Samberine Everose's (everose) Reviews

Samberine Everose

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Poems-any genres except erotica

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#4212378

Review of War Drum

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!kerrimiller

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

While looking around into your homefolio to pick for something to review, this piece of yours lure my attention.
The blending of the two words is just simple but creates a good imagery.
Each one can relate on it. I really think that this is about a battle.
Sounds adventurous on my part.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me as your reader.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:

Very nice, in just only 100 words you did it well in describing the given title.
This is an act of siren in a battle field, and also the emotion of injah has been reflected well. Great.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4212152

Review of Sweet desires

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi jaya h ,

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
The blending of the two words Sweet Desires creates an enticing effect for me to choose this piece of yours to read and give a review, why because every desire if we see as sweet can lead to our happiness because we like and love it.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

THE BODY-

Just like the given title, the scribbled lines in the body is much sweeter and link at the given title. I like how you created it with the rhyming, the thought is good also.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the rhyming on the third stanza.
A desire has a life of its own, long or short,
when it doesn’t stick to a motivated heart.

Congratulations on the Awardicon!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4212148

Review of RAVAGES OF TIME

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi bumfuzzled ,

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

While my tiny wings flip and flap into your homefolio looking for something that will give me an interest, and my eyes was captured into this piece of yours. What makes me captured is because of the given title, the blending of the two words Ravage and Time creates an enticing effect if it there's really a ravages of time..? I just only thought about Death.
Good job because the title hook me.

THE BODY-

This piece stimulate the emotions because of the Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery just like the title.
This is about death isn't it?, the thing that I really like is the rhythm of the created words between the lines

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4207439

Review of Lovely Poets

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A pleasant hour!!LaLa

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The thing that hooked me this piece of yours while scrolling down items in the newbies section is the word Poet, because I love poetry a lot.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

While looking the scribbled lines inside the body, the thought that gives is true, and beautiful, and this is in free verse.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just only have some doubt to think about.
The given title- The Lovely Poets. - There's a double meaning on this one, might pertains to look, though, I agree that all poets are beautiful and lovely, but when we go inside the body of the piece, it doesn't link already.
In the body, it says there the thing that creates the poet are lovely.
You might like not to add the word lovely there, or you might like to choose words that might best describe for a poets, like mighty Word-sword, or you might have a much better name.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4207434

Review of YOU

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A pleasant hour!!razia

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is short, and typical, but its effect can hook a reader because you let the reader be a part of it, using the pronoun You.
This can give the reader an interesting effect.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled lines in the body is simple, but the emotions is there already.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some doubt.

On using Punctuation marks- this can stimulate the emotion of a poetry, like line spacing, breaking and so on. You might like to put a period after the line, it makes the line firm.

These line are for someone in my life- you might like to add s in the line because these are four lines.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4203982

Review of Crazy Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Chris24

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

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#1950388 by ~ Santa Sisco ~
and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE

This piece of yours hook me to read and review while visiting your homefolio because it sounds cool and interesting.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
From the beginning until I reach the ending part, I'm so fond in reading this. This is just only a dialogue, but it says a lot, it describes a lot.
This is one example that using a dialogue only can stand alone a concrete to make a story moving and interesting. Good job!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4201571

Review of Yellow

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!dogpack saving 4premium+

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title creates a good imagery, and one of my favorite colors because of what it gives and what it makes one to feel and see.
The color yellow belongs to one of he brightest colors, it symbolize the sunshine, a happy day, a bright day, but sometimes they see it as in mellow.
I really like this color, so that impression hook me to pick this piece of yours

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

Just like the given title, the body consist of a lively tone or mood, refreshing and a warmth wishes and greetings to all Yellows!.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4200296

Review of On the Value of Replying to Reviews

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!the prodigal son returns 2024.

I'm Samberine Everose

your little best fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review for my picked Item of WDC Authors this month.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an educational and informative impression. So I definitely picked it up and included in my Fairy Frontline Board this month.
I'm just sorry because I just only have the time to reviewed it now.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader, and any reader will definitely hooked on this one.

