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#4250774

Review of Propriety

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and se some sci fi static of yours because we are also having our Group Raid review.

But please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple, but it gives a deep thought.
Maybe after finishing to read the story I will be going to understand why you chosed that title for this story, as of now, its not clear to me.

As I ponder the body of the piece, I like how you trying to hook the reader slowly by beginning a scene that will set their mind through stating an interesting main topic-about the CHIP, then follows the crowd, the people of how this CHIP will be useful to people and then on the last paragraph stating and introducing your main character here, where he came from and what he think. He object about the CHIP.
Well that will make the reader being curious also because you showed here clearly the setting and maybe the main ingredient/problem of this story.

You just only used few dialogue here but it just right, it seems that its not boring because you made the setting very interesting and the words you used are in general.

I think this piece of yours is not yet finish, so I am looking forward to read the continuation.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, i just have doubt in putting an acronym there.
Acronyms are important to know by readers, if you put an acronym you should also state its meaning, like the POW.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4250771

Review of ONCE GIANTS VOL 1 - The Size Queen

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review specially in the sci-fi genre because we are also doing a raid group review.

But please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The word giants hook me to enter and see what's inside in this piece of yours, and found out that this is a link to the more big and I think its a great website.
I also think that this is a kind of advertisement, and the simple caption below that you will be rooboting the series is already captivating to enticed the reader.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

Maybe you might like to add more images.
Images are very attracting to an audience or reader, even the image of the character are very much eye catching already.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4250743

Review of Me Mathair’s Shillelagh

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The poem is short and there are words that are slang and I think this is a nice poem.
I think about a mother who is taking care of her daughter.
Maybe you can translate it in English so that everyone like me will really understand it. But I know this is a great poem.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4250739

Review of From the Shore

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this August.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is simple, everyone can relate on it, but the interesting effect that can hook a reader is the impression of a place. Shore what is there in the shore in which that things came from.
Inside the body and when I try to ponder the different lines, the most thing that I like is the lyric kind like a song while reading the lines.
I like also the punctuation that you added, it stimulate the emotion, the woes and sorrow of the main character.
I like also the story inside this poem, I can say its a great poetry.
Well Done!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4249424

Review of Work and Happiness

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Himanshu Jasrotia

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

I'm Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Corner, I definitely pick it while seeing the given title, it sounds interesting to me, because using the two words Happiness and Work and blending it gives an impression of things that might be consider as some significant things to human. It gives a concrete impression that I might get a good read and nice thought on it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the body, I can say that this is a great opinion or views about work and happiness. Yup! Mostly now in the modern word, work are one of the main thing that always devour our time, You right, because of money, sometimes power or glory, but other they work for others for service, they work because others need them. And its true also that we shouldn't prioritize our work, as long as we can family should be first. Simplicity of life style is the best, because once we change the simpleness of our life style, work can already be demanding, because we try to achieve what life style we are having and try to maintained it.
All in all this is a good thought and opinion, its only in short paragraph but the meanings are compact.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4249420

Review of The Language of Eyes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Jellybean4401

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Eyes is one of the expressive part of our face. Its the mirror of our soul. Looking the eyes of other will definitely gives us a clue who she/he is. It can also serve as the mirror. The lips can deny our true feelings, but not our eye. We can see through our eyes when we are sad, crying, happy, or angry.

I like how you chose the eye as your topic here, it inspired me to write also someday about the mystery of the eyes.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The body is simple, like the topic-eye, but all the verb and adjective words here describe well and fit well to the eyes.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, the only thing that I doubt is the last line, all the word that you used are all verb and adjective but on the last line that ends the poem its only a continuation, maybe it best if the last line should be used a strong verb.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4249415

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Zacharie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the Newbies corner, what makes me to pick it
because the word blue though its only one word creates many things or imagery to think about it.
Blue can be a color, a name, an emotion, so blue sounds interesting to me.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The body is in few words, but I like the given aura on it. It gives an impression that you are proud for having Blue as your pet.
This is in few words but I think you captured enough and shows it to your reader of what is significant and important about Blue. Nice!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the last part, or what I mean the last or ending part is misleading.
She didn't eat your other one yet!

Using the pronoun your here and other gives a misleading statement what is the other thing that you are pointing here.

