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#4256630

Review of The Blue Bag Patrol

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi ♥Hooves♥

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me again into your portfolio to celebrate with you your September Anniversary.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is a very tender story about your pet Boo, who likes to poo and have different kinds and style of poo. Its so refreshing to read and see that your inspiration here is your pet dog. I can say that the created story is well detailed, I like also the
beginning part, a conversation it makes me eager to know more and follow the sequence of the story, specially the topic about the poo of boo between you and your husband.
The most thing that I like here is even the simple thing that we were see in every routine that we have ever day, or the slightest topic that we were talk about, there is there our companion. And I like and admire seeing you with your husband still having fun with cute little Boo. Great nonfiction story.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the story, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256626

Review of Dear Me, hooves (Circa 2014)

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ♥Hooves♥

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me again into your portfolio because you are one of the celebrant who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is my third time to read a static item about letter to ourselves, and just like the first two that I read, this piece of yours is a good motivation and an encouraging letter also.
I admire for being so brave in writing and some kind of scolding to yourself to do and don't the things you didn't like to do.
The most thing that I like is words scribbled is intended for everybody, I can easily grasp and understand the thing you mean and not quite blur to me. SO I say that this is intended to all your readers specially an ESL like me.

I like how you encourage yourself here, with a blend of comedy or sense of humor, that is one thing which is good in your writings, because I find a bit of humor there to balance or distract the enter of any boredom ness. This is good and It encourage me to write a letter for my self also.

MY FAVORITE PART:
Seventh, continue to play the lottery in case you might win and write one more thing on this list because "8" is your luckiest number.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256618

Review of A Bird's Nest Haiku

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The blending of the two words bird's nest gives a good thought and an imagery of nature in our mind which gives us a relaxing feeling. Seeing the beauty of nature always gives us that pleasure and gives a calming effect in us.
That is what I reflect in this haiku form piece of yours. Few chosen words but the given thought is compact and gives a good mirror to any reader.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4256580

Review of For my hero

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi unicornstar

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Everyone can relate on the given title. Hero means the one who always protect as, or the one who will be our world, and as I scribbled at the given body, I can say that I like the words that you used which are easy to grasp which means it is for everybody, you used an active verb which describe vividly, creates a good imagery and stimulate the emotion of this piece. This is in free style and I like the format that you used, it just link on the chosen genre- emotional and romance. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
There is no masquerade in you
Your hands are stretched out and your heart is true

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256572

Review of Afternoon Thoughts

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi tj ~ endeavors to persevere!

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The blending of the tow words creates a nostalgic impression, specially the word afternoon where in the sun is going to set, sun are much warm on this part of the day with the breeze of air, which makes us feel to have a nap sometimes. Its good to have a rest on this part of this day, specially after our lunch.
Just like the given title, the scribbled words in the body creates a nostalgic effect also. Remembering those past years, specially with our feelings that never change with our loved one, so sweet and momentous.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Time it changes all things
Yes this I know is true
With all these years and changes
I've grown more in love with you.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256556

Review of Laughter

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Lina Black-So Far Behind!!!

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Everyone can relate on the given title, life is very dull without having laugh or laughter. This will always makes us look young, stretch our muscle, inspired us, help us to move. So the given title always gives a good outlook and impression, that is why I pick this piece of yours to have a read and give my review.
And as I ponder at the given body, though this is only in few words but the idea or the essence gives an inspiring thought and can bring a colorful imagery to anyone who will read it. I like the personification that you used here, it reminds me of some bubbles that are floating in the air, where everyone would like to catch it, to fill them its enthusiasm and vibrancy. An inspiring poetry!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
seeking to devour

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256159

Review of Celebrate

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Seabreeze

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Wow! what an inspiring poem about WDC birthday. The spirit is there. I see this just like some cheers, the mood or emotion are uplifting, it reflects the positivity and spirit of the community through its members. The scribbled words are light and full of enthusiasm. It state there on how we create or the rules in setting our account and its true that they are easy. Everyone will be having fun here just like the scribbled words in this good piece of yours. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
I've tried to keep my feelings back
But I have slipped off the track
Come see what they have at writing.com
Because if you don't I am going to flip my stack

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256153

Review of Penguins Make the World Go Round

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!⭐Princette♥PengthuluWrites

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE C-NOTE-
I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio and while looking at the different amazing static featured, this one enticed my eyes to enter and look what's inside.

What makes me hook is because of the given title as well as of course the awesome image. Penguins make the world go round. I like it, makes me amuse
Reminds me of those cute little penguins who looks funny when they walk. I wonder if the can run too.

And I discovered that all the images in this wonderful C-note are very captivating because of the colorful and properly combination of different colors.

They are all in order, easy to pick, understandable, easy to grasp.

All the pic.images with the short description are related in each other.

