Samberine Everose's (everose) Reviews

Samberine Everose

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#4167888

Review of Inspiration

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi CarbonMuse

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

Samberine Everose

is here again your little fairy friend in WDC.

and its my pleasure and honored that you requested a review from me, that means that you liked my review.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
As what you've requested, I'll try to flap my little wings to return back into your Homefolio and search this piece of yours that you would like me to review.

As the given title already said- Inspiration, that word creates a good imagery into the mind of a prospective reader. We don't have any bad inspiration, if inspiration comes this could be the things that makes us happy, to enjoy, interest, our love and likes, and that impression and imagery can make a reader hooked on the said piece.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I continue to flap and go along into the lines inside the body of the piece,
Wow!, you scribbled it nicely,neatly, and captured the real and feelings when we are about to listen and already listening to our Muses.
Correct rhyming and rhythm also.
Good job! also in using punctuation marks.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

Maybe, you can try to erase the remarks- (second draft) and place it into the space for brief description using punctuation open and close parenthesis (()), because as you put it into the main title, it just distract the opening mood or tone of the piece.

In the body
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.

Over all, this piece is so inspiring and as well as nicely crafted.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment for reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4166938

Review of Keep Moving Forward

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

Hi Maverick

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces. Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
I flap my little wings into the Newbie Corner and I've found your piece in there.
What hooked me is because of the given title, sounds interesting.
The way how it scribbled in few and simple words but creates an inspiring and encouraging effect to a prospective reader.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body, this is where the first impression and expectation is created.

THE BODY-
The given thought is good, full of encouragement.
The created line creates an impact, and inspiring.
There is a beat between the lines and that is the rhythm of the poetry.
I can't say that this is a rhyming poetry, because there are some does not rhyming, maybe its in free verse.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just have a doubt on the second line of the first stanza, the word leaking and while they are contradict.

Keep moving forward,
while your lifeblood's leaking.

I don't know if that is the correct word, because the given thought is something un realistic.

maybe you might mean
Keep moving forward,
even if your lifeblood's leaking.

or maybe you might mean,
Keep moving forward,
while your lifeblood's flowing.

leaking- pertains to be flow out or lose from our body.
flowing- is still a part or moving inside our body.

On the second stanza-

Keep moving forward,
when you want lay down.

you might mean-
when you want to lay down.

On the third stanza-

But keep moving forward.
while thinking of your family.

after a period, please capitalized the first letter, because you are again creating a new thought.
Or you might mean that the period you used on the second line should be a comma,

Over all, this piece is good, there are some words and punctuation that you missed.

Thank you for sharing this piece, I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4166927

Review of Music

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Natalie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into the Newbies Corner to find something to review, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review.
Music one of favorite thing other than Poetry, Arts and Architecture.
because Music always linked to Poetry, Arts and Architecture, so if you love also poetry, certainly you love music.
Other is Music also interest me.
Good job, because the title hooked me.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title serve as the main door before entering to the main body, this is where the first impression and expectation by the prospective reader was created.

THE BODY-
The given thought is good, every lines related to the purpose and tells Music as a gift and enjoyment. This is in free verse even some are in rhyming, but its fine. I like how you scribbled it and also the mood and tone created. Entertaining.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I just only have a comment on the last stanza.

Rejoicing with great pride,
And drowning out our fears.
Music is our friend,
And it wipes away our tears.

Don't capitalized the next letter after using a comma.

Over all, this piece is good,and the given thought is good, you just only missed on what I've comment.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it. I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4166345

Review of Choices

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi the prodigal son returns 2024.

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm here again Samberine Everose

your little Best Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as one of my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
It happens that my tiny wings brought me again into your homefolio to find something to review so I tried to flap my little wings and this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me to enter.
What makes me hooked is because the given title.
Choices- its simple, but there are so many things to think while I'm looking that word, it could be choices for ourselves, choices for others, choices for everything, or in other words choices in which we absolutely need or like.

Good job in choosing the title, because it hooked me as your reader.

THE BODY
The first thing that I admired is how the words were constructed and it gives a concrete thoughts.
I am still figuring it on, but I think they are all good.
like:

People often climb tall, dangerous mountains
just because they're there.
They also do so
just because they can.