I think about the other shoe, but its blur.
If this line says about the shoe which Blue like to eat
You might consider saying:

She didn't eat the other one yet!

or She will not eat the other one yet!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248952

Review of Greeting the Ex-

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Schnujo's in Alabama

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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thank you for all your help with the two writings. are you my friend and the ducks aren't happy.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The title of a piece should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part, the given title seems obscure to me at first but when I try to understand it, this gives an interesting title that readers may not perceived it immediately but gives a nice thought at the end.

I like stories that was written in few words its compact and there are no words
that can be wasteful. I can say that you have a good snap shot on the incident you like to portray it here. .

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248257

Review of That suits me

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!WakeUpAndLive️~Happiness

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Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcase on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

A word whether it in short or long, if it stir the emotion through experience, likes and favourites as well as creates a good imagery to the reader, it gives a good impression and an eagerness to know to enter to that item.

Method reminds me in terms of format, or a line or procedure for approaching something, thinking that idea lure me to see this interesting piece of yours.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
Though the given idea is simple and we always face it in our everyday routine, but on how you shows it gives an artistic imagery using words that are properly arrange to create the given thought.
This is I think a decision making and you expressed it well in the simple manner
through choosing the clothes what we wear.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4248254

Review of Inspirations and Anecdotes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Mare ~ extended hiatus

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcase in the
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Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

I was drawn by the given title while looking for something to review in your Portfolio. The thing that makes it very interesting is the word inspiration, which creates a good effect and gives a good imagery.
I like also anecdotes so I immediately pick it.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I like every scribbled line on it, just like the given title it gives an inspiring and encouragement. Though the words are simple but the given thought and ideas are true and compact.
My favorite lines are:

"If you wait for inspiration to come to you, you're a waiter, not a writer"

"The five most important words: You did a great job."

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4245013

Review of For Shaina

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Cheri Annemos

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
What a beautiful poetry that express a dark emotions about leaving.
This was created only in few words but you showed and scribbled it nicely.
I like also the format, which every line begins with a the article adj- A, this makes the poem enticing to read.
I like also the story within this piece.
Good job!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I just have a doubt on this line:
she's lost the love

Using a contraction that distract that smoothly sailing of words of it.
You might like to drop off the contraction 's on it.

She lost the love...

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4244590

Review of Reflections Revealed

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Wow! what a beautiful snap shot of nature that you have. You painted it with colorful words and creates a beautiful imagery as I ponder it.
You didn't just tell it but showed it smoothly to your reader like me in a nicely touch and gently format of your words.

Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
They stand, those pencil-like sentries of evergreen,
saluting the handiwork of the Creator.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4244588

Review of FRIENDS

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Alexandra

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Wow! What an inspiring poem that talks about our friends.
All the scribbled lines there are all true and good.
Loyal, cheerful, they are always there in our hard times, listening.
All the created lines are inspiring.
I also like the created rhyme and rhythm.
Well Done!

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
True friends are there in the hardest times
Sharing laughter, grief and tears.
They know the best and worst of us,
They're loyal and steadfast over the years.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4244554

Review of Jesus

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi Stallion

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this July.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Jesus is one of those names that when we stumble unto it, there is an enlightenment, hope and inspiration that will strike us, because we all know and believe that through His sacrifice on the cross we already saved from our sins.

I love that you chose Him as your inspiration in creating this inspiring piece of yours, the words are uplifting, and inspiring.
Words of comfort. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Jesus
Got me on my knees, Jesus
You’re everything to me, Jesus
You died for me, how could you be
So kind

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4243236

Review of she met him around..

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Motioncity

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hey, I've seen this piece of yours in the Newbies Review Section, I pick it because the given title sounds good because there is an emotion on it, its like a part of a story, using the punctuation marks ellipsis means there is omitted words and there's a continuation on it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

First of all thank you for expressing your feeling and writing it in a blog form.
I like how the piece was written in red, emphasizing that this is an emotional piece.

It talks about love and hurt. Love always have hurt. If we love someone, expect to have and be in hurt also, even if we didn't not intended to give and have the hurt.
The range of how the pain feelings strike us is that is how the measure of love was given in that person involve of our love. And everybody have the capacity to love because all have emotions, all have hearts.

What I like in your blog piece, is very expressive, emotional.
I think you poured it here all your feelings, and I felt your agony.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some doubt for you to consider. Pick if you like, and ignore if you don't. I marked my doubts in red and my suggestions in green. Thank you.