They are affordable, and the best for friends.

So I easily added it into my favorites.

Good job, in creating this beautiful C-note shoppe.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking and reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256150

Review of Received

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi SWPoet

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I was charmed by the title of this piece of yours, though the word is just simple but it tells a lot, and mostly it sounds interesting to me. Received is another means of mine, or I have, I had, and it sounds that it gives an important to you and you valued it.
And as I ponder at the given body, I can say its beautiful.
I like how you formed the lines in the enjambment form, it slow down the pace of reading, where in it stimulate the emotion.
Until it finally reach the ending line, I like also the line break, it enhance the weaved words.
I relate this to marriage or a vow between two lovers.
This is a romantic form of poetry, where in its not been wordy or mushy. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
And you stand before me
with your gift
in hands outstretched
offering me all you are
and ever will be

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256116

Review of Moon

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Schnujo is Late to Lannister

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title creates a good and mysterious imagery. A good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hook on the given title of a piece.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

Choosing a title of a piece is one of the great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Just like the given title, the body creates a mysterious imagery, though it is in few words but the meaning is compact, haiku form is in few words but each word is important to put to create and give a good thought on the whole body of the piece. well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt why you didn't add an exclamation point after the interjection -oh because it emphasis a strong emotion on this part.
Congratulations for being the winner in the contest!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4256025

Review of A birth announcement limerick

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Dad

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Congratulations! what an inspiring poem of a proud grandpa to his grandson.
It reminds me of my late grandpa, maybe when we are also born his grandson, he also very proud of each of us. The words are just simple and few but the emotion is powerful, it reflect a happiness and a proud grandfather having his grandchildren.
Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:

My ego's expanding its girth

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256018

Review of New View

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Kotaro

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Your piece charmed me immediately while seeing some static item in your portfolio to have a read and give my review. I like the blending of the two words new and view it gives a refreshing imagery and lively emotion using the word new which means young, and views are things that always gives a delightful look in our eyes, so I didn't hesitated to pick it.
I like how you scribbled those words inside the body of the piece, they give an good insight about the setting that you greatly showed it here. I like also the proper and in order forms of the words. It reminds me of something a kind of adventure or sightseeing with your dog along a beach. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Depth and height imagined, they’re not really there.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4256000

Review of Child's Lament

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Dr Taher writes again!

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is a beautiful prayer of a little child, I can't see it as a lament but yup! there is a lament as one of the emotions that I can see while reading the words.
I like the thought or the lesson within this piece. Time is one of the best gift we should be given to our children. And I like your idea for making this as lament of every child. It took me when I was also a little kid where my parents was also busy in their own works until their marriage crashed and us their children suffered.
This is a good and inspiring poem. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:

So take me to the shore,
Or make me listen to birds,
Buy me a little pleasure,
Kiss me on my face.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4255992

Review of I am me!

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Fran 💜 💜 💜

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

These all scribbled words in every line are all beautiful thoughts for ourselves. Positive vibration that we should give to ourselves everyday will give us inspiration, and as we have that inspiration and always have that confidence in ourselves we can always pull and be an inspiring to others also. That is what I reflect in this inspiring piece of yours. Be the unique person we are. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4255532

Review of Untitled on Purpose

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Kenzie

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this January.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I pick this piece of yours from all of your items in your portfolio because of the given title, some kind of abstract in my impression. Sometimes abstract specially in the artistic form are one of the most beautiful to bask because of its mystery and interesting impression, and as I go along into the body, just like the given title, the scribbled words in the poetry are abstract its form and given thoughts, but I like it, I just only concluded it means when I finish reading it, I think this about some kind of our everyday routine where in at the end of the day we always try
to accomplish it. The poetry format is new to me and interesting.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Riddle solved.
Relief, satisfaction.
Meaning discovered.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4255292

Review of A Candle

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi CHarris

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Beautiful poetry about candle, everyone can relate on that simple word candle but there is always a good thought and wisdom that it gives, just like this piece of yours it just only in few words but you describe it well and your thought about a simple candle can give already enough a good wisdom to any reader, as well as it gives an impact also. I like how you use enjambment in creating those lines it stimulate the emotions and make a smooth reading. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
New sparks come from old,

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4255272

Review of No Chance to Say Goodbye

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Though, I already have a clue on the given title, that this will talk about farewell but I pick it to see what's inside the body of this piece because of the proper arrangement of the words in the given title.
The scribbled words in the body is in few lines but you captured here correctly and vividly the thought which is link at the given title. The emotions reflect here through the proper words that were used which is natural and not forceful.
I like also the punctuation marks (ellipse) that is on the last line, it gives a dramatic effect.
Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Desire is fleeting, realizing that regrets aren't worth the agony.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4255256

