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Review of Bad Weather Blues  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Daft Punk, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of those who have different ways of seeing the weather.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. Some people love weather and some some despise weather. The comparison is quite interesting. The imagery of your poem is vivid and and expressive, eg a bright sun marks a new day. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Audra_Branson, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a gorgeous picture about winters from the past.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and was delighted to have poetic nuances. The imagery of your poem is expressive and vivid too, eg cherished memories were made from forgotten times. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words. The form of you poem is quite complicated and unique. Very interesting.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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for entry "Sea Horse" 
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Amay, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of one of your poems for your account anniversary.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem from a collection for your grandson, a gorgeous baby. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg See the world with a child's sense of wonder. The poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm in your poem creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Fun With Synonyms  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes fun with synonyms.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg get to off your fanny, to run we'll have to be canny. The rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
HI Dogpack, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of the crows getting together for the day.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about the crows who find it necessary to discuss the topics of the day. I have lived in an environment close to crows. They are just hilarious. The imagery of your poem is vivid and graphic, eg flap those wings...grab a bite, yell with great delight. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.
Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 1: Flap those wings look for shiny NOT shine things
Stanza 2: Where we're going, no one knowing NOT where we going no one knowing

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My Fairytale  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
H Blurjellybaby, . I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem for our account anniversaries. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture for your personal fairytale.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I also like poetic nuances. The imagery of your poem is expressive and graphic too, eg underneath this veil of darkness, I am unable to lift myself from my stupor. Your poem is Unrhymed verve. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture that heroes come in different forms

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one who adores the poetic nuances. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, too, eg inspire faith, confidence and hope that the most satisfying outcomes can be reached. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Ugly Like Rain  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Danial Francis, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the poet's thoughts which he calls ugly like rain.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as I like poetic nuances too. Your imagery is expressive and vivid too, eg dark is messy like rain, dark, cold and foreboding. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Violets  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the lovely violets written for your son's teacher.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading the poem about the violets written for your son's kindergarten teacher. What joyful times when one is part of a family's kindergartener. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg the petals are so beautiful...I will hold them in my heart, especially for you. The rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Dragon's Rage  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi GoldenKitsune, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem tells a story of a dragon caught with rage.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your story poem of the dragon's anger, although I didn't like the anger that spun out over time. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg avoid the faithless quarry known as the sunken shipyard. Rhyme is sprinkled through the poem and rhythm creates a poem with read aloud of your poem.

Suggestion/Correction:
Line 1: most grim NOT most a grim (typo?)

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Tree  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi April, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your, poem,which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a beautiful haiku/senyru.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I adore haikus/senyrus. Such a gorgeous expression of words. No rhyme required. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

Suggestion/Correction: Second line has 8 syllables rather than 7 syllables.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of Pat's whale watching event.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem, as I am a lover of whale watching too. Your imagery is graphic and vivid, eg Pat brings out her camera to snap a picture of that humpback specimen with the spouting aperture. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and well written. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Stay Forever Stay  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Christopher Jeremy, . I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes about your first love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Stay Forever Stay". The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg to what do I owe this angel from above. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Tropical Storm  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Moona, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a long awaited rain.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as I am fascinated with tropical storms too. Your imagery is expressive and vivid, eg bright flashes of blue light zapping through the house. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words, upon reading your poem aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tiny Pixie, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your acrostic poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your acrostic poem "I Love You So Much" paints a picture of your love for your husband.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem, as I am one who likes the nuances of poetry. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg oh dear Lord above, I thank you
for this ultimate fate. Your poem is unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud with your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi All Smiles, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes an imaginary woman who vanishes when war comes.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I'm not fond of any kind of war, I enjoyed reading your poem. Your imagery is expressive and vivid, eg the soul comes and you vanish, the strength of my soul gives me bandages. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.
Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 3: it's NOT its
Stanza 4: the Sun tarnishes NOT tarnish
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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of I, A Winter Storm  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi.Harry I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a winter's storm.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem, entitled "I, A Winter Storm". Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg My chattering sleet is accompanied by the creaking of cracking tree limbs. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Duplicity  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Daniel Francis, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for the devil to become an advocate.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:,
I enjoyed what you had to say about the devil becoming an advocate, although I lamented the darkness of your poem. The imagery of your poem is graphic and vivid, eg offer and pretend direction in their deception. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HiI Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture for a sacrifice of the soul.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and felt it was sincerely written. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg forgiveness holds the key to finding love. for heaven's sake. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and words are beautifully chosen. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. A well written poem.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Truth  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi theunknowingirl, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a picture of how you see truth in yourself.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and felt it was sincere. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg say that I always result in the litter of a person's life. Is that true? Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words, with your reading aloud of your poem.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 1 You have a combination of small I and capital I. To be consistent, use capital I. True in Stanza 4calso.
Stanza 2. person's deeds NOT persons deeds

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Abu Qasim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of thinking differently.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one who thinks differently too. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg When you have only one word to say, think alone. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when you read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the dream of every man and woman.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem about fortune cookies, as I am an upbeat person myself. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg a sprinkling of hope, to make all dreams a reality. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with reading aloud of your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.
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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
H Bill OBier, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a sad look back at a young boy's heart.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented your situation, I was sympatathetic for your your losing your mother. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg duck and cover from the shame that became my coping game. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm is creates a good flow or words for reading your poem aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Angels  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pumpkin, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes Biblical angels which can be frightening,

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, although I found the Angels would attack if they had to. Your imagery is expressive and graphic, eg Calling to Moses, the angel of the Lord flamed up in the burning bush, revealing God. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with your poem read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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Review of Letting Go  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pat, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Happy Retirement, Pat. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of your daughter's growing up.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one who appreciates family. Your poem is vivid and expressive, eg I hope that you will keep the laughter in your eyes. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with your reading aloud of your poem.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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