There's a truth on this one.
We can't try to do things or decide to do a thing if we can't survive on it.
It's true that we always have a choice.

People often take the lives of animals
just because they're there--
creatures that creep, crawl,
slither and wiggle.

There's also a truth on this one.
specially the one that I bolden.
Maybe, this things gives the thought of survive, and we always have a choice on that.

Entities that were here
long before ourselves
and will likely be around
long after.

I just don't get this one, maybe this pertain to our own beliefs.

People sometimes decide
to let small things live,
not just because
they choose to do so,
But just because they can.

And this is the best I think.
I think about this as what sometimes humans are for.

Over all, I can say that this piece is a good read and gives a good thought, all the scribbled lines here are really are choices.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4166139

Review of FuzzyFlowers (set three)

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi ♥Pay It Forward♥

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Corner and I've found you there, as one of my favorite author who will celebrate its Anniversary this October.
So I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio to find something to review.
And this piece of yours did catch my attention, and enticed me enter and give a review.

What makes me hooked is because the given title as well as of course the awesome pretty image of flowers.
Flowers are really beautiful, and always n eye catching.
And as I begin to scroll down to look inside, I've found beautiful bouquet of flowers.
Best to be gift for friends, with their different colors.
There is a classy outcome while I stared on them.
And its good that you didn't scribbled a caption, this means that this can be for any occasion, as long as the flowers are good for that occasion.
And the cost are affordable.

Good job, in creating this beautiful fuzzy flowers C-note.

Thank you for sharing this C-note shop, and the excitement in looking on it.
I am looking forward to see more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4166120

Review of Sum Haiku

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi the prodigal son returns 2024.

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

And I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Account Anniversary Section and I've found you there, as one of my favorite author who will celebrate its Anniversary this October.
So I try to flap my little wings into your homefolio to find something to review.

And this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and chosen to give a review.

What makes me hooked is because of the given title, that seems so interest using the word Sum, and means a "particular amount", combining with the word Haiku, and we all know that Haiku created always in few words. That made me enticed to read it.

Choosing a title in poetry is very important, because this served as the main door before entering to the main body of the piece. The first impression and expectation of a prospective reader are always created here.

Good job in choosing a title because it hooked me as your reader.

As I continue flapping my wings into the main body.

You followed the standard syllable line count of the haiku

The given thoughts are good, even if its not about nature as haiku was intended.

I will not comment any of the created line and used words because I think they are all true, even if I still figuring it out. But I can say that its good.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4165624

Review of Chronic

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi CarbonMuse

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
What makes me hooked and see about is the given title.Short and the meaning is in there, but it tells a lot.
I mean short word but compact.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter into the body, the first thing that I did notice and I do like is the correct rhyming in every line.
Good scribbled words because it creates its mood or tone in agony or pain.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

The only thing that I have doubt is the use of punctuation marks.
I'm a fan of punctuation marks because it helps to direct and stimulate the emotion of the piece.
like for example:
Accepting my fate, I no longer pray,
For it is my burden, forever to stay...

Don't capitalized a letter after using a comma.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4165618

Review of Wishing They Were a Star

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Candied Apples

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
The given title gives a tone of hoping, yes wishing, and if you connect a wish to a star, that would be interesting, because star is like our dreams.
It reminds me of a peaceful night, looking for a star in the sky.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-

This is in free verse and I feel like a child while reading your poetry.
As like the given title, there is a pleasantly smooth created tone, maybe the way how the breaking of lines formed.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem,
but I'm a fan of punctuation marks because punctuation marks helps to direct, and stimulate the emotion of the piece.

like don't capitalized a word after using a comma.

Up at stars, glimmering hope,
Wishing to fly and be among beams
To soar the universe,
Take wing in a midnight world

Over all, this piece is good, you did fine in painting the beauty of how stars were wished in a peaceful night.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment for reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4165609

Review of Life is a Kiss on the Cheek

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Erickens

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm earning my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
What makes me enticed to enter is the given title. There are many thoughts or we have our own opinions on what we think about life, and the given title gives an interesting words about life.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in a poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
Wow!. You have 14 different definition or views about life, and they all seems to be true.
My most favorite is the line on the last line in which it's the same as the title that enticed me to read.
And in other words, life is the combination of positive and negative things to be balance. Life is in equilibrium.
.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that can distract the flow of the piece.
And no comment arise.