It was not love at the first sight..Anyhow, (its okay if you don't add article the and conjunction =Anyhow)

Her first reaction towards love has been love and me (comma here) noway (no way!).. She use to run from this four letters word like a plague!

Thats That's when She realized She was changing, The girl who had all the luxrious luxurious in life, a pampered kid in entire family, impatient girl started living for Him, (I wonder why you capitalized the letter H here, it sounds our Creator when you capitalize a letter specially him) love

was something she wanted to spread all over in His life, All the ill treatment of him she suffered patiently, She laughed with Him, Cried for Him, Prayed for Him,

Fought for him....

Everything for Him...,

But Slowly she felt all Her doings that she do are mere waste, The place where she is, People there Had no value of love or feelings, what a dead world she was in??

Lost in crowd she was not able to help herself, still tried to make evrything everything perfect, but failed, every time she tried and more pain she suffered...

She than (then) thought of running away from everything, That was the only way to get ridd rid of her problems...

Today while writing this blog, I just realisedrealize a Tear just (omit just)fell (fall)from my eye may be this is what Love is all about "SACRIFICE"

Sacrifice is something that makes relationship real, And Real relationship has no endings, and no endings means true love!!

"Waiting for him" is all she left with...

Remember also that after a comma, the next line will begin in a small letter because it continues the given thought.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4243227

Review of Time flies

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Eternal

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is captivating, so I pick it immediately in the Newbies Review Section to give a review to your piece. It reminds me of fire flies but this is kind of different because instead of fire you used time to be like flies.
And that gives an enticing effect to readers like me.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I like how the words were pour continuously and express the thought about time, like the flies when they are flying to search for a light.
I also like the created beat of it in every line, while reading it aloud.
But most specially I like the thoughts that gives.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some few doubts of mine that arise while reading this great peace of yours. Pick it if you like and ignore of you don't.
I market my doubts in red and my suggestion in green.

How often do we find
Ourselves sitting and pondering
On the years we left behind (comma here)
Its so sad how quick time flies (period here)
If only we could re-write time
I'd take my watch and throw it far
Not looking back or blinking once (period here)
I'd run so fast with a great big smile
My arms spread wider than a mile
I'd jump, I'd scream, I'd laugh
Hold tightly on all those dear to me The rhyming changes here already suggestion to my life.
And the tears that I would cry
Well those would finally be
Tears of peace, warmth, and gratitude
Oh what it would feel like to be free

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4243223

Review of Weltuntergang

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Wrodmangler

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I tumble your piece in the Newbies reviewing section, I pick it because the given created title is a new word to me, and I'd like to find out, what it means.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Well, I think you are not a native English, and English is your second language like me, I said that because I think the language you used here is your own language.
Maybe, this is a good story if you translate it in the English language, as everybody used here, but its good because you gave me an idea to write a piece in my own native language and write a translation in English.
I would like to return to your piece and give a good review if you will translate this in the English language which everyone understand.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4236839

Review of MIRROR

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Anthony viola

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Reviewing Section. I pick it to have a read and didn't resist to give my review.
The given title gives a good and interesting imagery.
Mirror always gives a good thought, mostly its a reflection.
Mirror is always a reflection of us, what we think and feel to our selves when we are looking in a mirror, it always reflects in there.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled body is emotional, and I like how you used the wisdom of a mirror to show here in your poem about relationship. Love and Hurt.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
Just doubts for you to consider. I marked them in red and my suggestion is in green.

WITHOUT ME (comma here) THERE IS NO WE

WITHOU ME, THERE IS NO US ( Possessive Pronoun is in the third person)

THERE IS NO US (comma here) WITHOUT YOU (period here)

I NEVER KNEW A LOVE COULD FEEL THIS TRUE (period here)

FROM DARK SKIESThis should be in singular, because We have only one boundless sky AND (There should be a numerical adjective here because you stated many stars= THOSE )BRIGHT STARS (period here)

FROM DARK SKY AND THOSE BRIGHT STARS.

ILL (Should be I will because your poem begins in a formal tone) I'll is good if the format is in casual. ALWAYS REMEMBER WHO YOU ARE (period here)

I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER WHO YOU ARE.

FOR ME I AM YOU !