Review of Waterless

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Than Pence

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I pick this from all of your items in your portfolio because it sounds interesting to me, I always encounter that word for places here in our town who have no water source so that is my first impression, I didn't know that this talks about our everyday routine life, well the thought on the scribbled body is something worrying at the beginning and interesting but it makes me amuse when I reach the ending part.
The first thing that I like here is the proper and organize place of the words ehich creates a good rhyming at the end of every line. But, mostly I like the story behind this piece of yours and the ending part that I didn't expect it to be its conclusion.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4254765

Review of A Toast To Spam'oween

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi willwilcox

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

But, please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I like the playful words on the given title, that is the one that hook me to pick this piece of yours, though its not yet Halloween and we are celebrating WDC week, but maybe the playful words gives an alluring effect to me to pick this piece of yours to give my review. And the scribbled words in the body are more relaxing and amusing to read just like the title, I like the words that are fashioned played and then came up a good meaning just by blending some other words. Its fun to know that you used some members here to show well what you've been describing it here.

MY FAVORITE STANZA THAT MAKES ME AMUSE:
And as for me, well, when I fart,
I Ignus Fatuus which is just like Death by Fire
And even though my balls hang low,
they are still something to admire.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4254752

Review of Georgia Smiles

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
That thing that hook me to piece this piece of yours in all your items in your portfolio is the word smile. Smile always gives a good imagery, a gesture and a beauty that every person have. It reminds me of some painting like the Monalisa smile. And as I ponder at the given body, you creatively shows it in those lovely words and describe well the beauty within the smile of your little one. Nice captured of a picture within those lovely words. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
In sacred cadence she appears like
a celestial treasure well loved.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4254747

Review of The Invitation

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Jellyfish-on holiday

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

But,Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This piece is somekind of relaxing while having my reading on it. Maybe just because for having the word invitation where in it gives a good imagery, reminding us a party, or a celebration, in which what we are having and celebrating now here in WDC. I like how the words were form into enjambment, it makes the reading go into a slow phase which makes the reader have a mellow thought about the things that were stated and plan there, I like also the last part where in it concluded the whole piece that this is some kind of invitation. Love it.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
We will sing
At the top of our voices
To old fashioned song choices,

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4254740

Review of Little pleasures

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Soh ~ Luminousa

This is a review from "Invalid Item"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

My tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this September.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

But, please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is a beautiful story during our childhood years. Its just only in few paragraphs but the message is very sentimental, and the joyful emotions during those times when we are still kids are there. It took me to my childhood years and reminds me of my playmates and childhood friends, its nice to return back in that time where problems and anxiety are still unknown in our mind. I like also the given title, it draws me to pick this piece of yours through the word pleasure. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
“Close your eyes make a wish and blow the eyelash away!”

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the story, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4254691

Review of the girl who is lost

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Ash

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Review Section. I pick it because the given title seems interesting to me, specially the word lost that you've chose as one of the word in the given title, though it links to something dark and everyone can relate on it, but I would like to find out the good story behind on this piece of yours.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the scribbled body, the thing that surpass here is the emotion of the piece. Though words that were used are some kind of light or wordy, but the piece have a feeling or emotion, using an enjambment format can stimulate also the emotion.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some doubt for you to consider if you like.
I marked them in red color, and my suggestion is in green.

A girl who is lost, (period)
Is searching for her soul;
What did she know this is quite blur, maybe using the interrogating word what can mislead the reader,
I suggest to drop that word, and use a more active word.
How about: She thought,
its not her destiny to make it;

she wan't the only one lost,

I suggest to re create this line, its quite misleading.

She want the only one that is lost

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4254677

Review of The Special One

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Ella.004

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies Review Section, I pick it because the title sounds interesting to me using the word Special blending it with one, it perceive a character which is an important thing in this piece.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the scribbled words in the given body, I think this is still in draft, but you I like how you begin this chapter, the first paragraph sounds poetic to me. That can be a good effect to your reader specially to those who likes poetry like me. The second paragraph even if it still a bit blur, there is some identity you already give about your main character, that may give a bit of clue in the reader's view. But I think this story is not yet finish, i see it as an abstract waiting to continue, but anyway, you gave a good impression in the beginning part of it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I suggest to continue this draft, I think this would be a great story.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4254662

Review of My Profile on this Site

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!Christopher Roy Denton

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the Newbies review Section I pick it because it lure me to have a read a give my review because of the given title. it gives me already a clue and impression which or what site you are going to tell on this piece of yours, Yup! our writing dot com home site, that gives me and sounds interesting in my impression, what you seems to see in this wonderful writing site.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder at the given the body, my first impression is I link this to be like a song or a lyrical, by repeating some or most of the lines, its good because it gives a rhythmic beat where in it comes as natural and not forcefully created, I like how you play with those words. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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