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#4193964

Review of The Adventures of Globby and Friends

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
The word Adventure is the interesting word on the given title as well as the characters.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I think this is not yet finished. You might like to continue it to join the adventure of Globby and friends

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193963

Review of Contest Entry#2 Haiku and Senryu contest

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The thing that hooked me on this piece of yours is by mentioning that this is a haiku and senryu,it makes me think that this is a poetry. I love poetry.

And I didn't disappointed in reading it, it contains a beautiful poetry.
Its just only in few words but the meaning is full and the thought is good.
These are four poetry and my favorite is the Harvest.
Harvest is Autumn, and bright and clear.
Good job.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just have doubt on the given title, you might like to make it specific, so that it will give a dramatic beginning before entering to the main body.(You can describe it in the brief description that this is for the contest.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193962

Review of A Walk in the "Mitten"

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is interesting using the word mitten.
Though its not been specific that this is about nature but by using the word walk, it explains about viewing, or seeing, and that relates to Nature, like the crafted lines in the body.
The scribbled line sin the body is beautiful, full of good imagery.
It made me feel what the Author's see and feel by crafting those chosen words.
The first line creates a dramatic flow.

Good job.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The Awardicon deserves well! CONGRATULATIONS!
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193961

Review of The Angels Cried 2

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Just like the first one that I read, its beautiful and full of emotions, but this one is more emotional, because there are already an action using adjectives and verb that is more dramatic.
Good job, because the title hooked me as well as the body.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193960

Review of The Angels Cried

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!MidnightAngel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

As I flap and flip my little wings into your Homefolio, this piece of yours enticed my attention because of the given title. The given title creates an emotional feeling. Let me choose the word Sorrow, because angel always handle a happy thoughts, but when mixed it the word cried, it gives a sadness effect.
Because I think Angels don't know how to cry.
Like the given title, the created lines inside the body links on the given title.
The imagery is tender, and the emotions are in there.

Good job.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193720

Review of Day 2 Summer Days

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Vixey Todd

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Summer- creates a good imagery, lots of fun, activities and enjoyment.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I think this is still in draft and not yet finished, you might like to replace the word Day 2 and put it into the brief description. Adding in the title can distract the created mood of the given piece.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, I am looking forward to read its continuation, and read more of your works again.

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#4193719

Review of House Targaryen Signature

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Vixey Todd

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was always attracted to images, so when I find out this only images of yours in your Homefolio, I didn't hesitate to take a glace and look.
And I can say, its a well crafted image, using the color dark brown gives an effect of STRONG and FIRM. I remember some battles during the old times. And it reflects on this the braveness.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193400

Review of Ramblings Cover

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Future Mrs. B

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The created image gives a mysterious effect, using the brown or like a sephia color.
The image of a lady with her style and dress links to the chosen color.
My first impression is might be interesting to read and full of mystery.
Good job.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good image of your book, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking it. Good luck on your book.
I am looking forward to see more of your works again.

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#4193399

Review of The Red River

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Future Mrs. B

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I can say its beautiful, full of drama, words are strong and emotional but not vulgar. Well Done!
The title is well chosen also and link to the body.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193398

Review of First Day of Summer

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Future Mrs. B

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Summer is really fun and full of happiness.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4193397

Review of Lily of My Heart

for entry "Last Time I Saw Her"

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Future Mrs. B

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I try to read one of the items in your book about memories of your grandma, and this one enticed me to read it.

Why because of the given title. There's already an emotion and an interesting effect.
While reading the body of your piece, I like the created beat in every lines.
There are lines that you repeated but it didn't distract the flow, but it gives a beat of the piece, like music or song.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :

I just have doubt on the second line, you might like to change the last word to rhyme the first and third lines.
It will read smoothly.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4193396

Review of Lily of My Heart

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Future Mrs. B

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The one that hooked me into this item to enter is the given title, it creates a good thought and there is already an emotion on that simple line. Maybe the word Lily,
Lily is a name of a flower, and flowers gives a happy thought and a delightful feeling when we see them.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

I like the quote inside the body, very emotional and full of sentiments.
I like also the picture very endearing, even its an old picture, it say a lot.
I think love from our parents/grandmas.
No wonder you got inspired in writing memoirs while looking at the picture.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this very good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read and see more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190496

Review of The New Girl

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Angie.pz

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is simple and anyone can relate on it.
The thing that is enticing is it gives a good imagery using the word new, means begin something. Nice.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :....
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I think this is still unfinished. You might like to continue it, sounds interesting and a good read.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190495

Review of The Person In The Back Yard

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!sweet_love

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

,and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title creates an interesting effect, because the title was pointing to a person where in it didn't give a detailed description. So the reader like me automatically will give a sneak unto the body of the piece.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some typos, but I think the story is still in draft.

It was a bright and sunny summer afternoon . (omit the space) I had just come from taking a nap so i (capital letter) decided to go out in the back yard the (you might mean to)play for about and (you might mean on) hour or two . It was me and my twin sister playing . We where playing all sorts of games . Freeze and Tag , Hide - N - Go - Seek , Dress up dolly , etc etc .

