenny Leigh

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Review Section, I pick it because the given title seems so interesting and it reflects an emotional thing which its to important to know, maybe by using the possessive pronoun My, and blending it with the word world which reflects to everything.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the given body, I can say that all the scribbled words creates or stimulate an emotion as well as a good description.
I like also the natural rhythm and rhyme that were create while reading this piece of yours, and specially at the last stanza in which this piece were truly dedicated.
I also have a little one, and all the things you've scribbled are perfectly fit to describe every mother feel for their precious baby.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4254409

Review of In The Air

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!TanyaWrite

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Review Section. I pick it because it sounds interesting to me, using the word air, where in it links to nature.
As air is one of the important needs of human being, it is the thing we breath.
So my impression is this is about nature's beauty.
And nature's beauty is one of the beautiful things which God inspiring creation.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled words in the body is in few words, no wonder because this is in the haiku form. But the thing that I most like is, its compact and the chosen words your weaved is in fit to capture the beauty of nature to behold. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4253272

Review of The Architect

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC and this is my birthday review gift also. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

But please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece draws me to pick immediately to have a read and give my review, because I was lure on the given title.
The word Architect is one of those words or profession that has been close to my heart, not just because it creates a good imagery, but its very familiar to me, it took me 5 years to learn and to know that profession, and reminds me of something personal and sentimental where in trying to achieve that profession because its my Dad dreams to me.

As I go inside the body, I didn't expect that this is a short story, but it gives an interesting impression.
Its a scene, something related in that business, Yup! because I found the word blue print, foot, buildings, auditors, though being an ESL there are some words that being used in the sentence that is blur and its hard for me to figure it, but I think the story talks about a father who are planning or testing his son if his son will be able to meet his standard to being a head of his company.

The setting is quite blur to me also, maybe just because I found many dialogue,
dialogue is good, they can give an action or make the story moving, but too much
dialogue will give a very active impression of the scenario of the story and it doesn't have its breathing part, like to take slow on the imagery of the reader while reading, so there is also need to have a narrating part of a story.

I can say this is a good story, but maybe for being an ESL some parts I didn't catch, my apology for that.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4253270

Review of The Sweetest Kiss

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my welcome GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC and also my gift to you in celebrating your Birthday here in WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

The given title already tells a lot of being so romantic, and sentimentalist.
I think there's nothing beat in the first kiss, the given title reminds me also of on old movie that I've watched, 50 dates if I am not mistaken by Drew Barrymore and forgot the actor.
But everyone can lure on it, because this all reminds something true and real.
The scribbled words in the body is very romantic like the given title.
I like the story behind, words you used are just fit to describe the feelings, the emotions evokes arises in those words.
I mostly like the proper created rhyme and rhythm, they are naturally reflect without the impression of forcing to have it.
Well Done!

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I played your song upon the keys,

I wonder if you know how to play the piano, you've mentioned here about keys, or maybe it just a figure of speech. But I like it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4253085

Review of Have you met my pal?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you sincere thank you review for donating funds in my group "THE WDC Celebrity Author's Group"

This will help to support the upcoming activities of the group and encourage WDC members to be a WDC Celebrity Author.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick this piece of yours while dropping in into your Portfolio to see for something to review. What makes me entice is because of the given title, if we used and interrogating title, we are giving our audience to be a part of our writings so by asking it like the given title that you gave creates an interesting effect to readers like me and would like to know who is that pal that the author is talking about.

As I ponder at the given body, the first thing that I noticed is this is in few words, but the enthusiasm is in there, there is a lively aura within the poem, maybe by using a limerick format, by making the rhyme and rhythm in that way it stimulate the emotion. Nice words in describing your pal. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4252715

Review of The Artist

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Quick-Quill

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title draws me first, though the word is just simple but the meaning is deep. Artist are person who can see some uncommon things or have an eye to appreciate real beauties that a common person can't see.
With the brief description, any one can really charmed in this piece of yours knowing that an artist can paint in two worlds, that is interesting.

As I read and ponder the body, the setting of the story is good, its vivid and précised. They are smoothly describe while narrating it.
The sequence is in order, it begins an intriguing the main character to make the reader curious about it, then luring the reader through the sequence of the story which every detail is quite interesting until it reach to the ending part, which is already the concluding part.
The one that good in the story is in the way in which the story were created gives the reader not to determine immediately its ending so there is the capacity of the story that you hold the readers attention through stating things that can be unbelievable, the part that the other artist is in doubt in the work of his friends that is one point or ability that you already hold the readers attention.
Well Done!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4252416

Review of Why Do I Write the Way I Do?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm your new friend and student Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here, this is a part also of the reviewing activity in the newsfeed which brought to you by pay it forward.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interrogating. That is the charming point of the given title, words accompanied by a question mark always lure the reader or you give a curios effect to your reader to find the answer of the one that were asking for in the given title.
So why do we write the way we do, wow! what a good question where in reader can also think of that way. That is the interesting thing so reader like me would like to know what is inside this piece of yours.

