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Review of Raven  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi. ConnieAnn I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a black bird.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. Your imagery is vivid and graphic too, eg beady eyes unfriendly. Your rhythm creates happiness and a read aloud or two. Your rhyme is sprinkled throughout. Your verse is Unrhymed.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Rhyssa, Iam GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem painted a pictured of your first Halloween.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. You imagery was vivid, eg they knocked and an unseen hand creaked open the door. You're rhyme pattern is consistent and funny to read. Your rhythm creates happiness with a read aloud or two.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of SWEET DECEIT  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Maria Mize, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of sweet deceit.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including your poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg unless evil ago gangly struts in evil deceit. Rhythm creates happiness with read alouds. Your poem is Unrhymed verse.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim Chiu, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the mark of a good man. Never give up optimism.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem, complete with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg It comes to life. Nature creates happiness and a read aloud or two. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Close To Tears  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi The House of House Stark. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes feeling its too close to tears.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including your poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg, the grass shifts itself, rustling in the breeze. Your rhythm creates happiness about a terrific read aloud. Your rhyme iis Unrhymed verse with rhyme that can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of When In Bohemian  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Vinnie Faraday, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on CThe piclic review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a tale of a woman who roamed the world with her heart borne on her wake.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
She fully enjoyed reading her poem, with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg.a woman who roamed the world with her heart borne on her wake. Your rhyme schemes can be sprinkled throughout your poem. Your rhythm creates happiness, with a well known read along.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Epona's Song  
Review by GerMac
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Aniu, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a song for a foal.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. Your imagery is vivid, eg, I see the strength inside, insider our soul. Your rhythm creates a lovely place for read alouds. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and fabulous to read. I love you Epona, and I've never even met you!

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Anniversary  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Spiday, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of symbolic anniversary times.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your rhythm creates happiness with a great read aloud or two. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public. review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of springtime writing.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery was vivid, eg, I began these lines many times. Rhythm creates happiness full the best read aloud. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout in a delightful Nove Otto.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Wasting Time  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Kat Tonyan, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes wasting time and exhausted babbling.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. Your imagery is vivid, eg why are you so strange, dear girl? You poem is Unrhymed verse. Your rhythm creates happiness, with a well thought read along.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Watercolor Dreams  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Whitemorn. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a natural theme.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg I felt her breathing life into me. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Your poem could be sprinkled throughout. Your rhythm creates happiness, especially with a good read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of O Mohonk  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi WWWhite Walkers Rise. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a visit to a wonderful place.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg Lilacs fill the air, lingering on a gentle breeze. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem. Your rhythm creates happiniee and a good read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Buckky, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a beautiful mind.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem with poetic nuance. Your imagery is vivid, and expressive, eg. thoughts that said delved into the beauty of your mind. Your rhythm creates happiness and a good read aloud. Your rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem. Good thought.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Craig Henders, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes one of life's risk takers.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem, one of poetry's nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg, with a small old man stuck, wishing he could. Your rhythm creates happiness, with a read aloud. Your poem could be sprinkled throughout your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Driftwood  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes self discovery all alone.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your HuntersMoon poem, with poetic nuances. Your imagery is expressive, eg a journey of hope. Your rhythm creates happiness with read alouds. Your Unrhymed verse is delightful to read. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem. Wonderfully well-written.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Friendships Rest  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jae O'Toole, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of Charlie Brown, one of my favorites, as you can see!

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg mutual trust. Your rhythm creates happiness, a good flow of words, and a read aloud. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes that you're hungry for value.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, and the poetic nuances that go with it. Your imagery is vivid, eg for those hungry for value. Your rhythm creates a flow of words for a read along. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and lovely to read. Good job.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on thepublic review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes sitting in the sunshine.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg Sit by the light of your window. Your poem is made of an abanga form. You peek is Unrhymed verse. Your Rhythm creates happiness. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem. Correction: bathe should be bath.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Pins and Needles  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SWPoet, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public reviewers pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about breaking the child abuse cycle.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed readiing your poem, especially poetic nuances. The imagery is vivid, she made a monument on her mother's closet wall. Your poem is free verse. Thythm creates happiness and a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My Prayer  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Lisa Grove 46311. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your owns, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about a prayer of a Christian martyr.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, especially with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg I am inspired about a movie about Rachel Joy Scott. Your verse is Unrhymed. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your pen. Rhythm creates happiness and a good read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Dear JohnLetter  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Lisa Grove46311, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is painted with a kiss in your Dear JohnLetter.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed fully your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, saying goodbye because I can. Rhythm creates happiness and a good read aloud. Your poem I'd Unrhymed verse.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Time's Deceit  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Winnie, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found, on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes youth and the elderly.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. The imagery is vivid, eg the tick of time deceived. Rhythm creates happiness especially when there is a read aloud. Rhyme can be sprinkled throughout your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes an old fashioned Christmas get together.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including the poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid and magical, eg and wondrous chit chat! Your words will be sprinkled throughout your poem. Read alouds are fabulous. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell

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Review of From the pier  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Craig Henders, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes looking from a pier and is beautifully written.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg restless motion in every direction. Good chance to practice a verse. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Your Unrhymed verse is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates, especially with a good flow or words and a read aloud.


*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi., Shaara, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of spring becoming autumn.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, where poetry is a nuance. Your imagery is vivid, eg where the buds and the grass were his heart. Rhythm creates a flow of words. Your read aloud sings a song. Rhyme is sprinkled across the poem. Well written.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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