Over all, this piece is good and as the title said its interesting to read.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment for reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4164110

Review of Short Bio

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi Nathan Hilbert

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
What makes me flap my wings and look inside your piece is the given title.
It says all in there, that this is about biography even if it just abbreviated.
Well, I like to read biography.

Biography tells a lot about people, and people are unique and different each other. We can also learn to everyone because they have their own thoughts and own wisdom created in their time.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
You are really a writer. Writer have their own world, words, musing and character, and I like the character you created here.
From a different world, time and space, travelled and fell down here in the color-full and wonder-full world of Writing dot Com.

and you are brave not to use pseudonym.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow of your mini bio, in fact I found it as interesting and enjoying to read.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4164109

Review of The little life!

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi Aabha

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
The given title gives an interesting effect, by using the word little combining it to the word life.
My first impression is maybe this can be a simple life.
Simple life can be wonderful, or can be and struggling.
Good job, because the title hooked me as you reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
I can say that you did good in expressing and defining the little life that you mean here.
Now I know that little life means the life of the little people, or people who are live below average.
I like words like invasion, deepest dungeons, peasant, broken walls.
It gave an impact to the given description. .

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I am a fan of using punctuation marks, because these marks when it used properly, they help to stimulate the given emotions of the piece.

I just noticed some punctuation here if really they are meant to be there in there place like
It's an invasion,
Into the deepest dungeons,
Of the life of a peasant.
A family sold,

Don't use capital letter when the line before that next line ends in comma.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment for reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4163655

Review of The Painting Burned

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi RocketMan

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

and I'm earning also my sparkles at "Invalid Item"

to spread sparkles for Phoebe around WDC!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.

What makes me hooked and see about is the word painting. Painting are one of my favorite and Arts are one of the things that are closest to me, and if a painting was burned as what the title says, that would be truly fret, cutting down one of the enjoying beauties.
Good job, in hooking a reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As my tiny wings continue to flap and go over through the lines of your piece, I find this as a song or having maybe a rhyming pattern.
There are lines that are repeated, but its good, it just makes the piece some kind of being in noticeable, and I like the way it is.
It was scribbled in a lighter tone and mood, using striking words like churn, yearn, concern, discern between light lines made the poetry have a meaning that is sensible.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem.
And no doubt arise.

Over all, this piece is a good read, its cute, but the meaning make sense.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and the enjoyment for reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

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#4159183

Review of Tears like rain

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi phelous

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being here.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com.

I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and find your way here.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into the Newbie Review corner of WDC, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review.
I like the given title, its simple, the meanings is in there but there is a dramatic effect. I like the two words tears and rain you choose and used, Tears can be rain, but the emotion that is hiding is always been different.
Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body. This is the part where you can create an expectation and impression of a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
The thing that I most like on the body of this piece of yours, is the emotion that attached. I can feel it.
I liked words that you used to describe the feeling of pain and breaking up, its true that it was in different perspective.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

I'm a fan of using punctuation, because it may help to add to the correct flow and direct the emotions of the piece.
like after using a comma, the next letter will not be in capital.

Theirs so much i need to say, -
Throwing stones,
Across the river near the bay,

Over all, this piece can be good, there are some things to be adjusted, specially the punctuation marks.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, and I'm looking forward to read again more of your works.

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#4158888

Review of The Real Santa

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi luvleepoet

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little garden fairy friend here in this wonderful and colorful world of WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the Rising Star Member to Member Reviews.

I'm not expert in reviewing, These are just only my humble opinions who just like to read pieces and bits of everyone.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into your beautiful home-folio,and scrolling items in your garden of poems, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-

its a poetry- I love poetry, I'm a poetry addict.

its about Santa, and it reminds me about Santa Claus

I like Santa Claus, not just because he give gifts but one of the symbol of Christmas, and Christmas is the wonderful day of the year, where lots of fun and excitement.