A title of a piece is one that will be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the given body, the first thing that is very attractable is the created rhyme and rhythm of every stanza. I like how you did it in that way where the words you used are in order and in its proper place so the natural rhyming and rhythm reflect on it. I like also the thought of every stanza where in it talks about the purpose of our writings and the way how we captured our inspirations.

My Favorite Stanza:
I smell the world in chocolate chips
and taste the wine, that flows,
That hurricane of words, it grips
the head down to the toes.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4251555

Review of Fortune Teller

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Georgina Antoinette

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my welcome GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

My tiny wings brought me into the newbies section and found your piece there.

The given title is the one that hook me to choose this nice piece of yours, because it creates a good imagery to me.
Fortune teller gives an interesting effect to the reader because knowing that through this medium that can perceive or for-tell our future.
Sometimes I just think that this is some kind of magic, or having a magic spell, or maybe they really have a third eye.

A word whether it in short or long, if it stir the emotion through experience, likes and favourites as well as creates a good imagery to the reader, it gives a good impression and an eagerness to know to enter to that item.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I like the given aura on it, it took me into a magical land where in I see or talk to a fairy giving or dusting that my wishes will be granted.
Nice chose of words that will make and entice the imagery of this piece.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4251548

Review of I Need A Wish

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Fen

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writing as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick again this piece of yours in the Newbies Reviewing Section because it draws me by the word wish you used as the title.
Wish always creates a good impression and imagery, wish always reminds me when I was still in my kid years, yearning a wish and hoping a wish if this will be granted.
So as times flew by wish still didn't change its given thought and impression, any wish is need to be granted.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The created body links into the given title, I like words that you used it gives a subtle impression though when we perceive a lot I imagined this to be dark, and yup! this is an emotional piece. I like also the story within this piece.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have doubt on this line-Just what an idiot I am.
It just to harsh for me, it distract the smooth flow of the piece and also it didn't rhyme like the others.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4251542

Review of Hear The Storm

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Fen

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

,and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble into your piece in the Newbies Reviewing Section, I pick it to give my review because it hook me on the chosen title you decided to give.
Though, its simple, and everyone can relate on it, but when I try to muse it gives me an interesting thought and the desire to know what you hear in the storm, or maybe what you listen while storm is coming.
I don't like storm, but I have an good impression that you hear some good things on it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Wow! what an interesting piece you created, listening and what you heard when storm is here.
Using personification and using active verbs that really fit and describe well the emotions and the good thought of this piece.
I love the created romance on it. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4251538

Review of Johnny Learns to Rhyme the Letter "A"

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the Newbies reviewing Section. I pick it just because the given title is very interesting to me, I see a story on it and second I would like to give you a review as my way of saying thank you to you for giving mea review before.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the given body, the first line creates an interesting beginning
It reminds me of some nursery rhyme for children, using also the word apple creates a good imagery, setting the readers mind to expect that this piece of yours will be something cheery.

I like also the created story inside this piece, and the given lesson on it about following some important rules in life.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, though there are some words that I think you intended to spelled it that way as following the principle or idea of the letter A here, but I can say its just distract when the poem is to be read. But its okay when I read it again.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4250774

Review of Propriety

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and se some sci fi static of yours because we are also having our Group Raid review.

But please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple, but it gives a deep thought.
Maybe after finishing to read the story I will be going to understand why you chosed that title for this story, as of now, its not clear to me.

As I ponder the body of the piece, I like how you trying to hook the reader slowly by beginning a scene that will set their mind through stating an interesting main topic-about the CHIP, then follows the crowd, the people of how this CHIP will be useful to people and then on the last paragraph stating and introducing your main character here, where he came from and what he think. He object about the CHIP.
Well that will make the reader being curious also because you showed here clearly the setting and maybe the main ingredient/problem of this story.

You just only used few dialogue here but it just right, it seems that its not boring because you made the setting very interesting and the words you used are in general.

I think this piece of yours is not yet finish, so I am looking forward to read the continuation.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, i just have doubt in putting an acronym there.
Acronyms are important to know by readers, if you put an acronym you should also state its meaning, like the POW.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4250771

Review of ONCE GIANTS VOL 1 - The Size Queen

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 18+

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review specially in the sci-fi genre because we are also doing a raid group review.

But please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The word giants hook me to enter and see what's inside in this piece of yours, and found out that this is a link to the more big and I think its a great website.
I also think that this is a kind of advertisement, and the simple caption below that you will be rooboting the series is already captivating to enticed the reader.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

Maybe you might like to add more images.
Images are very attracting to an audience or reader, even the image of the character are very much eye catching already.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4250743

Review of Me Mathair’s Shillelagh

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The poem is short and there are words that are slang and I think this is a nice poem.
I think about a mother who is taking care of her daughter.
Maybe you can translate it in English so that everyone like me will really understand it. But I know this is a great poem.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4250739

Review of From the Shore

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is simple, everyone can relate on it, but the interesting effect that can hook a reader is the impression of a place. Shore what is there in the shore in which that things came from.
Inside the body and when I try to ponder the different lines, the most thing that I like is the lyric kind like a song while reading the lines.
I like also the punctuation that you added, it stimulate the emotion, the woes and sorrow of the main character.
I like also the story inside this poem, I can say its a great poetry.
Well Done!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4249424

Review of Work and Happiness

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Himanshu Jasrotia

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Corner, I definitely pick it while seeing the given title, it sounds interesting to me, because using the two words Happiness and Work and blending it gives an impression of things that might be consider as some significant things to human. It gives a concrete impression that I might get a good read and nice thought on it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the body, I can say that this is a great opinion or views about work and happiness. Yup! Mostly now in the modern word, work are one of the main thing that always devour our time, You right, because of money, sometimes power or glory, but other they work for others for service, they work because others need them. And its true also that we shouldn't prioritize our work, as long as we can family should be first. Simplicity of life style is the best, because once we change the simpleness of our life style, work can already be demanding, because we try to achieve what life style we are having and try to maintained it.
All in all this is a good thought and opinion, its only in short paragraph but the meanings are compact.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4249420

Review of The Language of Eyes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jellybean4401

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Eyes is one of the expressive part of our face. Its the mirror of our soul. Looking the eyes of other will definitely gives us a clue who she/he is. It can also serve as the mirror. The lips can deny our true feelings, but not our eye. We can see through our eyes when we are sad, crying, happy, or angry.

I like how you chose the eye as your topic here, it inspired me to write also someday about the mystery of the eyes.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The body is simple, like the topic-eye, but all the verb and adjective words here describe well and fit well to the eyes.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, the only thing that I doubt is the last line, all the word that you used are all verb and adjective but on the last line that ends the poem its only a continuation, maybe it best if the last line should be used a strong verb.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4249415

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Zacharie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the Newbies corner, what makes me to pick it
because the word blue though its only one word creates many things or imagery to think about it.
Blue can be a color, a name, an emotion, so blue sounds interesting to me.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The body is in few words, but I like the given aura on it. It gives an impression that you are proud for having Blue as your pet.
This is in few words but I think you captured enough and shows it to your reader of what is significant and important about Blue. Nice!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the last part, or what I mean the last or ending part is misleading.
She didn't eat your other one yet!

Using the pronoun your here and other gives a misleading statement what is the other thing that you are pointing here.

I think about the other shoe, but its blur.
If this line says about the shoe which Blue like to eat
You might consider saying:

She didn't eat the other one yet!

or She will not eat the other one yet!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248952

Review of Greeting the Ex-

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Schnujo is Late to Lannister

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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thank you for all your help with the two writings. are you my friend and the ducks aren't happy.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The title of a piece should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part, the given title seems obscure to me at first but when I try to understand it, this gives an interesting title that readers may not perceived it immediately but gives a nice thought at the end.

I like stories that was written in few words its compact and there are no words
that can be wasteful. I can say that you have a good snap shot on the incident you like to portray it here. .

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248257

Review of That suits me

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024

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Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcase on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

A word whether it in short or long, if it stir the emotion through experience, likes and favourites as well as creates a good imagery to the reader, it gives a good impression and an eagerness to know to enter to that item.

Method reminds me in terms of format, or a line or procedure for approaching something, thinking that idea lure me to see this interesting piece of yours.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
Though the given idea is simple and we always face it in our everyday routine, but on how you shows it gives an artistic imagery using words that are properly arrange to create the given thought.
This is I think a decision making and you expressed it well in the simple manner
through choosing the clothes what we wear.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248254

Review of Inspirations and Anecdotes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Mare ~ extended hiatus

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcase in the
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Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

I was drawn by the given title while looking for something to review in your Portfolio. The thing that makes it very interesting is the word inspiration, which creates a good effect and gives a good imagery.
I like also anecdotes so I immediately pick it.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I like every scribbled line on it, just like the given title it gives an inspiring and encouragement. Though the words are simple but the given thought and ideas are true and compact.
My favorite lines are:

"If you wait for inspiration to come to you, you're a waiter, not a writer"

"The five most important words: You did a great job."

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4245013

Review of For Shaina

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Cheri Annemos

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
What a beautiful poetry that express a dark emotions about leaving.
This was created only in few words but you showed and scribbled it nicely.
I like also the format, which every line begins with a the article adj- A, this makes the poem enticing to read.
I like also the story within this piece.
Good job!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I just have a doubt on this line:
she's lost the love

Using a contraction that distract that smoothly sailing of words of it.
You might like to drop off the contraction 's on it.

She lost the love...

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4244590

Review of Reflections Revealed

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Sssssh! I'm not really here.

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Wow! what a beautiful snap shot of nature that you have. You painted it with colorful words and creates a beautiful imagery as I ponder it.
You didn't just tell it but showed it smoothly to your reader like me in a nicely touch and gently format of your words.

Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
They stand, those pencil-like sentries of evergreen,
saluting the handiwork of the Creator.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4244588

Review of FRIENDS

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Alexandra

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Wow! What an inspiring poem that talks about our friends.
All the scribbled lines there are all true and good.
Loyal, cheerful, they are always there in our hard times, listening.
All the created lines are inspiring.
I also like the created rhyme and rhythm.
Well Done!

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
True friends are there in the hardest times
Sharing laughter, grief and tears.
They know the best and worst of us,
They're loyal and steadfast over the years.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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