Into the body-
As my first impression and expectation, the body of the piece is really informative and educational, you stated here the importance of replying to a review, and the importance in what and which reviews gives, that sometimes it was been forgotten, or misused, misinterpret the reviews, that mostly reviews even if how light, how long, how short, always needs a simple appreciation because its a good, warmth and friendly WDC gesture.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4199439

Review of only 15 minutes til bedtime

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!AmyD23

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I think you take here a snapshot about your fun activity week end. Very cool.
It just only short, but full of exciting, and interesting, maybe if you would like to add more and give a most vivid view.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
Here are some of the couple things that I have in-doubt.
1. The title- is always the front line of every piece, as I've said already, impression and expectation first create here.
For me, using small letters in the title makes an impression for me an act of laziness. Every title should begin in capital letter.

2. You might like to add punctuation marks, and paragraph spacing. Punctuation marks always helps to stimulate emotions of piece as well as paragraph spacing, for a clearer view.

Oh crap. Its already 9:45 on a Sunday night and I have yet to ready the buckets for tomorrows customers.

This statement is blur to me, I mean not vivid.
you might mean-
and I should have to ready the buckets for tomorrows customers.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4199436

Review of Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Amrita

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Love is one of the enticing word that always hook a prospective reader as well as create a good imagery.
Though, love always have its twin emotion hurt, but we can't say that its love if we will not feel the hurt.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job because the title hook me.

The created lines in the body is light and true, but I feel the emotions.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

Love makes you cold - hearted and it completely changes a person .
changes you might mean change.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198968

Review of The Dance Of Dis

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Angus

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Congratulations once again!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.

The word Dis hook my attention while looking for something to review in your homefolio. Its a new word for me, blending it with the word dance- dance gives a good imagery ad thought.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

Inside the body, I can say that you did well in holding the emotions of the piece as well as the describing and showing about the dance of Dis, you took me into a not so dark but a mysterious place in a night which the moon is full, and scattered stars.
You did well in making your reader to be in the shoes of the viewer.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198691

Review of Missed.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!EMPALAGARSE

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The given title enticed me to read your piece and give a review, because that simple word creates an emotional impact. Everyone knows and always feels that emotional feeling, and we can relate on it.

Inside the body, you described well, how is that feeling, and you did well.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198685

Review of From a hello to a goodbye

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Justin

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is simple, anyone can relate on it.
But the enticing unto this is knowing that this is something another story about in love and its twin hurt.
You describe it well the feeling of being in-love and when its twin-hurt will shoot you up also. That's is usually done, Love and Hurt at the end. This two always blend.
Because, without hurt you can't measure how you've been love that person.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I would suggest to add some spacing, Paragraph spacing can stimulate emotions as well as the breathing of the written words and lines.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4198682

Review of Blue

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!adt2017

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I also love blue, because it makes me feel at peace when I looking up at the vast sky, and its one of the cool colors when it link to ocean and seas. I'm also curious and have sympathy when I see blue in every person.
In other words the given title creates a good imagery for me, so I picked this piece of yours to give a read and review.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.
Good job in choosing the given title.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some words that distract the flow, and vividness.
like:
the color blue lets me know I’m not alone.

You might like to change the word lets to something more clearer on what you mean on the above statement.
like the word- telling
The color blue always telling me that I'm not alone, - there is already an impression of personification here to make it twist.

I love the color blue because it has taught me to love myself in every shade. Omit the word has to make the statement more firm and true.

Adding also an spacing, line breaking to a paragraph specially if its long makes the piece moving and stimulate emotions.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4197648

Review of When did I start loving you?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!JessCarsen

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the showcased on the
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#1950388 by ~ Santa Sisco ~
and a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE GIVEN TITLE
The given title is the one that hook me in choosing this nice piece of yours, because it creates a good imagery to me.
It reminds me of song, because the created lines-title already have a beat or the rhythm, and by using a punctuation mark, you give the chance that your reader to be a part on the created piece.