The title is an eye catching, and it gives a good and fun imagery, and giving the reader an eager to know who is the real Santa
Good job in hooking a reader.

THE BODY-
This is a good example, that Santa symbolizes of the one we love, and its good that your Santa is your best friend-doggie.
I like how the lines are being rhyme at the end, even if there are smooth less reading when you stay closer to the lines, it doesn't affect the fluently, because the given imagery is good.

FAVORITE LINE-
The spirit of Christmas is ours to keep -

Over all you did a good job in this one.
Thank you for sharing and for the enjoyment in reading it.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4158885

Review of Night of Halloween

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi *Jenny*

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little garden fairy friend here in this wonderful and colorful world of WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the Rising Star Member to Member Reviews.

I'm not expert in reviewing, These are just only my humble opinions who just like to read pieces and bits of everyone.
Please try to chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into your beautiful home-folio, and scrolling items in your poemfoldo, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-

its a poetry- I love poetry.

The title is an eye catching, and it gives a good and fun imagery, especially now that the month of Halloween is approaching. My mind begin to imagined the night of spooky and hunterous and ghostrous.
Good job in hooking a reader.

THE BODY-
I can say that the captivating part of the given body of this piece is the given or created imagery on it.
Words are fluently, and they are fit in each other. The witch, zombies, graveyard, goblins, ghouls and ghost are always a part of Halloween. I am not disappointed on my expectation from the given title. It talks about the fun, during the Halloween season.

Congratulations! the Awardicon deserves well!!!

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION-

I am not expert in Grammar, but I can say that I can't find words that can distract the flow and emotion.
By the way,did you intend to add the letter a in the word graveyard?
It's just ok, it makes the piece to be more fun, and playful, like the word spooktacular.

Over all you did a good job in this one.
Thank you for sharing and for the enjoyment in reading it.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4156244

Review of God Knows and Sees All.

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi jackneigut

Greetings!!!
I'm Samberine Everose

your little garden fairy friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review.

I came across to your Home-folio, while I'm flapping my little wings into the review section searching for something to review and find out this piece of yours.

I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble thoughts and opinions, who just like to read pieces and bits of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE-
Most items that enticed me to read is poetry because I'm a poetry addict, but the given title of your piece hooked me. Why because it stated about God here, and the given statement is true.
that God knows and sees all, because He is the Creator of all.
The Creator knows and sees even the tiniest part of his/her creation and knows its unique purpose why he/she created that thing.
Every creation is unique on the sight of a Creator.

Good job in hooking a reader.

THE BODY -
Honestly, my first impression is long, but when I begin to read it, I don't know what keeps me intact to it, until suddenly I already reach the end part.
That means that its entertaining to read.
Every part or situation that was given in the story is need until I understand what the whole piece means, and its reflection in me as a reader.
Good description of character in the story, I like also that you added some things that are seems to be miracles. Miracles can attract reader and give the reader eager to know, what is it, specially on the last part.
Good job.

Comments and Suggestion.
I don't have any comment, I think the story is vivid, the written words are easily understand and its for everyone.

I have just only one doubt, maybe you just forgot.
When we addressed to our God it should be in capital letter, like

be broken for he is our Father in spirit
Sea for his chosen people....

As other piece that is about the goodness and how God manifest to our lives, this piece is truly a blessing and inspirational to every reader.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and looking forward to read again more of your inspirational writings.

Regards and Have a Great day!!!!

Samberine Sig.

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#4155091

Review of What is considered success?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Survivor48

First of all I would like to greet you a Happy WDC Month!, and I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend and fans here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review to your one of your items.
It happens that my little wings brought me into your Portfolio, and found this piece of yours.

I'm not an expert in reviewing, this are just only my personal thoughts and humble opinion, who likes to read writings of other specially poetry, please try to chew, and ignore it if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE
I can say that the title is interesting, because you used an inquiring tone, anyone would like to know what will be considered as a success?
You did job in hooking me as a reader.

THE BODY
I like the meaning on this piece of yours.
You stated all, where can we find success, or different views of success.
But the main meaning of success as the last stanza stated is responsibility with self respect.

I will not comment any grammar issues, because I see that there are no words that can distract the flow, and even a thought on any of the lines.
I like how it was created.

