Why I chose this piece This is part of the spiritual newsletter. The topic is something I am dealing with myself, although I have lived in the same house for twenty-five years
Overall impression of piece Simple, direcy and to the point.
Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well. No errors
What I liked? This brought up a lot of interesting questions that might be deeper than you planned on going. What is orientation of the soul?
Points to Ponder:There is a lot of telling in this. I think the things that more express the poetic form is, "What does it feel like or look like?"
How the piece made me feel We have become a homeless people. We think we are something, but without a center to define us, we are not much
Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.
Peace and beauty in freefall