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4236823

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Stormy

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Blue is one of the charming cool colors in the color palette or wheel. Sometimes it perceive as a dull color when blended with some dark hues. Others, blue have also the peaceful element or impression like the blue sky, or an indefinite space.
Blue is beautiful.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The lines you scribbled shows awesome definitions and characteristics of Blue.
Blue is also a kind of masculinity. Great description of Blue here. Its okay, even if you didn't add some Punctuation because I think the poem is in enjambment. Nice work.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have a doubt on the last line.
But in reality they just shine

You might mean
But in reality they're just shine.
they're is a contraction of they are,

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4236287

Review of The Birthday Boys

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Gus Kilthau

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Here is another piece of yours that hook me in the Newbies Section. I pick it again because it sounds interesting to me.
The given title creates a good ambience or mood, using the word birthday which always creates a good imagery, a joyful party.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Just like the other piece that I read before, this consist of right rhyme and rhythm. Its good when it reads aloud. The given thought is good also and gave a good tone or mood. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4236283

Review of "Don't Bug Me" Said Little Red Ladybug

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Gus Kilthau

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Reviewing Section. I pick it because the given title sounds interesting to me, though its kind of long, but it gives a fable effect using animal(lady bug) as maybe the main character of this poem.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I try to ponder at the created body, I can say that I like the rhyming and rhythm created. There is a beat in every line and it flows good.
There is some kind of slang in some lines but it just makes the poem kind of modern like some pop music. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4236278

Review of Beautiful

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Stormy

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Beautiful is one of the best adjective that describe to a person or things to admire its appearance or uniqueness. This word gives an impression that is not quite or few but rather full. If you used this to describe to a person, she/he would be definitely flattered.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

There's a lot of good thought about beautiful that you stated here in your poem.
You just didn't tell it but showed it like
Beautiful not like a flower, or a vase.
The sunset are extremely beautiful,
shooting star, cloud and rainy day.
Great metaphor you used!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I don't see any words that distract the flow, but I have doubt why you didn't use any Punctuation Marks.
Punctuation Marks in poem can help the poetry stimulate, slow its phase and emotion.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4235902

Review of Intentional

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!ß Samantha ß

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Reviewing Section, I pick it because sounds interesting to me. I think it gives a good thought to think.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the given body, I found this like a diary, because you talked about birth, the day you birth and what happened on that day.
This is in few words for me, but you stated the important things and captured the most essence in your story the time when you are delivered here in this world. Great!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, I marked my doubts in the red color and my suggestion is in green color.

I have a rule book that I have kept next to my bed. I read a bit of it every night to remember the child I was. I was declared alive at 3:36 a.m. on what was to be the sunniest day of winter 1977.( You can omit the linking verb was, it just gives a misleading effect in the sentence. )

I was declared alive at 3:36 a.m. on what to be the sunniest day of winter 1977.

The doctorwas put out (use more active verb-how about informed)...

The doctor informed that mom went down to birth so early in the morning, but then she had been in labor since 4 p.m or so the previous day and she no longer cared for the hour.

I was born by a rule that she established then and there and theyput in my book to follow for the rest of my life. Rule 1 - Don't cause others pain. (Especially your mother). I have been a good baby since then.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4234158

Review of Respect

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Ahmad Danial

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I stumble your piece in the Newbies Reviewing Section.
I pick it because it sounds interesting to me. Respect creates a good imagery, a good thought other than it emphasize a good character.
Every one can have it, if they will earn it.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The given body is in few words,as I've said I love quotes, I have one contest before about scribbling quotes with the desired number of words.
Someday, I will open that contest again, because it inspired me, reading your quotes.

We have different definitions and opinions about the word Respect and I got
your point in here. However there are some words that lock the true beauty of this beautiful thought of yours about respect.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

''In order to have respect you have to respect yourself by respecting others''
My Doubt:

You forgot to add some comma,
Some words has been used twice, like the verb have.
The thoughts of the two phrases had been the same, means its reiterated.

In order to have respect and
by respecting others.

I try to jumble the words and express here the thought that I caught in your nice quote.
This is only my suggestion, pick if you like and ignore if you don't.

In order to earn respect from others, you have to respect yourself first.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4229175

Review of Descending

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Lavender.Honey

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The word descending hypnotized me to pick this piece of yours in the Newbies Review Corner, because the word descending tells a lot of imagery.
And when I try to read it, Wow! the emotions are the only thing and what I've seen in this nicely crafted piece.
I admire how you chose words that best fits to show or to emphasized what you feel and think of a feeling or emotion.
Falling inlove and falling to sleep are just surely the same.
Drifting we are, descending.

Well Done!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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