Overall, Thanks again for sharing this piece of yours,
you are always giving an inspiring piece.

Just always remember, to keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4155024

Review of Happy Birthday

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Hi Juliet Faith

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

HAPPY WDC Month!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC Month!.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author here in the wonderful world of Writing Dot Com.

I'm not an expert reviewer, this is just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read poetry.
Please try to chew and disregard it if doesn't fit to your taste.

The TITLE-
While I'm flapping my little wings into your homefolio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-

its a poetry- I love poetry, I'm a poetry addict.

the title seems to be fit on this WDC month affair,
because its WDC birthday.

I like the color of the font, it fits to the word.

Good job, because the title hooked me.

A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or pulls a reader, because a title serve as the door before going to the main body.

The BODY-
The given body is quite simple, but the messages are all in there. Glitters, sparkles, smiles, fun, grown, celebration, year.
Those are the words we see and be in times of birthdays.
I think and say that you expressed and described well a birthday here. Full of fun.

I think also that this can be a nice greetings, attached to a card.

The only thing that I think you missed is using Punctuation marks.
Punctuation makes word to be moving, they are need in poetry, sometimes they help to stimulate emotions.

Over all, this piece is good, the only thing you missed is using puntuation.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4153695

Review of The Trouble With Listening

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Poet's Place

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Dan Sturn

HAPPY 15th WDC ANNIVERSAY!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend and one of your fans here in WDC.

.
and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC Anniversary!.

I'm not expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I'm flapping my tiny wings into your beautiful home-folio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-

its a poetry- I love poetry.

and have a captivating title, the word trouble and listening pulls my attention, the title have an interesting effect, made me eager to know, what's the trouble in listening, because I'm the person who always likes to listen.
Good job in hooking a reader.

The BODY-
I think you just reflect and stated there in your piece the way our thoughts went on while we listen.

I like how the words was written and how they was in their form, I can say that they are moving and not boring and this can make you think a lot of deep.
The given emotion is good also, that's the way we feel while we are listening,

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4153678

Review of RAINING IN THE GARDEN

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Mary Ann MCPhedran

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

HAPPY 15th WDC ANNIVERSAY!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC Anniversary!.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being one of the Newbies Showcased this September., that's where I found your portfolio.

I'm not expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I'm spreading my little wings into your beautiful home-folio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review because-

its a poetry- I love poetry.

its about nature- I'm a nature lover.

and have a captivating title in which the given imagery is refreshing. I imagined a garden drenched by the rain.
Good job in attracting a reader.

The BODY-
I can say its beautiful, the given emotion is good. Lively and you did well in describing a garden where rain is falling.
I've been like a fairy playing with the rain in the garden with those daisy flowers closing their buds upon reading your piece.

"But after rain there's a rainbow's in sight"

Do we need to add s their in the rainbow word, it just distract the rhythm while reading it
and Sometimes the need of punctuation can make and entice a poem to be more lively and moving.

Over all, this piece is good, I liked it. Very Clever.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4153175

Review of I NEED A DIVORCE FROM U

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi Donkey Hoetay

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

HAPPY 15th WDC ANNIVERSAY!

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you review as my

to you on this awesome WDC Anniversary!.

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being one of the Newbies Showcased this September., that's where I found your portfolio.

I'm not expert in reviewing, please forgive me if I do some mess.

The TITLE-
While I'm spreading my little wings into your beautiful home-folio, this piece of yours did catch my attention to read and give a review.
Well, I love and like poetry and this is the only poetry in your homefolio.

The title seems to be interesting, frank, vulgar, comical, using the letter U, but more importantly this is most of today's main topic. Good job

in attracting a reader.

The BODY-
My first impression is- too long, but when I begin to read it, the mood is light, yes its a comedy, and made me

.
Very clever in using letters Q and U to divorce..?

Over all, this piece is good, I liked it. Very Clever.
I'm not good in Grammar searching but I can say that I didn't find any words that can distract the flow.

Until next reviewing again, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4152788

Review of Poetsvision

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Fyn

Happy WDC Anniversary!!

I'm Samberine Everose

one of your friends and fans here in Writing Dot Com.
and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you this awesome WDC Anniversary.

The TITLE-
The first thing that did hook me when I visited your poetfolio to look for something to review is the given title of this piece of yours.
Poetsvision- I liked the combination of these two words, every poet have different visions, the way they see things or reflect things.
I just curious if you intently wrote it in that way, no space between the two words Poets and vision.
Anyway it hook me, it's a kind of interesting.
I liked also the word doodle on the short description there, in arts/architecture, for me doodle are simple or circular and moving.
That made me look on it as interesting.

Good job

in alluring a reader.

The BODY-
Wow! All lines are true about a poet.
You hit every line on what I(we) feel.
Maybe you can add more lines using others senses like the touch, the smell etc.
But anyway, the way how it was crafted- short makes this piece extremely beautiful, because you make/let the reader get (I) into deep thoughts.

Until next reviewing, and keep smiling

while stay in Writing and Reviewing.

Regards
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#4152139

Review of The Seed

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi Beautiful Candy

Happy 15 WDC Anniversary my friend. !!

How are you?.

I'm Samberine Everose

one of your friends and fans here in WDC and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC celebration.

The TITLE-
The first thing that did hook me while visiting your port-home and looking for something new to review is the given title of your piece.
Simple and one word but it creates a lot of meanings, and that hook me to find out.

Second the given imagery while looking at the given title.
Seed at first are tiny and small but they could grow and can be a big thing.

The BODY-
The way you crafted the words attracted me, the way how the lines are created gives an impact, it can help to stimulate the emotions of the piece.

Maybe, this is about a word or a promise that didn't fulfilled.
or a character or a deeds that at first its hard to understand but just only reach the meaning at the end.

I'm not good in detecting Grammar error, but for me the words that are used are perfect.

maybe, you can just only adjust the size of the letters, for a clearer reading.
That's the only thing that distract the flow while I am looking on it.

Over all, I can say that I like and love this piece of yours.
Until next reviewing again!, and always keep on smiling while stay on writing/reviewing.

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#4152134

Review of A link to joy

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with Chatterbox Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Moarzjasac

Happy 15 WDC Anniversary my friend. !!

How are you?.

I'm Samberine Everose

one of your friends and fans here in WDC and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC celebration.

The Title-
The first thing that did hook me while visiting your port-home and looking for something to review is the given title of your piece.

Most of us looking for joy, and some don't know where we can find joy.
I just think that the given title creates a deep imagery about joy,
and as I read at the given simple description, it made me curious on the word peace of mind that was stated there because it links to the word joy on the given title.
Good job

in alluring a reader.

The Body-
I like the first stanza, They are all on the way of asking, it creates on emotion of weary ness.
While I go along the lines, the weary ness that I reflect on the first stanza turns to be hope and peace, being with family, on our home, it always creates a piece of mind in us.
I didn't find any word that can distract the good flow of the piece.

Over all, I can say that I like this piece of yours, it reminds me that we can find joy when we have piece of mind in our family specially unto the simple and little one.

Until next reviewing again!, and always keep on smiling while stay on writing/reviewing.

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#4152130

Review of Lazing with Butterflies

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi the prodigal son returns 2024.

Happy 15 WDC Anniversary my friend. !!
How are you?.

I'm Samberine Everose

one of your friends and fans here in WDC and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you on this awesome WDC celebration.

The first thing that did hook me while visiting your port-home and looking for something to review is the given title of your piece.
First its about nature, I love Nature.
Second the given imagination while looking at the given title, maybe the word Lazing, It reminds me of an autumn afternoon, they usually attached that word.
Lazy afternoon, because after-lunch that was afternoon usually at rest or at peace.
Lazing with the butterflies, maybe by looking at the butterflies we are at peace and at rest.
Nice choice of word.

The body - The mood is good, I can't find any word that can distract the good flow of emotions on the piece, it says and like the given title,
I think every line would described the given title but my favorite is-
"Drink from the morning dew"
I just imagined a morning having a breakfast before the sunrise.

Over all, I can say that I like this piece of yours, not only that creates a good mood, but it take me into a resting imagination.

Until next reviewing again!, and always keep on smiling while stay on writing/reviewing.

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