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Samberine Everose

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#4183192

Review of The Time of Ends

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi The prodigal son returns 2023.

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which Seshat

purchased it for you, with the message:

Merry Christmas my friend!! from your Princess.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

This piece stimulate the emotions because of the Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery as like the title.

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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4183005

Review of Best Thing About Teddy Bears/ Poem

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which your Secret Santa purchased it for you, with the message:

Teddy Bear hugs from your Secret Santa

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Good job, because the title hooked me.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery as like the title.
Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, as well as stimulate also the emotions of the piece.
It means that Teddy Bear is love by all.

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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel in looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4183003

Review of Teddy Bear Tea Time

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which your friend harperpaul purchased it for you, with the message:

This package is a part of "Your Big Day!" Remember, for you, this isn't just any day!
!

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked on the given title of a piece.
Good job, because the title hooked me.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, as well as stimulate also the emotions of the piece.
It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery as like the title.

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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel in looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4181794

Review of My Family

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi The Run-on King PDG Member

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

which your friend harperpaul purchased it, with the message:

This is just a little something to reward you when you might not be getting any recognition for all the things you do. Please keep on keeping on!

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review.
This piece of yours enticed my attention, because of the given title.

My Family- anyone can relay on it, but the interesting thing is the imagery that creates of this simple world. Who doesn't like to know our home.

Good job, because the title hooked me.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

The thing that is attractable here is the colorful image of dragons and the different dragons.
And very enticing to know that they have their own names created by the guest who will be joining this entertaining activity.
Rules are simple, in order and easy to follow.
Scribbled words are in proper order.
I think I will gonna join this.

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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this entertaining activity, and happy to feel the enjoyment in looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4181541

Review of Every year

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Whiskerfaceschoolsout!

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as one of the goodies from the gift package which purchased by your Secret Santa in "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED"

.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to pick for something to review.This piece of yours catched my attention, why because it’s a poetry. Did you know that I'm a poetry addict.

But aside from that, what makes me enticed to read is because of the given title.
Every Year- its simple, anyone can relay on it. But it gives an interesting effect- because this talks about time. And time have its own moment. So what special on that year?
And also the brief description- duck and duckling creates tender and some kind of funny thought because they are cute.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I continue flapping my wings to look and mused between the lines of your piece.
Wonderful Poem about the life of a duckling.
Now I know why and how you chose the title- it links on the body.
A wonderful adventure of the duckling with their mama duck.

I like the created tone of the piece, it reminds me of a very fine day.
A beautiful fine day where the simplicity of life is there.
That made me to think that sometimes simplicity of life through simple things can brought joy to our hearts.
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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.

Over all, this piece is a good read,maybe you can create also a short story about the duckling and their momma duck like they were talking. I relay the message into simplicity of life.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4181242

Review of Dear Me (2015)

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi Jeff

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

And I'm here to give you a review as one of the goodies from the Teddy Bear Basket that your Secret Santa purchased for you.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review. This piece of yours catch my attention because its a letter.
I like to read letters, and the thing that fascinates me on this one is knowing that this is a letter for yourself.Because the title addressing it to you. That's fascinates me, and very interesting to read, and somehow funny, for writing a letter to yourself.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I continue flapping my wings to look and ponder between the lines of this letter of yours to yourself.
First interesting fact that I've discovered is that you are working in a Law Office?- Interesting.
I liked how the way the letter have its greetings, is not obvious that this is a demand letter.
But for my further reading there is a requiring effort to do so.
The way how its enumerate the things that should be accomplished for oneself is vivid, sometimes it makes me as the reader to discover and to know more about yourself.
Good job in putting me as your reader in the author shoes.
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COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the letter.
And no doubt arise.

Over all, this letter is really a sincere self letter, the message is something demanding but somehow inspiring, maybe, I could also do a letter for myself.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4181007

Review of heart to heart

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Hi George a. Hopkins

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

and Congratulations also for being a Registered Author here. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
I spread and flap my little wings into your homefolio and found this piece of yours as I scrolled down your homefolio items.
What makes me eager to read is because of the given title,
heart to heart- Heart creates a good imagery because it talks about heart. It always gives a positive effect. Specially when mixing it with another heart. The thought is effective- it sounds sincere.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

While I continued to flap my tiny wings and try to ponder between the lines of your poetry,
The first thing that I noticed is short,
but the emotions is there I can relay it.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just only have some little doubt about the
Title- You can try to capitalize the two beginning letters of the heart, to make a firm effect.
Using a small letter specially on the start of something or a word creates an impression of being lazy.

And some lines in the body:

Iv broken hearts- maybe you might mean I'm broken heart- because we only have one heart, but if the thought you would like to show is you are a breaker of hearts- I'm a heart breaker would be fine.

And ruined lives
The vividness to link to this second line from the first line.
You might mean with ruined lives
- it links to the first line, that not only a broken heart but also whos lives was ruined.

All to say that Iv survived,
You might mean - But I've survived.

But whats the truth, If you're the lie
what's
lie- you might mean a liar.

Who am I to testify
Who am I.... Who am I...

You can still add more lines. I think this still in draft.

Over all, this piece is emotional, I can feel the emotion on it, but it needs some little tweak to make the shine more brighter.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4180079

Review of Eternal Peace

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi HRK

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here..

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
I'm flapping my little wings again into your homefolio, to search for something to review. And this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because the title seems to be interesting. This is not new, I find this in the genre of dark or death or in times of Grief.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created.

THE BODY-
This is just in few words, but the scribbled words is compact and created an impact.
The created imagery on the first two lines can draw the reader closer, because of the emotion.
Words like tears, shed, moments, path, peace, heart and relieved were linked each other.
In few lines but the piece is uplifting and inspiring.
Really links and define the given title.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't see words that can distract the flow of the poem.
just only the proper used of Punctuation marks.
Punctuation marks can help to stimulate the emotion.

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece, I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4180076

Review of Bad Habit

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Poet

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS!for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE TITLE-
I stumble on your poem in the Newbies Section, while flapping my little wings. What makes me enticed is the given title.
Every one can relay on it. We all have Bad habits. Bad habits creates a negative imagery, but we tend to do it, because its our habits, sometimes this one can be one that will identify us.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
I can say that this is beautiful poetry. Words scribbled is like lyrics in Music.
This is romantic also, looking our love one as bad habit, because we always crave them.
They are really a hard habit to break.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't see words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,and I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4180070

Review of Jealous

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi bitwise

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here..

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into the newbies Corner, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because the title seems to be interesting, its just only one word but the created imagery have a curious effect.
Jealous gave a negative imagery, its a feeling of envy, but maybe depends on the situation. Jealous maybe fine in a relationship, specially couple, because that will range how deep the person's love can be.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created into a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
I can say that the words scribbled are light, few, easy to grasp, or in other word- Simple.
I like its simplicity, easy to grasp its for everybody.
The emotion is there already. And I can feel it.
But remember that Poetry can be in few words or lines, but the word to choose should be compact and create an impact to reader.
Words should be stimulate the emotion.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I suggest that you can try words that are compact, words that are firm.
Combining two words that are well chosen or mixing them can create a powerful impact to readers.

Thank you for sharing this piece, I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4179564

Review of The Bitter Truth

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi HRK

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here..

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into the newbies Corner, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because the title seems to be interesting. Anyone can relay on it, but thinking about truth that is bitter can lead the reader an eagerness to know what can be the caused of bitter in that Truth.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
The thing that I like while musing the lines of your piece is the created thoughts.

Would the Creator be happy by my arrival? you might mean on
Did I obey Him ,the way He wanted? obeyed
If so indeed,
He would be delighted by my arrival. on

Spending life without obeying The Lord,
Then death would be dark, painful and hard,
Indeed The Lord of the Worlds would not be pleased; World is more firm than worlds.
By the coming of such a soul.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

The only thing that I doubt is by the proper used of punctuation marks.
Like after a comma, the letter would be in small not capital, because it continue a thought
Punctuation marks can help stimulate the emotion of the piece.
And some few comments on the body as I've stated before.

Thank you for sharing this piece, I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4179554

Review of A brief collection of my work 2

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi JLondon32

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here..

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into the Newbies Corner, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because of the enticing description, even though the title is too long.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body. This is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I try to go inside the body, and ponder those created words and lines:
I've noticed that you like short poetry.
Short poetry or in few words poetry are good specially if the created words were chosen and gives an impact to the reader.
The compact or dense of words are the main ingredients here.
I can stay that all the short poems are good and I dense.
They have their own rhythm, although they are in free verse.
The mood or tone is good, I can feel the emotion of every poems.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

The only thing that I have doubt is the given title, maybe you can create or choose a title that is more interesting and enticing:
Like: My peer to someone.
or To someone I don't know.
and others, I think you may have much interesting scribbling words in yours.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4178722

Review of Bittersweet Rosebuds

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi sunnystarr }

Congratulations! your item is my this December.

I'm Samberine Everose

your little GFL garden fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you and for being so awesome here in WDC.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into your Homefolio to look for an item of yours, and while I was there this piece of yours fascinated me to picked and featured in my simple Flash Page."Welcome to my Garden of Creativity "

What makes me hooked is because of the created combining of words as the given title. Bittersweet - it looks balance for me, there is the bitter and the sweet, and this combination of words always used it through tender or emotional moments. With the word Rosebuds creates a good imagery. Roses when still in buds are beautiful, in blossom. So the given title creates a thought about a bittersweet of a blossoming-beautiful.
That makes me hooked. Good Job!

IN THE BODY

The first thing that I noticed is an Acronym Poem- that is one which makes the body to be enticing to read.
Well,The thought is about friendship, a blossoming friendship.
The bittersweet word here was pertain to the smell of the Rose, my first impression is would it be the taste.
The created words creates a good imagery, like following the sweet contour shape of the rose flower. Beautiful, specially using dense words that describe the blooming-budding Rose.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION

I didn't find any word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise. The AWARDICON deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!!

Over all I can say that this piece is beautiful, and well crafted. Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours and the excitement in reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4178719

Review of In The Heart

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi sunnystarr

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the package I've gift to you on your BIG Day last November. Please forgive me if its only now that I had the time to send it for you.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As I scroll down the items in your portfolio to picked for something to review and This piece of yours catch my attention, why because it’s a poetry. Did you know that I'm a poetry addict.

But aside from that, what makes me enticed to read is the word Heart.
The word Heart creates a good imagery, like passion, like love, something that we like, our emotions, and for me its sounds good to read, and I'm eager to know what's behind on it.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I continue flapping my wings to look and ponder between the lines of this piece.
The first thing that I noticed is its short, in few lines, but the word are compact.
Why I said compact, because the meaning is deep but in truth.
Scribbled words are easy to grasp means that it is for everybody, but when if we look it closer the thought is dense.

These two are my favorite lines:

For in the heart is where
treasures lie and secrets are kept.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise. The AWARDICON deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!!

Over all, I love how this piece was scribbled, I have a good and inspiring time reading on it. Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

Samberine Everose

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#4177580

Review of Talking with the Moon

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ~Minja~

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm here again Samberine Everose

your little Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as one of my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
It happens that my tiny wings brought me again into your homefolio to find something to review so I tried to flap my little wings and this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to enter.

THE TITLE
What makes me hooked is because of the given title.
Talking with the Moon- its simple, everyone can relate on it, but the word moon can create a mysterious effect, adding the verb word talking, it could be interesting. I remember when I was still a little girl, I often like to see the moon and yeah talk too also, asking why its colors and shape are changing, that sometimes its white, then yellow like Cheese. So that makes me wonder too how you talk to the Moon.

Good job in choosing the title, because it hooked me as your reader.

THE BODY
The first thing that I admired is how the words were inscribed and it gives a tender but concrete thoughts.
Nice rhythm and rhyming, they are all in proper.
I like also how you personify the moon, that is one interesting on it.

My favorite stanza:
Why moon, I said
all my wounds are bled
all my feelings are dead
and look at you, you're red

Over all, I can say that this piece is a good read and gave an interesting to read, Well done!.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4177579

Review of Happy birthday cNotes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ~Minja~

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Corner and I've found you there, as one of my Favorite Author who will celebrate its Anniversary this November.
So I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio to find something to review.
And this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to be one of my favorite items.

What makes me hooked is because the thought that this is a C-note and I know this consist of awesome images. The given title is simple and everyone can relate about it, but the interesting that made me to look inside is knowing that this awesome images have quotes.

I discovered that all the C-note items images are vibrant, colorful, lively and can link to Birthdays.

They are all in order, easy to pick, understandable, easy to grasp.

All the pic.images with quotes are related in each other.

They are affordable, and the best for friends.

Good job, in creating this amazing Birthday C-note.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking and reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

567

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#4177578

Review of Vintage cNotes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ~Minja~

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Corner and I've found you there, as one of my Favorite Author who will celebrate its Anniversary this November.
So I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio to find something to review.
And this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to be one of my favorite items.

What makes me hooked is because the given title as well as of course the awesome image. I liked the word Vintage, my impression is something classy. I think classic things are stylish which also made me to think that maybe this is where I can find all the images I need and likes for a C-note, and I didn't disappointed while I begin to enter.

I discovered that all the C-note items which are my favorites are here already.

They are all in order, easy to pick, understandable, easy to grasp.

All the pic.images with quotes are related in each other.

They are affordable, and the best for friends.

So I easily added it into my favorites.

Good job, in creating this amazing Vintage C-note.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking and reading on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

568

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#4177063

Review of A Friendship Try Angle

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi 🇺🇸 Carol St.Ann 🇺🇸

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the Rising Star M2M this November.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into your Homefolio to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
What hooked me is because its a poetry, well I'm a poetry addict, and the title sounds interesting to read.

A friendship Try Angle- Friendship is one of the most interesting thing, because No man is an island. We all needs friends. And as I can see the given title it gives me a very inspiring thought that friendship can be in any angle, that in what ever angle we see of friendship,
Friendship will still remain, meaning through thick and thin, happiness and sorrow, tough and good. A real friendship will always there supporting each other.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I continue to flap my little wings, and mused the thought between the lines-
You already inscribed there what ever friendship have.
The thought is very inspiring, making me think of all my friends.
That we are all blessed for having them as Friends.

These are my favorite line-it makes my eyes misty because its full of enthusiasm, sincerity and love.

I will laugh with you,
cry with you,
wonder the why with you.
Walk with you,
run with you,
fancy the fun with you.
I'll make time for you,
years for you,
tackle the tears for you.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.
The AWARDICON deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!!!

Over all, this piece is plenty of beautiful lines about Friendship, very inspiring. Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4176818

Review of Adults world

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi mais

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
Adults world
Anyone can relay on the given two word title, but what enticed me is on the given brief description, which makes me eager to know also what a small child's keen observation.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering into the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body, and try to flap my wings pondering to those scribbled lines.
The scribbled lines are easy to grasp and reach.
Right using those font and words being in the point of view of a child.
I liked how you maintained the emotion, and the way of the point of view.
The created thought is good and interesting.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just wonder, why you don't used any punctuation marks,
Punctuation marks can help stimulate the emotions of a poetry, they can control or emphasize also the thought that gives.

Over all, this piece is interesting. I admired you for using the point of view of a child. Awesome!

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4176394

Review of WRITING

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Leander

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
WRITING
I think everyone here can relate and can be hooked if they stumble on that word, because it creates not only as a good imagery, but also an inspirational and interesting passion.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering into the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter into the body, and try to flap my wings pondering those scribbled lines:
You already described here what really writing as matters.
Correct Rhyming and Rhythm of created words.
And the thoughts are good and very inspiring.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

}I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
And I have no doubt arise.

Over all, this piece is finely scribbled and description on how a writings goes.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4175376

Review of The Only Being

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi HRK

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
The Only Being
The given title creates an impact that this piece is different and have a special effect, because of capitalizing the three words. One will already figured it out who is the One that been stated here.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering into the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body, and try to flap my wings pondering those scribbled lines.
Those created lines are true, and all is true.
As has been said When you knock you shall be open.
It stated here also that we should praise Him and obeyed Him in His will.
The given piece makes me reflects on this thought:

Our prayers can be answered into three different ways
Yes- because its the best for us,
Wait- because its not yet the right time,
No- because he have much better plan for us than the things we are asking.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just have doubt on the way the punctuation marks were used like:
Desperately waiting,
For the fulfillment of my prayers,
As I obeyed Him,

After a comma don't capitalized the next letter because it continue the given thought.

Over all, this piece is a good read and inspiring, and this can be more shinier if done some few tweak as I've stated, but its well done even if its in few lines.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4175373

Review of the nightmare

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi Oni

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, this is just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
the nightmare
The given title creates already an emotion of fear, but intriguing.
We always like or eager to know about the nightmare of anyone.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering into the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body, and try to flap my wings pondering those scribbled lines.
I think it creates a good story, with suspense. There's an action.
The first thing that I do noticed is the good rhyming on the last of every two lines.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

There are some things I have doubt like the title:

A title to make an effect of firm, and appealing. Title should begins in a capital letter.
The first impression if the title begins in a small letter is- maybe being lazy by the creator.

I knock the door but hi didnât answer
you might mean he didn't

You didn't used any punctuation marks. Punctuation marks helps to stimulate the emotion of a piece, with the proper breaking and spacing of lines.

The two last line didn't rhyme, it could be perfect if they could rhyme, to consider that this is a rhyming poetry.

Over all, this piece is good, there are some few things that needs to be tweak to make it better and more shinier.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4175362

Review of Late Night Reflection

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi MarkD

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little GF Garden Fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
Late Night Reflection- I like the combination of the two words night and reflection,
because it gives a mysterious imagery. Night is already a mystery, when we have a reflection on it, maybe it gives an impression that is deep. Then adding the adjective late describing the night is really make the title very appealing to be in mystery.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body of your piece, and try to mused along the weaved lines.
I can say that this is like a prose, means that the lines was inscribed in poetic form. I like how the way it was scribble, I felt the emotion. Narrating the past, looking to the night like a mirror.
The emotion is in there.
I like how you hold the emotions, so fluently and softly poured, like the rain in a twilight afternoon.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any word that can distract the flow of the piece.
And I have no doubt arise.

Over all, this piece is a good read, I can say that its well done, and I like it. Emotional print poured by a pen tears.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4174804

Review of Fog

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi Rose Scott

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little GF Garden Fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
Fog- The enticing about this one is the created imagery. We usually found fog in the morning, mist, very refreshing, specially now that the December breeze or winter is coming.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body of your piece, and try to mused along the weaved lines.
The created lines like the given title creates a good imagery.
It really describes a fog.
I like the word mystery you used to define the fog and also the white silence.
Really fogs are just blank white, sometimes gives a blurry vision, but the feeling once we felt is good and refreshing.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just wonder why you didn't used punctuation marks.
Punctuation marks can help to stimulate the emotion of a piece, so as to breaking of lines and spacing.
And on the last part, you made the reader to have a curious effect on that simple line, its good but, it gives an impression that the piece is still not yet finished.

Over all, this piece is a good read, there are some things that just need a little tweak like those I've mentioned to bring out the shine and best that still hiding on this piece.

Thank you for sharing this poetry of yours, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4170427

Review of Alumni C-Note Shops

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Pepper

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Corner and I've found you there, as one of the favorite authors who will celebrate its Anniversary this October.
So I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio to find something to review.
And this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to have a look and give a review.

What makes me hooked is because the given title as well as of course the awesome image. I liked the word Alumni it gave a good imagery.
Alumni for me means those who are graduated or finished something.
A kind of success. So I made a look inside and see how is the attached image.

I discovered that there's only one awesome image.

I like the colors that you used and the scribbled letters related to the mood of Alumni.

Good job, in creating this amazing image.

If only you can add more or create more images, then it could be more awesome.

Thank you for sharing this C-note image of yours, and the excitement in looking and on it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,