It (That)was about 5:00 pm , and my sister had went (you might mean get) inside to use the bathroom , and i (capital letter) was still outside playing , then i (in capital letter) looked up at the tree next to wear (where) i (capital I) was playing , and i (capital I) saw this figure

You might like to continue the story, it sounds good and you left your reader a bit hanging what would be the next part.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190261

Review of True Love

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Akriti

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The one thing that I like in your piece is the given thoughts between the created lines. They are all true, you speak freely and specified it clearly how true love means and be the feeling.
We may have many loves but the true one is the only one who is special and true.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have doubt on the use of Punctuation Marks, like after using a comma, the next sentence should begin in small letter because it continues the given thought.
Punctuation marks is one of the important in creating a poetry, because it helps to control and stimulate the created emotion.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190257

Review of I'm here

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!HzH

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The thing that enticed me to read your piece on the Newbies section is the given title. There is an emotion already or a kind of dialogue asking to give readers to try to read using that short statement.
And as I entered into the body, I've realized that this is a poem of a new born baby.
The best thing that I like here is you did great that you hold the emotion or the point of view of the child. Very Cute specially on the last line.
And also the given title is link to the body.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190254

Review of Beneath Emerald Rainbows

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop

Congratulations!!! for winning my package in the "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the package you've won.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

As I flap and flip again my wings into your homefolio this piece of yours enticed my attention because of the given title. Rainbows is one of the beauties of Nature. Blending it with the word Emerald makes the given title being more enticing to look and read, giving an impression that the Rainbow is sparkling like a Gem.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

THE BODY-

Very nice and vivid crafted words. I like the beat in every line, its called the rhythm of poetry. The chosen words to describe an emerald rainbow is fit also and well chosen.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190015

Review of Listening to the Rain

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop

Congratulations!!! for winning my package in the "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the package you've won.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Listening to the Rain gives a good feeling while pondering at the given title, as well as it gives a good imagery while reading the body of the piece.
I like how the words used and scribbled. It gives a playful thing like the dripping of rain.
Though, Our season are going to be in Summer now, but while reading this piece of yours it makes me feel in times of Rainy days. Beautiful.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4190013

Review of Autumn

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop

Congratulations!!! for winning my package in the "Invalid Item"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as one of the goodies from the package you've won.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

The given title is simple but it gives a good imagery.
One of my favorite season is Autumn, next to Summer, because of its dramatic ambience, at rest and brilliant colors.

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

THE BODY-

This piece stimulate the emotions because of the Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery as like the title.

You did fine in describing the beauty of Autumn.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4189454

Review of Pieces..

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Aiman

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I can say its beautiful, and moving.
I like the way how the piece/poem crafted, the line breaks and spacing helps to stimulate the emotions.
The shortness or in few words links also on the given title, and in the first line- broken pieces.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, maybe you can add one more descriptive word to the broken pieces as you stated on the first line, to give a dramatic flow, and also the used of Punctuation marks, change the comma to a period, it will make the word firm its meaning, specially every line always begin in capital letter.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4188435

Review of More Fun Flare Button C~notes!

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Princess Zelda

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this January.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE C-NOTE-
I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio and while looking at the different amazing static featured, this one enticed my eyes to enter and look what's inside.

What makes me hooked is because of the given title as well as of course the awesome image. I liked the word Fun Flare. Sounds Fun and interesting.

I discovered that all the images in this wonderful C-note are very captivating because of the colorful and properly combination of different colors.

They are all in order, easy to pick, understandable, easy to grasp.

All the fun flare pic.images with the short description are related in each other.

They are affordable, and the best for friends.

Good job, in creating this beautiful C-note shoppe.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking and reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4188432

Review of Leger's Romantic Cnotes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi Legerdemain

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

It happens that my tiny wings brought me into the Anniversary Section of WDC and found you there who will celebrate its Anniversary this January.
So I immediately spread -flip and flap my wings and drop in your Porthomefolio to look for something to review, and this item of your enticed my attention.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE C-NOTE-
I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio and while looking at the different amazing static featured, this one enticed my eyes to enter and look what's inside.

What makes me hooked is because of the given title as well as of course the awesome image. I liked the word Romantic Cnotes, it creates a good imagery, specially now the heart month is coming.

I discovered that all the image in this wonderful C-note are very captivating because of the colorful and properly combination of different awesome images.

They are all in order, easy to pick, understandable, easy to grasp.

All the pic.images with the short romantic description are related in each other.

So I easily added it into my favorites.

Good job, in creating this beautiful C-note shoppe.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking and reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

548

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#4188425

Review of Silent night

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Aleeza

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title reminds me of a beautiful Christmas song, that is the one that hook me to read it.
The created lines in the body is good, the used of words creates an emotion, using words like cars, traffic etc. creates like in panic or in stressful imagery and emotion.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have doubt on the used of Punctuation Marks, like
after using a comma the word that should be next will begin in small letter because it continues the given thought.
And also the given title, it says there as a Silent night but the created imagery in the body is in a busy street, using the word traffic, cars etc.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4188422

Review of Dreams

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!ArkMan

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title creates a good imagery. Dreams always creates a positive one, dreams comes first before entering in our way to succeed. That's my first impression while I stumble on your piece.
The created lines inside the body though, you used simple words but creates a good thought like the title.

In choosing a title of a piece, this one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem, but you forgot to add punctuation marks.
Punctuation marks can help to stimuli the emotions of a piece.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4188195

Review of kings

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!queens

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The created piece is short and simple, but the meaning is true and compact with thought and emotion.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the body.
I just have doubt on the given title.
You used the word kings which means on my impression that there are so many kings.
But on the first line of the piece, there is just only one, using the word He.
So, maybe you might mean king.
And using a small letter in a title gives an impression to be laziness.
You might consider to begin in capital letter, because its a Title.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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