A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
I like every created lines. You did well in crafting it.
The rhyme and rhythm is in there, the thought that gives is good and true, and specially the emotion. The words you chose creates the emotion that is tender but not really mushy.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4195049

Review of Music to write by

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Joey's Summer Sparkle

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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This is a gift from your "Secret Cupid"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. The word music, hooked me because I'm one of the fanatic persons in music other that its one of my passion.
Music to write by, creates an inspiring mood because you blend the word music to the word write. And as I enter inside, I found out, beautiful classical music, and they are good, they are just hard to link, it takes time in linking.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
No doubt arise, just only the linking, or might be the problem is our net.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4195047

Review of "Emergency Warnings! Read Your Labels."

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Joey's Summer Sparkle

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

This is a gift from your "Secret Cupid"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is already captivating, using strong-alarming words and active punctuation marks.
Like the given body, its funny. and the created words are vivid and true.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193964

Review of The Adventures of Globby and Friends

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Happy Valentine's Day to a special person!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
The word Adventure is the interesting word on the given title as well as the characters.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I think this is not yet finished. You might like to continue it to join the adventure of Globby and friends

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193963

Review of Contest Entry#2 Haiku and Senryu contest

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

Happy Valentine's Day to a special person!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The thing that hooked me on this piece of yours is by mentioning that this is a haiku and senryu,it makes me think that this is a poetry. I love poetry.

And I didn't disappointed in reading it, it contains a beautiful poetry.
Its just only in few words but the meaning is full and the thought is good.
These are four poetry and my favorite is the Harvest.
Harvest is Autumn, and bright and clear.
Good job.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the given title, you might like to make it specific, so that it will give a dramatic beginning before entering to the main body.(You can describe it in the brief description that this is for the contest.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193962

Review of A Walk in the "Mitten"

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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#2009523 by Samberine Everose

which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

Happy Valentine's Day to a special person!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is interesting using the word mitten.
Though its not been specific that this is about nature but by using the word walk, it explains about viewing, or seeing, and that relates to Nature, like the crafted lines in the body.
The scribbled line sin the body is beautiful, full of good imagery.
It made me feel what the Author's see and feel by crafting those chosen words.
The first line creates a dramatic flow.

Good job.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well! CONGRATULATIONS!
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193961

Review of The Angels Cried 2

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

Happy Valentine's Day to a special person!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Just like the first one that I read, its beautiful and full of emotions, but this one is more emotional, because there are already an action using adjectives and verb that is more dramatic.
Good job, because the title hooked me as well as the body.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193960

Review of The Angels Cried

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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#2009523 by Samberine Everose

which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

Happy Valentine's Day to a special person!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

As I flap and flip my little wings into your Homefolio, this piece of yours enticed my attention because of the given title. The given title creates an emotional feeling. Let me choose the word Sorrow, because angel always handle a happy thoughts, but when mixed it the word cried, it gives a sadness effect.
Because I think Angels don't know how to cry.
Like the given title, the created lines inside the body links on the given title.
The imagery is tender, and the emotions are in there.

Good job.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193400

Review of Ramblings Cover

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Grateful Jess

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Gifted by your Secret Cupid

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The created image gives a mysterious effect, using the brown or like a sephia color.
The image of a lady with her style and dress links to the chosen color.
My first impression is might be interesting to read and full of mystery.
Good job.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good image of your book, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking it. Good luck on your book.
I am looking forward to see more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193399

Review of The Red River

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Grateful Jess

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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which your friend purchased it for you with the following message:

Gifted by your Secret Cupid

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I can say its beautiful, full of drama, words are strong and emotional but not vulgar. Well Done!
The title is well chosen also and link to the body.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193398

Review of First Day of Summer

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Grateful Jess

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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#2009523 by Samberine Everose

which your secret cupid purchased it for you with the following message:

Gifted by your Secret Cupid

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Summer is really fun and full of happiness.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .